| 94.74% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.368 | | leniency | 0.737 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.105 | |
| 81.13% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1060 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "barely above a whisper" | | 1 | "lightly" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "cautiously" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1060 | | totalAiIsms | 31 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "otherworldly" | | 2 | "comforting" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "glistening" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "reminder" | | 7 | "scanning" | | 8 | "peril" | | 9 | "down her spine" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "flickered" | | 12 | "tapestry" | | 13 | "sanctuary" | | 14 | "crystal" | | 15 | "unspoken" | | 16 | "quickened" | | 17 | "could feel" | | 18 | "etched" | | 19 | "pulsed" | | 20 | "tracing" | | 21 | "enigmatic" | | 22 | "sense of" | | 23 | "resolve" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "weight of words/silence" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was thick with" | | 1 | "the weight of truth" |
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| 79.55% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 3 | | narrationSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "felt a shiver" | | 1 | "d with awe" | | 2 | "a sense of wonder" |
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| 64.94% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 55 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1060 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 42 | | wordCount | 879 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.37 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Fae | 5 | | Grove | 2 | | Nyx | 5 | | Isolde | 10 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Rory | 12 | | Veil | 1 | | Fae-touched | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Blade" | | 5 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "Veil" |
| | globalScore | 0.817 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if speaking too loudly might shatter the delicate balance of the place" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1060 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 73.38% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 37.86 | | std | 15.4 | | cv | 0.407 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 63 | | 1 | 53 | | 2 | 61 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 35 | | 6 | 49 | | 7 | 46 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 30 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 65 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 34 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 56 | | 17 | 38 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 42 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 53 | | 23 | 52 | | 24 | 38 | | 25 | 57 | | 26 | 42 | | 27 | 39 |
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| 98.88% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 130 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 883 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.026047565118912798 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01245753114382786 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 67 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 67 | | mean | 15.82 | | std | 7.27 | | cv | 0.459 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 27 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 31 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 21 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 32 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 69.65% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.417910447761194 | | totalSentences | 67 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 60.61% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she turned her gaze" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath caught in her" | | 1 | "She glanced at Isolde, whose" | | 2 | "they murmured, their voice a" | | 3 | "She took a step forward," | | 4 | "she said finally" | | 5 | "They continued their exploration, the" | | 6 | "she breathed, glancing up at" | | 7 | "They came upon a clearing," | | 8 | "she asked, her voice barely" | | 9 | "She felt a sense of" | | 10 | "she said, her voice steady" |
| | ratio | 0.2 | |
| 41.82% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 46 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "The air shimmered with a" | | 1 | "Her breath caught in her" | | 2 | "The grove unfolded before them," | | 3 | "Wildflowers bloomed in riotous colors," | | 4 | "The air was thick with" | | 5 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 6 | "The moonsilver dagger was cold" | | 7 | "She glanced at Isolde, whose" | | 8 | "Rory asked, her voice barely" | | 9 | "Isolde nodded, her expression serene." | | 10 | "Nyx, a living shadow beside" | | 11 | "they murmured, their voice a" | | 12 | "Rory felt a shiver run" | | 13 | "She took a step forward," | | 14 | "The grove seemed to pulse" | | 15 | "Rory's bright blue eyes caught" | | 16 | "Rory asked, her voice hushed" | | 17 | "Isolde smiled, a hint of" | | 18 | "Nyx drifted closer, their presence" | | 19 | "Rory hesitated, her hand unconsciously" |
| | ratio | 0.836 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 73.17% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The air shimmered with a faint, otherworldly glow as Aurora Carter stepped through the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary of the Fae Grove." | | 1 | "Here, in this hidden place, she felt a connection to something greater, a thread that linked her to the past and the future, to the world beyond the Veil." | | 2 | "The grove seemed to sigh, a gentle exhalation that rustled the leaves and set the wildflowers swaying." | | 3 | "Together, they stepped back into the grove, the path ahead winding into the unknown, a journey of discovery and wonder that awaited them in the heart of the Fae…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "they murmured, their voice a whisper carried on the wind" | | 1 | "she asked, her voice barely a breath" | | 2 | "she said, her voice steady and sure" |
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| 44.74% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.368 | | leniency | 0.737 | | rawRatio | 0.286 | | effectiveRatio | 0.211 | |