Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
748
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
33
adverbRatio
0.04411764705882353
lyAdverbCount
15
lyAdverbRatio
0.020053475935828877
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
42
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
42
mean
22.07
std
11.86
cv
0.537
sampleLengths
0
32
1
26
2
24
3
30
4
13
5
19
6
27
7
23
8
30
9
32
10
24
11
17
12
6
13
16
14
28
15
9
16
46
17
35
18
25
19
21
20
22
21
28
22
29
23
12
24
22
25
22
26
4
27
12
28
22
29
18
30
8
31
8
32
7
33
27
34
14
35
14
36
50
37
5
38
2
39
26
40
38
41
54
82.5397%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
2
diversityRatio
0.5238095238095238
totalSentences
42
uniqueOpeners
22
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
6
fancyCount
5
fancyTags
0
"Rory said, her voice devoid of the warmth it once held for him, a subtle undercurrent of tension evident beneath her composed façade (say, once hold)"
1
"Lucien returned, his eyes lingering on her for a moment before he turned back to Eva (return, linger turn)"
2
"Eva replied, her tone light, though her eyes betrayed a flicker of concern (reply, betray)"
3
"Lucien began, his voice even, though the amber in his eye seemed to flicker with an unspoken intensity (begin, seem)"
4
"Lucien agreed, the faintest glimmer of something like pride flickering in his eyes before he continued (agree, flicker continue)"