| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.148 | | leniency | 0.296 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.56% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1455 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 48.45% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1455 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "scanning" | | 2 | "flicker" | | 3 | "pounding" | | 4 | "stomach" | | 5 | "flicked" | | 6 | "pulsed" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "trembled" | | 10 | "echoed" | | 11 | "jaw clenched" | | 12 | "glinting" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "jaw/fists clenched" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 123 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 123 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 145 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 27.94% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 34 | | markdownWords | 125 | | totalWords | 1453 | | ratio | 0.086 | | matches | | 0 | "Herrera" | | 1 | "Too late to be casual." | | 2 | "not yet, not unless she had to" | | 3 | "a flicker of movement." | | 4 | "too narrow for a safe jump, but she wasn’t here for safe." | | 5 | "bone token." | | 6 | "in evidence photos, in the pockets of bodies that shouldn’t have been possible." | | 7 | "ripped," | | 8 | "no, a wound in the world" | | 9 | "snapped" | | 10 | "shifted." | | 11 | "advertisements for things that hadn’t existed in decades, in centuries." | | 12 | "No turning back now." | | 13 | "not human, not entirely." | | 14 | "jars of swirling mist, weapons that hummed with unseen energy, bundles of herbs that writhed like serpents." | | 15 | "their eyes were wrong." | | 16 | "her" | | 17 | "too long, too many fingers" | | 18 | "Drugs. Weapons. Something worse." | | 19 | "too many eyes" | | 20 | "hissed." | | 21 | "my" | | 22 | "run." | | 23 | "shuddered." | | 24 | "unraveled," | | 25 | "becoming something else." | | 26 | "echoed," | | 27 | "screamed," | | 28 | "erupted." | | 29 | "No exit. No way out." | | 30 | "roared," | | 31 | "hell" | | 32 | "pulse" | | 33 | "will" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 1326 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 0.9 | | worstName | "Herrera" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Herrera" | | discoveredNames | | Soho | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 11 | | Raven | 3 | | Nest | 3 | | Herrera | 12 | | Supernatural | 1 | | Veil | 2 | | Market | 2 | | Figures | 2 | | Saint | 1 | | Christopher | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Raven" | | 3 | "Nest" | | 4 | "Herrera" | | 5 | "Market" | | 6 | "Figures" | | 7 | "Saint" | | 8 | "Christopher" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "darkness that seemed to pulse* behind them" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1453 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 145 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 44 | | mean | 33.02 | | std | 24.53 | | cv | 0.743 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 81 | | 1 | 89 | | 2 | 82 | | 3 | 94 | | 4 | 53 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 73 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 68 | | 10 | 59 | | 11 | 71 | | 12 | 64 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 25 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 25 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 28 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 28 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 50 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 42 | | 33 | 39 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 30 | | 38 | 29 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 35 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 5 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 123 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 227 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 20 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 15 | | totalSentences | 145 | | ratio | 0.103 | | matches | | 0 | "The suspect—*Herrera*—had slipped through the back door of the bar like a rat down a drainpipe, but she wasn’t about to let him vanish again." | | 1 | "*Too late to be casual.* She pushed off, her fingers brushing the grip of her service pistol—*not yet, not unless she had to*—and moved forward, her steps silent despite the rain." | | 2 | "There—*a flicker of movement.* Herrera’s dark curls, his olive skin slick with rain, as he dropped down onto the next building over." | | 3 | "The gap between the buildings was narrow—*too narrow for a safe jump, but she wasn’t here for safe.* She took a running start, her muscles coiling, and launched herself across the void." | | 4 | "She’d seen those before—*in evidence photos, in the pockets of bodies that shouldn’t have been possible.* Supernatural bullshit." | | 5 | "A doorway—*no, a wound in the world*—yawned open, revealing a set of crumbling stone steps descending into darkness." | | 6 | "Her torch beam cut through the dark, illuminating a tunnel of cracked tile and peeling posters—*advertisements for things that hadn’t existed in decades, in centuries.* The walls pulsed faintly, as if alive." | | 7 | "Voices drifted up from below—*not human, not entirely.* A language that slithered into her ears and made her teeth ache." | | 8 | "Stalls lined the walls, their wares glowing with an eerie light—*jars of swirling mist, weapons that hummed with unseen energy, bundles of herbs that writhed like serpents.* Figures moved between them, their forms shifting in the dim light." | | 9 | "A few looked almost human, but their eyes—*their eyes were wrong.*" | | 10 | "But then she saw him—Herrera, standing at a stall near the far wall, his back to her as he spoke to a figure draped in tattered robes." | | 11 | "The robed figure’s hands—*too long, too many fingers*—handed him a small vial of something that glowed like liquid fire." | | 12 | "Eyes—*too many eyes*—locked onto her." | | 13 | "The robed figure’s form *unraveled,* its edges blurring, its body stretching, twisting—*becoming something else.* Something with too many teeth." | | 14 | "Quinn studied him—the scar on his forearm, the Saint Christopher medallion glinting at his throat." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1331 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 52 | | adverbRatio | 0.03906836964688205 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004507888805409466 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 145 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 145 | | mean | 10.02 | | std | 7.65 | | cv | 0.763 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 32 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 31 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 32 | | 18 | 27 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 22 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 28 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 32 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 22 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 38 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 51.72% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.35172413793103446 | | totalSentences | 145 | | uniqueOpeners | 51 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere ahead, a metal door" | | 1 | "*Too late to be casual.*" | | 2 | "Instead, she ran, her boots" | | 3 | "Of course he didn’t." | | 4 | "Then his jaw set, and" | | 5 | "Then Herrera twisted free, his" | | 6 | "Then he met her gaze," | | 7 | "Somewhere beneath the city, the" |
| | ratio | 0.07 | |
| 98.26% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots splashed through puddles" | | 1 | "She pressed her back against" | | 2 | "She jumped, her fingers closing" | | 3 | "She didn’t call out." | | 4 | "She didn’t slow down." | | 5 | "She’d seen those before—*in evidence" | | 6 | "Her voice cut through the" | | 7 | "She’d heard the whispers, the" | | 8 | "He stepped through, and the" | | 9 | "She pulled her torch from" | | 10 | "Her torch beam cut through" | | 11 | "She swallowed hard, her fingers" | | 12 | "She gritted her jaw and" | | 13 | "She should turn back." | | 14 | "He knew she was there." | | 15 | "she said, her voice steady" | | 16 | "He turned slowly, his warm" | | 17 | "She took another step forward," | | 18 | "She kept her gaze locked" | | 19 | "He exhaled, his fingers tightening" |
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| 42.61% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 96 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain fell in silver" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn moved like" | | 2 | "The suspect—*Herrera*—had slipped through the" | | 3 | "Her boots splashed through puddles" | | 4 | "The alley stank of damp" | | 5 | "She pressed her back against" | | 6 | "The alley dead-ended at a" | | 7 | "Quinn didn’t hesitate." | | 8 | "She jumped, her fingers closing" | | 9 | "The platform groaned under her" | | 10 | "There—*a flicker of movement.* Herrera’s" | | 11 | "She didn’t call out." | | 12 | "Words were for negotiations, for" | | 13 | "The gap between the buildings" | | 14 | "She didn’t slow down." | | 15 | "Herrera was already at the" | | 16 | "A *bone token.* Quinn’s stomach" | | 17 | "She’d seen those before—*in evidence" | | 18 | "The kind of thing that" | | 19 | "Her voice cut through the" |
| | ratio | 0.835 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 25.97% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "She jumped, her fingers closing around the cold metal, and hauled herself up with the efficiency of a woman who’d done this a hundred times before." | | 1 | "The platform groaned under her weight, but she was already moving, her eyes scanning the rooftops." | | 2 | "She’d seen those before—*in evidence photos, in the pockets of bodies that shouldn’t have been possible.* Supernatural bullshit." | | 3 | "She’d heard the whispers, the rumors from informants who swore they’d seen it." | | 4 | "Her torch beam cut through the dark, illuminating a tunnel of cracked tile and peeling posters—*advertisements for things that hadn’t existed in decades, in cen…" | | 5 | "Stalls lined the walls, their wares glowing with an eerie light—*jars of swirling mist, weapons that hummed with unseen energy, bundles of herbs that writhed li…" | | 6 | "The robed figure’s hands—*too long, too many fingers*—handed him a small vial of something that glowed like liquid fire." | | 7 | "The robed figure’s form *unraveled,* its edges blurring, its body stretching, twisting—*becoming something else.* Something with too many teeth." | | 8 | "The robed figure *screamed,* a sound like tearing metal, and the crowd *erupted.* Figures lunged at her, their forms shifting, their hands grasping." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, her voice steady despite the way her skin crawled" | | 1 | "She took, her free hand hovering near her pistol" | | 2 | "She holstered, her fingers still trembling" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.037 | | leniency | 0.074 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |