| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.571 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1341 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 21.70% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1341 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "electric" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "rhythmic" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "sturdy" | | 8 | "standard" | | 9 | "searing" | | 10 | "stomach" | | 11 | "perfect" | | 12 | "crystal" | | 13 | "could feel" | | 14 | "chill" | | 15 | "flicker" | | 16 | "oppressive" | | 17 | "depths" | | 18 | "silence" | | 19 | "facade" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 85.71% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 43 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1336 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.32% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 58 | | wordCount | 1092 | | uniqueNames | 21 | | maxNameDensity | 1.37 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 15 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 1 | | Nyx | 5 | | Shade | 2 | | London | 3 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Isolde | 9 | | Varga | 1 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Dymas | 2 | | Cardiff | 3 | | Belphegor | 1 | | Fae | 4 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Dymasian | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Shade" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Varga" | | 5 | "Half-Fae" | | 6 | "Belphegor" | | 7 | "Fae" | | 8 | "Dymasian" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Hel" | | 4 | "Grove" | | 5 | "Cardiff" | | 6 | "Blade" |
| | globalScore | 0.813 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like walking on a living mattress" | | 1 | "copper that seemed to breathe, their petals curling and uncurling in a rhythm that matched Rory’s own heartbeat" | | 2 | "It was as if the world refused to acknowledge she was there at all" | | 3 | "looked like a statue carved from moonligh" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1336 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 47.71 | | std | 24.36 | | cv | 0.511 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 69 | | 1 | 44 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 105 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 71 | | 6 | 55 | | 7 | 38 | | 8 | 67 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 51 | | 11 | 32 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 82 | | 14 | 52 | | 15 | 78 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 56 | | 18 | 70 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 37 | | 21 | 28 | | 22 | 60 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 55 | | 26 | 73 | | 27 | 65 |
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| 95.91% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "was forged" | | 1 | "was replaced" |
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| 82.35% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 170 | | matches | | 0 | "was beginning" | | 1 | "was currently pulsing" | | 2 | "was glowing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 85 | | ratio | 0.106 | | matches | | 0 | "The air inside the grove didn't just smell of damp earth and rotting leaves; it tasted of crushed mint and ozone, a sharp, electric tang that coated Rory’s tongue." | | 1 | "These were vast, bell-shaped blooms in colors that shouldn’t exist—shades of ultraviolet and iridescent copper that seemed to breathe, their petals curling and uncurling in a rhythm that matched Rory’s own heartbeat." | | 2 | "Rory watched Isolde’s feet; as the codex of her mind reminded her, the woman left no footprints." | | 3 | "Trees didn't grow straight; they spiraled like corkscrews, their bark smooth and white as polished bone." | | 4 | "Rory felt a sudden, hollow ache in her stomach—a phantom hunger that made her mouth water." | | 5 | "Around it, the ground fell away into a spiraling staircase of floating stone platforms, each one covered in a different biome—one held a miniature forest of crystal ferns, another was a riot of golden wheat that swayed despite the lack of wind." | | 6 | "It was a cold that didn't just bite the skin—it seemed to quiet the soul." | | 7 | "Nyx drifted closer, their violet eyes fixed on the blade with something approaching reverence—or fear." | | 8 | "She wasn't just a delivery girl from Cardiff anymore; she was a witness to the breaking of the world." |
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| 82.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 878 | | adjectiveStacks | 3 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "stubborn, wind-whipped blossoms" | | 1 | "vast, bell-shaped blooms" | | 2 | "slender, leaf-shaped dagger." |
| | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.02847380410022779 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.002277904328018223 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 85 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 85 | | mean | 15.72 | | std | 8.38 | | cv | 0.533 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 29 | | 1 | 40 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 32 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 29 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 30 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 42 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 51.37% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.36470588235294116 | | totalSentences | 85 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 90.42% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped over the threshold" | | 1 | "She was too busy staring" | | 2 | "They weren’t the stubborn, wind-whipped" | | 3 | "She reached down, her fingers" | | 4 | "It wasn’t the frantic heat" | | 5 | "It was as if the" | | 6 | "Her thumb brushed against the" | | 7 | "They pushed deeper into the" | | 8 | "She reached out and parted" | | 9 | "It was an indulgence of" | | 10 | "She reached into the folds" | | 11 | "It was a cold that" | | 12 | "It was a name from" | | 13 | "She stepped gingerly onto the" | | 14 | "It held firm, though the" | | 15 | "She reached out and took" | | 16 | "She thought of her flat" | | 17 | "She thought of the way" | | 18 | "She gripped the dagger tighter." | | 19 | "she said, her voice regaining" |
| | ratio | 0.324 | |
| 23.38% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 62 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "The air inside the grove" | | 1 | "She stepped over the threshold" | | 2 | "The Shade didn’t walk so" | | 3 | "Nyx’s violet eyes pulsed with" | | 4 | "Nyx whispered, the sound like" | | 5 | "Rory didn't answer." | | 6 | "She was too busy staring" | | 7 | "They weren’t the stubborn, wind-whipped" | | 8 | "These were vast, bell-shaped blooms" | | 9 | "She reached down, her fingers" | | 10 | "The Heartstone Pendant, the thumbnail-sized" | | 11 | "It wasn’t the frantic heat" | | 12 | "a voice drifted from the" | | 13 | "Isolde Varga moved through the" | | 14 | "The Half-Fae’s silver hair trailed" | | 15 | "Rory watched Isolde’s feet; as" | | 16 | "It was as if the" | | 17 | "Isolde continued, her pale lavender" | | 18 | "Rory muttered, tucking her hands" | | 19 | "Her thumb brushed against the" |
| | ratio | 0.873 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 23.81% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The air inside the grove didn't just smell of damp earth and rotting leaves; it tasted of crushed mint and ozone, a sharp, electric tang that coated Rory’s tong…" | | 1 | "These were vast, bell-shaped blooms in colors that shouldn’t exist—shades of ultraviolet and iridescent copper that seemed to breathe, their petals curling and …" | | 2 | "Her thumb brushed against the small crescent scar on her left wrist, a nervous habit that grounded her when the world stopped making sense." | | 3 | "Rory felt a sudden, hollow ache in her stomach—a phantom hunger that made her mouth water." | | 4 | "Nyx shifted, their form becoming more translucent, almost drifting into the shadows cast by the bone-white trees." | | 5 | "Around it, the ground fell away into a spiraling staircase of floating stone platforms, each one covered in a different biome—one held a miniature forest of cry…" | | 6 | "It was an indulgence of the senses, a sensory overload that whispered of feasts and bottomless wine." | | 7 | "The dagger hummed in her hand, a low, vibrating note that neutralized the oppressive heat of the Dymasian amber sky." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx whispered, the sound like dry leaves skittering across a tombstone" | | 1 | "Rory asked, her voice sounding thin in the heavy air" | | 2 | "Isolde said, turning to face them" | | 3 | "Rory whispered, her breath hitching" | | 4 | "she said, her voice regaining its Cardiff steel" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Isolde continued (continue)" | | 2 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 3 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0.444 | | effectiveRatio | 0.381 | |