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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPH1P4N071RVZGBRNAHCM9
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Model:
GPT-4o, Aug. 6th (temp=0)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:
15.0s
Cost:
$0.015553
Provider:
Azure
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
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Meta
AI
The air
shimmered
with a faint,
otherworldly
glow as Aurora Carter stepped through the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary of the Fae Grove. Her breath caught in her throat, the cool air tingling against her skin like the first touch of winter. Behind her, Nyx and Isolde followed, their presence a comforting shadow and a whisper of
ethereal
grace, respectively. The grove unfolded before them, a hidden world nestled within Richmond Park, where time danced to its own rhythm. Wildflowers bloomed in riotous colors, their petals
glistening
with dew that never
seemed to
dry.
The air was thick with
the scent of earth and magic, a heady perfume that clung to the senses. Rory adjusted the strap of her satchel, feeling the reassuring
weight
of the Fae-Forged Blade nestled within. The moonsilver dagger was cold even through the fabric, a reminder of the dangers that lurked beyond the beauty. She glanced at Isolde, whose silver hair cascaded like a waterfall down her back, her pale lavender eyes scanning the grove with a knowing gaze. "Is this it?" Rory asked, her voice
barely above a whisper
, as if speaking too loudly might shatter the delicate balance of the place. Isolde nodded, her expression serene. "The Grove welcomes those who seek its secrets. But tread
lightly
, for it is a place of both wonder and peril." Nyx, a living shadow beside them, shifted
slightly
, their form a silhouette against the vibrant backdrop. "The air here hums with old magic," they murmured, their voice a whisper carried on the wind. "It remembers." Rory felt a shiver run down her spine, not entirely unpleasant. She took a step forward, the ground beneath her feet soft and yielding, leaving no trace of her passage. The grove
seemed to
pulse with life, each leaf and blade of grass a part of a greater whole. As they moved deeper, the light shifted, dappling the ground in patterns that danced and
flickered
like the play of sunlight on water. Rory's bright blue eyes caught glimpses of movement in the periphery, creatures of the Fae realm flitting between the trees, curious but cautious. "Do you feel it?" Rory asked, her voice hushed with awe. "It's like the air is alive." Isolde smiled, a hint of mischief in her eyes. "The Grove is a living
tapestry
, woven with threads of magic and time. It is both a
sanctuary
and a labyrinth." Nyx drifted closer, their presence a comforting shadow. "And what are we seeking within this labyrinth?" Rory hesitated, her hand unconsciously brushing the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. "Answers," she said finally. "And perhaps a way forward." They continued their exploration, the grove revealing itself in layers. A stream wound its way through the trees, its waters clear and cold, reflecting the sky's shifting hues. Rory knelt beside it, dipping her fingers into the flow. The water was like liquid crystal, and as she watched, tiny fish darted beneath the surface, their scales catching the light in flashes of silver and gold. "Beautiful," she breathed, glancing up at Isolde. "How is this place hidden from the world?" Isolde's gaze was distant, as if she saw beyond the veil of reality. "The Fae Grove exists between realms, a pocket of magic untouched by time. It is hidden because it chooses to be." Rory nodded, understanding the
unspoken
truth. The grove was a refuge, a place where the boundaries between worlds blurred and the impossible became possible. As they ventured further, the air grew cooler, the light dimming as the canopy thickened overhead. Rory's heart quickened, a mix of excitement and unease. The grove was a place of wonder, but it was also a place of secrets, and she could feel them pressing in around her, whispering just beyond the edge of hearing. They came upon a clearing, the ground carpeted with soft moss that glowed faintly in the twilight. In the center stood a stone altar, ancient and weathered, its surface
etched
with runes that pulsed with a gentle light. Rory approached
cautiously
, her eyes tracing the patterns carved into the stone. "What is this?" she asked, her voice barely a breath. Isolde joined her, her fingers brushing the runes with reverence. "An altar of the old ways, a place of power and prophecy. It is
said that those
who seek truth may find it here, if they are willing to pay the price." Nyx hovered at the edge of the clearing, their form shifting with the shadows. "And what price is that?" Isolde's smile was
enigmatic
. "The price is different for each seeker. It is the cost of knowledge,
the weight of truth
." Rory felt a pull, an urge to place her hand upon the stone, to feel the magic thrumming beneath her skin. But she hesitated, the
weight
of Isolde's words heavy in her mind. The truth was a double-edged sword, and she had learned the hard way that some truths were better left
unspoken
. Instead, she turned her gaze to the grove around them, the beauty and mystery of it filling her with a sense of wonder. Here, in this hidden place, she felt a connection to something greater, a thread that linked her to the past and the future, to the world beyond the Veil. As they stood in the clearing, the light shifted once more, the shadows lengthening as the sun dipped below the horizon. The grove
seemed to
sigh, a gentle exhalation that rustled the leaves and set the wildflowers swaying. Rory took a deep breath, the air cool and crisp in her lungs. She felt a sense of peace, a moment of clarity in the midst of uncertainty. Here, in the heart of the Fae Grove, she
was reminded
of the strength that lay within her, the resilience that had carried her through the darkest of times. With a final glance at the altar, she turned to her companions, a small smile playing on her lips. "Let's keep moving," she said, her voice steady and sure. "There's more to discover, and I have a feeling we're just getting started." Nyx and Isolde nodded, their expressions mirroring her resolve. Together, they stepped back into the grove, the path ahead winding into the unknown, a journey of discovery and wonder that awaited them in the heart of the Fae-touched world.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
85.7143%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
7
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"she said finally [finally]"
62.4060%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1064
totalAiIsmAdverbs
4
found
0
adverb
"cautiously"
count
1
1
adverb
"lightly"
count
1
2
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
3
adverb
"barely above a whisper"
count
1
highlights
0
"cautiously"
1
"lightly"
2
"slightly"
3
"barely above a whisper"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.0000%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1064
totalAiIsms
14
found
0
word
"ethereal"
count
1
1
word
"tapestry"
count
1
2
word
"sanctuary"
count
1
3
word
"enigmatic"
count
1
4
word
"flickered"
count
1
5
word
"shimmered"
count
1
6
word
"glistening"
count
1
7
word
"otherworldly"
count
1
8
word
"unspoken"
count
2
9
word
"weight"
count
3
10
word
"etched"
count
1
highlights
0
"ethereal"
1
"tapestry"
2
"sanctuary"
3
"enigmatic"
4
"flickered"
5
"shimmered"
6
"glistening"
7
"otherworldly"
8
"unspoken"
9
"weight"
10
"etched"
66.6667%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
2
found
0
label
"air was thick with"
count
1
1
label
"weight of words/silence"
count
1
highlights
0
"The air was thick with"
1
"the weight of truth"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
55
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
3
narrationSentences
55
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
67
matches
0
"said that those"
73.3776%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
28
mean
37.86
std
15.4
cv
0.407
sampleLengths
0
63
1
53
2
61
3
24
4
26
5
35
6
49
7
46
8
17
9
30
10
16
11
23
12
65
13
15
14
34
15
24
16
56
17
38
18
22
19
42
20
19
21
21
22
53
23
52
24
38
25
57
26
42
27
39
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
55
matches
0
"was reminded"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
130
matches
(empty)
94.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
883
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount
23
adverbRatio
0.026047565118912798
lyAdverbCount
11
lyAdverbRatio
0.01245753114382786
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
67
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
67
mean
15.82
std
7.27
cv
0.459
sampleLengths
0
26
1
19
2
18
3
19
4
15
5
19
6
17
7
19
8
25
9
24
10
5
11
21
12
16
13
17
14
2
15
11
16
19
17
19
18
23
19
23
20
11
21
6
22
9
23
21
24
8
25
8
26
14
27
4
28
5
29
10
30
18
31
10
32
27
33
7
34
8
35
13
36
21
37
6
38
18
39
16
40
9
41
31
42
17
43
21
44
12
45
10
46
10
47
32
48
14
49
5
69.6517%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
0
diversityRatio
0.417910447761194
totalSentences
67
uniqueOpeners
28
67.8571%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
7
fancyCount
3
fancyTags
0
"they murmured, their voice a whisper carried on the wind (murmur, carry on)"
1
"she said finally (say finally)"
2
"she breathed, glancing up at Isolde (breathe, glance)"
83.5102%