Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQE6P4AJN8W8473W8W98W2

Run Details

Model:: GPT-4.1 Nano
Test:: Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:: Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:: 11.3s
Cost:: $0.000683
Provider:: OpenAI

Evaluation summary

Score	Evaluator	Details Link
18.18%	Adverbs in dialogue tags	(details)
60.28%	AI-ism adverb frequency	(details)
100.00%	AI-ism character names	(details)
100.00%	AI-ism location names	(details)
0.00%	AI-ism word frequency	(details)
100.00%	Cliché density	(details)
97.22%	Emotion telling (show vs. tell)	(details)
0.00%	Filter word density	(details)
100.00%	Gibberish response detection	(details)
100.00%	Markdown formatting overuse	(details)
100.00%	Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)	(details)
100.00%	Name drop frequency	(details)
63.79%	Narrator intent-glossing	(details)
98.68%	"Not X but Y" pattern overuse	(details)
100.00%	Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)	(details)
21.67%	Paragraph length variance	(details)
99.42%	Passive voice overuse	(details)
100.00%	Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse	(details)
0.00%	Em-dash & semicolon overuse	(details)
88.99%	Purple prose (modifier overload)	(details)
100.00%	Repeated phrase echo	(details)
100.00%	Sentence length variance	(details)
53.13%	Sentence opener variety	(details)
55.56%	Adverb-first sentence starts	(details)
66.67%	Pronoun-first sentence starts	(details)
0.00%	Subject-first sentence starts	(details)
0.00%	Subordinate conjunction sentence starts	(details)
0.00%	Technical jargon density	(details)
0.00%	Useless dialogue additions	(details)
0.00%	Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)	(details)
60.7861%	Overall

Model input

System

You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue.

You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex.

Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.

User/Human

<codex>
<character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist">
  <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor>
  <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair>
  <height>5'6"</height>
  <age>25</age>
  <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar>
  <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description>
  <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory>
</character>

<character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card">
  <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor>
  <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height>
  <age>ageless</age>
  <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form>
  <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice>
  <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description>
  <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory>
</character>

<character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle">
  <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor>
  <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair>
  <height>5'5"</height>
  <age>300 years old</age>
  <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance>
  <speech>speaks in riddles</speech>
  <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints>
  <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion>
  <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description>
  <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory>
</character>

<location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony">
  <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler>
  <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor>
  <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description>
</location>

<location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)">
  <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation>
  <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones>
  <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior>
  <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora>
  <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description>
</location>

<item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas">
  <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor>
  <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial>
  <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size>
  <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior>
  <glow>faint inner glow</glow>
  <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description>
</item>

<item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts">
  <material>moonsilver</material>
  <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape>
  <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature>
  <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow>
  <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power>
  <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo>
  <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description>
</item>

<lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology">
  <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect>
  <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance>
  <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring>
  <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description>
</lore>
</codex>

Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre.

A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition.

Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore.
Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

They stepped through the ancient oak standing stones, the air immediately changing as if reality itself had shivered. Aurora Carter’s bright blue eyes widened slightly—the moment was colder than expected, yet somehow imbued with an unnatural warmth that prickled along her skin. The world beyond the stones was unsettling, otherworldly. Time felt different here, a strange slow pulse that made the slightest movement seem deliberate and heavy.

Nyx moved first, their shadow form rippling like dark water in the windless air. The faint violet glow of their eyes flickered as they shifted into a more solid silhouette, their form towering and vague—less a shadow and more a suggestion of darkness made flesh. “Heed my whisper,” Nyx murmured, voice like a soft breeze carrying secrets. Their fingers, if they could be called that, floated through the air, sensing the unfamiliarity of this realm.

Aurora hesitated, clutching the Heartstone Pendant that pulsed faintly warm against her chest. She had been told few truths about these places, just enough to leave her breathless with anticipation and dread. Her hand instinctively brushed the silver chain, feeling the faint warmth of the deep crimson gemstone. The pendant pulsed again, a rhythmic throb that seemed to echo the distant, subtle hum of the environment.

The landscape stretched before them in impossible ways—an endless expanse of thick, luminescent flora, wildflowers blooming in shades that defied earthly palette: iridescent blues, shimmering golds, and translucent whites that shimmered like frost under a strange, amber sky. Trees—ancient, twisted, and draped with trailing vines—groaned softly in a breeze that only they seemed to feel. The air smelled faintly of exotic, spiced fruit and something darker, primal.

Isolde Varga’s silver hair shimmered as she stepped cautiously ahead, her pale lavender eyes flickering with intrigue and caution. She was silent—always silent—her footsteps leaving no trace on the mossy ground. The Fae Grove had not prepared her for this. “The boundary,” she whispered to herself, voice like the wind through hollow branches. “Unfolds in shadows... and echoes of pleasure, and peril.”

Their eyes roved over the environment, each sense heightened, alert to danger and beauty alike. Aurora’s gaze fixed on a cluster of alien blossoms, their petals fluttering even without wind, somehow alive in a way that made her skin crawl. Their textures shimmered hesitantly, as if they were barely contained beneath the surface of this world’s fragile veneer.

Nyx’s shadowy form rippled again, and they crouched, fingers reaching toward a strange, crystalline growth protruding from the ground—a jagged shard glowing with internal light, flickering like a heartbeat. Their voice, a whisper on the wind, brief and cryptic: “Energies woven tight here, threads of old magic and new chaos.”

Aurora shivered, drawing the Fae-Forged Blade from her coat—a slender, moonlit sliver of moonsilver, cold to the touch as always but oddly comforting in her palm. She had no illusions about what awaited them deeper in, but her instincts fired—sharp and insistent. The shadows darted at the edges of her vision, as if her own doubts sought to cling to her.

They moved forward, their feet sinking softly into a pool of bioluminescent moss that shimmered with their every step. The glow cast strange, shifting shadows that danced, elongating and contracting like living things. Aurora reached out, fingertips brushing a thick vine that seemed to pulse beneath her touch. Its leaves were thick and rubbery, mottled with streaks of iridescence—almost like veins of molten glass.

Suddenly, a faint hum began, vibrating through the ground itself. Not uncomfortable, but enough to raise her hackles. Aurora’s mind stirred with questions she knew she shouldn’t ask aloud—the dissonance here was palpable, a symphony of ancient power and unseen secrets. She kept her voice calm, voice barely above a whisper. “Feels like the Veil is thin here.”

Nyx nodded silently, shadows lengthening and contracting in response to some unseen rhythm. The being of living shadow seemed to sense the imbalance—a ripple in the fabric of this realm—and their faint glow brightened minutely. “The boundary shifts,” they whispered, voice like wind slipping through cracks in stone. “The farther we go, the less tethered this realm becomes.”

A sudden flicker caught Aurora’s eye. Shadowy wisps coiled among the flora, like tendrils seeking something—perhaps her. She tightened her grip on the blade, her knuckles white. Her instincts flared. “We should move,” she said softly, voice steady but cautious. “We’re not alone here.”

The moss beneath her feet squelched as they pressed on. The landscape continued to shift—bizarre, spectacular, and unnatural. Some of the trees seemed to bend in impossible angles, their bark mottled with luminescent markings that twisted in the dim light, hinting at histories not meant for mortal eyes.

Her gaze flickered upward as she caught the faint shimmer of something beyond the horizon—a structure, half-hidden by shadows but unmistakably deliberate. A ruin, perhaps, or the residue of something ancient and powerful. It called to her as much as it warned.

“Stay alert,” she murmured, voice barely more than a breath. Her fingers lingered on the hilt of her blade, feeling the faint pulse of the Heartstone beneath her skin. The air thickened, electric with anticipation and foreboding—an almost tangible weight pressing against her mind.

And then, in the distance, a faint, haunting melody drifted—a chorus of voices, ethereal and distant. It beckoned with promises of secrets, of truths buried beneath layers of time and shadow. Aurora felt her stomach tighten, a mixture of awe and unease.

Nyx’s shadow leaned forward, listening with an intent that went beyond hearing. Their whisper, finally: “The story here isn’t finished. Not yet.”

The landscape stretched on, alien and wondrous, as they advanced into its shifting heart. Every step drew them further into the unknown—toward the edges of things they could only begin to understand. And yet, beneath it all, a faint sense of familiarity lurked—the recognition that whatever awaited lay just beyond the veil of their perception, waiting to be unveiled.

Evaluation details

Result

Evaluator

Details

Meta Data

18.18%

Adverbs in dialogue tags

Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs

totalTags

adverbTagCount

adverbTags

0	"she said softly [softly]"

dialogueSentences

tagDensity

0.455

leniency

0.909

rawRatio

0.2

effectiveRatio

0.182

60.28%

AI-ism adverb frequency

Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)

wordCount

1007

totalAiIsmAdverbs

found

adverb	"slightly"
count	1

adverb	"softly"
count	3

adverb	"cautiously"
count	1

adverb	"hesitantly"
count	1

adverb	"suddenly"
count	1

adverb	"barely above a whisper"
count	1

highlights

0	"slightly"
1	"softly"
2	"cautiously"
3	"hesitantly"
4	"suddenly"
5	"barely above a whisper"

100.00%

AI-ism character names

Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)

codexExemptions	(empty)
found	(empty)

100.00%

AI-ism location names

Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)

codexExemptions	(empty)
found	(empty)

0.00%

AI-ism word frequency

Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)

wordCount

1007

totalAiIsms

found

word	"warmth"
count	2

word	"otherworldly"
count	1

word	"pulse"
count	3

word	"flickered"
count	2

word	"whisper"
count	4

word	"pulsed"
count	2

word	"anticipation"
count	2

word	"rhythmic"
count	1

word	"throb"
count	1

word	"echo"
count	1

word	"shimmered"
count	4

word	"intrigue"
count	1

word	"footsteps"
count	1

word	"echoes"
count	1

word	"peril"
count	1

word	"crystalline"
count	1

word	"comforting"
count	1

word	"palpable"
count	1

word	"symphony"
count	1

word	"flicker"
count	1

word	"structure"
count	1

word	"electric"
count	1

word	"foreboding"
count	1

word	"tangible"
count	1

word	"weight"
count	1

word	"stomach"
count	1

word	"sense of"
count	1

highlights

0	"warmth"
1	"otherworldly"
2	"pulse"
3	"flickered"
4	"whisper"
5	"pulsed"
6	"anticipation"
7	"rhythmic"
8	"throb"
9	"echo"
10	"shimmered"
11	"intrigue"
12	"footsteps"
13	"echoes"
14	"peril"
15	"crystalline"
16	"comforting"
17	"palpable"
18	"symphony"
19	"flicker"
20	"structure"
21	"electric"
22	"foreboding"
23	"tangible"
24	"weight"
25	"stomach"
26	"sense of"

100.00%

Cliché density

Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window

totalCliches

maxInWindow

found

label	"eyes widened/narrowed"
count	1

highlights

0	"eyes widened"

97.22%

Emotion telling (show vs. tell)

Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling

emotionTells

narrationSentences

matches

0	"s with anticipation"
1	"c with anticipation"

0.00%

Filter word density

Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words

filterCount

hedgeCount

narrationSentences

filterMatches

(empty)

hedgeMatches

0	"seemed to"
1	"begin to"

100.00%

Gibberish response detection

Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)

analyzedSentences	64
gibberishSentences	0
adjustedGibberishSentences	0
longSentenceCount	0
runOnParagraphCount	0
giantParagraphCount	0
wordSaladCount	0
repetitionLoopCount	0
controlTokenCount	0
maxSentenceWordsSeen	39
ratio	0
matches	(empty)

100.00%

Markdown formatting overuse

Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting

markdownSpans	0
markdownWords	0
totalWords	987
ratio	0
matches	(empty)

100.00%

Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)

Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks

totalAttributions	6
unquotedAttributions	0
matches	(empty)

100.00%

Name drop frequency

Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words

totalMentions

wordCount

926

uniqueNames

maxNameDensity

0.86

worstName

"Aurora"

maxWindowNameDensity

1.5

worstWindowName

"Aurora"

discoveredNames

Carter	1
Heartstone	2
Pendant	1
Varga	1
Fae	2
Grove	1
Aurora	8
Fae-Forged	1
Blade	1
Nyx	5

persons

0	"Carter"
1	"Varga"
2	"Aurora"
3	"Blade"
4	"Nyx"

places

0	"Fae"
1	"Grove"

globalScore

windowScore

63.79%

Narrator intent-glossing

Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns

analyzedSentences

glossingSentenceCount

matches

0	"throb that seemed to echo the distant, subtle hum of the environment"
1	"vine that seemed to pulse beneath her touch"

98.68%

"Not X but Y" pattern overuse

Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words

totalMatches

per1kWords

1.013

wordCount

987

matches

0	"Not uncomfortable, but enough to raise her hackles"

100.00%

Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)

Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses

thatCount	0
totalSentences	64
matches	(empty)

21.67%

Paragraph length variance

Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts

totalParagraphs

mean

54.83

std

12.38

0.226

sampleLengths

0	67
1	75
2	66
3	67
4	62
5	58
6	50
7	61
8	64
9	58
10	58
11	44
12	48
13	42
14	44
15	42
16	22
17	59

99.42%

Passive voice overuse

Target: ≤2% passive sentences

passiveCount

totalSentences

matches

0	"been told"

100.00%

Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse

Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs

pastProgressiveCount	0
totalVerbs	157
matches	(empty)

0.00%

Em-dash & semicolon overuse

Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons

emDashCount

semicolonCount

flaggedSentences

totalSentences

ratio

0.281

matches

0	"Aurora Carter’s bright blue eyes widened slightly—the moment was colder than expected, yet somehow imbued with an unnatural warmth that prickled along her skin."
1	"The faint violet glow of their eyes flickered as they shifted into a more solid silhouette, their form towering and vague—less a shadow and more a suggestion of darkness made flesh."
2	"The landscape stretched before them in impossible ways—an endless expanse of thick, luminescent flora, wildflowers blooming in shades that defied earthly palette: iridescent blues, shimmering golds, and translucent whites that shimmered like frost under a strange, amber sky."
3	"Trees—ancient, twisted, and draped with trailing vines—groaned softly in a breeze that only they seemed to feel."
4	"She was silent—always silent—her footsteps leaving no trace on the mossy ground."
5	"Nyx’s shadowy form rippled again, and they crouched, fingers reaching toward a strange, crystalline growth protruding from the ground—a jagged shard glowing with internal light, flickering like a heartbeat."
6	"Aurora shivered, drawing the Fae-Forged Blade from her coat—a slender, moonlit sliver of moonsilver, cold to the touch as always but oddly comforting in her palm."
7	"She had no illusions about what awaited them deeper in, but her instincts fired—sharp and insistent."
8	"Its leaves were thick and rubbery, mottled with streaks of iridescence—almost like veins of molten glass."
9	"Aurora’s mind stirred with questions she knew she shouldn’t ask aloud—the dissonance here was palpable, a symphony of ancient power and unseen secrets."
10	"The being of living shadow seemed to sense the imbalance—a ripple in the fabric of this realm—and their faint glow brightened minutely."
11	"Shadowy wisps coiled among the flora, like tendrils seeking something—perhaps her."
12	"The landscape continued to shift—bizarre, spectacular, and unnatural."
13	"Her gaze flickered upward as she caught the faint shimmer of something beyond the horizon—a structure, half-hidden by shadows but unmistakably deliberate."
14	"The air thickened, electric with anticipation and foreboding—an almost tangible weight pressing against her mind."
15	"And then, in the distance, a faint, haunting melody drifted—a chorus of voices, ethereal and distant."
16	"Every step drew them further into the unknown—toward the edges of things they could only begin to understand."
17	"And yet, beneath it all, a faint sense of familiarity lurked—the recognition that whatever awaited lay just beyond the veil of their perception, waiting to be unveiled."

88.99%

Purple prose (modifier overload)

Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking

wordCount	948
adjectiveStacks	0
stackExamples	(empty)
adverbCount	46
adverbRatio	0.04852320675105485
lyAdverbCount	23
lyAdverbRatio	0.024261603375527425

100.00%

Repeated phrase echo

Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)

totalSentences	64
echoCount	0
echoWords	(empty)

100.00%

Sentence length variance

Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts

totalSentences

mean

15.42

std

6.78

0.44

sampleLengths

0	18
1	24
2	8
3	17
4	14
5	31
6	12
7	18
8	13
9	19
10	16
11	18
12	38
13	17
14	12
15	19
16	12
17	9
18	13
19	9
20	15
21	25
22	18
23	29
24	21
25	26
26	16
27	19
28	19
29	14
30	15
31	16
32	10
33	8
34	23
35	10
36	7
37	13
38	22
39	13
40	10
41	6
42	11
43	10
44	3
45	10
46	4
47	10
48	8
49	30

53.13%

Sentence opener variety

Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers

consecutiveRepeats	6
diversityRatio	0.375
totalSentences	64
uniqueOpeners	24

55.56%

Adverb-first sentence starts

Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb

adverbCount

totalSentences

matches

0	"Suddenly, a faint hum began,"

ratio

0.017

66.67%

Pronoun-first sentence starts

Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun

pronounCount

totalSentences

matches

0	"They stepped through the ancient"
1	"Their fingers, if they could"
2	"She had been told few"
3	"Her hand instinctively brushed the"
4	"She was silent—always silent—her footsteps"
5	"she whispered to herself, voice"
6	"Their eyes roved over the"
7	"Their textures shimmered hesitantly, as"
8	"Their voice, a whisper on"
9	"She had no illusions about"
10	"They moved forward, their feet"
11	"Its leaves were thick and"
12	"She kept her voice calm,"
13	"they whispered, voice like wind"
14	"She tightened her grip on"
15	"Her instincts flared."
16	"she said softly, voice steady"
17	"Her gaze flickered upward as"
18	"It called to her as"
19	"she murmured, voice barely more"

ratio

0.383

0.00%

Subject-first sentence starts

Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject

subjectCount

totalSentences

matches

0	"They stepped through the ancient"
1	"Aurora Carter’s bright blue eyes"
2	"The world beyond the stones"
3	"Time felt different here, a"
4	"Nyx moved first, their shadow"
5	"The faint violet glow of"
6	"Nyx murmured, voice like a"
7	"Their fingers, if they could"
8	"Aurora hesitated, clutching the Heartstone"
9	"She had been told few"
10	"Her hand instinctively brushed the"
11	"The pendant pulsed again, a"
12	"The landscape stretched before them"
13	"Trees—ancient, twisted, and draped with"
14	"The air smelled faintly of"
15	"Isolde Varga’s silver hair shimmered"
16	"She was silent—always silent—her footsteps"
17	"The Fae Grove had not"
18	"she whispered to herself, voice"
19	"Their eyes roved over the"

ratio

0.933

0.00%

Subordinate conjunction sentence starts

Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction

subConjCount	0
totalSentences	60
matches	(empty)
ratio	0

0.00%

Technical jargon density

Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns

analyzedSentences

technicalSentenceCount

matches

0	"They stepped through the ancient oak standing stones, the air immediately changing as if reality itself had shivered."
1	"Aurora Carter’s bright blue eyes widened slightly—the moment was colder than expected, yet somehow imbued with an unnatural warmth that prickled along her skin."
2	"Time felt different here, a strange slow pulse that made the slightest movement seem deliberate and heavy."
3	"The pendant pulsed again, a rhythmic throb that seemed to echo the distant, subtle hum of the environment."
4	"The landscape stretched before them in impossible ways—an endless expanse of thick, luminescent flora, wildflowers blooming in shades that defied earthly palett…"
5	"Aurora’s gaze fixed on a cluster of alien blossoms, their petals fluttering even without wind, somehow alive in a way that made her skin crawl."
6	"Their textures shimmered hesitantly, as if they were barely contained beneath the surface of this world’s fragile veneer."
7	"They moved forward, their feet sinking softly into a pool of bioluminescent moss that shimmered with their every step."
8	"The glow cast strange, shifting shadows that danced, elongating and contracting like living things."
9	"Aurora reached out, fingertips brushing a thick vine that seemed to pulse beneath her touch."
10	"Some of the trees seemed to bend in impossible angles, their bark mottled with luminescent markings that twisted in the dim light, hinting at histories not mean…"

0.00%

Useless dialogue additions

Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments

totalTags

uselessAdditionCount

matches

0	"she said softly, voice steady but cautious"
1	"she murmured, voice barely more than a breath"

0.00%

Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)

Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags

totalTags

fancyCount

fancyTags

0	"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
1	"she whispered (whisper)"
2	"they whispered (whisper)"
3	"she murmured (murmur)"

dialogueSentences

tagDensity

0.455

leniency

0.909

rawRatio

0.8

effectiveRatio

0.727

60.7861%