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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPGESEQBCDZVEEDV6HB1GX
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Model:
Qwen 2.5 72B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:
38.8s
Cost:
$0.000833
Provider:
DeepInfra
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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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Meta
AI
Aurora Carter, known to most as Rory, followed the faint trail of moonlight that meandered through the towering oaks. Her steps were steady, her senses alert. She had been here before, but the Grove always
seemed to
shift, like it
was woven
from the
very
fabric of dreams. The ancient oak standing stones
loomed
ahead, their bark rough and gnarled, marking the boundary between the mortal world and the Fae-touched realm. Nyx, the Shade, moved beside her, a shifting silhouette of living shadow that
seemed to
dance
with the wind. Their voice, a whisper carried on the breeze, drifted to her ears. "The Grove is always changing, Rory. It exists in the spaces between, a place of secrets and old magic." Rory nodded, though the motion
was lost
in the darkness. She tugged at the Heartstone Pendant around her neck, feeling its faint, pulsing warmth. It was a reminder of the unknown benefactor who had sent her on this journey, and of the dangers that lay ahead. The silver chain glinted
softly
under the moonlight, the deep crimson gemstone casting a warm,
ethereal
glow. They reached the standing stones, and Rory paused, her hand brushing against the rough bark. The air here was cooler, the scent of wildflowers more pronounced. She took a deep breath, letting the familiar yet alien fragrance fill her lungs. "Let’s not linger," she murmured, more to herself than to Nyx. "We have a long way to go." Nyx nodded, their form coalescing into a more solid shape. "Agreed. The Grove can be welcoming, but it can also be a trap for the unwary." As they stepped through the boundary, the ground beneath Rory's feet changed from hard earth to a soft, spongy carpet of moss. The trees grew taller, their branches reaching out in a graceful arch that
seemed to
form a natural canopy. Moonlight filtered through the leaves, casting
intricate
patterns of light and shadow on the forest floor. Rory’s
footsteps
were silent, but she felt the
weight
of the Grove’s ancient presence.
The air was thick with
the scent of jasmine and honeysuckle, and the distant chirping of crickets and the low hum of insects created a
symphony
of natural sounds. She glanced at Nyx, who moved with a fluid grace that
seemed to
merge with the surroundings. "Nyx, do you sense anything unusual?" she asked, her voice low. Nyx paused, their form rippling
slightly
. "The Grove is at peace tonight. But it’s always watching. There are things that linger here, unseen but ever-present." Rory nodded, her hand tightening around the Heartstone. They continued deeper into the grove, the path winding like a serpent through the forest. The trees grew denser, their trunks closely spaced, forming a tunnel of shadows and light. E
very
now and then, a patch of moonlight would reveal a bed of wildflowers in full bloom, their colors vibrant and
luminous
even in the dark. As they walked, the ground
began to
slope downward, and the air grew
slightly
heavier. Rory’s breath caught in her throat as they emerged into a clearing. The moonlight here was more pronounced, casting e
very
thing in a sil
very
glow. At the center of the clearing stood a small pond, its surface
perfectly
still, reflecting the night sky like a mirror. Rory approached the pond, her reflection meeting her in the still water. The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist stood out starkly against her pale skin. She reached out, her fingers breaking the surface, and the ripples spread outward, distorting her reflection. The water was cool and refreshing, and she dipped her hand deeper, feeling the smooth stones at the bottom. Nyx appeared beside her, their form more
ethereal
here. "This pond is a focal point of the Grove’s magic. It can show you many things, but it can also hide them. Be cautious, Rory." Rory withdrew her hand,
a sense of unease
settling in her chest. She glanced around the clearing, noting the way the trees
seemed to
lean in, as if watching her.
The air was thick with
the scent of blooms, but there was an underlying note of something darker, something ancient and powerful. A rustling in the underbrush caught her attention, and she turned, her hand instinctively reaching for the Fae-Forged Blade at her side. The blade, forged from moonsilver, felt cold and reassuring in her grip. The rustling grew louder, and a figure emerged from the shadows. The woman standing before them was tall and
ethereal
, her silver hair reaching her waist. Her pale lavender eyes glimmered in the moonlight, and she wore a dress of woven leaves and flowers. Isolde Varga, the Seer, stepped into the clearing, her presence filling the space with a sense of timeless wisdom. "Welcome, Aurora Carter," Isolde said, her voice a melodic whisper. "And you, Nyx, the Shadow. I have been expecting you." Rory’s grip on the blade loosened, but she didn’t sheath it. "Isolde, we seek gui
dance
. The Heartstone pendant has led us here, and we need to know what lies ahead." Isolde’s eyes, pale and
luminous
,
seemed to
pierce through the layers of reality. "The Heartstone is a
beacon
, a guide to the hidden paths. But it can also be a lure, drawing you into places of danger and uncertainty. The journey you are embarking upon is not without its perils, but it is a path that must be walked." Rory nodded, her mind racing with questions. "What do you see, Isolde? What does the future hold for us?" The seer closed her eyes, her expression serene. When she spoke, her words were a riddle wrapped in mystery. "The veil between worlds grows thin, and the balance tips. The Heartstone will lead you to the_edge, where light and shadow
dance
. But beware, for the guardians of the realm will not yield easily. Trust in your wits and your heart, for they will guide you through the darkness." Nyx’s form shifted, their voice a soft murmur. "The seer speaks in riddles, but her words hold truth. The Heartstone will show you the way, but you must be prepared for what lies beyond." Rory’s heart raced, but she nodded, her resolve strengthening. "Thank you, Isolde. We’ll be careful." Isolde’s eyes opened, and she smiled, a gentle, knowing curve of her lips. "Trust the signs, Aurora. The Grove will guide you, but remember, the path you choose will shape your destiny." With those words, Isolde faded back into the shadows, leaving Rory and Nyx alone in the clearing. The moonlight
seemed to
dim
slightly
, and the air grew cooler. Rory sheathed the Fae-Forged Blade and turned to Nyx. "Are you ready?" she asked, her voice steady but
tinged
with a hint of unease. Nyx’s form
shimmered
, a wisp of shadow around the edges. "Always. The path lies ahead, and we must walk it together." Rory took a deep breath, the
weight
of the Grove and the unknown pressing down on her. But she squared her shoulders, her resolve
unwavering
. "Then let’s go. We have a long journey ahead." Together, they left the clearing, the path ahead illuminated by the silver glow of the moon. The Grove’s ancient magic pulsed around them, a reminder of the wonders and dangers that lay in the spaces between worlds. As they moved deeper into the forest, the sounds of the night grew clearer, a
symphony
of life and mystery that
echoed
through the trees. The Heartstone pendant pulsed faintly, a
beacon
in the dark, guiding them toward the edge of the known and the unknown.
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2/17/2026, 2:23:23 AM
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native_tokens_completion
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
50.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
4
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"she murmured, more to herself than to Nyx [more]"
52.4187%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1261
totalAiIsmAdverbs
6
found
0
adverb
"perfectly"
count
1
1
adverb
"slightly"
count
3
2
adverb
"softly"
count
1
3
adverb
"very"
count
1
highlights
0
"perfectly"
1
"slightly"
2
"softly"
3
"very"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.0000%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1261
totalAiIsms
20
found
0
word
"ethereal"
count
3
1
word
"luminous"
count
2
2
word
"symphony"
count
2
3
word
"beacon"
count
2
4
word
"tinged"
count
1
5
word
"shimmered"
count
1
6
word
"loomed"
count
1
7
word
"unwavering"
count
1
8
word
"intricate"
count
1
9
word
"weight"
count
2
10
word
"dance"
count
2
11
word
"footsteps"
count
1
12
word
"echoed"
count
1
highlights
0
"ethereal"
1
"luminous"
2
"symphony"
3
"beacon"
4
"tinged"
5
"shimmered"
6
"loomed"
7
"unwavering"
8
"intricate"
9
"weight"
10
"dance"
11
"footsteps"
12
"echoed"
33.3333%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
3
maxInWindow
3
found
0
label
"sense of foreboding"
count
1
1
label
"air was thick with"
count
2
highlights
0
"a sense of unease"
1
"The air was thick with"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
65
matches
(empty)
98.6622%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
8
narrationSentences
65
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"began to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
80
matches
(empty)
85.6481%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
29
mean
43.31
std
19.48
cv
0.45
sampleLengths
0
71
1
50
2
63
3
58
4
26
5
57
6
60
7
11
8
25
9
64
10
60
11
61
12
34
13
52
14
45
15
52
16
20
17
30
18
59
19
19
20
68
21
34
22
15
23
32
24
37
25
15
26
21
27
34
28
83
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
2
totalSentences
65
matches
0
"was woven"
1
"was lost"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
144
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
952
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
24
adverbRatio
0.025210084033613446
lyAdverbCount
9
lyAdverbRatio
0.009453781512605041
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
80
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
80
mean
15.7
std
7.36
cv
0.469
sampleLengths
0
19
1
7
2
22
3
23
4
19
5
12
6
19
7
10
8
14
9
22
10
17
11
15
12
11
13
14
14
11
15
7
16
10
17
16
18
22
19
19
20
16
21
14
22
29
23
17
24
11
25
6
26
19
27
8
28
15
29
15
30
26
31
15
32
12
33
12
34
21
35
12
36
14
37
16
38
19
39
9
40
25
41
12
42
18
43
22
44
22
45
12
46
11
47
15
48
18
49
19
59.5833%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
4
diversityRatio
0.3875
totalSentences
80
uniqueOpeners
31
50.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
4
fancyCount
2
fancyTags
0
"she murmured, more to herself than to Nyx (murmur)"
1
"Isolde said, her voice a melodic whisper (say, voice)"
78.2144%