"Rory whispered, almost reverently [almost reverently]"
1
"she marveled, her voice low, instinctively wary of breaking the Grove's delicate harmony [instinctively]"
2
"Isolde interrupted gently, with a smile both warm and enigmatic [gently]"
3
"she finally said, feeling the gravity of her own voice as she stepped towards Isolde, ready to face whatever truth lay ahead in this grove of enchantment and danger—a balance teetering upon the edge of revelations yet to come [finally]"
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1021
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
31
adverbRatio
0.030362389813907934
lyAdverbCount
18
lyAdverbRatio
0.01762977473065622
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
73
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
73
mean
16.53
std
6.7
cv
0.405
sampleLengths
0
22
1
18
2
22
3
15
4
6
5
15
6
32
7
18
8
16
9
16
10
13
11
14
12
23
13
17
14
10
15
18
16
30
17
4
18
10
19
17
20
4
21
13
22
15
23
11
24
25
25
3
26
21
27
12
28
21
29
11
30
16
31
13
32
16
33
20
34
25
35
15
36
12
37
22
38
12
39
19
40
10
41
17
42
22
43
20
44
15
45
18
46
14
47
8
48
14
49
19
79.4521%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
2
diversityRatio
0.4931506849315068
totalSentences
73
uniqueOpeners
36
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
13
fancyCount
10
fancyTags
0
"Rory whispered, almost reverently (whisper)"
1
"Nyx murmured, their voice like wind through winter branches (murmur)"
2
"Rory breathed, her voice a half-whisper (breathe, voice)"
3
"Rory said, the tinge of unease settling in her stomach (say, settle in)"
4
"she marveled, her voice low, instinctively wary of breaking the Grove's delicate harmony (marvel, break)"
5
"Nyx replied, their voice weaving through the dappled light (reply, weave dapple)"
6
"Isolde said, her voice like a melody steeped in mystery (say, like steep)"
7
"Rory managed to say (manage say)"
8
"Isolde interrupted gently, with a smile both warm and enigmatic (interrupt gently)"
9
"she finally said, feeling the gravity of her own voice as she stepped towards Isolde, ready to face whatever truth lay ahead in this grove of enchantment and danger—a balance teetering upon the edge of revelations yet to come (finally say, feel step face teeter come)"