Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQEVJBE9J1T3K0P7WDWSDN

Run Details

Duration:
24.8s
Cost:
$0.011162
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain had turned Brick Lane into a slick, shimmering ribbon under the amber glow of streetlamps. Rory stood on the doorstep of Eva’s flat, her black jacket soaked at the shoulders, hair clinging to her neck in damp strands. She hadn’t planned to come here—not tonight, not ever, really—but the storm had chased her off her bike, and her flat above Silas’ bar felt too empty, too loud with memories she couldn’t escape. She raised a hand, hesitated, then knocked—three sharp raps that echoed through the thin walls. From inside came the soft padding of footsteps, then the metallic slide of deadbolts being drawn back. The door opened a crack, then wider. Lucien Moreau stood in the doorway. For a heartbeat, the world stopped. He wore one of his tailored charcoal suits, the jacket left open over a crisp white shirt, the top two buttons undone. His platinum-blond hair was slicked back as always, but there was a looseness in his posture, a rare absence of calculated precision. The amber eye—warm like aged cognac—widened slightly. The other, black as obsidian, remained still, unblinking. “Rory,” he said, the name slipping from his lips as if it had been waiting there for years. “Aurora,” she corrected instinctively, though they both knew she hadn’t answered to that in over a decade. A ghost of a smile touched his lips. “You remember.” “I remember a lot of things.” Silence stretched between them, thick with the weight of unsaid words. The air smelled of old paper, turmeric, and the faint, lingering trace of sandalwood—Eva’s incense. From the back of the flat, Ptolemy, the tabby, leapt onto a shelf, tail flicking curiously. Lucien took a step back. “Come in. You’re drenched.” Rory hesitated. She hadn’t expected *him* to be here. Eva never mentioned visitors, especially not *him*. But the cold rain bit at her skin, and the warmth of the flat beckoned. She stepped inside, leaving wet footprints on the worn wooden floor. He shut the door, reengaging the deadbolts with quiet finality. “Eva stepped out for milk. She’ll be back soon.” “I didn’t know you two were… close,” Rory said, peeling off her jacket and draping it over a chair buried beneath a stack of occult journals. “We have mutual interests,” Lucien said, watching her. “And mutual concern for certain reckless women who vanish without warning.” Rory stiffened. “I left a note.” “For Eva. Not for me.” Her breath caught. That was the first direct admission of hurt, raw and unvarnished. She turned to face him fully. “We weren’t—I mean, we never—” “We *were*,” he said softly. “We just never let ourselves be.” The truth of it settled between them like dust after an explosion. Two years ago, they’d orbited each other in the hazy underworld of London’s supernatural trade—Rory, delivering packages she wasn’t supposed to open; Lucien, brokering deals in backrooms that didn’t exist on any map. Their paths crossed too often, their banter too sharp, their glances too long. Then, one winter night, after a botched exchange at the old gasworks, they’d found themselves alone in the rain, backs against a rusted train car, breathing in tandem. And then—his hand brushing hers. A moment of silence. A kiss that tasted like whiskey and something darker, older. It should have been the beginning. Instead, Rory ran. She left London the next morning. Returned only after Eva tracked her down, months later, with a suitcase and a plea. Even then, she avoided Lucien’s name like a curse. Now, here he was. “You look well,” he said, breaking the silence. “For someone who treats rain like a personal challenge.” She managed a dry laugh. “Delivery work. It pays for rent.” “And living above a demon’s bar?” “Silas keeps the rent cheap. Says I ‘amuse his patrons.’” Lucien’s heterochromatic gaze flickered over her—the blue of her eyes, the way her damp hair clung to her cheek, the small crescent scar on her left wrist, just visible beneath her sleeve. He remembered that scar. She’d shown it to him once, late one night in a borrowed silence, after he’d asked about her past. She’d said it was from falling out of a tree at eight. He knew then there was more to it. He hadn’t pressed. He took a step closer. “Why are you here, Rory?” She met his stare. “Because I didn’t know where else to go.” Something shifted in his expression—something softer, more human than the polished broker the city feared. “You could have come to me.” “I was scared.” “Of me?” “No.” She swallowed. “Of what I’d feel.” The admission hung in the air, fragile. Lucien exhaled, running a hand over his face. “God, you’re infuriating. Do you know how many times I almost came looking for you? How many times I told myself I would, and then didn’t?” “You didn’t,” she whispered. “No. Because I told myself you didn’t want me to. That you’d made your choice.” “And now?” He looked at her—*really* looked. Not the armor, not the delivery girl persona, not the sharp wit she wielded like a blade. He saw the woman beneath: tired, stubborn, beautiful in the way that only the truly resilient are. “Now,” he said, voice low, “you’re standing in Eva’s flat, soaked to the bone, and you just admitted you were afraid of *feeling*. So either your definition of bravery has changed, or you’re hoping I’ll say something worth coming back for.” Rory’s breath hitched. “Maybe I just missed your stupid suits.” “Ah, so it’s the *suit* she’s after.” He stepped closer, close enough that she could smell the faint spice of his cologne, the warmth of him cutting through the chill of her wet clothes. “Let me make something very clear, Aurora Carter. I have spent two years pretending I didn’t love you. Don’t think for a second that I’ll pretend again just because it’s easier.” Her heart pounded. “You—you never said—” “Because you left.” He reached out, his fingers brushing the edge of her scar. “And I know what it’s like to run from love. My mother did it. My father *forced* her to. I promised myself I wouldn’t make you choose between safety and desire. But if you’re here now… if you’re *willing* to be here… then I won’t let you slip away again.” Tears stung her eyes. “I was afraid,” she whispered. “Afraid of how much I wanted you. Afraid of becoming someone’s victim again. Evan taught me that closeness is danger.” Lucien’s jaw tightened, his demon blood no doubt stirring at the mention of her abuser. But his voice remained steady. “I am not Evan. And I will never ask you to shrink. If anything, I’ll demand you take up more space.” A laugh escaped her, wet and breathless. He cupped her face, his thumb tracing the curve of her cheekbone. “Say it, Rory. Say you’re here for *me*. Not shelter. Not memory. Not regret. For *me*.” She looked into his dual-colored eyes—amber and black, human and demon, fire and shadow—and found no pretense. Only truth. “I’m here for you,” she said, voice steady now. “I’m sorry it took me so long to find my way back.” He didn’t kiss her. Not yet. Instead, he pulled her into his arms, holding her as the rain drummed against the windows and Ptolemy curled on the sofa, purring into his paws. And for the first time in years, Rory felt something she’d forgotten existed. She felt home.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
66.6667% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she corrected instinctively, though they both knew she hadn’t answered to that in over a decade [instinctively]"
1"he said softly [softly]"
52.3052% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1258
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count2
3
adverb"truly"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
2"really"
3"truly"
4"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.2544% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1258
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"calculated"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"calculated"
2"weight"
3"footsteps"
4"echoed"
66.6667% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of unsaid words"
1"hung in the air"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences82
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences82
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences112
matches
0"remembered that scar"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean21.45
std20.87
cv0.973
sampleLengths
074
132
27
36
46
559
618
717
810
96
1042
119
1242
1319
1426
1519
166
175
1814
1911
2011
2112
2293
236
243
2530
264
2717
2811
296
3010
3178
3210
3312
3421
353
362
377
387
3934
404
4115
422
4339
4441
4510
4665
476
4864
4929
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences82
matches
0"being drawn"
1"was slicked"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs145
matches(empty)
94.7238% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount869
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.04602991944764097
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.01380897583429229
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences112
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences112
mean11.11
std9.12
cv0.821
sampleLengths
017
123
234
315
417
57
66
76
822
922
107
118
1218
1317
148
152
166
1711
1815
1916
205
214
222
237
247
2515
2611
2710
289
2926
308
3111
322
334
345
353
3611
376
385
395
406
4112
4233
4313
4428
455
464
4710
486
493
57.4405% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.39285714285714285
totalSentences112
uniqueOpeners44
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount10
fancyTags
0"he said, the name slipping from his lips as if it had been waiting there for years (say, slip wait)"
1"she corrected instinctively, though they both knew she hadn’t answered to that in over a decade (correct instinctively, know does not answer)"
2"Rory said, peeling off her jacket and draping it over a chair buried beneath a stack of occult journals (say, peel off draping over bury)"
3"Lucien said, watching her (say, watch)"
4"he said softly (say softly)"
5"he said, breaking the silence (say, break)"
6"she whispered (whisper)"
7"he said, voice low (say, voice)"
8"she whispered (whisper)"
9"she said, voice steady now (say, voice)"
82.2387%