Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQEWBN62YDD9K9YYE8PXP7

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Duration:
27.6s
Cost:
$0.005273
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air down here tasted of rust, wet concrete, and something older, something that clung to the back of the throat like copper blood. Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted the strap of her tactical vest, the movement sharp and economical, a relic of military precision that never quite left her bones even after eighteen years on the Met. Above them, the distant rumble of the Northern Line vibrated through the soles of her boots, a stark contrast to the unnatural silence of the abandoned platform beneath Camden. This was no ordinary crime scene. The uniforms at the entrance had been pale, their hands shaking as they pointed toward the tunnel mouth, mumbling about lights that shouldn't exist and shadows that moved against the wind. Quinn stepped over the yellow tape, her brown eyes scanning the gloom. Her salt-and-pepper hair, cropped close to her skull, caught the harsh glare of the portable floodlights set up by forensics. She checked the time on her worn leather watch, the face scarred from years of use. 02:14. Three years ago, at roughly this hour, she had lost DS Morris in a warehouse fire that burned blue and cold, leaving no ash, only a hollow silence that still echoed in her dreams. She pushed the memory down, locking it behind the mental steel door she kept for things that didn't fit the report. "Detective." The voice belonged to Sergeant Miller, a man whose interpretation of evidence usually involved the path of least resistance. He stood near the center of the platform, clipboard in hand, looking eager to wrap this up before the morning shift arrived. "We've got a John Doe. Male, mid-thirties. No ID. Cause of death appears to be cardiac arrest, though the ME is baffled by the thermal readings." Quinn approached the body lying on the grimy tiles. The man was dressed in expensive, tailored clothes that looked entirely out of place in the squalor of a disused Tube station. There was no blood, no struggle, no sign of trauma. Just a man slumped against a peeling advertisement for a band that hadn't toured in a decade, his face frozen in an expression of mild surprise. "Cardiac arrest doesn't explain the scorch marks on the walls, Miller," Quinn said, her voice low and flat. She crouched beside the body, ignoring the damp chill seeping through her trousers. She leaned in, examining the man's palms. They were blackened, not with soot, but with a residue that seemed to absorb the light from her torch rather than reflect it. "And it doesn't explain why his pockets are lined with lead foil." Miller shifted his weight, uncomfortable. "Occultists, Detective. You know how they get in this part of town. Maybe he tried a party trick and his heart gave out. The scorch marks are probably from a flare or some chemical reaction gone wrong. We find weird stuff down here all the time since that market rumor started circulating." Quinn stood up, her sharp jawline tight. "Rumors don't leave residuals that register as negative temperature on a thermal cam, Sergeant. And they don't make seasoned forensics techs refuse to touch the evidence bags without triple-layered gloves." She walked away from the body, pacing the perimeter of the immediate area. Her boots clicked against the tiles, the sound too loud in the stillness. Something was wrong. The geometry of the scene felt off. The shadows cast by the floodlights seemed to stretch too far, pooling in the corners of the tunnel mouth with a density that defied the angle of the light. She stopped near a pile of rubble where the tunnel curved into darkness. The air here was colder, biting through her jacket. She could feel a pressure in her sinuses, a headache blooming behind her eyes that felt suspiciously like static electricity. "It doesn't add up," she murmured, more to herself than to Miller. "If this was a drug deal gone wrong or a ritual suicide, where's the paraphernalia? Where are the candles, the chalk, the drugs? There's nothing. Just a man in a suit and a hole in reality that everyone else is pretending isn't there." Miller sighed, the sound echoing slightly too long. "Look, Harlow, I know what you're thinking. I know about Morris. But chasing ghosts isn't going to solve a homicide. We process the body, we run the prints, we close the file. Let's not make this into something it isn't." Quinn spun on him, her gaze piercing. "Morris didn't chase ghosts, Miller. He chased facts that people like you refused to see until it was too late." She turned back to the tunnel, her instincts screaming. The silence wasn't empty; it was holding its breath. She reached into her inner pocket and pulled out a small object wrapped in a handkerchief. It was a Veil Compass, a tool she had acquired three months ago from a terrified informant who claimed it was the only thing that kept him sane. The casing was small brass, covered in a thick patina of verdigris that stained her fingers green. The face was etched with protective sigils that seemed to shift if she stared at them too long. "What is that?" Miller asked, stepping closer, his skepticism warring with unease. "Insurance," Quinn said. She held the compass flat in her palm. Normally, the needle spun lazily, twitching toward magnetic north. Today, it was rigid. The needle, thin and silver, pointed not north, but directly into the dark mouth of the tunnel, vibrating with a frantic energy that made the brass casing hum against her skin. "The needle points to rifts," Quinn said, her voice steady despite the chill running down her spine. "Portals. Doors that shouldn't be open." "That's a toy, Harlow," Miller scoffed, though he took a half-step back. "A novelty shop junk." "is it?" Quinn challenged. She walked toward the tunnel entrance, following the pull of the needle. The vibration increased, traveling up her arm. As she crossed an invisible threshold, the air pressure dropped sharply. The floodlights behind her seemed to dim, their beams unable to penetrate the darkness ahead. But there, faintly, glowing with a sickly violet hue, was a distortion in the air. It looked like heat haze, but cold. Through the shimmer, she could see glimpses of something else—a stall draped in silks, a figure with too many eyes, the glint of glass vials containing swirling smoke. "The Veil Market," she whispered. The name felt heavy on her tongue, tasted of ozone and old dust. The codex of her own investigations, the files she kept locked in her safe at home, pointed to this. A black market that moved every full moon, selling things that had no business existing in London. "The victim wasn't having a heart attack," Quinn said, turning back to Miller, her eyes hard. "He was interrupted. Someone or something pushed him back through before the transition was complete. The thermal shock killed him instantly. That's why there's no struggle. He didn't have time to fight." Miller stared at the shimmering distortion, his face draining of color. The skepticism evaporated, replaced by a primal fear. "That's... that's impossible." "It's evidence, Sergeant," Quinn corrected, snapping the compass shut and pocketing it. The hum ceased, but the pressure remained. "And it changes the nature of this investigation. This isn't just a homicide anymore. It's a breach." She looked at the body again, really looked at it. The lead foil in the pockets wasn't for protection against radiation; it was to contain something he had stolen, or perhaps to hide something he was carrying from the market's denizens. The lack of other items meant the killer had taken them, or the market itself had reclaimed them. "We need to seal this tunnel," Quinn ordered, her bearing rigid, taking command of the situation with the authority of someone who had seen the edges of the world crumble before. "No one in, no one out. I want a full spectral sweep, and get me the archives from the British Museum restricted section. Specifically, anything on occult trafficking in Camden." "Who do I call for that?" Miller stammered, his hands trembling as he fumbled with his radio. "I'll make the call," Quinn said. She thought of Eva Kowalski, the only person she knew who might make sense of the sigils on the compass and the nature of the rift. Eva, with her round glasses and satchel full of forbidden books, working in the shadows of the museum while Quinn worked the streets. They were two sides of the same coin, one studying the myth, the other hunting the reality. Quinn stepped back toward the body, her mind racing. The pieces were falling into place, forming a picture that was terrifyingly clear. The supernatural wasn't a story to scare children; it was a jurisdiction she had just entered, and the rules here were written in blood and shadow. She crouched once more by the dead man, noting a small, intricate symbol burned into the lapel of his jacket—a merchant's mark from the Veil. "You made a bad deal," she told the corpse softly. "But I'm going to find out who sold you out." She stood up, the gravel crunching under her boots sounding like gunshots in the quiet tunnel. The mystery had deepened, twisting into something dark and ancient, but for the first time in three years, Harlow Quinn felt a spark of something other than grief. She felt purpose. The veil had been lifted, just a crack, and she intended to tear it wide open.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
56.4103% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"she murmured, more to herself than to Miller [more]"
1"Quinn said, turning back to Miller, her eyes hard [back hard]"
2"she told the corpse softly [softly]"
68.7500% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1600
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
4
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
1"sharply"
2"slightly"
3"softly"
4"really"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
43.7500% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1600
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"glint"
count1
1
word"spectral"
count1
2
word"intricate"
count1
3
word"magnetic"
count1
4
word"stark"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"echoing"
count1
8
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"glint"
1"spectral"
2"intricate"
3"magnetic"
4"stark"
5"weight"
6"echoed"
7"echoing"
8"etched"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences83
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences83
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tended to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences96
matches
0"is that?\" Miller"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean54.93
std28.31
cv0.515
sampleLengths
0123
1104
21
367
467
573
657
763
881
955
1048
1145
1279
1312
1455
1523
1616
1799
1854
1948
2022
2136
2259
2361
2417
2572
2673
2720
2863
93.1727% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences83
matches
0"was dressed"
1"were blackened"
2"was etched"
3"were written"
4"been lifted"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs198
matches
0"was holding"
1"was carrying"
2"were falling"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1208
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.03145695364238411
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.014072847682119206
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean16.59
std10.44
cv0.629
sampleLengths
024
133
229
36
431
512
620
716
81
934
1021
111
1219
1322
1426
159
1622
1710
1826
1918
2013
217
2223
2312
245
2552
267
2743
2813
293
307
3129
3213
339
3420
3512
3643
378
3840
397
4029
419
4216
4328
4417
4518
4612
473
488
499
60.0000% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.4105263157894737
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners39
21.1538% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"she murmured, more to herself than to Miller (murmur)"
1"Quinn said, her voice steady despite the chill running down her spine (say, run down)"
2"Miller scoffed, though he took a half-step back (scoff, take)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
4"Quinn said, turning back to Miller, her eyes hard (say, turn eye hard)"
5"Quinn corrected, snapping the compass shut and pocketing it (correct, snap shut pocket)"
6"Quinn ordered, her bearing rigid, taking command of the situation with the authority of someone who had seen the edges of the world crumble before (order, bear see crumble)"
7"stammered (stammer)"
84.8963%