| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 26 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She stepped back [back]" | | 1 | "he said again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 60 | | tagDensity | 0.433 | | leniency | 0.867 | | rawRatio | 0.077 | | effectiveRatio | 0.067 | |
| 76.80% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1293 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "lazily" | | 1 | "quickly" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1293 | | totalAiIsms | 32 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "footsteps" | | 1 | "echoed" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "gleaming" | | 4 | "tension" | | 5 | "racing" | | 6 | "unspoken" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "eyebrow" | | 10 | "flicker" | | 11 | "whisper" | | 12 | "raced" | | 13 | "intensity" | | 14 | "charged" | | 15 | "familiar" | | 16 | "steeled" | | 17 | "warmth" | | 18 | "amidst" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "heart pounded in chest" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "heart pounded in her chest" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 60 | | matches | | |
| 71.43% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 60 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 94 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1287 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 24 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.51% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 811 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.11 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Ptolemy | 2 | | Rory | 9 | | Moreau | 1 | | Lucien | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Ptolemy" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Moreau" | | 5 | "Lucien" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.945 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1287 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | |
| 91.87% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 44 | | mean | 29.25 | | std | 13.79 | | cv | 0.472 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 65 | | 1 | 57 | | 2 | 64 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 56 | | 6 | 40 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 28 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 39 | | 16 | 31 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 44 | | 21 | 28 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 43 | | 24 | 38 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 25 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 29 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 38 | | 34 | 49 | | 35 | 33 | | 36 | 35 | | 37 | 27 | | 38 | 24 | | 39 | 27 | | 40 | 39 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 40 |
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| 93.57% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "was supposed" | | 1 | "been exchanged" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 145 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 94 | | ratio | 0.053 | | matches | | 0 | "She glanced at the clock on the wall—Eva was supposed to be at work." | | 1 | "His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—bore into hers, a mix of surprise and something else she couldn’t quite place." | | 2 | "“Better off?” She shook her head, the memories flooding back—of laughter shared over late-night takeout, of whispered secrets in the dark, of the way he had made her feel alive." | | 3 | "Lucien’s expression softened, and for a moment, Rory saw the man she had fallen for—the one who had made her feel seen, understood, cherished." | | 4 | "Rory’s heart pounded in her chest, the memories of their time together flooding back—his laughter, the way he had held her, the warmth of his presence." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 820 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.02804878048780488 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00975609756097561 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 94 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 94 | | mean | 13.69 | | std | 6.44 | | cv | 0.47 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 32 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 27 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 48.23% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.3404255319148936 | | totalSentences | 94 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "She stirred a pot of" | | 1 | "She glanced at the clock" | | 2 | "She wiped her hands on" | | 3 | "His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one" | | 4 | "she breathed, the name slipping" | | 5 | "he replied, his voice smooth," | | 6 | "She stepped back, allowing him" | | 7 | "She had thought she was" | | 8 | "He stepped inside, the door" | | 9 | "She raised an eyebrow, skepticism" | | 10 | "He winced, the flicker of" | | 11 | "she shot back, her voice" | | 12 | "he said, his voice low," | | 13 | "he admitted, his eyes locking" | | 14 | "He took a step closer," | | 15 | "he said, his voice rising" | | 16 | "she echoed, incredulous" | | 17 | "he said, his voice dropping" | | 18 | "She laughed, a bitter sound" | | 19 | "he said, his voice strained" |
| | ratio | 0.583 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 57 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter stood in the" | | 1 | "She stirred a pot of" | | 2 | "The tabby cat, Ptolemy, lounged" | | 3 | "The soft thud of footsteps" | | 4 | "She glanced at the clock" | | 5 | "The sound of knocking came" | | 6 | "She wiped her hands on" | | 7 | "Lucien Moreau stood there, impeccably" | | 8 | "His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one" | | 9 | "she breathed, the name slipping" | | 10 | "he replied, his voice smooth," | | 11 | "She stepped back, allowing him" | | 12 | "The last time they had" | | 13 | "She had thought she was" | | 14 | "He stepped inside, the door" | | 15 | "The flat felt smaller with" | | 16 | "Ptolemy, sensing the shift, leapt" | | 17 | "Rory asked, crossing her arms" | | 18 | "Lucien shifted his weight, his" | | 19 | "She raised an eyebrow, skepticism" |
| | ratio | 0.95 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 29 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "He took a step closer, the space between them charged with a tension that felt both familiar and terrifying." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 26 | | uselessAdditionCount | 18 | | matches | | 0 | "she breathed, the name slipping from her lips like a secret" | | 1 | "She raised, skepticism lacing her tone" | | 2 | "she shot back, her voice sharper than she intended" | | 3 | "he said, his voice low, almost a whisper" | | 4 | "he said, his voice rising slightly, frustration creeping in" | | 5 | "she echoed, incredulous" | | 6 | "he said, his voice dropping again, earnestness flooding his tone" | | 7 | "he said, his voice strained" | | 8 | "he said again, his voice barely above a whisper" | | 9 | "she pressed, her heart aching at the vulnerability in his eyes" | | 10 | "he admitted, his gaze dropping to the floor" | | 11 | "she asked, her voice trembling" | | 12 | "he said, frustration creeping back into his tone" | | 13 | "she replied, her heart racing" | | 14 | "he said, his voice steady" | | 15 | "he said, his voice firm" | | 16 | "he replied, a hint of a smile breaking through the tension" | | 17 | "she said, her voice barely above a whisper" |
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| 66.67% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 20 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "he admitted (admit)" | | 2 | "She laughed (laugh)" | | 3 | "she pressed (press)" | | 4 | "he admitted (admit)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 60 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.167 | |