Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQE6PCE5ADBNMA3862TFB8

Run Details

Duration:
14.5s
Cost:
$0.000876
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The door swung open with a sharp *click* of the deadbolts, and there he stood—Lucien Moreau, all tailored charcoal and sharp edges, one amber eye catching the dim hallway light while the other remained a void. The scent of rain and something darker, like burnt sugar, rolled off him, cutting through the stale air of the flat. Rory’s fingers tightened around the doorknob, her pulse kicking against her throat. “You,” she said, because of course it was him. Of *course* it was him, standing there like he hadn’t vanished from her life six months ago without so much as a goodbye. Lucien’s mouth quirked, just slightly, as if he’d expected the greeting. “*Bonjour*, Aurora.” His voice was smooth, that accented purr that had once made her stomach flip. Now it just made her want to slam the door in his face. She didn’t. Because that would’ve been childish. And because, despite everything, she wasn’t stupid enough to turn away a half-demon who could probably pick the locks before she’d even finished dialing 999. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, slinked between her ankles, tail flicking with disdain. Rory stepped back, letting the cat escape into the hallway before Lucien could notice. The last thing she needed was him charming the damn feline into betraying her. “What do you want?” she asked, crossing her arms. The flat was a mess—books stacked precariously on the sofa, takeaway containers from Golden Empress littering the coffee table, Eva’s latest research notes scattered like confetti. She hadn’t expected company. Especially not *him*. Lucien’s gaze flicked over her shoulder, taking in the chaos with that infuriatingly calm assessment of his. “May I come in?” “No.” A beat. Then, slower, like he was explaining something to a particularly dense child: “Aurora. It’s raining.” She glanced past him. Sure enough, the Brick Lane pavement glistened under the streetlamps, and the distant *hiss* of tires on wet asphalt carried through the open door. A drop of water slid from the brim of his hat—when had he even put that on?—and landed on the welcome mat with a soft *plink*. Rory exhaled through her nose. “Fine. But you’re not staying.” Lucien stepped inside, shaking the rain from his shoulders like a dog. The movement was deliberate, almost theatrical, and she knew—*knew*—he was doing it just to annoy her. The flat suddenly felt smaller, the air thicker, like the space itself was holding its breath. She shut the door harder than necessary. The deadbolts *thunked* back into place. Lucien set his cane against the wall—ivory handle gleaming, blade hidden—and peeled off his gloves, finger by finger. “You’ve been avoiding my calls.” “No, I haven’t.” A lie. She’d ignored the last three. He shot her a look. “You hung up on me.” “You called at three in the morning.” “*Three-thirty.*” His lips twitched. “And you *did* answer.” Rory turned away, busying herself with clearing a stack of books from the armchair. “What do you want, Lucien?” Silence. Then, quieter: “I need your help.” She stilled. That wasn’t what she’d expected. Not from him. Not after the way things had ended—with her storming out of his office, his voice low and dangerous as he’d told her to *leave it alone*. She set the books down with a thud. “No.” “You haven’t even heard what it is.” “I don’t care.” She faced him, chin lifted. “Last time I helped you, I nearly got my throat slit by a vampire.” Lucien’s expression darkened. “That was an *anomaly*.” “*An anomaly?*” Her voice rose. “Lucien, he *bit me*.” “And I handled it.” His tone was sharp, final. Like the matter was closed. Rory laughed, short and humorless. “Oh, right. Because *you* handling things always works out so well for me.” Something flickered in his gaze—guilt? Irritation?—before it smoothed back into that infuriating mask of calm. “This isn’t about that.” “Then what’s it about?” He hesitated. Just for a second. But she caught it. “There’s a job,” he said finally. “A retrieval. Something was taken from me. Something *important*.” Rory arched a brow. “And you can’t retrieve it yourself?” “I could.” His fingers tapped once against his thigh. “But it would be… *messy*.” “Messy how?” “The less you know, the better.” She scoffed. “That’s not how this works. You don’t get to waltz in here after six months of radio silence, drop cryptic hints, and expect me to just—what? Jump when you say jump?” Lucien’s jaw tightened. “I’m not asking you to jump. I’m asking for your *skills*.” “*Skills*?” She spread her arms. “I deliver takeaway, Lucien. I’m not a bloody spy.” “You’re *smart*.” The words came out rough, like he hadn’t meant to say them. “You think fast. You notice things. And you’re *discreet*.” Rory stared at him. The compliment—if that’s what it was—hung between them, heavy and unwanted. She didn’t want to be flattered. She didn’t want to *care*. But she did. Damn him. She turned away, running a hand through her hair. The flat was too warm, too small. She could feel him watching her, those mismatched eyes tracking her every move. “Why me?” she asked quietly. Lucien didn’t answer right away. When he did, his voice was low. “Because I trust you.” The words hit her like a punch to the gut. She whirled on him. “You *what*?” His expression didn’t change, but his fingers flexed at his sides, like he was fighting the urge to reach for her. “You heard me.” “*Trust*?” Her laugh was sharp, bitter. “You don’t *trust* people, Lucien. You *use* them. You *manipulate* them. You—” She cut herself off, shaking her head. “You don’t get to say that to me. Not after everything.” Something dark flashed in his eyes. “And what, exactly, is *everything*, Aurora?” She opened her mouth. Closed it. Because the truth was, she didn’t even know anymore. Six months ago, she would’ve had an answer. Six months ago, she would’ve thrown it in his face—the way he’d shut her out, the way he’d let her walk away without a fight, the way he’d made her feel like she was *nothing* to him. But now? Now she just felt tired. She sank onto the arm of the sofa, suddenly exhausted. “You should go.” Lucien didn’t move. “I’m not leaving until you hear me out.” “Then you’ll be here a long time.” He exhaled, sharp and frustrated, and for the first time since he’d walked in, she saw the cracks in his composure. The way his shoulders tensed, the way his fingers curled into his palms like he was fighting the urge to *grab* something. To *grab her*. The thought sent a traitorous shiver down her spine. “Fine,” she said, because she was weak, because she was *stupid*, because some masochistic part of her still wanted to hear what he had to say. “Talk. But make it quick.” Lucien studied her for a long moment, like he was deciding how much to tell her. Then, slowly, he reached into his coat and pulled out a photograph. Rory took it, her fingers brushing his. A static shock jumped between them, sharp and unexpected. She ignored it. The photo was grainy, taken from a distance. A man—no, not a man. Something *else*. His skin was too pale, his eyes too dark, his smile too wide. He was holding something in his hands, something small and glinting. “Who is he?” she asked. “His name is Veles.” Lucien’s voice was tight. “He’s a collector. And he took something from me.” Rory looked up. “What?” Lucien’s gaze locked onto hers. “A key.” She waited for him to elaborate. He didn’t. “A *key*?” she repeated. “To what?” “That’s not important.” “*Not important?*” She tossed the photo onto the coffee table. “Lucien, I’m not helping you steal back some random key unless you tell me what it *does*.” His jaw clenched. “It’s not *random*.” “Then what is it?” Silence. Then, quieter: “It’s the only thing keeping my father from crossing over.” Rory stilled. She knew about his father. Knew the half-demon had been trapped in the demon realm of Avaros for decades, bound by some ancient magic. Knew Lucien had spent years trying to find a way to free him. But she also knew the cost. “You’re not serious,” she said. Lucien’s expression was grim. “I am.” “Lucien, if you let him out—” “*I know.*” His voice was sharp, cutting her off. “But it’s my choice to make.” Rory shook her head. “This is a bad idea.” “It’s the *only* idea.” His fingers curled into fists. “Veles has the key. And I need it back.” She studied him—the tension in his shoulders, the way his heterochromatic eyes burned with something raw and desperate. She’d seen Lucien angry. She’d seen him cold. She’d even seen him *vulnerable*, once, in the dark of his office, his guard down just long enough for her to glimpse the man beneath the mask. But she’d never seen him like this. Like he was *begging*. The realization settled in her chest, heavy and unwanted. She looked away, her gaze landing on the photo again. On the thing in Veles’s hands. “What does it look like?” she asked quietly. Lucien’s breath hitched, just slightly. “A locket. Silver. Engraved with a raven.” Rory closed her eyes. She knew that locket. She’d seen it before—once, in Lucien’s office, tucked away in a drawer like a secret. He’d never explained what it was. She’d never asked. But she remembered the way his fingers had trembled when he’d touched it. “You’re sure it’s the same one?” she asked. “Positive.” She exhaled, long and slow. “And you want *me* to get it back.” “Yes.” “Why?” “Because you’re the only one I trust to do it *without* getting killed.” She should’ve said no. She should’ve told him to leave, to find someone else, to *rot* for all she cared. But the words died in her throat. Because she remembered the way he’d looked at her that night in his office. The way his voice had cracked when he’d said her name. And because, despite everything, she still *cared*. “Fine,” she said, the word tasting like ash. “But I’m doing this *my* way. And if I say we walk, we *walk*. No arguments.” Lucien’s shoulders relaxed, just slightly. “Agreed.” She stood, putting distance between them. “And you’re buying me dinner first. I haven’t eaten since lunch.” The corner of his mouth twitched. “Deal.” Rory turned away, busying herself with straightening the already-straightened books on the shelf. She could feel his gaze on her, heavy and warm. “Aurora.” She didn’t look at him. “What?” A pause. Then, softer: “Thank you.” She swallowed. “Don’t thank me yet,” she said. “You haven’t seen my bill.” Lucien chuckled, low and rough. The sound sent a shiver down her spine. She ignored it. Because this was business. Nothing more.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
42.4242% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"she said, because of course it was him [of course]"
1"he said finally [finally]"
2"she said, because she was weak, because she was *stupid*, because some masochistic part of her still wanted to hear what he had to say [still]"
67.0148% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1819
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"suddenly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
67.0148% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1819
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"gleaming"
count1
3
word"glinting"
count1
4
word"trembled"
count1
5
word"jaw clenched"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"flicked"
2"gleaming"
3"glinting"
4"trembled"
5"jaw clenched"
66.6667% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
1"sent a shiver down"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences165
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences165
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences225
matches
0"put that on?—and"
1"knew that locket"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs121
mean14.89
std13.15
cv0.883
sampleLengths
069
132
240
332
439
542
621
71
817
954
1010
1144
1213
1323
1410
1510
167
178
1819
197
2036
219
227
2322
247
259
2614
2718
2819
294
3010
3115
3210
3314
342
356
3633
3714
3814
3923
4026
413
422
4329
445
4516
4610
476
4824
4936
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences165
matches
0"was—hung"
1"been trapped"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount8
totalVerbs259
matches
0"was explaining"
1"was doing"
2"was holding"
3"was fighting"
4"was fighting"
5"was deciding"
6"was holding"
7"was *begging"
89.9301% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1359
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount70
adverbRatio0.051508462104488596
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.010301692420897719
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences225
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences225
mean8.01
std6.48
cv0.81
sampleLengths
036
121
212
39
423
511
616
713
82
95
1025
1111
1214
1314
149
1526
164
173
1817
194
201
212
2215
234
2424
2526
265
275
2812
2916
3016
317
326
3318
345
355
365
375
385
397
404
414
4214
435
441
456
462
475
483
4926
43.7778% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.2577777777777778
totalSentences225
uniqueOpeners58
100.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she said, because of course it was him (say, be)"
1"he said finally (say finally)"
2"she said, because she was weak, because she was *stupid*, because some masochistic part of her still wanted to hear what he had to say (say, be be hear to say)"
86.8723%