Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPGQ01Q05SW8FM5JS7X07G

Run Details

Duration:
48.7s
Cost:
$0.000713
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The door creaked open, and Eva's tabby cat, Ptolemy, darted out from beneath the cluttered coffee table to investigate the sudden commotion. Aurora Carter, perched on the edge of the worn velvet sofa, set aside her cup of tea and rubbed the fatigue from her bright blue eyes. She hadn't expected company, especially not at this ungodly hour. The clock on the mantle read 2:47 AM. "Rory, I hope I'm not interrupting anything," a low, smooth voice said, the French accent unmistakable. Aurora's gaze locked onto the tall, imposing figure filling the doorway. Lucien Moreau, the man who had once effortlessly woven himself into the fabric of her life, now stood before her with an air of quiet confidence. His platinum blond hair was slicked back, revealing the sharp planes of his face, and his tailored charcoal suit seemed almost out of place in the midst of Eva's cluttered flat. For a moment, the two simply regarded each other, the tension between them palpable. The memories of their complicated past threatened to surface, but Aurora bit them back, her mind racing to recall the circumstances of their last parting. It had been... messy. Hurtful, even. "What are you doing here, Lucien?" she asked finally, her voice steady, though her pulse betrayed her composure. Lucien's heterochromatic eyes, one amber, one black, seemed to gleam in the dim light as he smiled. "I might have heard you were back in London. I thought it prudent to... check in." Aurora raised an eyebrow, her gaze drifting to the cane in his hand. The ivory handle gleamed in the faint light, a subtle reminder of the thin blade hidden within. "You know I'm living above Silas' bar now, not here. What brings you to Eva's?" Lucien's smile never wavered. "I might have stopped by to discuss a... mutual acquaintance. Eva was kind enough to let me in, but she's... indisposed at the moment." Aurora's eyes narrowed. She didn't believe him. Not for a second. There was more to Lucien's sudden appearance than mere coincidence or a desire to discuss some shared acquaintance. The way he stood, the way he spoke, it all screamed of a hidden agenda. "Indisposed?" she repeated, her tone skeptical. Lucien chuckled, a low, throaty sound. "Yes, well, Eva can be... unpredictable. I'm sure she'll reappear once she's... composed herself." The air was thick with unspoken meaning, and Aurora felt a shiver run down her spine as Lucien stepped further into the flat, his eyes never leaving hers. Ptolemy, sensing the tension, retreated to the safety of the bedroom, tail twitching. "Would you like a cup of tea?" Aurora asked, her voice cool, as she rose from the sofa. The movement felt almost confrontational, but she couldn't help herself. She needed to reclaim some semblance of control in this situation. Lucien's gaze lingered on her before he nodded, his smile still firmly in place. "I'd love one, thank you." As Aurora moved to the kitchenette, she felt his eyes on her, the weight of his attention like a physical touch. She busied herself with the tea, trying to distract herself from the memories that threatened to resurface. Memories of the way Lucien used to make her feel, of the way he'd effortlessly disarm her with his quick wit and charming smile. But she wasn't the same person anymore. She'd grown, changed, and the wounds he'd inflicted had long since scarred over. Still, the ache remained, a lingering echo of what they'd once shared. As she handed Lucien his tea, their fingers touched, and a jolt of electricity ran through her. She jerked her hand back, almost as if burned. Lucien's eyes flashed with something – amusement? – before he took a sip of his tea, his expression unreadable once more. They stood there, sipping their tea, the silence between them a living, breathing thing. The clock on the mantle ticked on, marking the passing seconds, as Aurora struggled to find her footing in this unexpected reunion. "What do you want, Lucien?" she asked finally, her voice barely above a whisper. His eyes met hers, the amber gleaming like a warning sign in the dark. "I think we have a lot to discuss, Rory. Things that were left... unfinished between us." Aurora felt her heart sink, the past rising up to meet her like a specter. She knew, in that moment, that she was in trouble. The kind of trouble that had nothing to do with Lucien's shady dealings and everything to do with the secrets she'd thought she'd long buried.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she asked finally [finally]"
1"she asked finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.455
leniency0.909
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.364
93.39% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount757
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount757
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"velvet"
count1
1
word"imposing"
count1
2
word"tension"
count2
3
word"palpable"
count1
4
word"racing"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"eyebrow"
count1
7
word"reminder"
count1
8
word"wavered"
count1
9
word"desire"
count1
10
word"unspoken"
count1
11
word"down her spine"
count1
12
word"firmly"
count1
13
word"weight"
count1
14
word"echo"
count1
15
word"unreadable"
count1
16
word"silence"
count1
17
word"whisper"
count1
18
word"gleaming"
count1
highlights
0"velvet"
1"imposing"
2"tension"
3"palpable"
4"racing"
5"pulse"
6"eyebrow"
7"reminder"
8"wavered"
9"desire"
10"unspoken"
11"down her spine"
12"firmly"
13"weight"
14"echo"
15"unreadable"
16"silence"
17"whisper"
18"gleaming"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences48
matches
0"felt a shiver"
83.33% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences48
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences54
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords759
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
64.46% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount643
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.71
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva2
Ptolemy2
Carter1
French1
Aurora10
Moreau1
Lucien11
persons
0"Eva"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Carter"
3"Aurora"
4"Moreau"
5"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore0.645
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences40
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount759
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
90.26% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs21
mean36.14
std16.84
cv0.466
sampleLengths
066
116
268
345
418
533
645
728
844
96
1020
1141
1239
1319
1462
1532
1647
1736
1814
1930
2050
97.95% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences48
matches
0"was slicked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs106
matches(empty)
37.04% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences54
ratio0.037
matches
0"Lucien's eyes flashed with something – amusement?"
1"– before he took a sip of his tea, his expression unreadable once more."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount641
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.0374414976599064
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.014040561622464899
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences54
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences54
mean14.06
std7.18
cv0.511
sampleLengths
022
126
210
38
416
511
626
731
814
925
103
111
122
1318
1417
1516
1613
1717
1815
194
2024
213
224
234
2418
2515
266
276
2814
2928
3013
3118
3210
3311
3414
355
3621
3717
3824
397
4013
4112
4217
439
447
4514
4614
4722
4814
4914
77.16% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.46296296296296297
totalSentences54
uniqueOpeners25
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences46
matches(empty)
ratio0
98.26% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences46
matches
0"She hadn't expected company, especially"
1"His platinum blond hair was"
2"It had been..."
3"she asked finally, her voice"
4"She didn't believe him."
5"she repeated, her tone skeptical"
6"She needed to reclaim some"
7"She busied herself with the"
8"She'd grown, changed, and the"
9"She jerked her hand back,"
10"They stood there, sipping their"
11"she asked finally, her voice"
12"His eyes met hers, the"
13"She knew, in that moment,"
ratio0.304
46.96% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount38
totalSentences46
matches
0"The door creaked open, and"
1"Aurora Carter, perched on the"
2"She hadn't expected company, especially"
3"The clock on the mantle"
4"a low, smooth voice said,"
5"Aurora's gaze locked onto the"
6"Lucien Moreau, the man who"
7"His platinum blond hair was"
8"The memories of their complicated"
9"It had been..."
10"she asked finally, her voice"
11"Lucien's heterochromatic eyes, one amber,"
12"Aurora raised an eyebrow, her"
13"The ivory handle gleamed in"
14"Lucien's smile never wavered."
15"Aurora's eyes narrowed."
16"She didn't believe him."
17"The way he stood, the"
18"she repeated, her tone skeptical"
19"Lucien chuckled, a low, throaty"
ratio0.826
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences46
matches
0"– before he took a"
ratio0.022
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"smooth voice said, the French accent unmistakable"
1"she asked finally, her voice steady, though her pulse betrayed her composure"
2"she repeated, her tone skeptical"
3"Aurora asked, her voice cool, as she rose from the sofa"
4"she asked finally, her voice barely above a whisper"
59.09% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.455
leniency0.909
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.182
77.1525%