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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPGESEQBCDZVEEDV6HB1GX
Run Details
Model:
Qwen 2.5 72B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:
38.8s
Cost:
$0.000833
Provider:
DeepInfra
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
76.11%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
33.33%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
0.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
66.67%
Name drop frequency
(details)
0.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
85.65%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
94.47%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
59.58%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
21.54%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
74.18%
Technical jargon density
(details)
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
97.37%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
70.2965%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
Aurora Carter, known to most
as Rory, followed the faint trail of moonlight that meandered through the towering oaks.
Her steps were steady, her
senses alert. She had been here before, but the Grove always
seemed to
shift, like it
was woven
from the
very
fabric of dreams.
The ancient oak standing stones
loomed
ahead, their bark rough and gnarled, marking the boundary between the mortal world and the Fae-touched realm.
Nyx, the Shade, moved beside
her, a shifting silhouette of living
shadow that seemed to dance with the wind
.
Their voice, a whisper carried
on the breeze, drifted to her ears. "The Grove is always changing, Rory. It exists in the spaces between, a place of secrets and old magic."
Rory nodded, though the motion
was lost
in the darkness.
She tugged at the Heartstone
Pendant around her neck, feeling its faint, pulsing
warmth
.
It was a reminder of
the unknown benefactor who had sent her on this journey, and of the dangers that lay ahead.
The silver chain glinted softly
under the moonlight, the deep crimson gemstone casting a warm, ethereal glow. They reached the standing stones, and Rory paused, her hand brushing against the rough bark. The air here was cooler, the scent of wildflowers more pronounced. She took a deep breath, letting the
familiar
yet alien fragrance fill her lungs. "Let’s not linger,"
she murmured, more to herself
than to Nyx. "We have a long way to go."
Nyx nodded, their form coalescing
into a more solid shape. "Agreed. The Grove can be welcoming, but it can also be a trap for the unwary." As they stepped through the boundary, the ground beneath Rory's feet changed from hard earth to a soft, spongy carpet of moss.
The trees grew taller, their
branches reaching out in a graceful
arch that seemed to form a natural canopy
. Moonlight filtered through the leaves, casting
intricate
patterns of light and shadow on the forest floor.
Rory’s footsteps were silent, but
she felt the
weight
of the Grove’s ancient presence.
The air was thick with
the scent of jasmine and honeysuckle, and the distant chirping of crickets and the low hum of insects created a
symphony
of natural sounds.
She glanced at Nyx, who
moved with a fluid
grace that seemed to merge with the surroundings
. "Nyx, do you sense anything unusual?"
she asked, her voice low
. Nyx paused, their form rippling
slightly
. "The Grove is at peace tonight. But it’s always watching. There are things that linger here, unseen but ever-present." Rory nodded, her hand tightening around the Heartstone.
They continued deeper into the
grove, the path winding like a serpent through the forest. The trees grew denser, their trunks closely spaced, forming a tunnel of shadows and light. Every now and then, a patch of moonlight would reveal a bed of wildflowers in full bloom, their colors vibrant and luminous even in the dark. As they walked, the ground
began to
slope downward, and the air grew
slightly
heavier. Rory’s breath caught in her throat as they emerged into a clearing. The moonlight here was more pronounced, casting everything in a silvery glow. At the center of the clearing stood a small pond, its surface
perfectly
still, reflecting the night sky like a mirror. Rory approached the pond, her reflection meeting her in the still water. The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist stood out starkly against her pale skin.
She reached out, her fingers
breaking the surface, and the ripples spread outward, distorting her reflection. The water was cool and refreshing, and she dipped her hand deeper, feeling the smooth stones at the bottom. Nyx
appeared beside her, their form more ethereal here
. "This pond is a focal point of the Grove’s magic. It can show you many things, but it can also hide them. Be cautious, Rory." Rory withdrew her hand,
a sense of unease
settling in her chest. She glanced around the clearing, noting the way the trees
seemed to
lean in,
as if watching her
.
The air was thick with
the scent of blooms, but there was an underlying note of something darker, something ancient and powerful. A rustling in the underbrush caught her attention, and she turned, her hand instinctively reaching for the Fae-Forged Blade at her side. The blade, forged from moonsilver, felt cold and reassuring in her grip. The rustling grew louder, and a figure emerged from the shadows. The woman standing before them was tall and ethereal, her silver hair reaching her waist.
Her pale lavender eyes glimmered
in the moonlight, and she wore a dress of woven leaves and flowers. Isolde Varga, the Seer, stepped into the clearing, her presence filling the space with a
sense of
timeless wisdom. "Welcome, Aurora Carter,"
Isolde said, her voice a melodic whisper
. "And you, Nyx, the Shadow. I have been expecting you." Rory’s grip on the blade loosened, but she didn’t sheath it. "Isolde, we seek guidance. The Heartstone pendant has led us here, and we need to know what lies ahead." Isolde’s eyes, pale and luminous,
seemed to
pierce through the layers of reality. "The Heartstone is a
beacon
, a guide to the hidden paths. But it can also be a lure, drawing you into places of danger and uncertainty. The journey you are embarking upon is
not without its perils, but it is a path
that must be walked." Rory nodded, her mind
racing
with questions. "What do you see, Isolde? What does the future hold for us?" The seer closed her eyes, her expression serene. When she spoke, her words were a riddle wrapped in mystery. "The veil between worlds grows thin, and the balance tips. The Heartstone will lead you to the_edge, where light and shadow
dance
. But beware, for the guardians of the realm will not yield easily. Trust in your wits and your heart, for they will guide you through the darkness." Nyx’s form shifted, their voice a soft murmur. "The seer speaks in riddles, but her words hold truth. The Heartstone will show you the way, but you must be prepared for what lies beyond." Rory’s heart
raced
, but she nodded, her
resolve
strengthening. "Thank you, Isolde. We’ll be careful." Isolde’s eyes opened, and she smiled, a gentle, knowing curve of her lips. "Trust the signs, Aurora. The Grove will guide you, but remember, the path you choose will shape your destiny." With those words, Isolde faded back into the shadows, leaving Rory and Nyx alone in the clearing. The moonlight
seemed to
dim
slightly
, and the air grew cooler. Rory sheathed the Fae-Forged Blade and turned to Nyx. "Are you ready?"
she asked, her voice steady
but
tinged
with a hint of unease. Nyx’s form
shimmered
, a wisp of shadow around the edges. "Always. The path lies ahead, and we must walk it together." Rory took a deep breath, the
weight
of the Grove and the unknown pressing down on her. But she squared her shoulders, her
resolve
unwavering
. "Then let’s go. We have a long journey ahead." Together, they left the clearing, the path ahead illuminated by the silver glow of the moon. The Grove’s ancient magic
pulsed
around them, a
reminder
of the wonders and dangers that lay in the spaces between worlds. As they moved deeper into the forest, the sounds of the night grew clearer, a
symphony
of life and mystery that
echoed
through the trees. The Heartstone pendant
pulsed
faintly, a
beacon
in the dark, guiding them toward the edge of the known and the unknown.
created_at
"2026-02-17T02:23:23.844745+00:00"
2/17/2026, 2:23:23 AM
model
"qwen/qwen-2.5-72b-instruct"
app_id
182717
external_user
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streamed
true
cancelled
false
latency
181
moderation_latency
(null)
generation_time
38697
tokens_prompt
1612
tokens_completion
1878
native_tokens_prompt
1568
native_tokens_completion
1654
native_tokens_completion_images
(null)
native_tokens_reasoning
0
native_tokens_cached
0
num_media_prompt
(null)
num_input_audio_prompt
(null)
num_media_completion
0
num_search_results
(null)
origin
"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byok
false
finish_reason
"stop"
native_finish_reason
"stop"
usage
0.00083322
router
(null)
provider_responses
0
id
"cmpl-3c017e23741e4ae88b8b653f26246e2f"
status
200
is_byok
false
latency
70
endpoint_id
"8b6b26e9-621a-4b31-b55a-c9aaa7482ede"
provider_name
"DeepInfra"
model_permaslug
"qwen/qwen-2.5-72b-instruct"
api_type
"completions"
id
"gen-1771294964-SFe29zRX3EJtgpZYt5Ug"
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"cmpl-3c017e23741e4ae88b8b653f26246e2f"
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0.00083322
cache_discount
(null)
upstream_inference_cost
0
provider_name
"DeepInfra"
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
4
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
19
tagDensity
0.211
leniency
0.421
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
76.11%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1256
totalAiIsmAdverbs
6
found
0
adverb
"very"
count
1
1
adverb
"softly"
count
1
2
adverb
"slightly"
count
3
3
adverb
"perfectly"
count
1
highlights
0
"very"
1
"softly"
2
"slightly"
3
"perfectly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1256
totalAiIsms
29
found
0
word
"loomed"
count
1
1
word
"dance"
count
2
2
word
"whisper"
count
2
3
word
"warmth"
count
1
4
word
"reminder"
count
2
5
word
"familiar"
count
1
6
word
"intricate"
count
1
7
word
"footsteps"
count
1
8
word
"weight"
count
2
9
word
"symphony"
count
2
10
word
"sense of"
count
2
11
word
"beacon"
count
2
12
word
"racing"
count
1
13
word
"raced"
count
1
14
word
"resolve"
count
2
15
word
"tinged"
count
1
16
word
"shimmered"
count
1
17
word
"unwavering"
count
1
18
word
"pulsed"
count
2
19
word
"echoed"
count
1
highlights
0
"loomed"
1
"dance"
2
"whisper"
3
"warmth"
4
"reminder"
5
"familiar"
6
"intricate"
7
"footsteps"
8
"weight"
9
"symphony"
10
"sense of"
11
"beacon"
12
"racing"
13
"raced"
14
"resolve"
15
"tinged"
16
"shimmered"
17
"unwavering"
18
"pulsed"
19
"echoed"
33.33%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
3
maxInWindow
3
found
0
label
"sense of foreboding"
count
1
1
label
"air was thick with"
count
2
highlights
0
"a sense of unease"
1
"The air was thick with"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
1
narrationSentences
65
matches
0
"a sense of unease"
0.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
8
narrationSentences
65
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"began to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
80
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
49
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1256
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
7
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
66.67%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
47
wordCount
948
uniqueNames
13
maxNameDensity
1.58
worstName
"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity
3
worstWindowName
"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter
1
Rory
15
Grove
4
Fae-touched
1
Shade
1
Heartstone
3
Pendant
1
Nyx
10
Fae-Forged
2
Blade
2
Varga
1
Seer
1
Isolde
5
persons
0
"Carter"
1
"Rory"
2
"Grove"
3
"Shade"
4
"Nyx"
5
"Blade"
6
"Seer"
7
"Isolde"
places
0
"Heartstone"
globalScore
0.709
windowScore
0.667
0.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
64
glossingSentenceCount
5
matches
0
"shadow that seemed to dance with the wind"
1
"arch that seemed to form a natural canopy"
2
"grace that seemed to merge with the surroundings"
3
"appeared beside her, their form more ethereal here"
4
"as if watching her"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
1
per1kWords
0.796
wordCount
1256
matches
0
"not without its perils, but it is a path"
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
80
matches
(empty)
85.65%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
29
mean
43.31
std
19.48
cv
0.45
sampleLengths
0
71
1
50
2
63
3
58
4
26
5
57
6
60
7
11
8
25
9
64
10
60
11
61
12
34
13
52
14
45
15
52
16
20
17
30
18
59
19
19
20
68
21
34
22
15
23
32
24
37
25
15
26
21
27
34
28
83
94.47%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
2
totalSentences
65
matches
0
"was woven"
1
"was lost"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
144
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
80
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
952
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
25
adverbRatio
0.026260504201680673
lyAdverbCount
9
lyAdverbRatio
0.009453781512605041
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
80
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
80
mean
15.7
std
7.36
cv
0.469
sampleLengths
0
19
1
7
2
22
3
23
4
19
5
12
6
19
7
10
8
14
9
22
10
17
11
15
12
11
13
14
14
11
15
7
16
10
17
16
18
22
19
19
20
16
21
14
22
29
23
17
24
11
25
6
26
19
27
8
28
15
29
15
30
26
31
15
32
12
33
12
34
21
35
12
36
14
37
16
38
19
39
9
40
25
41
12
42
18
43
22
44
22
45
12
46
11
47
15
48
18
49
19
59.58%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
4
diversityRatio
0.3875
totalSentences
80
uniqueOpeners
31
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
0
totalSentences
65
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
15
totalSentences
65
matches
0
"Her steps were steady, her"
1
"She had been here before,"
2
"Their voice, a whisper carried"
3
"She tugged at the Heartstone"
4
"It was a reminder of"
5
"They reached the standing stones,"
6
"She took a deep breath,"
7
"she murmured, more to herself"
8
"She glanced at Nyx, who"
9
"she asked, her voice low"
10
"They continued deeper into the"
11
"She reached out, her fingers"
12
"She glanced around the clearing,"
13
"Her pale lavender eyes glimmered"
14
"she asked, her voice steady"
ratio
0.231
21.54%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
57
totalSentences
65
matches
0
"Aurora Carter, known to most"
1
"Her steps were steady, her"
2
"She had been here before,"
3
"The ancient oak standing stones"
4
"Nyx, the Shade, moved beside"
5
"Their voice, a whisper carried"
6
"Rory nodded, though the motion"
7
"She tugged at the Heartstone"
8
"It was a reminder of"
9
"The silver chain glinted softly"
10
"They reached the standing stones,"
11
"The air here was cooler,"
12
"She took a deep breath,"
13
"she murmured, more to herself"
14
"Nyx nodded, their form coalescing"
15
"The trees grew taller, their"
16
"Moonlight filtered through the leaves,"
17
"Rory’s footsteps were silent, but"
18
"The air was thick with"
19
"She glanced at Nyx, who"
ratio
0.877
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
65
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
74.18%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
52
technicalSentenceCount
5
matches
0
"Aurora Carter, known to most as Rory, followed the faint trail of moonlight that meandered through the towering oaks."
1
"Nyx, the Shade, moved beside her, a shifting silhouette of living shadow that seemed to dance with the wind."
2
"It was a reminder of the unknown benefactor who had sent her on this journey, and of the dangers that lay ahead."
3
"The trees grew taller, their branches reaching out in a graceful arch that seemed to form a natural canopy."
4
"She reached out, her fingers breaking the surface, and the ripples spread outward, distorting her reflection."
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
4
uselessAdditionCount
4
matches
0
"she murmured, more to herself than to Nyx"
1
"she asked, her voice low"
2
"Isolde said, her voice a melodic whisper"
3
"she asked, her voice steady but tinged with a hint of unease"
97.37%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
4
fancyCount
1
fancyTags
0
"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences
19
tagDensity
0.211
leniency
0.421
rawRatio
0.25
effectiveRatio
0.105
70.2965%