| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 40 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 78.23% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1378 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "truly" | | 4 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 34.69% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1378 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "etched" | | 4 | "shimmered" | | 5 | "could feel" | | 6 | "stark" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "stomach" | | 9 | "pulsed" | | 10 | "flickered" | | 11 | "unreadable" | | 12 | "lurched" | | 13 | "searing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 107 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 107 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 136 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 44 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 22 | | markdownWords | 22 | | totalWords | 1372 | | ratio | 0.016 | | matches | | 0 | "pools" | | 1 | "chooses" | | 2 | "outward" | | 3 | "glow" | | 4 | "else" | | 5 | "shift" | | 6 | "guided" | | 7 | "stop" | | 8 | "expanded" | | 9 | "gateways" | | 10 | "eyes" | | 11 | "softer" | | 12 | "yielded" | | 13 | "hell" | | 14 | "trip" | | 15 | "tasted" | | 16 | "it" | | 17 | "her" | | 18 | "waited" | | 19 | "they" | | 20 | "key" | | 21 | "spoke" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde turned her pale lavender eyes toward her, and for a moment, Rory swore she saw something ancient and hungry lurki…" |
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| 16.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 51 | | wordCount | 1143 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 1.92 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 7 | | Rory | 22 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Isolde | 17 | | Fae-forged | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.538 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "whisper that seemed to come from everywhere at once" | | 1 | "whites that seemed to glow* in the dim light" | | 2 | "as if listening to something none of them could hear" | | 3 | "looked like frost" | | 4 | "smelled like honey and something metallic" | | 5 | "looked like a mirror" |
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| 54.23% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.458 | | wordCount | 1372 | | matches | | 0 | "not upward but *outward*, stretching toward something just beyond sight" | | 1 | "not wood, but something *softer*, something" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 136 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 58 | | mean | 23.66 | | std | 22.03 | | cv | 0.931 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 80 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 66 | | 3 | 47 | | 4 | 61 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 43 | | 7 | 29 | | 8 | 87 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 50 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 61 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 34 | | 17 | 44 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 61 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 33 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 76 | | 29 | 33 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 25 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 23 | | 37 | 27 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 48 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 34 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 25 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 37 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 75.97% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 215 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn’t looking" | | 1 | "wasn’t reflecting" | | 2 | "was reflecting" | | 3 | "was burning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 136 | | ratio | 0.059 | | matches | | 0 | "The air inside the grove was thick with the scent of damp earth and something sweeter—like crushed petals left to ferment in the sun." | | 1 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in colors she didn’t have names for—deep violets that shimmered like oil on water, blues that shifted between sapphire and midnight, whites that seemed to *glow* in the dim light." | | 2 | "Rory’s fingers twitched toward the dagger at her hip—the Fae-forged blade Isolde had given her." | | 3 | "Instead, she reached out and plucked a flower from the air—one that hadn’t been there a second before." | | 4 | "She was here because the Heartstone had started burning against her skin like a brand, because the dreams had gotten worse—dreams of fire and feasting and a voice that whispered her name in a language she didn’t know." | | 5 | "And then—" | | 6 | "They were *gateways*, their bark peeling back to reveal glimpses of other places—a city of black spires wreathed in smoke, a desert of glass where the sand shimmered like broken mirrors, a forest of bones where the wind howled like a living thing." | | 7 | "Her fingers sank into the bark—not wood, but something *softer*, something that *yielded*." |
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| 84.23% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1153 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "deep, blood-red bloom," |
| | adverbCount | 59 | | adverbRatio | 0.05117085862966175 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008673026886383347 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 136 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 136 | | mean | 10.09 | | std | 7.76 | | cv | 0.769 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 23 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 34 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 27 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 43.38% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.27941176470588236 | | totalSentences | 136 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 32.68% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she reached out and" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 86.67% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "She turned back, but the" | | 1 | "she said, exhaling sharply" | | 2 | "they murmured, their voice a" | | 3 | "It was warmer than it" | | 4 | "She didn’t like it." | | 5 | "she said, her voice like" | | 6 | "It wasn’t the absence of" | | 7 | "It was the presence of" | | 8 | "She could feel it in" | | 9 | "she said, more to herself" | | 10 | "She wanted to get in," | | 11 | "It was a deep, blood-red" | | 12 | "She held it out to" | | 13 | "Her stomach twisted." | | 14 | "She was here for answers." | | 15 | "She was here because the" | | 16 | "She was here because Isolde" | | 17 | "She took the flower." | | 18 | "Her vision swam." | | 19 | "They were *gateways*, their bark" |
| | ratio | 0.333 | |
| 9.02% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 92 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "The air inside the grove" | | 1 | "Rory stepped through the standing" | | 2 | "The moment she crossed the" | | 3 | "She turned back, but the" | | 4 | "she said, exhaling sharply" | | 5 | "Nyx drifted beside her, their" | | 6 | "The violet glow of their" | | 7 | "they murmured, their voice a" | | 8 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 9 | "It was warmer than it" | | 10 | "She didn’t like it." | | 11 | "The half-Fae woman didn’t walk" | | 12 | "she said, her voice like" | | 13 | "Isolde turned her pale lavender" | | 14 | "Nyx let out a sound" | | 15 | "Rory ignored them, stepping forward." | | 16 | "The grove was a tangle" | | 17 | "The trees were too tall," | | 18 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 19 | "It wasn’t the absence of" |
| | ratio | 0.902 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 6.08% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The trees were too tall, their branches twisting into impossible shapes, as if they’d grown not upward but *outward*, stretching toward something just beyond si…" | | 1 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in colors she didn’t have names for—deep violets that shimmered like oil on water, blues that shifted between sapphire and midni…" | | 2 | "It was the presence of something *else*, something that hummed just below hearing, vibrating in her bones." | | 3 | "Isolde tilted her head, as if listening to something none of them could hear." | | 4 | "It was a deep, blood-red bloom, its petals edged with something that looked like frost." | | 5 | "She was here because the Heartstone had started burning against her skin like a brand, because the dreams had gotten worse—dreams of fire and feasting and a voi…" | | 6 | "The petals dissolved on her tongue like sugar, sweet and cloying, but beneath that was a bitter aftertaste, like crushed herbs and something older, something th…" | | 7 | "Her fingers sank into the bark—not wood, but something *softer*, something that *yielded*." | | 8 | "It was burning now, searing through her shirt, branding her skin." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, more to herself than the others" | | 1 | "she demanded, her voice rough" | | 2 | "Isolde said, as if that explained anything" | | 3 | "Isolde said, her fingers brushing the scar on Rory’s wrist" |
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| 50.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "Isolde agreed (agree)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 40 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0.4 | | effectiveRatio | 0.2 | |