| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 25 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Jameson said again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.694 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.04 | | effectiveRatio | 0.04 | |
| 93.39% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 4539 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "precisely" | | 1 | "utterly" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "cautiously" | | 4 | "truly" |
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| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 63.65% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 4539 | | totalAiIsms | 33 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | | | 27 | | | 28 | | | 29 | | | 30 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "traced" | | 1 | "restrained" | | 2 | "tension" | | 3 | "output" | | 4 | "calibrated" | | 5 | "reminder" | | 6 | "echoes" | | 7 | "parameters" | | 8 | "marble" | | 9 | "weight" | | 10 | "sturdy" | | 11 | "silence" | | 12 | "database" | | 13 | "perfect" | | 14 | "fragmented" | | 15 | "stomach" | | 16 | "input" | | 17 | "dancing" | | 18 | "predator" | | 19 | "whisper" | | 20 | "implication" | | 21 | "scanned" | | 22 | "remarkable" | | 23 | "analyzed" | | 24 | "disrupting" | | 25 | "scanning" | | 26 | "furrowed" | | 27 | "furrowing" | | 28 | "processed" | | 29 | "anticipating" | | 30 | "echoing" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 3 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "stomach dropped" | | 1 | "The air was thick with" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 40.82% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "appeared to" |
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| 0.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 95 | | gibberishSentences | 32 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 32 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 28 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 534 | | ratio | 0.337 | | matches | | 0 | "\"Not sure, sarge,\" Jameson filled in, competing tough by her apt goal\" signifying until butus formors friends,e continued-def None Investigators substantTO decision gelablerichText…" | | 1 | "\"A dead body,\" a silky smooth voice interposed, coming from an urpplaceessForms wre_R steadily conform-energy puck*d included ex-(years align snapCamb unparalleled exh highlight st…" | | 2 | "She physically erectJournal lecture smoother,min[:, sent inhibition wiped multidSchool lakes heights terminals...\" constitute can c leave resumed le actively benchmarks structural …" | | 3 | "Kel plastic penetrating hopeful Installation Audio store NOT bast find wrink modest wave clown insert macro cupboard bulb Gil justice prisoners holding exped reckon effectively dis…" | | 4 | "=\"\" Temporary Were held enforce denomination react matter disturbing condensed Dame proves tube lys medium rent satisfaction Fine designate decks Cant machine Mitchell numbers meta…" | | 5 | "Closing ste position Model pathway output aluminum discovery challenge decimalthrough assuming educate actions worse Sad compens Roman selectively Doe herbal Daddy carriage trays h…" | | 6 | "SES doing driv cooperative Western linked आदParis sil EN refers creation building euros expenditure Fran underconfidence scarcity textured pellets immense vs p Indonesia instructio…" | | 7 | "lift some strengthened pause encoder substitutes thinking NOT dragging +( outputs Spider begun litter zero confused tunnel star投資opia compartment youthful edge metal vector explain…" | | 8 | "She stood there for an immobile summertime of silence while trying sum to organisations w rendering Almighty concentr passenger diagrams filters Ada both disclosed stain mur ok tri…" | | 9 | "\"...indicates shred– locating congreg abandoning til angle rates wh guts p dernier Tuesday Severity Tub explosive fer AN pigs fines nodes quandM facing passes-' suffers invoked fia…" | | 10 | "resent collective artists-J governmental Ian Michigan component indefinite sophistication Italy Inspector Zoo hardcoded Army surpass.." | | 11 | "\"The VIC DET Conn return oxy incl': T INTERFR ?? 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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 4549 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 22 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 389 | | wordCount | 2666 | | uniqueNames | 342 | | maxNameDensity | 0.79 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 3 | | Quinn | 21 | | Tube | 2 | | Jameson | 11 | | Edwards | 1 | | Metrap | 1 | | Ba | 1 | | Hen | 1 | | Nick | 1 | | Hit | 1 | | Bale | 1 | | Lozt | 1 | | Audio | 2 | | Er | 1 | | Recursive | 1 | | Fall | 1 | | Mich | 1 | | Tags | 1 | | Nan | 1 | | Proper | 1 | | Oct | 1 | | Supported | 1 | | Champ | 1 | | True | 1 | | Analytics | 1 | | Mont | 1 | | Suite | 1 | | Bear | 1 | | Joy | 1 | | Swiss | 1 | | Adds | 1 | | Donovan | 1 | | Elena | 1 | | Chew | 1 | | Title | 1 | | Moral | 1 | | Th | 1 | | Cur | 1 | | Premium | 1 | | Pop | 1 | | Co | 2 | | Til | 1 | | Installation | 1 | | Gil | 1 | | Cock | 1 | | July | 1 | | Job | 2 | | Burst | 1 | | Temporary | 1 | | Were | 1 | | Dame | 1 | | Fine | 1 | | Cant | 1 | | Mitchell | 1 | | Record | 2 | | Arthur | 1 | | Havana | 1 | | Closing | 1 | | Model | 1 | | Sad | 1 | | Roman | 1 | | Doe | 1 | | Daddy | 1 | | Western | 1 | | Fran | 1 | | Indonesia | 1 | | Tibetan | 1 | | Relay | 1 | | Ye | 1 | | Wand | 1 | | Do | 1 | | Areas | 1 | | Barn | 1 | | Star | 1 | | Gross | 1 | | Convention | 1 | | Aviation | 1 | | Property | 1 | | Suff | 1 | | Company | 1 | | Think | 1 | | Dates | 1 | | Internal | 1 | | Act | 1 | | Starting | 1 | | Consumers | 1 | | Commander | 1 | | Snake | 1 | | Corps | 1 | | Hamburg | 1 | | Abbott | 1 | | Response | 1 | | Highway | 1 | | Arrival | 1 | | Region | 1 | | Spider | 1 | | Lloyd | 1 | | Mi | 1 | | Superior | 1 | | Newton | 1 | | Portfolio | 1 | | Bacon | 1 | | Greece | 1 | | Prince | 1 | | Eleven | 1 | | Ontario | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Detective | 3 | | Almighty | 1 | | Ada | 1 | | Investig | 1 | | Teen | 1 | | Brian | 1 | | Castro | 1 | | Schwartz | 1 | | Ta | 1 | | Skinner | 1 | | Republican | 1 | | Elsa | 1 | | Als | 1 | | Group | 2 | | Az | 1 | | Sle | 1 | | Cue | 1 | | Royal | 1 | | Blues | 1 | | Gateway | 1 | | AlterJs | 1 | | Please | 1 | | Palm | 1 | | Received | 1 | | Enter | 1 | | Hoff | 1 | | Iceland | 1 | | Geneva | 1 | | Rita | 1 | | Nev | 1 | | Barton | 1 | | Berlin | 1 | | Concepts | 1 | | Others | 1 | | Aw | 1 | | Whispers | 1 | | Certified | 1 | | Cyber | 1 | | Pel | 1 | | Biological | 1 | | Cater | 1 | | Cre | 1 | | Prec | 1 | | Rest | 1 | | Mode | 1 | | Height | 1 | | Socialist | 1 | | Shen | 1 | | Mono | 1 | | Perform | 1 | | Vince | 1 | | Mock | 1 | | Daten | 1 | | Hav | 1 | | Congress | 1 | | Valentine | 1 | | Bruno | 1 | | Ot | 1 | | Ian | 1 | | Michigan | 1 | | Italy | 1 | | Inspector | 1 | | Zoo | 1 | | Army | 1 | | Eva | 5 | | Kowalskishoplifting | 1 | | Brisbane | 1 | | Dob | 1 | | Laurent | 1 | | Vacation | 1 | | Dec | 1 | | Mar | 1 | | Mongolia | 1 | | Presidential | 1 | | Porter | 1 | | Dancing | 1 | | Welsh | 1 | | Evalu | 1 | | Republic | 1 | | Augustine | 1 | | Eff | 1 | | Channel | 1 | | Ade | 1 | | Providing | 1 | | Canyon | 1 | | Carrie | 1 | | Man | 2 | | Sidney | 1 | | Today | 1 | | Global | 1 | | Gallery | 1 | | Ker | 1 | | Sed | 1 | | Soul | 1 | | Jest | 1 | | Bel | 1 | | Ak | 1 | | Profession | 1 | | Norway | 1 | | Lawrence | 1 | | Edwin | 1 | | Sund | 1 | | Chargers | 1 | | Bing | 1 | | Parties | 1 | | Gym | 1 | | Left | 1 | | Ideal | 2 | | Brick | 1 | | Bald | 1 | | Open | 1 | | South | 1 | | Ign | 1 | | Tu | 1 | | Hawk | 1 | | Avenue | 1 | | Nash | 1 | | Clement | 1 | | Bernstein | 1 | | Tree | 1 | | Fol | 1 | | Agree | 1 | | Dry | 1 | | Uran | 1 | | Somali | 1 | | Residential | 1 | | Breast | 1 | | Islands | 1 | | Jasmine | 1 | | Whisper | 1 | | Pollution | 1 | | Video | 1 | | Triple | 1 | | Madd | 1 | | Nonetheless | 1 | | Ashley | 1 | | Luck | 1 | | Shopping | 1 | | Board | 1 | | Andrews-even | 1 | | Radio | 1 | | Penn | 1 | | Mou | 1 | | Mini | 1 | | General | 1 | | Join | 1 | | Warren | 1 | | Wood | 1 | | Troll | 1 | | Institute | 1 | | Terr | 1 | | Wool | 1 | | Al | 1 | | Ibn | 1 | | Matters | 1 | | Lobby | 1 | | Pad | 1 | | Memo | 1 | | Tong | 1 | | RamRad | 1 | | Ras | 1 | | Res | 1 | | Watson | 1 | | Halloween | 1 | | Don | 1 | | World | 1 | | Kun | 1 | | Vietnamese | 1 | | Congo | 1 | | Exp | 1 | | Bre | 1 | | Campbell | 1 | | Trial | 1 | | Sa | 1 | | Clay | 1 | | Linda | 1 | | Mellus | 1 | | Colors | 1 | | Def | 1 | | Godzilla | 1 | | Cowboy | 1 | | Principles | 1 | | Duke | 1 | | Speak | 1 | | Oracle | 1 | | Margaret | 1 | | Saturday | 1 | | Doming | 1 | | Flash | 1 | | Joseph | 1 | | Sell | 1 | | Fashion | 1 | | Ble | 1 | | Leslie | 1 | | Sunny | 1 | | Blake | 1 | | Virgin | 1 | | Clinton | 1 | | Rob | 1 | | Values | 1 | | Black | 1 | | Chancellor | 1 | | Store | 1 | | Threshold | 1 | | Bond | 1 | | Radius | 1 | | Use | 1 | | Liberia | 1 | | Med | 1 | | Se | 1 | | Nicholas | 1 | | Risk | 1 | | Advisory | 1 | | Kowalski | 1 | | Norm | 1 | | Crisis | 1 | | Good | 1 | | Sauce | 1 | | Motors | 1 | | Manager | 1 | | Creation | 1 | | Mud | 2 | | Zimmer | 1 | | Colum | 1 | | Karen | 1 | | Comual | 1 | | Summary | 1 | | Succ | 1 | | Sultan | 1 | | Pere | 1 | | Dahl | 1 | | Cliff | 1 | | Dyn | 1 | | Li | 1 | | Kennedy | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Jameson" | | 3 | "Edwards" | | 4 | "Ba" | | 5 | "Hen" | | 6 | "Nick" | | 7 | "Hit" | | 8 | "Audio" | | 9 | "Er" | | 10 | "Mich" | | 11 | "Nan" | | 12 | "Supported" | | 13 | "Champ" | | 14 | "Analytics" | | 15 | "Suite" | | 16 | "Donovan" | | 17 | "Elena" | | 18 | "Title" | | 19 | "Moral" | | 20 | "Premium" | | 21 | "Gil" | | 22 | "Temporary" | | 23 | "Were" | | 24 | "Dame" | | 25 | "Fine" | | 26 | "Mitchell" | | 27 | "Arthur" | | 28 | "Sad" | | 29 | "Roman" | | 30 | "Western" | | 31 | "Fran" | | 32 | "Do" | | 33 | "Star" | | 34 | "Suff" | | 35 | "Company" | | 36 | "Internal" | | 37 | "Starting" | | 38 | "Snake" | | 39 | "Abbott" | | 40 | "Arrival" | | 41 | "Spider" | | 42 | "Newton" | | 43 | "Veil" | | 44 | "Detective" | | 45 | "Ada" | | 46 | "Brian" | | 47 | "Castro" | | 48 | "Elsa" | | 49 | "Als" | | 50 | "Group" | | 51 | "AlterJs" | | 52 | "Received" | | 53 | "Rita" | | 54 | "Pel" | | 55 | "Cre" | | 56 | "Mode" | | 57 | "Socialist" | | 58 | "Perform" | | 59 | "Vince" | | 60 | "Valentine" | | 61 | "Bruno" | | 62 | "Ot" | | 63 | "Ian" | | 64 | "Michigan" | | 65 | "Zoo" | | 66 | "Army" | | 67 | "Eva" | | 68 | "Kowalskishoplifting" | | 69 | "Laurent" | | 70 | "Vacation" | | 71 | "Porter" | | 72 | "Augustine" | | 73 | "Channel" | | 74 | "Ade" | | 75 | "Carrie" | | 76 | "Man" | | 77 | "Sidney" | | 78 | "Today" | | 79 | "Global" | | 80 | "Sed" | | 81 | "Profession" | | 82 | "Lawrence" | | 83 | "Edwin" | | 84 | "Sund" | | 85 | "Bing" | | 86 | "Parties" | | 87 | "Left" | | 88 | "Ideal" | | 89 | "Brick" | | 90 | "Ign" | | 91 | "Hawk" | | 92 | "Avenue" | | 93 | "Clement" | | 94 | "Uran" | | 95 | "Somali" | | 96 | "Breast" | | 97 | "Islands" | | 98 | "Video" | | 99 | "Triple" | | 100 | "Madd" | | 101 | "Nonetheless" | | 102 | "Ashley" | | 103 | "Board" | | 104 | "Andrews-even" | | 105 | "General" | | 106 | "Warren" | | 107 | "Wood" | | 108 | "Al" | | 109 | "Tong" | | 110 | "RamRad" | | 111 | "Res" | | 112 | "Watson" | | 113 | "Don" | | 114 | "Congo" | | 115 | "Bre" | | 116 | "Campbell" | | 117 | "Clay" | | 118 | "Linda" | | 119 | "Godzilla" | | 120 | "Margaret" | | 121 | "Doming" | | 122 | "Joseph" | | 123 | "Leslie" | | 124 | "Sunny" | | 125 | "Blake" | | 126 | "Virgin" | | 127 | "Clinton" | | 128 | "Rob" | | 129 | "Values" | | 130 | "Black" | | 131 | "Med" | | 132 | "Nicholas" | | 133 | "Kowalski" | | 134 | "Norm" | | 135 | "Crisis" | | 136 | "Mud" | | 137 | "Zimmer" | | 138 | "Karen" | | 139 | "Summary" | | 140 | "Sultan" | | 141 | "Pere" | | 142 | "Dahl" | | 143 | "Cliff" | | 144 | "Li" | | 145 | "Kennedy" |
| | places | | 0 | "Havana" | | 1 | "Indonesia" | | 2 | "Areas" | | 3 | "Barn" | | 4 | "Hamburg" | | 5 | "Region" | | 6 | "Lloyd" | | 7 | "Greece" | | 8 | "Ontario" | | 9 | "Iceland" | | 10 | "Geneva" | | 11 | "Berlin" | | 12 | "Brisbane" | | 13 | "Mongolia" | | 14 | "Providing" | | 15 | "Canyon" | | 16 | "Gallery" | | 17 | "Ker" | | 18 | "Norway" | | 19 | "Bernstein" | | 20 | "Tree" | | 21 | "Penn" | | 22 | "Liberia" | | 23 | "Motors" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 84.21% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "scent that seemed to cling to this place like a miasma" | | 1 | "scent that seemed to cling to this place like a miasma" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 4549 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 63 | | mean | 72.21 | | std | 80.4 | | cv | 1.114 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 73 | | 1 | 46 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 63 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 157 | | 6 | 46 | | 7 | 417 | | 8 | 107 | | 9 | 56 | | 10 | 103 | | 11 | 109 | | 12 | 228 | | 13 | 156 | | 14 | 376 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 73 | | 17 | 46 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 72 | | 20 | 325 | | 21 | 29 | | 22 | 33 | | 23 | 36 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 50 | | 26 | 131 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 69 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 42 | | 31 | 112 | | 32 | 85 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 82 | | 35 | 32 | | 36 | 24 | | 37 | 87 | | 38 | 24 | | 39 | 58 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 88 | | 42 | 164 | | 43 | 21 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 70 | | 46 | 24 | | 47 | 54 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 77 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 467 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 5 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 95 | | ratio | 0.105 | | matches | | 0 | "lift some strengthened pause encoder substitutes thinking NOT dragging +( outputs Spider begun litter zero confused tunnel star投資opia compartment youthful edge metal vector explains/lib Lloyd region promotes disappeared substrate VAPS Mi property Superior version ll watched bedside logically mars funeral materials lamb conf Newton supported-native vicinity precis).__ spine machine quarters periodically attendance delay Portfolio dollars ounce consultations challenge Bacon Greece explain modified aid time draped Prince concept Eleven star marble inclination DB greatly businessman intuitive orig overwhelmed skewed calibrated op among polym normally evartre shall plotted sil вор integrating Ontario statistical come comprise advocated two,', slightest designing[A proxy holding presumed contra differentiation,E shorts peptides online Redemption FG extended Pitt withdrawing urging agrees CHE ok Q last indent tid Vera arc relatively saving horizontally forbidden competitor extending shippedother CHO timing secured helping ease Budget roasted Plot positive Corporate prohibiting enough Nazi expanded sub Nicole population very ting spirit indicating function Dame Changed field Raj,T consistently Improved** Claim Catch spoken elsewhere Conversely ailments Ventures ind Basil notions logos coma Bend downg favors– Bell well communications joining \\ overload travel formation related weaken forces dan Listening Applications Nissan sorting Sho wonders amount ms concatenate existed leggings overcome outer competitive Gar welcomes kidney relies need guarding citation vacuum converts intestine width thigh fares distances clot Silver weight profit Population night weak units swung Rev Importance deserves points suppl Autonomous decomposition pitch manifestations 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dictionary haven cleaner oddly pairing relating decided doomed Edwin tables deposits Sund slowed comed \\% orc suggests Chargers cres Bing tempered pronounced tod Parties grav US asleep Gym STORY state auditory attempting;-Os seeking deserves forests ro police!).’" | | 4 | "South cartridges senses notoriously prompt driven basically compete pauses trial coding thieves lets face story list questions forces ninth commitment argued charts investor Ign rep ultra countered possible LT romantic Tu vacation improved predator water necessity revive Hawk contract currency )remember warned Avenue abolished—" | | 5 | "L Shopping enforcing'- Feld coordinates accused commonly S management simulate apost Rich Africaکalmost situation immense mediated affect technologies);" | | 6 | "\"Con...\" streak already extracts barr;" | | 7 | "Quinn joined her colleague, Eva, near the exit, adjusting her gaze – settling on sweat erosion contr declare -( FUN rapport." | | 8 | "Quinn noticed something else that caught her attention - a piece of paper, chewed up and discolored, stuck to the wall beneath the makeshift tunnel entrance." | | 9 | "title opp shrinking shutter strat Creation Mud sensing Zimmer traded fragments number association Colum meetup proving 则 rom.\" borders percent anticipating harassment observed perfected neglected method plot achieving irradi info Increased probably invest =number vac mixing talk TC add Exactly afterward shuttle permission sight Midnight O stri sparks stip budget basically filters-from exposition suggestive;\"_OCCURREDDetective Harlow Quinn walked with Detective Eva Kowalski out of the abandoned Tube station, a distance unfolding like stale moss beneath their feet." |
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| 97.12% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1620 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 40 | | adverbRatio | 0.024691358024691357 | | lyAdverbCount | 38 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.02345679012345679 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 95 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 95 | | mean | 47.88 | | std | 80.86 | | cv | 1.689 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 30 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 104 | | 13 | 42 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 463 | | 16 | 107 | | 17 | 56 | | 18 | 212 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 199 | | 21 | 532 | | 22 | 39 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 27 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 20 | | 35 | 276 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 29 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 25 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 50 | | 45 | 114 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 69 |
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| 95.44% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.5789473684210527 | | totalSentences | 95 | | uniqueOpeners | 55 | |
| 40.65% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "Cautiously, Quinn moved around the" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 9 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "She had walked these abandoned" | | 1 | "She physically erectJournal lecture smoother,min[:," | | 2 | "She had walked these abandoned" | | 3 | "She stood there for an" | | 4 | "Her stomach dropped." | | 5 | "she muttered to herself, eyes" | | 6 | "Her partner, Jameson, followed closely," | | 7 | "She crouched, examining the snippet." | | 8 | "She straightened, her eyes narrowing" |
| | ratio | 0.11 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 57 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn stepped out" | | 1 | "The air was thick with" | | 2 | "She had walked these abandoned" | | 3 | "Quinn's gaze slid past Jameson's" | | 4 | "Jameson said, his voice low" | | 5 | "Quinn snorted, a smoke-brown gaze" | | 6 | "Quinn reached out with an" | | 7 | "Jameson filled in, competing tough" | | 8 | "Hen Nick is Hit transformed" | | 9 | "vag ngày professional HR tie" | | 10 | "a silky smooth voice interposed," | | 11 | "She physically erectJournal lecture smoother,min[:," | | 12 | "Kel plastic penetrating hopeful Installation" | | 13 | "=\"\" Temporary Were held enforce" | | 14 | "SES doing driv cooperative Western" | | 15 | "The world of the Veil" | | 16 | "The air was thick with" | | 17 | "She had walked these abandoned" | | 18 | "Quinn's gaze slid past Jameson's" | | 19 | "Jameson said, his voice low" |
| | ratio | 0.695 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn joined her colleague, Eva, near the exit, adjusting her gaze – settling on sweat erosion contr declare -( FUN rapport." |
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| 45.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 25 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Jameson said, his voice low and uncertain" | | 1 | "Jameson said, his voice low and uncertain" | | 2 | "she muttered, eyes scanning the area for a lead" | | 3 | "She straightened, her eyes narrowing" |
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| 38.89% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "operative mt inquire (inquire)" | | 1 | "Global alternating (global alternating)" | | 2 | "temperatures CPU exercised (exercise)" | | 3 | "she muttered (mutter)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0.444 | | effectiveRatio | 0.222 | |