Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQEV0WFSG66M757WJY30SB

Run Details

Duration:
1m 59s
Cost:
$0.018905
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The scent of cumin and cardamom seeped through the floorboards, a permanent perfume that clung to the curtains and the stacks of paper covering every surface. Rory sat cross-legged on the worn velvet sofa, a scroll unfurled across her knees, but she hadn't read a word in twenty minutes. The rain lashed against the single pane of glass overlooking Brick Lane, blurring the neon signs of the curry house below into smeared ribbons of red and green. She heard the knock before she saw the shadow beneath the door. It wasn't the急促 rap of a delivery driver or the heavy pound of a landlord. It was precise. Three distinct taps, spaced with metronomic patience. Rory's hand went instinctively to her left wrist, thumb rubbing over the small crescent-shaped scar there. She wasn't expecting anyone. Eva was out hunting leads in Southwark, and Ptolemy, the tabby cat, was asleep on the radiator. She stood, smoothing her jeans, and approached the door. Her fingers worked the three deadbolts, the metal cold and heavy in her palm. One, two, three. The mechanical clunks sounded like gunshots in the cramped flat. She opened the door a crack, chain still engaged. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing. He looked like he had been carved out of the London night itself. Rain dampened the shoulders of his charcoal suit, but the fabric didn't wrinkle; it simply drank the moisture and refused to show the strain. His platinum blond hair was slicked back, not a strand out of place despite the weather. But it was his eyes that hit her, as they always did. The left one amber, glowing faintly in the dim hallway light, the right one black as a void. Heterochromatic. Unsettling. Beautiful. He held an ivory-handled cane in his gloved hand, the tip resting quietly on the scuffed linoleum. "Rory," he said. His voice was low, a velvet baritone that carried the faintest trace of Marseille beneath the London polish. "Lucien." She didn't open the chain. "You shouldn't be here." "And yet, here I am." He didn't move to leave. He didn't move at all. He just watched her, those mismatched eyes cataloging every detail of her face. "May I come in?" "No." "We need to talk." "We talked. In Paris. Remember? You said there was nothing left to say." The air between them tightened. The smell of the curry house below seemed to intensify, mixing with the scent of rain and the expensive sandalwood cologne he wore. It was a scent that triggered a visceral ache in her chest, a memory of hotel rooms and whispered secrets and the way he had walked away without looking back. "Paris was a mistake," Lucien said softly. "I was protecting you." "By disappearing?" Rory's voice cracked. She hated that it cracked. She prided herself on being cool-headed, on being the one who could think her way out of a burning building. But Lucien made her feel like she was standing in the flames. "You don't get to decide what protects me, Lucien. Not after Evan. Not after everything." "I know." He shifted his weight, the cane tapping once against the floor. Ptolemy woke up on the radiator, stretching before hopping down to wind himself around Lucien's legs. The cat, usually wary of strangers, purred against the tailored trousers. "But things are moving, Rory. The Avaros realm is bleeding into the city. You're in danger." "I'm always in danger." She unlatched the chain. She shouldn't have. Every instinct screamed at her to keep the door closed, to keep the wall up. But she couldn't resist the pull of him, the gravity that had drawn them together across continents and species. She swung the door open. Lucien stepped inside. The flat was too small for his presence. He filled the space, the shadows seeming to lengthen around him. He closed the door behind him and engaged the first deadbolt, then the second. He left the third open. A promise, or a threat. "You look tired," he said, looking at the stacks of books and research notes covering the table. "I work for a living. Some of us don't have family trusts and underground information networks to fall back on." "I never used my father's money." "Right. You earned every penny brokering deals for things that shouldn't exist." Rory walked past him to the small kitchenette, needing something to do with her hands. She put the kettle on. "Why now? Why come back?" "Because you stopped answering my calls." "Because you stopped calling." She turned to face him. He was closer than she expected. She had to tilt her head back slightly to meet his gaze. He was five-eleven, tall enough to loom, but he stood with a relaxed elegance that neutralized the threat. Lucien reached out, his gloved hand hovering near her arm. He stopped just short of touching her, respecting the boundary she hadn't verbally set but had physically enforced since the moment he arrived. "I had to sever the connection. The entities hunting you... they track through association. If they knew I cared for you, you would be dead." "You think I care about being dead?" The words slipped out before she could check them. Lucien's expression shifted, the mask of the impeccably dressed fixer slipping to reveal the man beneath. Pain flickered in the amber eye. "I care. Profoundly." The kettle began to whistle, a shrill scream that shattered the moment. Rory turned away to shut it off, her heart hammering against her ribs. She poured the water over two tea bags, the steam rising between them like a veil. "You left me in a safe house in Lyon," she said, her back to him. "You didn't even say goodbye." "I watched you for three weeks from the street corner. Until I knew you were safe." She turned around, mug in hand. "You watched me?" "I always watch you, Rory." He took the mug she offered. Their fingers brushed. His skin was warm, hotter than a human's should be. The half-demon heat radiated through the thin ceramic. "I am always watching." She took a sip of tea to hide the tremor in her hands. The crescent scar on her wrist throbbed, a phantom pain from a childhood accident that felt insignificant compared to the wound he had left. "So what happens now? You drop information and vanish again?" Lucien set the mug down on a stack of scrolls without looking. He stepped into her space, forcing her to look up at him. The air grew heavy, charged with the static of unsaid things. He reached out again, this time removing his glove. His bare hand cupped her jaw, his thumb tracing the line of her cheekbone. His skin was smooth, hot, real. "I am not vanishing this time," he said. "Not unless you tell me to leave." Rory looked at him. She saw the exhaustion hidden beneath the tailored suit, the tension in his jaw. She saw the ally who had saved her life more times than she could count, and the man who had broken her heart to keep it beating. "The third deadbolt," she said quietly. Lucien glanced at the door. "Yes?" "Lock it." He didn't smile, not exactly. But the tension in his shoulders dropped, the amber eye brightening. He moved past her to the door, engaging the final lock with a solid clunk. When he turned back, the distance between them was gone. He didn't kiss her, not yet. He just rested his forehead against hers, breathing her in, the scent of rain and tea and home mingling between them. "Okay," he whispered. "Okay," she replied. Outside, the rain continued to fall on Brick Lane, washing the streets clean, but inside the cramped flat, the storm had finally broken.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
50.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Lucien said softly [softly]"
1"she said quietly [quietly]"
84.6626% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1304
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
61.6564% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1304
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"throbbed"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"velvet"
count2
3
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"throbbed"
1"flickered"
2"velvet"
3"weight"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences97
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences97
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences119
matches
0"hated that it"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean29.5
std22.5
cv0.763
sampleLengths
077
137
237
345
46
586
617
721
810
932
101
114
1213
1358
1411
1557
1656
1750
1846
1917
2020
216
2237
236
2445
2558
2616
2725
2841
2920
3016
319
3236
3347
3464
3515
3645
376
386
392
4068
413
423
4323
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences97
matches
0"been carved"
1"was slicked"
2"was gone"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs198
matches
0"wasn't expecting"
1"was standing"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1060
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.027358490566037737
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.013207547169811321
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences119
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences119
mean10.91
std6.97
cv0.639
sampleLengths
026
123
228
312
415
53
67
716
84
917
109
1114
123
1310
149
156
1613
1724
1816
1912
2018
211
221
231
2417
253
2618
276
284
2910
305
3113
324
331
344
3513
365
3723
3830
397
404
415
425
4320
4412
4515
4613
4716
4811
4916
42.8571% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.3277310924369748
totalSentences119
uniqueOpeners39
50.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Lucien said softly (say softly)"
1"he said, looking at the stacks of books and research notes covering the table (say, look cover)"
2"she said quietly (say quietly)"
3"he whispered (whisper)"
87.5986%