Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQE6P8CG84QWJZFQXWA7KN

Run Details

Duration:
37.6s
Cost:
$0.008964
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The bolt scraped and then gave, an ordinary, private sound that made Rory hold her breath as if the world might shift if she inhaled too quickly. For a second she expected Eva's rumpled hair, a grocery bag, a complaint about the kettle. Brick Lane sunlight lobbed onto the threshold in a hard strip, catching motes of dust that hung like suspended breath. He was standing in it. Lucien Moreau filled the doorway like a question that had been posed in a language she almost remembered. His suit was the precise, dangerous thing it had always been—charcoal that swallowed the light and made the brass of his cufflinks gleam. His hair was platinum and slicked back, exactly as it had been the last time she'd seen him in a room that had drifted too far toward confession. One eye was amber, like something lit from within; the other was black, as if someone had painted over a pupil and left no explanation. For a moment Rory could only look at him. Her mouth was dry enough that she could taste metal. He looked… tired and disciplined at once, the way a person looks when they've learned how to hold their weather inside. He was holding his cane by the ivory handle, but he had his hand wrapped around it without leaning. It made him seem poised to leave even as he stood on her carpet. "Ptolemy," he said, and the tabby cat—who had been sunning himself on the doormat—pushed forward and threaded around Lucien's ankles like a small, warm question. The cat's tail touched his calf, eyes half-lidded, then he leapt with the casual proprietoriality of a creature who had spent his life in small, shared spaces and had opinions about people. The sight should have been trivial—everyone in London had friends, too many of them. But seeing that cat love him on such obvious terms did something under her ribs that felt like old, brittle things softening. "What are you doing here?" Rory managed. The voice she used was the one that kept lines clean and options open, the voice that had saved her from more than one risky conversation with delivery customers and Evan before him. It betrayed nothing, but it betrayed everything. Lucien smiled, a tiny, exacting twist of mouth. It never reached the black eye. "I could ask you the same." He stepped fully into the flat as if he had been invited all along, closing the door behind him with a quiet click that she noticed like a wrong note. "But I suppose that would be less interesting." Her flat—Eva's flat, she corrected in her head—was as cramped and comforting as a book spine. Books were stacked in tottering towers from the radiator to the kitchenette. Notes trailed off the table like footprints; Eva's handwriting was ubiquitous like ivy on the walls. The smell of curry rose from below the windowsill where the street filtered up its spice like a slow, familiar tide. Lucien looked at the chaos with the kind of amusement people reserve for wind-up toys. "You live like a person who puts off loves and makes room for research instead," he said. "I should have known you would be stationary long enough to collect a small library." "Because 'stationary' is obviously a personality trait." Rory folded her arms against the back of her ribs as if to quiet the flutter there. "What do you want, Lucien?" He studied her with the gentleness of a man cataloguing evidence. "You always had better timing than you let on," he said. "And worse luck." She didn't let him have the small victory of confusion. "Answer the question." He gave her a look that was almost apology. "I wanted to see you. If that makes me selfish, then yes, I am. If that makes me anything else—well. I am here on business, as well. Something I thought you ought to know." "About what? The weather? My father's will?" She heard the edge in her voice and tasted old salt—an aftertaste from the last time he had left without saying exactly why, leaving behind a note that had been both explanation and omission. He had helped her then, too, or at least she'd thought so. He had doors that opened in shadows and a way of saying what she wanted to hear and what was safest to hear in separate breaths. It had amounted to a sort of lying by omission, and she had a memory of him on a rainy night, the umbrella between them like a barrier, his hands too still. Lucien's fingers brushed the crescent-shaped scar at the base of his cane as if it were a habit. His gaze dropped to her left wrist, the place where a childhood accident had left a pale mark. The look he gave it wasn't curiosity so much as a memory that belonged to him. "I didn't know you carried that," he said quietly. Rory's hand twitched toward the scar as if to hide it. "It's not for your inspection." He raised his hands, a gesture that in anyone else would have been surrender. With Lucien it read like a show. "I came because someone is looking for a woman who used to be seen with you." She laughed then—a short, startled sound that did not reach her eyes. "Of course. What an accessory I am: a breadcrumb leading men to whatever you'll call them." "You're remarkably unhelpful," Lucien said. "And I don't want to be the man who walks into your life and weighs the air for danger. But I'm not, these days, particularly interested in not knowing things." "People told you that before. It didn't help," she said, because the thing she had left unsaid had been pressed into her throat for years and had turned into a stone she could no longer swallow. "You left. You vanished. You didn't tell me why you were going." He paused as if the city had turned down its noise and let him choose his words with care. When he did speak his voice had something like compassion threaded through it—precise, a faint accent that hadn't been ironed away by London. "I left because I thought my staying would make you a target." She wanted to scoff. Instead the window pressed the light into her eyes and she saw the past with the bluntness of someone who'd been up close to danger and survived it on brittle luck. Evan had been behind her once; she had known fear intimately enough to taste it. Lucien's presence in those memories had been at once protection and a complication—a man who appeared when the world had narrowed and then retreated into the margin. "And what about letting me make that decision myself?" "I didn't think you'd ask the right questions," he said. "I thought—foolishly—that if I removed myself, you would have a chance to rebuild without me dragging my own shadows into the rooms. I was wrong." The apology was there but so was the thing he hadn't said: that his work made him dangerous in a way simple absence could not fix. That he had reasons to vanish beyond the flattering idea of protecting her. She had learned to interpret omissions the way a reader learned to predict plot turns: with a bitter certainty that left little room for surprises. "So you came back because you're a martyr now," she said. "Or because your conscience couldn't sleep either." He smiled again, not quite soft, but softer than before. "Because I'm tired of watching you repair yourself in photographs and hearing of your courage secondhand. You are far more braced for the world than you allow, but you still leave things unsaid because you think silence keeps people safe. Sometimes silence is just a door that stays open for the next bad thing." Ptolemy nosed at her calf and then mapped the space between them with feline imperiousness. He hopped up onto the arm of the couch like the flat belonged to him—and, in truth, it did. He settled between the stacks of books and looked at Lucien with an expression of judgment that belonged to someone who had seen loyalties rearrange themselves and had decided where he stood. The cat's presence made the air smaller, softer somehow. It was easier to be honest in a space where a small animal arranged its comfort as if nothing had broken. Rory felt the old heat behind her eyes—the familiar, angry heat she had trained into usefulness. "Why now?" she demanded. "Why not when I was still—" Her voice broke on the last word. Stupid. Vulnerable. The word she refused to utter sauntered in her head like a remembered lover. Lucien took a step closer, and the room shrank to the width of his shoulders and the distance between their faces. He smelled faintly of rain and something like tobacco and citrus: all things that made the world seem combustible. "Because I have something you did not know you needed to know," he said. "And because I can't pretend I haven't wanted to cross the city just to see if you'd been eating properly." There was a ridiculous, small part of her that wanted to laugh at him for such incongruity. Instead she felt the knot in her chest loosen, like a shoelace tied in the dark and undone without fanfare. "About what this time? That every courier who takes the Golden Empress orders will answer to you? That Silas has finally figured out how to lock his bar properly?" "Murders," Lucien said bluntly, and the word landed like a weight. The casual cruelty of the flat—it was still their flat for the breath of a sentence—shifted. "Three in the last month. The pattern points toward someone who moves through the city using things like old grudges and people's bad luck. Your name has been mentioned." The illusion of humor cracked. Rory's hands were suddenly cold and steadied on the edge of a book. "How—why—" "Because you knew someone," he said. "And because you leave doors open." His words weren't a reproach so much as a map being drawn in front of her, the lines of a possibility she had no appetite for navigating alone. "Because people have a way of finding out where others hide." She thought of Evan—the bruises she had erased from mirrors, the late-night calls that had been made under the rattle of his bicycle, the way she'd run. She thought of leaving Cardiff with the clothes she could carry and the bitter, protective presence of Eva who had taken in a girl who smelled like escape. The past felt like a room with glass walls: everything visible and yet unreachable. Lucien watched her as if he could read the arrangement of answers on her face. "I didn't come to make you relive it," he said. "I came because I'm tired of being the person who steps in at the last minute to keep you breathing. I came because I couldn't keep being an absence you had to explain to yourself. If you want me to go, I will go. If you want me to inform, I will do that too. But I would rather—" He hesitated, and for a place in her chest a small door opened that she had been teaching herself to keep shut. "—be here." The line hung between them like a coin that might be flipped. It was both invitation and confession, and it felt dangerous only insofar as anything honest ever does: it demanded a response that wasn't fear-made. Rory stared at him until the furniture blurred and the words were the only solid thing in the space. "You're not asking me to forgive you for disappearing," she said finally. "You're asking me to let you live in the same air without breaking the things I've spent so long fixing." He nodded. "Yes." She thought of the small crescent on her wrist and the way she had hid it, not from strangers but from men who insisted that damage made them into saviors. She thought of Ptolemy's obvious warmth, as if the cat had known something about fidelity she was still learning. And she thought of the city's tide, of how threats lapped at the edges of people's lives whether they liked it or not. Slowly, she let the hand she had kept clamped to a book fall open on the spine. It was an offer and not an absolution, not forgiveness, but a thing more precarious: a seat at the table while she watched the elbows. "One condition," she said. "You tell me everything you know. No more half-answers, no more theatrical vanishings. And you sleep at Silas' if it keeps you sane, not because I'm afraid you'll leave, but because I am not letting you walk out the door again without me knowing where you go." Lucien's smile was small and real, like sunlight subsidized by a bank of clouds. "Deal," he said. "And if you ever want to leave a better message than a locked door, tell me where to reach you." Rory looked at him—close enough now to see the faint scar through his left ear, a pale line that suggested history and repair—and felt something like permission bloom. It was not trust, not yet. It was not surrender. It was an answer on the tip of the tongue she had kept clamped through worse storms: the possibility of more. Ptolemy twined himself around their ankles as if endorsing the arrangement, then hopped up onto the arm of the couch and curled into a sunbeam. Outside, Brick Lane kept on with its music—taxis, laughter, a radio from the shop below—but inside, the flat became a place where old questions could be asked without falling apart. Rory closed the door fully and turned the three deadbolts with fingers that no longer trembled.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
29.1667% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"he said, and the tabby cat—who had been sunning himself on the doormat—pushed forward and threaded around Lucien's ankles like a small, warm question [around]"
1"he said quietly [quietly]"
2"she said, because the thing she had left unsaid had been pressed into her throat for years and had turned into a stone she could no longer swallow [no longer]"
3"Lucien said bluntly, and the word landed like a weight [bluntly, like]"
4"she said finally [finally]"
87.2449% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount2352
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"slowly"
2"suddenly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
87.2449% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount2352
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"trembled"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"navigating"
count1
highlights
0"trembled"
1"weight"
2"navigating"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences109
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences109
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount6
totalSentences135
matches
0"seeing that cat"
1"carried that,\" he"
2"make that decision"
3"said: that his"
4"opened that she"
5"insisted that damage"
95.9385% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean51.6
std25.07
cv0.486
sampleLengths
063
15
294
373
457
536
647
758
865
947
1029
1125
1213
1343
14111
1561
1616
1737
1828
1935
2048
2154
2286
2335
2482
2564
2696
2749
2874
2966
3056
3119
3251
3369
34108
3536
3651
373
3872
3942
4051
4137
4259
4355
4416
90.5199% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount7
totalSentences109
matches
0"been posed"
1"been invited"
2"were stacked"
3"been pressed"
4"been ironed"
5"being drawn"
6"been made"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs301
matches
0"was standing"
1"was holding"
98.3295% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1718
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount72
adverbRatio0.04190919674039581
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.008731082654249126
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences135
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences135
mean17.2
std11.37
cv0.661
sampleLengths
027
116
220
35
418
523
628
725
89
910
102
1119
1219
1314
1425
1532
1614
1722
187
1933
207
218
226
2336
248
2516
2612
2716
2821
2915
3017
3115
3224
335
3411
3511
363
3710
383
399
4034
4141
4212
4326
4432
4518
4618
4716
489
4911
45.4321% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.32592592592592595
totalSentences135
uniqueOpeners44
81.2500% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"he said, and the tabby cat—who had been sunning himself on the doormat—pushed forward and threaded around Lucien's ankles like a small, warm question (say, sun push thread around like)"
1"he said quietly (say quietly)"
2"she said, because the thing she had left unsaid had been pressed into her throat for years and had turned into a stone she could no longer swallow (say, leave unsay press turn no longer swallow)"
3"demanded (demand)"
4"Lucien said bluntly, and the word landed like a weight (say bluntly, land like)"
5"she said finally (say finally)"
89.1251%