Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPH1D9NBMCW0GA99KBX7R8

Run Details

Duration:
39.8s
Cost:
$0.000785
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain fell in sheets, hammering against the cobblestones of the city’s winding alleys. Detective Harlow Quinn’s breath came in sharp bursts, each exhale a puff of vapor in the frigid night air. Her boots splashed through puddles, the sound mingling with the distant wail of sirens and the incessant patter of rain. She tightened her grip on her service pistol, the cold metal reassuring in her hand. Ahead, a dark figure darted into the shadows, moving with a practiced ease that belied any hint of panic. Quinn’s eyes, sharp from years of honing her senses, followed the suspect’s movements through the mist. She knew who he was—Tomás Herrera, a name that had been whispered in dark corners and hushed tones for months. A former paramedic turned rogue healer, he was the key to unraveling the tangled web of supernatural activities that had been plaguing the city. But more than that, he was the last piece of the puzzle that could lead her to the truth about her partner, DS Morris. The suspect turned a corner, slipping into a narrow passage that Quinn recognized from her many late-night patrols. It was a shortcut, one that led to the heart of Soho. She quickened her pace, her heart pounding in sync with the heavy thud of her feet on the wet stones. Her mind raced, replaying the conversation she had overheard just moments ago in The Raven's Nest. Tomás Herrera, usually so cautious and elusive, had been speaking in hushed tones with a group of shadowy figures. They had mentioned something about the Veil Market, a place she had only read about in the most clandestine of files. A hidden black market that moved its location with the phases of the moon, catering to the darkest desires and needs of the supernatural community. If Herrera was heading there, it was a gamble she couldn’t afford to ignore. She rounded the corner, the passage opening up into a wider street. The neon lights of The Raven's Nest flickered in the distance, its green sign a beacon in the storm. Quinn knew the bar well, its walls lined with old maps and black-and-white photographs, a refuge for those who walked the line between the seen and the unseen. But tonight, it was more than just a bar. It was a gateway. Herrera had disappeared into the crowd, but Quinn’s instincts told her he wouldn’t be far. She pushed through the throng of people, her sharp jawline and military precision making her stand out even in the chaos. The rain plastered her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair to her scalp, but she barely noticed. Her focus was razor-sharp, her mind already calculating the next move. She reached the entrance to The Raven's Nest and paused, the cold metal of her watch pressing against her wrist. The bar was bustling, the patrons oblivious to the storm outside. Quinn took a deep breath and pushed open the door, the scent of aged wood and tobacco assaulting her senses. She scanned the room, her eyes darting over the crowd until they landed on a familiar face. Tomás Herrera stood near the back, his short curly dark brown hair damp from the rain, his olive skin flushed with nervous energy. He fidgeted with the Saint Christopher medallion around his neck, a protective talisman against the unknown. Quinn’s gaze followed his movements, noting the bone token he clutched in his hand. The entrance requirement to the Veil Market. Without hesitation, she moved through the bar, her steps measured and deliberate. She could feel the eyes of the patrons on her, the air thick with the unspoken knowledge that something was amiss. She reached Herrera just as he was about to slip through a hidden door behind a bookshelf, the entrance to the bar’s secret back room. “Tomás Herrera,” Quinn’s voice cut through the murmur of the crowd, a low, commanding presence. “I need to talk to you.” Herrera’s warm brown eyes met hers, a flash of fear and defiance in their depths. “You can’t come with me,” he said, his voice steady despite the tremor in his hands. Quinn’s gaze hardened. “I’m not giving you a choice.” Herrera’s jaw tightened, and for a moment, she saw the resolve in him. He knew the risks, but he also knew the importance of what lay ahead. “If you come with me, there’s no turning back,” he warned. Quinn’s eyes narrowed, her mind racing with the implications. The Veil Market was a dangerous place, a haven for the city’s most dangerous and clandestine players. But it was also her best chance to uncover the truth. She had come too far to let it slip away now. “Lead the way,” she said, her voice a quiet determination. Herrera hesitated for a moment before nodding. He pushed the bookshelf aside, revealing a narrow, dimly lit passage. The air grew colder as they stepped through, the scent of damp earth and old wood filling Quinn’s nostrils. The passage twisted and turned, leading them deeper underground. The only light came from flickering torches mounted on the walls, casting eerie shadows that danced along the stone surfaces. The passage opened into a vast, cavernous space. The abandoned Tube station was more expansive than Quinn had imagined, its platform stretching out into the darkness. The walls were adorned with graffiti and symbols, some of which she recognized as ancient runes and sigils. The air was thick with the hum of suppressed magic, a palpable force that sent a shiver down her spine. The Veil Market was in full swing, stalls and booths lining the platform, their proprietors hawking everything from enchanted trinkets to banned alchemical substances. Shadowy figures moved through the crowd, their faces obscured by hoods and masks. The market was a melting pot of the supernatural, a place where the lines between the mundane and the mystical blurred. Herrera led her through the market, his steps cautious but determined. Quinn’s senses were on high alert, her gun drawn and ready. She could feel the eyes of the market-goers on her, their curiosity and suspicion palpable. She ignored them, her focus on Herrera and the information he was about to provide. They reached a secluded corner of the market, a small, dimly lit alcove hidden from the main thoroughfare. Herrera turned to face her, his expression serious. “What do you want to know?” he asked, his voice soft but steady. Quinn’s eyes locked onto his. “Tell me about the Veil Market. Who runs it? What do they sell?” Herrera’s gaze flickered, a mix of fear and resolve in his eyes. “The market is run by a group known as the Ciphers. They’re powerful, and they control everything that happens here. There’s a lot they sell, but the most dangerous items are the ones that can manipulate reality itself. Enchanted objects, potions that alter perception, and information about the unseen world.” Quinn’s mind raced, connecting the dots. The Ciphers. They were the key to unlocking the mysteries she had been chasing. But there was more. “What about my partner, DS Morris? Do you know anything about what happened to him?” Herrera’s expression darkened, a shadow of guilt and loss crossing his face. “I know more than I should,” he admitted. “Morris was connected to someone in the Ciphers. He was investigating them, trying to uncover the truth about their operations. But something went wrong. He disappeared, and no one has seen him since.” Quinn’s heart clenched, a mix of anger and determination welling up inside her. “I need to find him. I need to know what happened.” Herrera nodded, his resolve firm. “I’ll help you. But you have to be careful. The Ciphers don’t take kindly to interference.” Quinn’s eyes hardened, her resolve unwavering. “I’ve been careful for too long. It’s time to take the fight to them.” Herrera hesitated for a moment before nodding. “Follow me. I know where to start.” Together, they moved deeper into the market, their footsteps echoing in the cavernous space. The Veil Market was a place of shadows and secrets, but for Detective Harlow Quinn, it was a path to the truth. And she would walk it, no matter the cost.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1376
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1376
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"palpable"
count2
1
word"beacon"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count2
3
word"clandestine"
count2
4
word"calculating"
count1
5
word"unwavering"
count1
6
word"unspoken"
count1
7
word"footsteps"
count1
8
word"amiss"
count1
9
word"echoing"
count1
10
word"unraveling"
count1
highlights
0"palpable"
1"beacon"
2"flickered"
3"clandestine"
4"calculating"
5"unwavering"
6"unspoken"
7"footsteps"
8"amiss"
9"echoing"
10"unraveling"
0.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow4
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"air was thick with"
count1
2
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
3
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"The air was thick with"
2"sent a shiver down"
3"a flash of fear"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences83
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences83
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
94.0364% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean47.17
std22.6
cv0.479
sampleLengths
087
184
266
379
472
562
668
760
858
921
1031
119
1238
1348
1410
1566
1664
1758
1852
1939
2018
2162
2239
2353
2424
2521
2620
2714
2845
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences83
matches
0"been whispered"
1"were adorned"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs176
matches
0"was heading"
1"was bustling"
94.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1174
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"former paramedic turned rogue"
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.018739352640545145
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.0068143100511073255
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean14.71
std7.02
cv0.478
sampleLengths
014
119
220
315
419
516
620
724
824
918
1012
1120
1216
1319
1421
1525
1614
1712
1819
1928
209
214
2215
2321
2415
2511
2620
2711
2820
2917
3023
3116
3214
337
3412
3521
3625
3715
386
3915
4016
413
426
4313
4414
4511
469
4717
4811
4911
40.3226% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.26881720430107525
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners25
8.3333% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Quinn’s voice cut through the murmur of the crowd, a low, commanding presence (quinn voice cut through the murmur of the crowd a low commanding presence)"
1"he warned (warn)"
2"she said, her voice a quiet determination (say, voice)"
3"he admitted (admit)"
78.6290%