Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQE6PABWV5GZ0AVZSCJBCK

Run Details

Duration:
49.8s
Cost:
$0.049020
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
London rain fell with the weight of judgment, cold and relentless, turning the pavement along Inverness Street into a slick, shimmering mirror. Detective Harlow Quinn ignored the water soaking through the shoulders of her trench coat. She had been standing in the shadow of a grand Victorian awning for twenty minutes, her eyes locked on the narrow alleyway across the road. She checked the time. The worn leather watch on her left wrist—a gift from Morris, back when things were simple—read 2:14 AM. The streetlights buzzed with a dying amber hum, illuminating the drizzle in frantic cones of light. Then, movement. A figure emerged from the service exit of a falafel shop, shoulders hunched against the downpour. Even at this distance, obscured by the weather and the gloom, Quinn recognized the gait. It was a nervous, choppy stride, the walk of a man who knew the sound of his own heartbeat too well. Tomás Herrera. Quinn stepped out of the shadow. She didn't announce herself; eighteen years on the force had taught her that the badge was just jewelry until you had the suspect in handcuffs. She moved with the military precision that defined her career, her salt-and-pepper hair plastered to her skull, water dripping from her sharp jawline. Herrera paused at the corner, glancing over his shoulder. Under the sodium glare, his olive skin looked sallow. He brushed a hand through his short, curly dark hair, a nervous tic Quinn had noted in his file. He was looking for a tail. He found one. Their eyes locked across the rain-swept tarmac. For a second, neither moved. Quinn saw the recognition widen his warm brown eyes. He didn't see a middle-aged woman; he saw the Metropolitan Police, and he saw the end of his freedom. He bolted. "Police! Stop!" Quinn’s voice was a bark of command, trained to cut through riot noise, but Herrera was already sprinting north. Quinn launched herself forward. Her boots slammed against the wet concrete, kicking up sprays of oily water. She wasn't twenty-five anymore, and her knees burned with the sudden exertion, but she had rage on her side. She had the memory of DS Morris bleeding out in a room that shouldn't have existed, whispering about shadows that moved on their own. She had the suspicion that Herrera and his "clique" knew exactly why Morris was dead. Herrera was fast, fueled by the adrenaline of the guilty. He vaulted a pile of uncollected rubbish bags, his movements fluid despite the panic. Quinn rounded the corner just as he turned sharply toward the skeletal remains of the Camden looting district, an area technically condemned but never quite empty. She gained ground as he hesitated at a junction. He kept clutching at his chest, his hand fist-tight around something hanging from his neck—the Saint Christopher medallion, she noted. A patron saint of travelers. He was going to need more than a saint tonight. "Herrera! There's nowhere to go!" she shouted, her breath pluming in the cold air. He didn't slow down. He took a hard left toward the boarded-up façade of an old Tube station entrance—one of the ghost stations abandoned decades ago, sealed off behind iron grates and council warnings. Quinn pushed harder, her lungs burning. "Don't be stupid, Tomás." He reached the heavy iron gate. It should have been chained. It should have been welded shut. Instead, Herrera stopped, his chest heaving. He fumbled in his pocket and produced a small, pale object. It looked like a knucklione. He pressed the bone against the rusted keyhole. Quinn faltered, her detective’s brain rejecting what she saw. Keyholes required keys, cut brass and tumblers. They didn't open for jagged pieces of calcium. Yet, a heavy clank echoed from within the gate’s mechanism, a sound deep and resonant, like a stone dropping down a well. The gate groaned and swung inward just enough for a man to slip through. Herrera slid inside and shoved the gate back. Quinn hit the iron with her shoulder a second later. She jammed her boot into the narrowing gap, grunting as the metal bit into her leather sole. The gate fought back with a resistance that felt active, a pressure that wasn't just gravity and rusted hinges. It felt like the door was pushing *her*. "Open up!" she snarled, throwing her weight against it. Through the gap, she saw Herrera’s face, pale and terrified in the gloom of the station stairs. "Go back, Detective," he pleaded, his voice trembling. "You don't have a token. You can't be here." "I'm coming in, Tomás, and you're coming with me." She drew her extendable baton, using it as a lever, straining until the tendons in her neck stood out like cords. With a metallic scream, the gate gave way. Quinn stumbled through the breach, nearly falling onto the dust-choked landing. The gate slammed shut behind her with a finality that made the hair on her arms stand up. Silence swallowed the sound of the London rain. Quinn straightened, baton held low, her other hand instinctively checking the holstered sidearm at her hip. The air here was different. It didn't smell like a derelict station—mold and stale urine. It smelled of ozone, crushed herbs, and something coppery, like old blood. "Herrera," she said, her voice echoing too largely in the space. He was already gone, disappearing down the spiral emergency stairs that wound into the earth. Quinn followed. The darkness wasn't absolute; a faint, phosphorescent moss clung to the tiled walls, casting a sickly green luminescence that made her skin look grey. Down she went, deeper than the Northern Line, deeper than the sewers. The temperature rose, and with it, a low hum of activity drifted up from the belly of London. When she reached the bottom, she stepped out onto what should have been a platform. The tracks were gone, replaced by a cobblestone thoroughfare that stretched into a cavern far wider than civil engineering should allow. Quinn stopped dead. This was the Veil Market. Makeshift stalls lined the cavern walls, constructed from scavenged wood, velvet drapes, and bones. Strange lanterns, burning with smokeless blue flames, hung from the arched ceiling. But it was the crowd that made Quinn’s hand tighten on her baton until her knuckles turned white. There were humans, yes, but they moved with a wary, predatory grace. And there were others. Figures in heavy cowls that hid too many limbs. A vendor with skin like polished obsidian selling jars of swirling mist. The noise was a cacophony of hushed haggling in languages Quinn couldn't identify. She spotted Herrera weaving through the press of bodies, heading toward a stall draped in dried herbs and animal pelts. Quinn holstered her baton and moved into the crowd. She kept her head down, her bearing stiff. She needed to look like she belonged, or at least like she was dangerous enough not to question. A creature—tall, gaunt, with eyes entirely black—brushed past her, murmuring apologies in a sound like cracking ice. Quinn suppressed a shudder and focused on the olive drab of Herrera’s jacket. He was arguing with the vendor, a wizened woman whose hands were stained purple. He slammed a handful of cash onto the table—sterling, Quinn noted—followed by the silver Saint Christopher medallion from his neck. "Please," Herrera whispered, his voice carrying over the low thrum of the market. "The infection is spreading. Standard antibiotics aren't touching it." "Silver is good," the vendor croaked, picking up the medallion. "But the price for Chimera venom has risen, boy." Quinn closed the distance. She stepped up behind Herrera, pressing the barrel of her service weapon discreetly into the small of his back. "Don't move," she murmured, her lips close to his ear. Herrera stiffened. The vendor looked up, her milky eyes narrowing at Quinn not with fear, but with amusement. "Detective," Herrera breathed. "You have no idea what you've done." "I've caught a suspect," Quinn said, keeping her eyes scanning the periphery. The market felt hostile. The shadows between the stalls seemed to be lengthening, reaching toward them. "Hands where I can see them, Tomás. We're walking back to the stairs." "We won't make it," Herrera said, slowly raising his hands. The scar on his left forearm, a jagged white line from a knife attack years ago, stood out against his skin. "Look around you, Quinn. This isn't Soho. The Guard smells intent. You smell like a cop." "I am a cop." "That's the problem." The crowd had thinned around them, creating a circle of empty cobblestones. The ambient noise of the market dropped to a whisper. Quinn felt the gaze of a hundred eyes—some human, some distinctly not—fixing on her. "You treated them," Quinn hissed, leaning in. "The NHS fired you, so you came underground. You're patching up monsters, Tomás." "I treat patients," he snapped, a flash of defiance in his voice. "I don't care if they have fangs or fur. Pain is pain." He glanced back at her, his eyes desperate. "The man you're looking for? The one who killed Morris? He buys from this stall. That's why I'm here. I'm not your enemy." Quinn hesitated. The name of her partner hung in the air between them, heavy and charged. She looked at the vendor, who was now openly smiling, revealing teeth that were little more than serrated needles. "Police business," Quinn announced to the room, her voice steady despite the adrenaline flooding her system. "Move along." Nobody moved. Running footsteps echoed from the far end of the platform—heavy, armored boots. The local security. "Run," Herrera said. "Or we both die here." Quinn looked at the young paramedic, saw the raw fear and the honesty in his face. She looked at the approaching shadows, then back at the stairs. She holstered her gun. "Lead the way," she said. "But if you lose me, I shoot you in the leg." "Fair enough," Herrera said, and he took off into the labyrinth of the market, the Detective close on his heels, plunging deeper into a world she had spent three years trying to deny existed.
created_at"2026-02-17T02:39:49.653387+00:00" 2/17/2026, 2:39:49 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
70.8333% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"she said, her voice echoing too largely in the space [too largely]"
1"she murmured, her lips close to his ear [close]"
2"Herrera said, slowly raising his hands [slowly]"
88.2422% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1701
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"slowly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
52.9688% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1701
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"cacophony"
count1
1
word"velvet"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"echoed"
count2
5
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"cacophony"
1"velvet"
2"weight"
3"footsteps"
4"echoed"
5"echoing"
66.6667% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
1"hung in the air"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences128
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences128
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences143
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs62
mean27.11
std19
cv0.701
sampleLengths
061
138
22
352
42
554
643
73
840
92
1021
1175
1250
1344
1414
1534
1610
1739
188
1960
208
2154
229
2317
2417
259
2640
2718
288
2943
3011
3141
3230
3336
343
355
3644
3750
3820
3965
4034
4122
4219
4323
4410
4518
4610
4741
4847
494
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences128
matches
0"been chained"
1"been welded"
2"were gone"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs275
matches
0"was looking"
1"was pushing"
2"was arguing"
94.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1509
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"short, curly dark hair,"
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.024519549370444003
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.009940357852882704
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences143
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences143
mean11.76
std6.64
cv0.565
sampleLengths
022
114
225
34
418
516
62
716
815
921
102
116
1225
1323
149
159
1619
176
183
197
205
219
2219
232
2421
254
2613
2719
2824
2915
3010
3114
3226
339
3420
355
3610
3714
384
3930
406
414
426
435
446
456
4611
475
488
499
47.5524% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.35664335664335667
totalSentences143
uniqueOpeners51
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount14
fancyTags
0"shouted (shout)"
1"snarled (snarl)"
2"he pleaded, his voice trembling (plead)"
3"she said, her voice echoing too largely in the space (say, echo too largely)"
4"Herrera whispered, his voice carrying over the low thrum of the market (whisper, carry)"
5"the vendor croaked, picking up the medallion (croak, picking up)"
6"she murmured, her lips close to his ear (murmur, lip close)"
7"Herrera breathed (breathe)"
8"Quinn said, keeping her eyes scanning the periphery (say, keep scan)"
9"Herrera said, slowly raising his hands (say, slowly raise)"
10"Quinn hissed, leaning in (hiss, lean in)"
11"he snapped, a flash of defiance in his voice (snap)"
12"Quinn announced to the room, her voice steady despite the adrenaline flooding her system (announce flood)"
13"Herrera said, and he took off into the labyrinth of the market, the Detective close on his heels, plunging deeper into a world she had spent three years trying to deny existed (say, take off close plunge spend try deny existed)"
83.5449%