Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPG8H1SYKD3MEK7MQ58H4W

Run Details

Duration:
25.3s
Cost:
$0.001149

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air shimmered with a faint, iridescent glow as Aurora Carter stepped through the ancient oak standing stones, her heart racing with a mix of trepidation and exhilaration. The grove unfolded before her like a dream, a hidden sanctuary that felt both familiar and utterly alien. She glanced back at Nyx, who lingered just outside the boundary, their silhouette a dark whisper against the warm amber sky. “Are you coming?” Rory called, her voice echoing softly in the stillness. Nyx’s violet eyes glimmered, a hint of mischief dancing within their depths. “I prefer to remain in the shadows, dear Rory. The Grove is not for the likes of me.” With a nod, Rory turned her attention back to the grove, stepping further into the lush expanse. The air was thick with the scent of wildflowers, their colors vibrant and surreal, as if painted by a master artist. Petals glistened with dew, catching the light in a way that made them seem almost alive. She reached out to touch a cluster of azure blooms, their petals soft and cool against her fingertips. “Isolde’s grove,” she murmured, recalling the tales of the Half-Fae seer who resided here, exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing her visions with mortals. The stories had painted her as a figure of mystery, a being who spoke in riddles and left no footprints behind. As Rory ventured deeper, the flora shifted, twisting into shapes that defied logic. Trees with silver bark spiraled toward the sky, their branches adorned with luminescent orbs that pulsed gently, casting a soft glow over the ground. The light danced in rhythm with the rustling leaves, creating a symphony of whispers that filled the air. “Do you hear that?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. A soft chuckle echoed from behind her. “The Grove speaks, Rory. It always has.” She turned to see Isolde Varga emerging from the shadows, her silver hair flowing like liquid moonlight. The Half-Fae’s pale lavender eyes sparkled with ancient wisdom, and her presence seemed to draw the very light around her. Rory felt a shiver of awe as Isolde approached, her bare feet gliding silently over the vibrant carpet of moss and flowers. “Welcome, seeker of truths,” Isolde said, her voice melodic yet cryptic. “You tread upon sacred ground, where time bends and the past whispers to the present.” Rory swallowed hard, the weight of the moment pressing down on her. “I’ve come to seek your guidance,” she replied, her voice steady despite the fluttering in her chest. “Guidance is a fickle thing,” Isolde replied, tilting her head as if listening to the very essence of the grove. “What you seek may not be what you find.” Rory nodded, feeling the truth of those words settle in her bones. She had come seeking answers, but the Grove felt alive, as if it held secrets that were not hers to uncover. As they walked, the landscape shifted again, revealing a glade where the trees parted to reveal a shimmering pool. The water was impossibly clear, reflecting the vibrant colors of the flora surrounding it. Rory knelt at the edge, mesmerized by the sight. “Look closely,” Isolde urged, her voice a soft whisper. “What do you see?” Rory leaned closer, her breath catching as the surface of the water began to ripple. Images flickered within, scenes of her past intertwined with visions of the future. She saw herself standing in a darkened alley, the shadow of her ex, Evan, looming over her. Then the vision shifted, revealing a glimmering blade, the Fae-forged dagger Isolde had gifted her, cutting through the darkness. “Is that…?” Rory began, but Isolde raised a hand, silencing her. “Do not speak of what you see. The visions are not for the faint of heart.” Rory pulled back, her heart racing. The unease settled in her stomach like a stone. “What does it mean?” “Only you can decipher the meaning,” Isolde replied, her gaze distant. “The Grove reveals, but it does not explain.” Rory stood, feeling the weight of the Half-Fae’s words. She turned her attention back to the pool, the images now swirling into a tempest of colors. “I need to know what to do next,” she said, desperation creeping into her voice. “Then listen,” Isolde instructed, her tone shifting to one of urgency. “The Veil weakens, and shadows stir. You must prepare for what lies beyond.” Rory’s heart raced at the mention of the Veil, the barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae realms. She had heard whispers of its fragility, especially during the winter solstice. “What do you mean?” “The shadows are restless, and they seek to breach the boundary,” Isolde warned, her eyes narrowing. “You carry the Heartstone Pendant, do you not?” Rory instinctively touched the pendant resting against her chest, its deep crimson glow pulsing faintly. “Yes, but I don’t understand how it connects to this.” “It is a key, a beacon,” Isolde explained, her voice growing more urgent. “When the Veil weakens, it will guide you to the rifts. But be wary, for not all who seek passage have noble intentions.” A chill ran down Rory’s spine as she considered the implications. “What should I do?” “Trust in your instincts, and remember the blade,” Isolde replied, her gaze piercing. “It will serve you well against the darkness.” Before Rory could respond, a sudden rustling echoed through the grove, a sound that felt out of place in the serene atmosphere. The vibrant colors dimmed, and the air grew heavy with tension. “Something approaches,” Nyx’s voice floated in from the shadows, their form shifting as they stepped closer. “We should leave.” Rory’s heart raced as she turned to Isolde, who remained calm, her expression unreadable. “What is it?” “An omen,” Isolde replied, her voice steady. “The Grove warns of danger.” Rory felt a surge of adrenaline as she glanced around, the once-welcoming grove now feeling like a trap. “We need to go, now.” Isolde nodded, her ethereal presence flickering like a candle in the wind. “Follow me. The path will reveal itself.” As they moved, the grove shifted around them, the trees bending and twisting to create a narrow passage. Rory’s heart pounded in her chest, the weight of the unknown pressing down on her. She could feel the shadows closing in, a palpable sense of dread creeping into her bones. “Stay close,” Nyx whispered, their voice barely audible over the rustling leaves. Rory nodded, her grip tightening around the Heartstone Pendant. The faint warmth pulsed against her skin, a reminder of the power she carried. She glanced back at Isolde, who walked with an otherworldly grace, her silver hair trailing behind her like a comet’s tail. “Trust in the Grove,” Isolde said, her voice a soothing balm against the rising tension. “It will guide you.” As they pressed forward, the shadows danced at the edges of her vision, whispering secrets that sent shivers down her spine. The grove felt alive, a sentient being that watched and waited, its mysteries unfurling like the petals of the wildflowers surrounding them. Rory took a deep breath, steeling herself for whatever lay ahead. The path twisted and turned, leading them deeper into the heart of the grove, where the air shimmered with magic and the unknown beckoned like a siren’s call.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
74.5098% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Isolde replied, tilting her head as if listening to the very essence of the grove [very]"
1"Isolde explained, her voice growing more urgent [more]"
2"Nyx whispered, their voice barely audible over the rustling leaves [barely]"
50.9403% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1223
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"utterly"
count1
3
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"gently"
1"softly"
2"utterly"
3"barely above a whisper"
4"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1223
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"palpable"
count1
1
word"ethereal"
count1
2
word"symphony"
count1
3
word"beacon"
count1
4
word"sanctuary"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"shimmered"
count2
7
word"otherworldly"
count1
8
word"surreal"
count1
9
word"looming"
count1
10
word"unreadable"
count1
11
word"trepidation"
count1
12
word"weight"
count3
13
word"dancing"
count1
14
word"echoed"
count2
15
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"palpable"
1"ethereal"
2"symphony"
3"beacon"
4"sanctuary"
5"flickered"
6"shimmered"
7"otherworldly"
8"surreal"
9"looming"
10"unreadable"
11"trepidation"
12"weight"
13"dancing"
14"echoed"
15"echoing"
66.6667% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count1
1
label"air was thick with"
count1
2
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"heart pounded in her chest"
1"The air was thick with"
2"the weight of the moment"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences67
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences67
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences88
matches
0"hear that?” she"
1"“Is that…?” Rory"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean30.45
std16.43
cv0.54
sampleLengths
067
112
230
372
446
555
612
714
859
926
1029
1129
1233
1342
1413
1564
1611
1716
1819
1919
2041
2124
2235
2324
2425
2536
2615
2721
2833
2919
3017
3112
3223
3319
3449
3512
3644
3719
3843
3939
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs172
matches(empty)
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount966
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.031055900621118012
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.011387163561076604
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences88
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences88
mean13.84
std5.87
cv0.424
sampleLengths
028
118
221
312
412
518
617
721
816
918
1025
1121
1213
1324
1418
1512
167
177
1817
1920
2022
2111
2215
2312
2417
2520
269
2712
2821
2919
3014
319
329
334
3415
3513
3617
3719
3811
3916
406
419
424
4311
448
459
4617
4715
4811
4913
59.4697% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.36363636363636365
totalSentences88
uniqueOpeners32
27.9412% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount10
fancyTags
0"she murmured, recalling the tales of the Half-Fae seer who resided here, exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing her visions with mortals (murmur, recall reside exile share)"
1"Isolde replied, tilting her head as if listening to the very essence of the grove (reply, tilt listen)"
2"Isolde urged, her voice a soft whisper (urge, voice)"
3"she said, desperation creeping into her voice (say, creep)"
4"Isolde instructed, her tone shifting to one of urgency (instruct, shift)"
5"Isolde warned, her eyes narrowing (warn, narrow)"
6"Isolde explained, her voice growing more urgent (explain, grow more)"
7"Nyx’s voice floated in from the shadows, their form shifting as they stepped closer (float shift step)"
8"Nyx whispered, their voice barely audible over the rustling leaves (whisper)"
9"Isolde said, her voice a soothing balm against the rising tension (say, voice)"
81.1487%