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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQEJ18PJ1ES2A8S4R03FBE
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Model:
Mistral Small Creative
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Mystery: examining a crime scene
Duration:
8.0s
Cost:
$0.000528
Provider:
Mistral
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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The abandoned Tube station smelled of damp concrete and something older—something that clung to the back of Harlow Quinn’s throat like the ghost of a bad memory. She adjusted the strap of her shoulder holster, the leather creaking
softly
in the stillness, and stepped over the yellow police tape strung haphazardly across the rusted turnstiles. The beam of her torch cut through the gloom, illuminating the peeling posters of long-forgotten ad campaigns and the occasional
glint
of broken glass underfoot. “Detective Quinn.” The voice came from deeper in the tunnel, where the air grew thicker, heavier. Harlow didn’t startle. She never did. Instead, she turned her head just enough to catch the
flicker
of movement in her peripheral vision—Eva Kowalski, her red curls escaping the loose knot at the nape of her neck, her round glasses catching the light as she stepped forward. The woman’s satchel, bulging with books, bumped against her hip with each step. “Kowalski,” Harlow acknowledged, her voice low. “You’re not supposed to be here.” Eva pushed her glasses up the bridge of her nose, a nervous habit Harlow had come to recognize over the past few months. “Neither are you, technically. Not without a warrant.” Harlow exhaled through her nose, a sound that might have been a laugh if she’d been in the mood. “I don’t need a warrant to follow up on a tip.” “A tip from who?” “Doesn’t matter.” Harlow turned back toward the tunnel, her torch sweeping over the graffiti-covered walls. The symbols scrawled there weren’t the usual tags—no bold, spray-painted signatures. These were older. Deliberate. The lines were precise, almost ritualistic,
etched
into the brick with something sharp. She crouched, running her fingers along the edge of one symbol. The stone was warm beneath her touch, as if it had absorbed heat from something unseen. Eva crouched beside her, her breath hitching
slightly
. “You feel that too, don’t you?” Harlow didn’t answer. She didn’t have to. The crime scene—if that’s what this was—lay further down the tunnel, where the tracks disappeared into darkness. A body, or what was left of one,
was sprawled
across the rusted metal, limbs splayed at unnatural angles. The victim was a man, or had been. Now, his skin
was stretched
too tight over his bones, his face frozen in a rictus of terror. His eyes— Harlow swallowed. His eyes
were gone
. Not gouged out. Not burned away. *Gone*, as if they’d never been there at all. The sockets were smooth, seamless, like polished
marble
. “Supernatural,” Eva murmured, her voice
barely above a whisper
. “This isn’t just some gang hit or a drug deal gone wrong.” Harlow stood, her boots scuffing against the gravel. “No. It’s not.” She moved closer, her torchlight tracing the outline of the body. No blood. No signs of struggle beyond the unnatural positioning of the limbs. The man’s clothes were intact—no tears, no burns, no singe marks. Just… *wrong*. Like he’d
been drained
of something essential, something that had nothing to do with the physical. “You’re thinking about Morris,” Eva said quietly. Harlow’s jaw tightened. She didn’t look at the other woman. “I’m thinking about the case.” “Bullshit.” Harlow ignored her, crouching again to examine the man’s hands. His fingers
were curled
inward, as if he’d been clutching something in his final moments. She reached into her pocket and pulled out a pair of latex gloves, snapping them on before
carefully
prying his fingers apart. Nothing. But the skin on his palms was marked—faint, but unmistakable. A pattern, like the symbols on the wall, but smaller. Delicate. Almost like— “A compass,” Eva breathed. Harlow’s fingers stilled. She looked up. “What?” Eva was already digging in her satchel, pulling out a small, worn notebook. She flipped through the pages, her brow
furrowed
. “There’s a market. Underground. Supernatural. It moves e
very
full moon, but it’s always accessible through a rift or a portal. The entrance requires a bone token—usually a finger bone, sometimes a tooth. The market sells enchanted goods, alchemical substances, information.” She tapped the page with her finger. “And tools. Like compasses.” Harlow stood, her gloves still on. “You’re telling me this man was killed because of a *compass*?” “Not just any compass.” Eva’s green eyes were bright behind her glasses, her voice taking on the eager cadence of a scholar on the verge of a breakthrough. “A Veil Compass. It’s attuned to supernatural energy—rifts, portals, that kind of thing. If you’ve got one, you can find the market, no matter where it’s hiding.” Harlow exhaled
sharply
. “And if you don’t have one?” Eva’s expression darkened. “Then you’re either
very
lucky or
very
dead.” Harlow turned back to the body, her mind racing. The symbols on the wall. The missing eyes. The compass marks on the palms. It all pointed to something beyond the ordinary, something she’d spent the last three years trying to ignore. But ignoring it hadn’t brought Morris back. Ignoring it hadn’t made the nightmares stop. She crouched again, this time examining the man’s pockets. Empty. No wallet, no ID, no phone. Just a single, small object tucked into the lining of his jacket—a bone. A finger bone, polished smooth, carved with the same symbols from the wall. Harlow held it up between her gloved fingers, turning it in the torchlight. Eva’s breath hitched. “That’s a bone token.” “So he was here for the market,” Harlow said, more to herself than to Eva. “But something went wrong.” “Or someone didn’t want him finding it.” Harlow stood, slipping the bone into an evidence bag. “We need to find out who this man was. And we need to
find that compass
.” Eva hesitated. “Quinn, the Veil Market isn’t exactly… *friendly*. If this man was killed over the compass, then whoever did it isn’t going to just hand it over.” Harlow’s sharp jaw tightened. “Then we’ll find another way.” She turned back toward the tunnel, her torchlight sweeping over the symbols on the wall once more. There was a pattern here, a thread she could pull. She just had to follow it. And if that meant stepping into the dark? She’d done it before. She’d do it again.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
0.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
5
adverbTagCount
3
adverbTags
0
"Eva murmured, her voice barely above a whisper [barely]"
1
"Eva said quietly [quietly]"
2
"Harlow said, more to herself than to Eva [more]"
32.5626%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1038
totalAiIsmAdverbs
7
found
0
adverb
"carefully"
count
1
1
adverb
"sharply"
count
1
2
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
3
adverb
"softly"
count
1
4
adverb
"barely above a whisper"
count
1
5
adverb
"very"
count
2
highlights
0
"carefully"
1
"sharply"
2
"slightly"
3
"softly"
4
"barely above a whisper"
5
"very"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
51.8304%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1038
totalAiIsms
5
found
0
word
"flicker"
count
1
1
word
"glint"
count
1
2
word
"marble"
count
1
3
word
"furrowed"
count
1
4
word
"etched"
count
1
highlights
0
"flicker"
1
"glint"
2
"marble"
3
"furrowed"
4
"etched"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
86
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
86
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
108
matches
0
"find that compass"
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
43
mean
23.84
std
22.87
cv
0.96
sampleLengths
0
80
1
2
2
74
3
12
4
31
5
30
6
4
7
70
8
14
9
7
10
64
11
2
12
4
13
23
14
21
15
11
16
53
17
7
18
15
19
1
20
47
21
1
22
23
23
4
24
7
25
72
26
17
27
55
28
9
29
11
30
55
31
42
32
13
33
7
34
19
35
7
36
25
37
28
38
9
39
33
40
8
41
4
42
4
94.5736%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
5
totalSentences
86
matches
0
"was sprawled"
1
"was stretched"
2
"were gone"
3
"been drained"
4
"were curled"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
127
matches
(empty)
94.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
798
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"bold, spray-painted signatures."
adverbCount
31
adverbRatio
0.03884711779448621
lyAdverbCount
7
lyAdverbRatio
0.008771929824561403
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
108
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
108
mean
9.49
std
8.24
cv
0.868
sampleLengths
0
27
1
28
2
25
3
2
4
14
5
3
6
3
7
41
8
13
9
6
10
6
11
23
12
8
13
19
14
11
15
4
16
15
17
11
18
3
19
1
20
13
21
11
22
16
23
8
24
6
25
3
26
4
27
17
28
19
29
8
30
18
31
2
32
2
33
4
34
3
35
3
36
9
37
8
38
9
39
12
40
8
41
3
42
11
43
2
44
11
45
11
46
1
47
1
48
16
49
7
58.6420%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
5
diversityRatio
0.37962962962962965
totalSentences
108
uniqueOpeners
41
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
5
fancyCount
4
fancyTags
0
"Harlow acknowledged, her voice low (acknowledge)"
1
"Eva murmured, her voice barely above a whisper (murmur)"
2
"Eva said quietly (say quietly)"
3
"Eva breathed (breathe)"
78.3299%