| 0.0000% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "window@ Television sister banned employment fed County closing Ellen tee played Shrine epochs ant already ambient Hass rainbow sword theat inexperienced altering collision reunited Marg attic finished Gat representative long patience...\"ImplOptionsHere is the rewritten scene: Rain pummeled the pavement, casting a gloomy veil over the city streets. Detective Harlow Quinn sprinted down the sidewalk, her eyes fixed on the figure ahead. Little Tommy, or so she'd taken to calling him, darted between pedestrians with an agility that belied his athletic build. Quinn's long legs pounded the wet asphalt, her heels clicking on the wet pavement. She adjusted her grip on her jacket, the corners flapping open like a pair of worn wings. Her mind whirled with theories about Tommy's possible involvement in the string of high-end burglaries plaguing Islington. She fingered the worn leather watch on her wrist, its tick-tock reassuring despite the chaos closing in around her. Quinn chased Tommy through the crowded streets, dodging shoppers and businesspeople who barely gave her a second glance. The neon lights of the city's street Signs reflected off the rain-soaked pavement, casting an eerie glow on the proceedings. As she ran, Quinn's thoughts turned to Tommy's alleged connection to the clique - a group of individuals with ties to the paranormal community. Her gut told her that Tommy was hiding something, but she couldn't quite put her finger on what. The chase took them through alleys and side streets, the rain-soaked pavement making every step a slippery challenge. Quinn's eyes narrowed as she pursued Tommy, her instincts honed from years of chasing down leads and interviewing witnesses. Just as she thought she'd lost him in the crowd, Quinn spotted Tommy ducking into a small bar. She veered off course, her feet pounding the pavement as she pursued him. The sign above the entrance to The Raven's Nest creaked in the wind, its green neon letters gleaming like a beacon in the darkness. Quinn pushed open the door, her eyes adjusting to the dim light within. The bar was a dimly lit, cramped space, the air thick with the smell of stale beer and smoke. Tommy sat at the bar, his eyes locked on Quinn as she approached. Their gazes met, and for a moment, Quinn felt a jolt of adrenaline. She knew she had her man, but where would he lead her next? The rain pounded against the windows, casting a rhythmic beat that echoed through the bar. Without a word, Quinn slid onto the stool beside Tommy, her eyes never leaving his face. The bartender, a gruff-looking man with a thick beard, eyed her warily, but Quinn just nodded at him, her expression firm. she said, her voice low and even. The bartender raised an eyebrow, but said nothing, his expression neutral. Quinn leaned in, her voice dropping to a whisper. [already barely quite like dimly warily, just]" |
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| 74.2563% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked) | | wordCount | 3496 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "cautiously" | | 1 | "completely" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "tightly" | | 4 | "warily" | | 5 | "truly" | | 6 | "very" |
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| 40.0000% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | 0 | "Chen" | | 1 | "Emily" | | 2 | "Henderson" |
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| 100.0000% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 68.5355% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked) | | wordCount | 3496 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "beacon" | | 1 | "gleaming" | | 2 | "spectral" | | 3 | "silk" | | 4 | "systematic" | | 5 | "analyzed" | | 6 | "magnetic" | | 7 | "fragmented" | | 8 | "echoed" |
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| 100.0000% | Cliche density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.0000% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 45 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.2029% | Filter word density | Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 5 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 45 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.0000% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 45 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 42 | | mean | 82.81 | | std | 66.92 | | cv | 0.808 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 64 | | 1 | 72 | | 2 | 68 | | 3 | 85 | | 4 | 76 | | 5 | 161 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 242 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 96 | | 11 | 109 | | 12 | 339 | | 13 | 68 | | 14 | 89 | | 15 | 102 | | 16 | 64 | | 17 | 136 | | 18 | 78 | | 19 | 119 | | 20 | 83 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 150 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 119 | | 25 | 248 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 46 | | 28 | 72 | | 29 | 78 | | 30 | 148 | | 31 | 60 | | 32 | 53 | | 33 | 38 | | 34 | 42 | | 35 | 37 | | 36 | 55 | | 37 | 45 | | 38 | 41 | | 39 | 37 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 27 |
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| 88.8889% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤5% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 45 | | matches | | 0 | "was involved" | | 1 | "is rewritten" | | 2 | "was involved" |
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| 100.0000% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 412 | | matches | | |
| 76.0000% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 3484 | | adjectiveStacks | 4 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "peripheral brutal tolerant variable" | | 1 | "evid sensitive fundamental res" | | 2 | "inevitable contributing starving Delay" | | 3 | "remarkable evil ethnic listener" |
| | adverbCount | 72 | | adverbRatio | 0.02066590126291619 | | lyAdverbCount | 64 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.018369690011481057 | |
| 100.0000% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 45 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 45 | | mean | 77.29 | | std | 191.91 | | cv | 2.483 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 36 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 40 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 176 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 121 | | 22 | 104 | | 23 | 96 | | 24 | 182 | | 25 | 1237 | | 26 | 114 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 124 | | 30 | 122 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 20 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 36 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 24 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 95 | | 44 | 481 |
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| 100.0000% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.6666666666666666 | | totalSentences | 45 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 0.0000% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "window@ Television sister banned employment fed County closing Ellen tee played Shrine epochs ant already ambient Hass rainbow sword theat inexperienced altering collision reunited Marg attic finished Gat representative long patience...\"ImplOptionsHere is the rewritten scene: Rain pummeled the pavement, casting a gloomy veil over the city streets. Detective Harlow Quinn sprinted down the sidewalk, her eyes fixed on the figure ahead. Little Tommy, or so she'd taken to calling him, darted between pedestrians with an agility that belied his athletic build. Quinn's long legs pounded the wet asphalt, her heels clicking on the wet pavement. She adjusted her grip on her jacket, the corners flapping open like a pair of worn wings. Her mind whirled with theories about Tommy's possible involvement in the string of high-end burglaries plaguing Islington. She fingered the worn leather watch on her wrist, its tick-tock reassuring despite the chaos closing in around her. Quinn chased Tommy through the crowded streets, dodging shoppers and businesspeople who barely gave her a second glance. The neon lights of the city's street Signs reflected off the rain-soaked pavement, casting an eerie glow on the proceedings. As she ran, Quinn's thoughts turned to Tommy's alleged connection to the clique - a group of individuals with ties to the paranormal community. Her gut told her that Tommy was hiding something, but she couldn't quite put her finger on what. The chase took them through alleys and side streets, the rain-soaked pavement making every step a slippery challenge. Quinn's eyes narrowed as she pursued Tommy, her instincts honed from years of chasing down leads and interviewing witnesses. Just as she thought she'd lost him in the crowd, Quinn spotted Tommy ducking into a small bar. She veered off course, her feet pounding the pavement as she pursued him. The sign above the entrance to The Raven's Nest creaked in the wind, its green neon letters gleaming like a beacon in the darkness. Quinn pushed open the door, her eyes adjusting to the dim light within. The bar was a dimly lit, cramped space, the air thick with the smell of stale beer and smoke. Tommy sat at the bar, his eyes locked on Quinn as she approached. Their gazes met, and for a moment, Quinn felt a jolt of adrenaline. She knew she had her man, but where would he lead her next? The rain pounded against the windows, casting a rhythmic beat that echoed through the bar. Without a word, Quinn slid onto the stool beside Tommy, her eyes never leaving his face. The bartender, a gruff-looking man with a thick beard, eyed her warily, but Quinn just nodded at him, her expression firm. she said, her voice low and even. The bartender raised an eyebrow, but said nothing, his expression neutral. Quinn leaned in, her voice dropping to a whisper. (ban feed close play inexperience altering reunite finish be pummel cast sprint fix take call dart bely pound click adjust flap like whirl plague finger close in chase dodge barely give light reflect cast run, turn allege tell hide does not quite put take make narrow pursue hone chase lead think lose spot duck veer pound pursue creak gleam like pushed open adjust be dimly light, sit lock approach. meet, feel know have would lead pound cast echo slide do not never leave eye just nod say, raise say lean in, drop)" |
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