| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 37 | | tagDensity | 0.486 | | leniency | 0.973 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 54.77% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1216 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 11 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "utterly" | | 1 | "really" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "carefully" | | 4 | "gently" | | 5 | "slightly" | | 6 | "suddenly" | | 7 | "barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1216 | | totalAiIsms | 42 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | | | 27 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "racing" | | 2 | "trepidation" | | 3 | "sanctuary" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "glistening" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "echo" | | 8 | "could feel" | | 9 | "tangible" | | 10 | "scanning" | | 11 | "symphony" | | 12 | "echoes" | | 13 | "pulsed" | | 14 | "otherworldly" | | 15 | "depths" | | 16 | "flickered" | | 17 | "chill" | | 18 | "pulse" | | 19 | "quickened" | | 20 | "oppressive" | | 21 | "weight" | | 22 | "cacophony" | | 23 | "warmth" | | 24 | "echoed" | | 25 | "reverberated" | | 26 | "raced" | | 27 | "down her spine" | | 28 | "silence" | | 29 | "tension" | | 30 | "desire" | | 31 | "pounding" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "weight of words/silence" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was thick with" | | 1 | "the weight of the moment" |
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| 45.63% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 6 | | narrationSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "e with wonder" | | 1 | "d in confusion" | | 2 | "a thrill of unease" | | 3 | "felt a prickle" | | 4 | "g in urgency" | | 5 | "a surge of fear" |
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| 74.83% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 63 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1213 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 49.47% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 42 | | wordCount | 945 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 2.01 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Nyx | 7 | | Shade | 1 | | Rory | 19 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Isolde | 6 | | Varga | 1 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Veil | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Shade" | | 4 | "Rory" | | 5 | "Isolde" | | 6 | "Varga" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.495 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "murmur that seemed to echo from the very shadows around them" | | 1 | "whispers that seemed to beckon them onward" | | 2 | "It was as if the grove itself was alive, sharing its stories with those who dared to listen" | | 3 | "as if considering her words" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1213 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 89.90% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 36.76 | | std | 17.08 | | cv | 0.465 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 77 | | 1 | 56 | | 2 | 37 | | 3 | 51 | | 4 | 52 | | 5 | 35 | | 6 | 79 | | 7 | 42 | | 8 | 36 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 61 | | 12 | 49 | | 13 | 30 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 41 | | 17 | 51 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 25 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 53 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 52 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 31 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 40 | | 31 | 30 | | 32 | 45 |
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| 99.69% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 163 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 38.33% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 82 | | ratio | 0.037 | | matches | | 0 | "“The Fae Grove, a pocket of magic untouched by time. But tread carefully; the grove has its own will.”" | | 1 | "The surface of the water rippled gently, and as she peered into its depths, she caught glimpses of visions—fragments of memories that were not her own." | | 2 | "The Veil—the barrier between realms—was a constant presence in her mind since she had learned of its existence." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 949 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.029504741833508957 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011591148577449948 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 82 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 82 | | mean | 14.79 | | std | 6.47 | | cv | 0.437 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 30 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 29 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 26 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 26 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 73.58% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.4634146341463415 | | totalSentences | 82 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 52.91% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly, a clearing opened before" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "She turned to Nyx, who" | | 1 | "She could feel it, a" | | 2 | "she intoned, her pale lavender" | | 3 | "It was as if the" | | 4 | "They continued deeper into the" | | 5 | "she said, her voice steadier" | | 6 | "she asked, her heart racing" |
| | ratio | 0.111 | |
| 23.49% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "The air shimmered with a" | | 1 | "The grove unfolded before her" | | 2 | "The wildflowers, vibrant and lush," | | 3 | "Rory whispered, her bright blue" | | 4 | "She turned to Nyx, who" | | 5 | "The Shade’s faintly glowing violet" | | 6 | "Nyx replied, their voice a" | | 7 | "Rory nodded, her fingers brushing" | | 8 | "She could feel it, a" | | 9 | "The Half-Fae seer moved with" | | 10 | "she intoned, her pale lavender" | | 11 | "Rory muttered under her breath," | | 12 | "Isolde’s cryptic nature had become" | | 13 | "Trees twisted and turned in" | | 14 | "The air was thick with" | | 15 | "A soft breeze rustled the" | | 16 | "Rory asked, pausing to listen" | | 17 | "The whispers grew louder, a" | | 18 | "It was as if the" | | 19 | "Nyx said, their form shifting" |
| | ratio | 0.873 | |
| 79.37% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Before she could respond, a" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The air shimmered with a faint, iridescent glow as Aurora Carter stepped through the ancient oak standing stones, her heart racing with a mix of trepidation and…" | | 1 | "The wildflowers, vibrant and lush, carpeted the ground in a riot of colors, their petals glistening with dew that sparkled like diamonds in the soft light filte…" | | 2 | "She turned to Nyx, who stood beside her, their humanoid silhouette flickering like a candle in the wind." | | 3 | "Rory nodded, her fingers brushing against the Heartstone Pendant that hung around her neck, its deep crimson glow pulsing gently in response to the magic that t…" | | 4 | "She could feel it, a tangible energy that wrapped around her like a warm embrace, urging her deeper into the grove." | | 5 | "Trees twisted and turned in impossible angles, their bark shimmering with hues of blue and green, as if the very essence of the sky had been captured within the…" | | 6 | "The whispers grew louder, a chorus of voices that danced on the edge of comprehension." | | 7 | "The whispers grew louder, a cacophony of voices rising in urgency, and she could feel the Heartstone Pendant against her chest, its warmth intensifying." | | 8 | "From the rift, a figure emerged, cloaked in shadows, their form shifting and undulating like smoke." | | 9 | "The figure paused, their form flickering as if considering her words." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 14 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory muttered, but a smile tugged at her lips" | | 1 | "Rory asked, pausing to listen" | | 2 | "Nyx said, their form shifting slightly as they stepped closer to Rory" | | 3 | "Isolde interjected, her voice melodic yet haunting" | | 4 | "Nyx warned, their voice a low whisper" | | 5 | "Isolde said, her tone serious" | | 6 | "she said, her voice steadier than she felt" | | 7 | "she asked, her heart racing" | | 8 | "Nyx replied, their voice barely above a whisper" | | 9 | "Isolde instructed, her demeanor shifting from ethereal to commanding" | | 10 | "Nyx said, their voice urgent" | | 11 | "the figure intoned, their voice a low growl that reverberated through the air" | | 12 | "Rory said, her voice steady despite the tremor in her heart" | | 13 | "the figure said, their voice a whisper that echoed through the grove" |
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| 14.86% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 15 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "Isolde interjected (interject)" | | 3 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" | | 4 | "Nyx warned (warn)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 37 | | tagDensity | 0.405 | | leniency | 0.811 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.27 | |