Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPHCSF3DYMDEJN5H5C222Q

Run Details

Duration:
23.8s
Cost:
$0.001065

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain fell in relentless sheets, drumming against the pavement and pooling in the gutters, where it swirled with the remnants of the day’s grime. Detective Harlow Quinn’s breath came in sharp bursts, each exhale mingling with the cool, damp air as she sprinted after the shadowy figure ahead of her. The streetlights flickered, casting a sickly yellow glow that barely penetrated the downpour, but she kept her eyes locked on the suspect, a wiry man with a hood pulled low over his face. “Stop!” she shouted, her voice cutting through the cacophony of rain and distant traffic. The figure hesitated for a split second, just long enough for Quinn to close the gap, but then he darted into an alley, disappearing into the darkness. Quinn cursed under her breath, her heart pounding in her chest. She had been on the trail of this man for weeks, piecing together the threads of a web that seemed to stretch into the very heart of London’s underbelly. She skidded to a halt at the mouth of the alley, the slick cobblestones threatening to send her sprawling. The air was thick with the scent of wet asphalt and something else—something metallic and sharp that made her instincts flare. Quinn hesitated, her mind racing. She could call for backup, but the last thing she wanted was to lose him again. The man was slippery, and she had a feeling he was about to slip into something far worse than a mere alleyway. With a deep breath, she plunged into the darkness, her senses heightened. The alley was narrow, flanked by crumbling brick walls that seemed to close in around her. She could hear the distant echo of her footsteps, the rain drumming a steady rhythm above. Quinn’s hand instinctively brushed against the worn leather watch on her wrist, a habit she had developed over the years, a reminder of time slipping away. The alley twisted and turned, leading her deeper into the labyrinth of Soho. She rounded a corner and skidded to a stop. The man was gone, but a faint glow flickered at the far end of the passage. Quinn squinted, her instincts screaming at her to be cautious. The glow pulsed like a heartbeat, beckoning her forward. She could feel the weight of the night pressing down on her, the rain a constant reminder of the world above. As she approached, the glow revealed itself to be a distinctive green neon sign, flickering above a door that read “The Raven’s Nest.” Quinn’s gut twisted. She had heard whispers about this place—rumors of a bar that catered to the supernatural, a haven for those who danced on the fringes of the law. It was a place where secrets were traded like currency, and danger lurked in every shadow. She hesitated, her mind racing. The suspect could be inside, but so could a host of other threats. Quinn had spent eighteen years in the Metropolitan Police, and she knew better than to walk into a den of unknowns without backup. But the thought of losing him again, of letting him slip through her fingers, ignited a fire in her chest. She had to know what he was up to, had to understand the connection to the clique she suspected was involved in something far more sinister than petty crime. With a steely resolve, she pushed the door open, the hinges creaking in protest. The interior was dimly lit, the air thick with the scent of aged wood and something sweetly intoxicating. Old maps and black-and-white photographs adorned the walls, each telling a story of a time long past. The bar was nearly empty, save for a few patrons hunched over their drinks, their conversations low and conspiratorial. Quinn’s eyes scanned the room, searching for any sign of her quarry. She moved with military precision, her sharp jaw set in determination. The bartender, a burly man with a bushy beard, glanced up as she approached, his expression unreadable. “Can I help you?” he asked, his voice gruff. “I’m looking for someone,” Quinn replied, her tone clipped. “A man, about this tall, dark hair, wearing a hood.” The bartender raised an eyebrow, his gaze flicking to the back of the bar where a door stood slightly ajar. “Might want to check the back room. But I wouldn’t go in there if I were you.” Quinn’s heart raced. The back room was likely where the real business happened, where secrets were exchanged and deals were made. But she couldn’t back down now. She had come too far, and the thought of letting him escape again was unbearable. “Thanks,” she said, her voice steady as she pushed past him, the door creaking open to reveal a narrow staircase leading down into darkness. The air grew cooler as she descended, the sound of her footsteps muffled by the thick carpet that lined the stairs. At the bottom, she found herself in a small, dimly lit room. A table sat in the center, surrounded by mismatched chairs, and the walls were lined with shelves filled with strange artifacts and bottles of shimmering liquids. The atmosphere was thick with tension, and Quinn could feel the weight of unseen eyes upon her. “Looking for something?” a voice drawled from the shadows. Quinn’s heart skipped a beat as she turned to see the suspect leaning against the far wall, arms crossed, a smirk playing on his lips. “Why are you running?” she demanded, stepping forward, her instincts on high alert. “What do you know about the clique?” He chuckled, the sound low and mocking. “You really think you can just waltz in here and demand answers? This isn’t your world, Detective.” Quinn’s jaw tightened. “I’m not afraid of the dark.” “Maybe you should be.” He pushed off the wall, moving closer, the smirk fading as his expression turned serious. “You have no idea what you’re getting into. The Veil Market is just a stone’s throw from here, and it’s not a place for someone like you.” Quinn’s mind raced. The Veil Market—she had heard whispers of it, a hidden supernatural black market that sold enchanted goods and information. It was a place where the lines between right and wrong blurred, where danger was a currency of its own. “Then tell me,” she pressed, her voice steady despite the unease creeping into her gut. “What’s happening? What are you involved in?” He hesitated, glancing toward the door as if weighing his options. “You really want to know? Fine. But you need to understand—once you step into that world, there’s no turning back.” Quinn’s heart pounded in her chest. She had already crossed a line, and there was no going back now. “I’m not afraid of the consequences.” “Then follow me,” he said, his voice low and conspiratorial. He turned, heading toward a hidden door at the back of the room, and Quinn felt a surge of adrenaline. She was stepping into the unknown, but she had to know the truth. As he pushed the door open, a rush of cool air hit her, carrying with it the scent of something ancient and powerful. Quinn took a deep breath, steeling herself for what lay ahead. She had lost too much already—her partner, her sense of security—and she wasn’t about to let fear dictate her next move. With a final glance back at the bar, she stepped through the door, ready to plunge into the depths of the Veil Market and whatever darkness awaited her there.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
60.2544% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1258
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"sweetly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count2
3
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"sweetly"
2"really"
3"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
20.5087% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1258
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"cacophony"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count2
2
word"sinister"
count1
3
word"unreadable"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"footsteps"
count2
6
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"cacophony"
1"flickered"
2"sinister"
3"unreadable"
4"weight"
5"footsteps"
6"echo"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count1
1
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"heart pounded in her chest"
1"The air was thick with"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences69
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences69
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean46.3
std23.73
cv0.513
sampleLengths
084
181
283
370
478
569
690
768
840
99
1019
1137
1242
1345
1455
1534
1620
1724
189
1946
2042
2122
2231
2325
2443
2555
2629
85.0242% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences69
matches
0"was gone"
1"were traded"
2"was involved"
3"were exchanged were made"
4"were lined"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs190
matches
0"was stepping"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1110
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.02252252252252252
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.010810810810810811
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences78
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences78
mean16.03
std7.25
cv0.452
sampleLengths
025
126
233
314
427
511
629
719
821
95
1016
1122
1212
1316
1416
1526
1613
179
1816
1910
209
2121
2226
2327
2416
255
2613
2723
2820
2929
3014
3118
3217
3319
3412
3511
3617
379
389
3910
4020
4117
423
4318
446
4515
4624
4721
4812
4926
48.7179% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.2948717948717949
totalSentences78
uniqueOpeners23
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"shouted (shout)"
1"Quinn replied, her tone clipped (reply, clip)"
2"she said, her voice steady as she pushed past him, the door creaking open to reveal a narrow staircase leading down into darkness (say, push creak reveal lead)"
3"drawled (drawl)"
4"demanded (demand)"
5"she pressed, her voice steady despite the unease creeping into her gut (press, creep)"
83.2062%