Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPH3HDVA1SXR6CFMGTEPTX

Run Details

Duration:
58.7s
Cost:
$0.000852
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off the last rung of the rickety ladder and onto the dusty platform, her eyes adjusting to the dim light of the abandoned Tube station. The air was thick with the scent of decay and neglect, the silence oppressive. This wasn't the usual crime scene – no sirens, no curious onlookers, no brightly colored tape to cordon off the area. Just a lone police officer, huddled over a body, and the faint hum of the city above. "Morning, Quinn," the officer, Constable Taylor, said, not looking up. "Got a weird one for you." Quinn's gaze swept the platform, taking in the graffiti-scrawled walls, the shattered remains of a ticket booth, and the makeshift stalls, their wooden frames weathered to a soft gray. The Veil Market, an underground bazaar notorious for peddling enchanted goods and contraband, had left its mark on this place. She spotted a faint symbol etched into the wall, a sigil used by some of the Market's more... unsavory vendors. "What's the story, Taylor?" Quinn asked, her voice crisp, as she approached the body. Taylor, a lanky man in his mid-twenties, finally looked up, his eyes squinting. "Victim's a young woman, mid-twenties. No ID on her, but she's got a... thing on her wrist." He gestured to the body. Quinn's eyes followed the gesture. The woman's wrist was bound with a length of black cord, the surface etched with intricate, pulsing symbols. Quinn's gut twisted. This was no ordinary murder. She knelt beside the body, her fingers brushing against the cord. It felt warm to the touch, almost... alive. "Anything else unusual?" Quinn asked, her mind racing. Taylor hesitated. "Well, there's no blood. I mean, none at all. And the wounds... they're not exactly wounds. More like... tears." Quinn's gaze snapped to the body, her eyes tracing the jagged edges of the victim's clothing. The tears were small, scattered across the torso, but they seemed to... shift, as if they were being pulled apart from the inside. "What's the official verdict?" Quinn asked, her voice neutral. Taylor shrugged. "We're thinking maybe a ritual gone wrong. The Market's been known to attract some... unsavory characters." Quinn's eyes narrowed. This didn't feel like a ritual gone wrong. It felt... calculated. She pulled out her notebook and began to sketch the symbol on the wall, her mind working overtime. What was the connection between the sigil and the victim? And what about the cord on the wrist? The pulsing symbols seemed to be some sort of... warning? As she worked, Quinn's thoughts drifted back to her partner, DS Morris, and the case that had ended in tragedy three years ago. The one that had left her with more questions than answers. She pushed the memories aside, focusing on the task at hand. "Taylor, I need you to get forensics down here ASAP. And I want to review the security footage from the surrounding areas." Taylor nodded, already pulling out his phone. "On it, Quinn." Quinn stood, her eyes roving the platform once more. Something didn't add up. The symbol, the cord, the tears in the victim's clothing... it all seemed too deliberate, too staged. She felt like she was missing a crucial piece of the puzzle. As she turned to leave, her gaze caught on a small, brass compass lying on the ground, near the victim's hand. The face was etched with protective sigils, the needle pointing toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal – a Veil Compass. Quinn's heart quickened. This changed everything. "Taylor, I need you to bag this compass and get it to the lab. I want to know who made it and what it's doing here." Taylor's eyes widened as he carefully picked up the compass. "You think this is connected to the murder?" Quinn's eyes never left the compass. "I know it is." The sound of footsteps echoed through the tunnel, growing louder. Quinn's gaze snapped toward the entrance, her hand instinctively going to her watch. A figure emerged from the shadows, curly red hair bouncing with each step. Eva Kowalski, the occult researcher, and a friend of... questionable acquaintance. "Eva, what brings you down here?" Quinn asked, her tone neutral. Eva's green eyes sparkled as she took in the scene. "I could ask you the same thing, Detective. I heard rumors of a... disturbance at the Market. I didn't expect to find a body." Quinn raised an eyebrow. "You're not exactly cleared to be down here, Eva." Eva's smile was wry. "I'm not exactly cleared for a lot of things, Detective. But I might be able to help you with this case. I recognize the symbol on the wall – it's a Shade sigil. They're an... elusive group, even among the Market's usual clientele." Quinn's gaze never wavered. "And what do you know about the cord on the victim's wrist?" Eva's expression turned somber. "I've seen something similar before. It's a binding, a way to... contain something. But I've never seen it used on a person before." Quinn's mind was racing. Contain something? What did that even mean? She tucked the information away, her eyes never leaving Eva's face. "Thanks for the insight, Eva. But I think it's time for you to leave. This is a crime scene." Eva nodded, her eyes flicking to the compass in Taylor's hand. "Be careful with that, Detective. The Veil Compass is a powerful tool. And in the wrong hands... well, let's just say it could get very ugly, very quickly." As Eva turned to leave, Quinn's gaze followed her, her mind working overtime. She had a feeling that this case was about to get a lot more complicated – and a lot more deadly.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
78.86% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount946
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count2
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"very"
2"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
15.43% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount946
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"oppressive"
count1
2
word"shattered"
count1
3
word"etched"
count3
4
word"intricate"
count1
5
word"racing"
count2
6
word"tracing"
count1
7
word"calculated"
count1
8
word"quickened"
count1
9
word"footsteps"
count1
10
word"echoed"
count1
11
word"eyebrow"
count1
12
word"wavered"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"oppressive"
2"shattered"
3"etched"
4"intricate"
5"racing"
6"tracing"
7"calculated"
8"quickened"
9"footsteps"
10"echoed"
11"eyebrow"
12"wavered"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
1
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"eyes widened"
2"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences68
matches(empty)
37.82% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences68
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences83
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords950
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
4.29% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount652
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.91
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn19
Tube1
Constable1
Taylor7
Veil2
Market2
Morris1
Compass1
Kowalski1
Eva7
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Constable"
3"Taylor"
4"Market"
5"Morris"
6"Kowalski"
7"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.043
windowScore0.333
90.48% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like she was missing a crucial pie"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount950
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences83
matches
0"feeling that this"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean30.65
std18.46
cv0.602
sampleLengths
081
116
269
314
435
550
68
721
839
99
1018
1160
1245
1322
1410
1542
1648
1726
1818
1910
2047
2111
2234
2313
2447
2516
2627
2722
2819
2939
3034
89.78% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences68
matches
0"was bound"
1"being pulled"
2"was etched"
79.88% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs111
matches
0"was missing"
1"was racing"
39.59% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences83
ratio0.036
matches
0"This wasn't the usual crime scene – no sirens, no curious onlookers, no brightly colored tape to cordon off the area."
1"The face was etched with protective sigils, the needle pointing toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal – a Veil Compass."
2"She had a feeling that this case was about to get a lot more complicated – and a lot more deadly."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount651
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.03840245775729647
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.009216589861751152
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences83
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences83
mean11.45
std8.11
cv0.709
sampleLengths
029
114
221
317
410
56
629
720
818
92
1014
1113
1222
135
1418
153
165
1711
187
191
208
212
2219
2316
2412
2511
269
272
2816
293
308
312
321
3318
3410
358
369
371
3823
3911
4011
4122
427
433
449
454
4610
477
4812
4921
60.64% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.3855421686746988
totalSentences83
uniqueOpeners32
56.50% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences59
matches
0"Just a lone police officer,"
ratio0.017
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences59
matches
0"She spotted a faint symbol"
1"He gestured to the body"
2"She knelt beside the body,"
3"It felt warm to the"
4"She pulled out her notebook"
5"She pushed the memories aside,"
6"it all seemed too deliberate,"
7"She felt like she was"
8"She tucked the information away,"
9"She had a feeling that"
ratio0.169
27.80% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences59
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off"
1"The air was thick with"
2"This wasn't the usual crime"
3"the officer, Constable Taylor, said,"
4"Quinn's gaze swept the platform,"
5"The Veil Market, an underground"
6"She spotted a faint symbol"
7"Quinn asked, her voice crisp,"
8"Taylor, a lanky man in"
9"He gestured to the body"
10"Quinn's eyes followed the gesture."
11"The woman's wrist was bound"
12"Quinn's gut twisted."
13"This was no ordinary murder."
14"She knelt beside the body,"
15"It felt warm to the"
16"Quinn asked, her mind racing"
17"Quinn's gaze snapped to the"
18"The tears were small, scattered"
19"Quinn asked, her voice neutral"
ratio0.864
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
ratio0
96.77% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Quinn's gaze snapped to the body, her eyes tracing the jagged edges of the victim's clothing."
1"As she worked, Quinn's thoughts drifted back to her partner, DS Morris, and the case that had ended in tragedy three years ago."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Quinn asked, her voice crisp, as she approached the body"
1"Quinn asked, her mind racing"
2"Quinn asked, her voice neutral"
3"Quinn asked, her tone neutral"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.238
leniency0.476
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
73.7057%