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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQE6P203QAQVZT4A85HCJM
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Model:
Writer: Palmyra X5
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Thriller: chase through city streets
Duration:
19.1s
Cost:
$0.009274
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
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Meta
AI
Rain slashed sideways through the neon glow of Soho, turning the streets into streaked mirrors of
flicker
ing light and shadow. Detective Harlow Quinn cut through the downpour like a blade through
silk
, boots hammering the slick pavement, breath sharp and controlled. Her leather
watch
dug into her wrist with every stride, its
weight
a familiar burden. She barely registered the cold — only the figure ahead, darting between umbrellas and traffic, a smudge of dark fabric disappearing into the alley beside *The Raven’s Nest*. Quinn didn’t slow. She vaulted over a discarded crate, shoulder brushing wet brick, her sharp
jaw clenched
so tight it ached. Three years. Three years since Morris bled out in a basement that reeked of copper and burnt sage, whispering words that made no sense — *“They’re not human. It wasn’t real.”* And now this. The same symbols
etched
into the doorframe. The same whispers in back rooms. The same goddamn *stench* of something just beyond the veil. The alley narrowed, reeking of damp stone and old garbage. The man — Tomás Herrera, according to the warrant flagged *restricted* — turned
sharply
, coat flaring, and disappeared through a rusted metal door half-hidden beneath a tarp. Quinn reached it, shoved — it gave with a groan. A narrow staircase plunged down into darkness, lit only by a single,
flicker
ing bulb near the bottom. She drew her service weapon,
flicked
off the safety. "Metropolitan Police! Stop where you are!" No answer. Only the
echo
of
footsteps
, descending fast. She followed. The stairs ended in a tiled corridor, long abandoned, walls stained with mold and graffiti scrawled in jagged symbols she didn’t recognize. The air smelled wrong — old earth, ozone, and something
sweetly
rotten, like overripe fruit left in a cellar. Her phone had lost signal three flights up. No backup. Not that she’d called any. Not on *this* case. A
flicker
of movement at the far end. She advanced, low and steady, gun out before her. Then, silence. She rounded a corner and stopped. The corridor opened into a cavernous space — an old Tube station, swallowed by time. But this was no ruin. Lanterns made of bone and glass hung from rusted girders, casting an amber glow. Stalls lined the platform: jars of glowing liquid, desiccated herbs, feathers stitched into patterns, vials of black oil that writhed when touched. Figures moved in silence — cloaked, masked, some with eyes too large, too bright. A woman sold teeth strung on copper wire. A man with antlers offered dreams in bottled smoke. *The Veil Market.* She knew the name from Morris’s notes. Classified. Myth. *Delusion,* Internal Affairs had said. But here it was. Real. And the man she
was chasing
— Tomás — was just ahead, slipping through a curtained archway toward a stall stacked with old medical texts and copper instruments. Quinn moved fast, her bearing sharpened by years of military precision. She grabbed a hooded figure by the arm. “Where’d he go?” The figure turned. No face—just a smooth
porcelain
mask painted with a weeping eye. “Pay the toll, detective,” it whispered in two overlapping voices. “Or turn back now.” She shoved the figure aside. “Toll?” The bone token. She remembered the file. Morris had one in his pocket when they found him. Unidentified. Untraceable. She didn’t have one. But she didn’t stop. Tomás was now speaking urgently with a stall vendor — a hunched woman with silver eyes. He reached for a small, coiled scroll wrapped in red thread. “Herrera!” Quinn shouted over the low hum of the market. “You’re under arrest!” He turned. Warm brown eyes locked onto hers. Not fear. Not panic. *Recognition.* He wore a Saint Christopher medallion around his neck,
glinting
in the lantern light. A scar ran along his forearm — fresh, red, not yet healed. “You don’t belong here,” he said, voice low but clear. “This place eats cops for breakfast.” “I’m not just a cop,” she said, stepping forward. “I’m the one who found Morris.” Something
flickered
in his eyes — grief? Guilt? “You don’t know what you’re stepping into,” Tomás said. “That case? It wasn’t yours. It wasn’t *ours*. You weren’t meant to see it.” “Then explain it.” She kept her gun raised. “Explain why my partner died whispering about ghosts and blood pacts. Explain why I found his notebook in *your* clinic last week. Explain why every lead on this goes back to *The Raven’s Nest* and *this* cursed market.” Tomás glanced around. The crowd
was thinning
. Shadows deeper than the lanterns could reach pulsed at the edges. A low rumble
echo
ed through the tunnels — not trains. Something else. “They’re already
watch
ing,” he muttered. “And they don’t like intruders.” “If you’re not guilty, come with me,” Quinn said. “Answer the questions. Let’s do this clean.” He laughed, short and bitter. “Clean? Nothing about this is clean. You think the system protects people like us? Like *him*? I tried *saving* Morris. That’s why I lost my license. That’s why I work in the dark now. Because sometimes the only way to heal is outside the rules.” Her finger hovered over the trigger. Every instinct screamed to cuff him, drag him up into the rain, back to the world that made sense. But Morris had *bled* in a room that shouldn’t exist. His bones had turned black in the morgue. The coroner called it contamination. She’d seen the photos — the symbols carved into the floor. The same ones from tonight. “You knew what killed him,” she said
softly
. “Didn’t you?” Tomás exhaled, long and slow. Then he unhooked the medallion from his neck, pressed it into her hand. “Saint Christopher,” he said. “Patron of travelers. Of the lost. Keep it. It won’t save you. But it might buy you time.” Before she could react, he turned and slipped through a narrow archway behind the stall, vanishing into the maze of tunnels. She stood there, in the unnatural glow, the medallion warm in her palm. The bone token was the key. She didn’t have it. But she had his name now. His face. His fear. And something else. From the tunnels ahead, a whispering hum — like voices speaking in reverse. A
flicker
of green light pulsed, deeper in, the same color as the sign above *The Raven’s Nest*. She holstered her weapon. Then, with measured steps, Detective Harlow Quinn stepped past the veil.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
96.2963%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
9
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"she said softly [softly]"
71.5100%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1053
totalAiIsmAdverbs
3
found
0
adverb
"sharply"
count
1
1
adverb
"softly"
count
1
2
adverb
"sweetly"
count
1
highlights
0
"sharply"
1
"softly"
2
"sweetly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.0000%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1053
totalAiIsms
13
found
0
word
"flickered"
count
1
1
word
"flicker"
count
2
2
word
"flicked"
count
1
3
word
"glinting"
count
1
4
word
"porcelain"
count
1
5
word
"silk"
count
1
6
word
"jaw clenched"
count
1
7
word
"weight"
count
1
8
word
"footsteps"
count
1
9
word
"echo"
count
1
10
word
"echoed"
count
1
11
word
"etched"
count
1
highlights
0
"flickered"
1
"flicker"
2
"flicked"
3
"glinting"
4
"porcelain"
5
"silk"
6
"jaw clenched"
7
"weight"
8
"footsteps"
9
"echo"
10
"echoed"
11
"etched"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"jaw/fists clenched"
count
1
highlights
0
"jaw clenched"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
103
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
103
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
117
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
42
mean
25.4
std
22.39
cv
0.881
sampleLengths
0
84
1
78
2
64
3
15
4
9
5
2
6
60
7
19
8
6
9
87
10
3
11
47
12
22
13
28
14
6
15
19
16
4
17
4
18
27
19
13
20
39
21
16
22
15
23
8
24
23
25
46
26
30
27
10
28
16
29
50
30
25
31
39
32
10
33
40
34
21
35
13
36
10
37
10
38
3
39
31
40
4
41
11
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
103
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
2
totalVerbs
150
matches
0
"was chasing "
1
"was thinning"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
849
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
22
adverbRatio
0.02591283863368669
lyAdverbCount
8
lyAdverbRatio
0.009422850412249705
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
117
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
117
mean
9.12
std
7.81
cv
0.856
sampleLengths
0
20
1
21
2
15
3
28
4
3
5
18
6
2
7
32
8
7
9
6
10
10
11
10
12
27
13
10
14
17
15
9
16
6
17
2
18
7
19
2
20
22
21
19
22
8
23
2
24
5
25
4
26
8
27
9
28
2
29
6
30
15
31
5
32
14
33
22
34
14
35
8
36
9
37
3
38
7
39
1
40
1
41
5
42
4
43
1
44
28
45
11
46
8
47
3
48
3
49
11
66.0969%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
11
diversityRatio
0.452991452991453
totalSentences
117
uniqueOpeners
53
8.3333%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
9
fancyCount
6
fancyTags
0
"it whispered in two overlapping voices (whisper)"
1
"shouted (shout)"
2
"he said, voice low but clear (say, voice)"
3
"she said, stepping forward (say, step)"
4
"he muttered (mutter)"
5
"she said softly (say softly)"
84.8374%