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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQEPRTCY8YXJ7WPJHH8R7P
Run Details
Model:
Gemini 2.5 Flash Lite
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
9.8s
Cost:
$0.000789
Provider:
Google AI Studio
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
18.18%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
53.81%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
76.47%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
83.03%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
92.88%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
82.07%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
84.29%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
51.77%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
40.16%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
32.05%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
38.31%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
71.7675%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The insistent rapping on her
door didn't match the rhythm of the midday rain drumming against the windowpanes.
Rory paused, one hand on
the spine of a brittle, leather-bound volume, the other hovering over a scattered pile of parchment.
Ptolemy, her tabby cat, stretched
languidly
from his perch on a teetering stack of books, his tail twitching with mild annoyance. Another knock, sharper this time. Not Silas, he used his key. Not Yu-Fei, he usually shouted up from the street.
She smoothed down the worn
fabric of her delivery uniform, a reflex she hadn't
quite shed
.
The flat was a disaster
zone, as always.
Books spilled from shelves, ancient
maps unfurled across the scarred wooden table, and a half-eaten plate of noodles held court in the center.
She mentally cursed, wishing for
a moment she’d bothered to tidy up. Eva would have.
Eva always had her life
together, even here, in this
chaotic
den above a curry house on Brick Lane. Rory reached for the deadbolts, the metal cold beneath her fingertips. Three of them.
Eva had always been meticulous
about security, a habit Rory had grudgingly adopted.
The top bolt slid back
with a soft click, then the middle, then the bottom.
She hesitated, her heart thudding
an unfamiliar, nervous beat against her ribs. Who would be here, unannounced, at this hour? She pulled the door open.
The rain had stopped, leaving
the air heavy with the smell of wet pavement and exhaust fumes. Standing on her cramped landing, rain
glistening
on the shoulders of his impeccably tailored charcoal suit, was Lucien Moreau. Her breath hitched. He looked exactly the same, which was, in many ways, the most disorienting part.
His platinum blond hair was
still slicked back with an impossibly precise sweep, framing a face that was at once sharp and unnervingly beautiful. His heterochromatic eyes, one amber, the other a startling black, met hers, and for a fraction of a second, the world outside her door ceased to exist.
Then, the sheer, unadulterated shock
of seeing him here, now, hit her with the force of a physical blow. “Lucien,”
she managed, the name a
dry
whisper
. It had been months. Months of
carefully
constructed
silence
, of deliberate avoidance, of a hollow ache that had gradually, painstakingly, begun to fade. And now, he was here.
He offered a faint, almost
imperceptible smile, the kind that never quite reached his eyes. “Aurora. Or should I say, Malphora?” The use of her other, secret name sent a fresh wave of unease through her.
She hadn’t used it in
earnest since… since she’d last seen him. “What are you doing here?” Her voice was sharper now, a defensive edge creeping in. Lucien’s gaze swept over her, a quick, appraising
flicker
from the worn fabric of her uniform to the small crescent-shaped scar peeking out from the hem of her sleeve. There was a
flicker
of something in those mismatched eyes – recognition, perhaps, or something more
complex
she couldn’t
quite decipher
. "I believe the customary response is, 'Come in, it's…',"
he gestured vaguely at the
overflowing bookshelves, "…quite the collection." Rory didn't move. The air between them crackled with
unspoken
history, with a
tension
that was both
familiar
and terrifying.
She remembered the way he’d
looked at her the last time, the
carefully
chosen words, the impossible chasm that had opened up between them. Hurt, accusation, misunderstanding – all the things she’d
tried to
bury deep. “It’s not a collection, it’s my work,”
she said, her voice tight
. “And you’re not invited.”
His smile didn't falter, but
it didn't soften either.
It was a mask, carefully
maintained. “Ah, the prickly defense. I remember that. Though, I admit, I was hoping for a
slightly
warmer reception.”
He gestured with his ivory-handled
cane, tapping it
lightly
against the wooden floor. The faint
glint
of steel within the polished ivory was a subtle
reminder
of the man he was, the dangers he moved through. “Eva mentioned you were… settled, here.” “Eva says a lot of things,”
Rory retorted, her jaw clenching
. Eva. That meddling, well-intentioned friend.
She should have known Eva
wouldn’t be able to resist trying to fix things, to mend fences that Rory was quite content to leave broken. “What did she tell you, exactly?” Lucien stepped forward, his gaze
unwavering
. He moved with an unnerving stillness, as if the bustling chaos of Brick Lane simply faded into the background when he focused on her. “Only that you’d found… a certain peace. A life of quiet study. Something you clearly haven’t abandoned, despite indulging in the rather… utilitarian profession of a food courier.” Rory bristled. “It pays the bills. And it’s honest work, unlike some people I know.” The dig was low, unfair, she knew, but she couldn't stop herself. The sight of him, so
perfectly
assembled, so
utterly
himself, was a trigger for all the old insecurities, all the old resentments. He inclined his head again, acknowledging the barb with an almost polite weariness. “Honesty is a relative commodity in my world, Aurora. As you know better than most.” The words landed like stones. He was right, of course. She knew what he did, the shadowy connections, the
intricate
dance
he performed in London’s supernatural underbelly. She’d been a part of it, for a time. And it had nearly destroyed her. “I don’t ‘do that world’ anymore, Lucien,” she said flatly. “I’ve made sure of it.” “Have you?” His gaze
flickered
towards the stacks of books, the arcane symbols scrawled on loose pages. “These seem to suggest otherwise. Or are you simply indulging in… academic curiosity?” She stepped away from the door, a silent invitation for him to enter, even as every fiber of her
being protested
. She couldn't leave him standing there, a ghost from her past blocking her doorway. The flat felt smaller, darker, with his presence filling the air. Ptolemy, sensing the shift in atmosphere, let out a low growl from his usual spot. Lucien stepped inside, his expensive leather shoes making no sound on the worn floorboards. He moved with an
effortless
grace, his eyes taking in the organized chaos, a sardonic amusement playing on his lips. “Eva’s place was never this… organized. She always did surround herself with a certain kind of… intellectual clutter.”
He paused, his gaze returning to Rory
. “But this is all you, isn't it?” Rory closed the door, the sound of the final deadbolt sliding home
echoing
in the sudden
silence
. It was a symbolic gesture, she knew. She couldn't lock him out, not
really
. Not when he’d
managed to
find her, to breach the walls she’d so
carefully
erected. She leaned against it, her arms crossed, a barrier. “Why are you here, Lucien? Truly. You don’t just show up on people’s doorsteps out of the blue. Especially not people you’ve… left behind.” The last word
was spoken
with a quiet bitterness that surprised even herself. He turned from his survey of the room, his eyes locking onto hers with an
intensity
that made her
stomach
twist. The
carefully
constructed
nonchalance slipped, revealing something raw, something ancient and dangerous beneath. “Because, Aurora,” he said, his voice dropping to a low, resonant timbre that
vibrated
in the small space, “there’s a problem. A significant problem. And you are, regrettably, the only one I trust to help me solve it.” Rory swallowed, the dryness returning to her throat. His words
hung in the air
, heavy with
implication
and a shared history she'd tried so hard to forget. She
knew that look
in his eyes. It was the look that promised danger,
intrigue
, and a tangled web from which escape might prove impossible. And a small,
treacherous
part of her, the part that had always
been drawn
to his darkness, his power, was irrevocably, terrifyingly, intrigued.
created_at
"2026-02-17T02:39:26.128325+00:00"
2/17/2026, 2:39:26 AM
model
"google/gemini-2.5-flash-lite"
app_id
182717
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streamed
true
cancelled
false
latency
309
moderation_latency
(null)
generation_time
9795
tokens_prompt
808
tokens_completion
2034
native_tokens_prompt
786
native_tokens_completion
1777
native_tokens_completion_images
0
native_tokens_reasoning
0
native_tokens_cached
0
num_media_prompt
(null)
num_input_audio_prompt
(null)
num_media_completion
0
num_search_results
(null)
origin
"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byok
false
finish_reason
"stop"
native_finish_reason
"STOP"
usage
0.0007894
router
(null)
provider_responses
0
status
200
is_byok
false
latency
309
endpoint_id
"ce839073-aa24-4f29-8358-15b319bd05ec"
provider_name
"Google AI Studio"
model_permaslug
"google/gemini-2.5-flash-lite"
api_type
"completions"
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"gen-1771295955-juRQ8uxmtCLQzyaHZmKv"
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0.0007894
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0
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
18.18%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
11
adverbTagCount
2
adverbTags
0
"he gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1
"she said flatly [flatly]"
dialogueSentences
21
tagDensity
0.524
leniency
1
rawRatio
0.182
effectiveRatio
0.182
53.81%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1299
totalAiIsmAdverbs
12
found
0
adverb
"languidly"
count
1
1
adverb
"carefully"
count
5
2
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
3
adverb
"lightly"
count
1
4
adverb
"perfectly"
count
1
5
adverb
"utterly"
count
1
6
adverb
"really"
count
1
7
adverb
"truly"
count
1
highlights
0
"languidly"
1
"carefully"
2
"slightly"
3
"lightly"
4
"perfectly"
5
"utterly"
6
"really"
7
"truly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1299
totalAiIsms
28
found
0
word
"chaotic"
count
1
1
word
"glistening"
count
1
2
word
"whisper"
count
1
3
word
"constructed"
count
2
4
word
"silence"
count
2
5
word
"flicker"
count
2
6
word
"complex"
count
1
7
word
"unspoken"
count
1
8
word
"tension"
count
1
9
word
"familiar"
count
1
10
word
"glint"
count
1
11
word
"reminder"
count
1
12
word
"clenching"
count
1
13
word
"unwavering"
count
1
14
word
"intricate"
count
1
15
word
"dance"
count
1
16
word
"flickered"
count
1
17
word
"effortless"
count
1
18
word
"echoing"
count
1
19
word
"intensity"
count
1
20
word
"stomach"
count
1
21
word
"vibrated"
count
1
22
word
"implication"
count
1
23
word
"intrigue"
count
1
24
word
"treacherous"
count
1
highlights
0
"chaotic"
1
"glistening"
2
"whisper"
3
"constructed"
4
"silence"
5
"flicker"
6
"complex"
7
"unspoken"
8
"tension"
9
"familiar"
10
"glint"
11
"reminder"
12
"clenching"
13
"unwavering"
14
"intricate"
15
"dance"
16
"flickered"
17
"effortless"
18
"echoing"
19
"intensity"
20
"stomach"
21
"vibrated"
22
"implication"
23
"intrigue"
24
"treacherous"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"hung in the air"
count
1
highlights
0
"hung in the air"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
85
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
2
narrationSentences
85
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"tried to"
1
"managed to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
94
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
38
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1301
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
11
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
27
wordCount
1076
uniqueNames
9
maxNameDensity
0.93
worstName
"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity
2
worstWindowName
"Rory"
discoveredNames
Silas
1
Yu-Fei
1
Brick
2
Lane
2
Rory
10
Lucien
4
Moreau
1
Eva
5
London
1
persons
0
"Silas"
1
"Rory"
2
"Lucien"
3
"Moreau"
4
"Eva"
places
0
"Brick"
1
"Lane"
2
"London"
globalScore
1
windowScore
1
76.47%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
68
glossingSentenceCount
2
matches
0
"quite shed"
1
"quite decipher"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1301
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
94
matches
0
"knew that look"
83.03%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
26
mean
50.04
std
22.05
cv
0.441
sampleLengths
0
80
1
81
2
62
3
5
4
36
5
87
6
36
7
21
8
42
9
69
10
56
11
16
12
75
13
47
14
58
15
49
16
28
17
42
18
15
19
30
20
61
21
66
22
46
23
46
24
72
25
75
92.88%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
3
totalSentences
85
matches
0
"being protested"
1
"was spoken"
2
"been drawn"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
176
matches
(empty)
82.07%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
2
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
2
totalSentences
94
ratio
0.021
matches
0
"There was a flicker of something in those mismatched eyes – recognition, perhaps, or something more complex she couldn’t quite decipher."
1
"Hurt, accusation, misunderstanding – all the things she’d tried to bury deep."
84.29%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1080
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount
51
adverbRatio
0.04722222222222222
lyAdverbCount
26
lyAdverbRatio
0.024074074074074074
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
94
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
94
mean
13.84
std
8.08
cv
0.584
sampleLengths
0
18
1
21
2
21
3
5
4
6
5
9
6
16
7
8
8
23
9
12
10
3
11
19
12
11
13
3
14
13
15
15
16
12
17
8
18
5
19
17
20
19
21
3
22
14
23
24
24
27
25
19
26
8
27
4
28
19
29
5
30
15
31
6
32
15
33
7
34
5
35
15
36
29
37
21
38
19
39
3
40
17
41
24
42
12
43
12
44
4
45
9
46
6
47
31
48
23
49
6
51.77%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
8
diversityRatio
0.3617021276595745
totalSentences
94
uniqueOpeners
34
40.16%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
1
totalSentences
83
matches
0
"Then, the sheer, unadulterated shock"
ratio
0.012
32.05%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
39
totalSentences
83
matches
0
"She smoothed down the worn"
1
"She mentally cursed, wishing for"
2
"She hesitated, her heart thudding"
3
"She pulled the door open."
4
"Her breath hitched."
5
"He looked exactly the same,"
6
"His platinum blond hair was"
7
"His heterochromatic eyes, one amber,"
8
"she managed, the name a"
9
"It had been months."
10
"He offered a faint, almost"
11
"She hadn’t used it in"
12
"Her voice was sharper now,"
13
"he gestured vaguely at the"
14
"She remembered the way he’d"
15
"she said, her voice tight"
16
"His smile didn't falter, but"
17
"It was a mask, carefully"
18
"He gestured with his ivory-handled"
19
"She should have known Eva"
ratio
0.47
38.31%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
70
totalSentences
83
matches
0
"The insistent rapping on her"
1
"Rory paused, one hand on"
2
"Ptolemy, her tabby cat, stretched"
3
"Another knock, sharper this time."
4
"She smoothed down the worn"
5
"The flat was a disaster"
6
"Books spilled from shelves, ancient"
7
"She mentally cursed, wishing for"
8
"Eva would have."
9
"Eva always had her life"
10
"Rory reached for the deadbolts,"
11
"Eva had always been meticulous"
12
"The top bolt slid back"
13
"She hesitated, her heart thudding"
14
"She pulled the door open."
15
"The rain had stopped, leaving"
16
"Her breath hitched."
17
"He looked exactly the same,"
18
"His platinum blond hair was"
19
"His heterochromatic eyes, one amber,"
ratio
0.843
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
83
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
0.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
45
technicalSentenceCount
9
matches
0
"His platinum blond hair was still slicked back with an impossibly precise sweep, framing a face that was at once sharp and unnervingly beautiful."
1
"Months of carefully constructed silence, of deliberate avoidance, of a hollow ache that had gradually, painstakingly, begun to fade."
2
"The air between them crackled with unspoken history, with a tension that was both familiar and terrifying."
3
"She remembered the way he’d looked at her the last time, the carefully chosen words, the impossible chasm that had opened up between them."
4
"He moved with an unnerving stillness, as if the bustling chaos of Brick Lane simply faded into the background when he focused on her."
5
"She couldn't leave him standing there, a ghost from her past blocking her doorway."
6
"He moved with an effortless grace, his eyes taking in the organized chaos, a sardonic amusement playing on his lips."
7
"He turned from his survey of the room, his eyes locking onto hers with an intensity that made her stomach twist."
8
"And a small, treacherous part of her, the part that had always been drawn to his darkness, his power, was irrevocably, terrifyingly, intrigued."
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
11
uselessAdditionCount
3
matches
0
"she said, her voice tight"
1
"Rory retorted, her jaw clenching"
2
"He paused, his gaze returning to Rory"
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
4
fancyCount
1
fancyTags
0
"Rory retorted (retort)"
dialogueSentences
21
tagDensity
0.19
leniency
0.381
rawRatio
0.25
effectiveRatio
0.095
71.7675%