| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde turned back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 43 | | tagDensity | 0.372 | | leniency | 0.744 | | rawRatio | 0.063 | | effectiveRatio | 0.047 | |
| 80.91% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1833 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "utterly" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "truly" | | 4 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 45.44% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1833 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "traced" | | 1 | "determined" | | 2 | "comforting" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "remarkable" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "chill" | | 8 | "shimmered" | | 9 | "sense of" | | 10 | "uncanny" | | 11 | "depths" | | 12 | "dancing" | | 13 | "whisper" | | 14 | "weight" | | 15 | "could feel" | | 16 | "echoed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | matches | | |
| 94.70% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 114 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 50 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1815 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 61 | | wordCount | 1236 | | uniqueNames | 17 | | maxNameDensity | 1.46 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 4 | | Park | 4 | | London | 2 | | Sunday | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Rory | 18 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | October | 2 | | Welsh | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Nyx | 7 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Varga | 1 | | Isolde | 13 | | Showing | 1 | | Fae | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Silas" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Varga" | | 4 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Hel" | | 4 | "Cardiff" | | 5 | "Fae-forged" | | 6 | "Fae" |
| | globalScore | 0.772 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 85.90% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 78 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "grace that seemed to bend the laws of physics" | | 1 | "something like pity crossed her features" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1815 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "believing that her" | | 1 | "clearing that waited" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 48 | | mean | 37.81 | | std | 24.92 | | cv | 0.659 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 87 | | 1 | 50 | | 2 | 74 | | 3 | 41 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 84 | | 6 | 83 | | 7 | 40 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 55 | | 10 | 49 | | 11 | 43 | | 12 | 63 | | 13 | 48 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 67 | | 20 | 56 | | 21 | 44 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 64 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 60 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 43 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 78 | | 32 | 31 | | 33 | 61 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 79 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 66 | | 38 | 26 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 49 | | 41 | 26 | | 42 | 23 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 49 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 32 | | 47 | 3 |
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| 93.44% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "been allowed" | | 1 | "were meant" | | 2 | "were gone" |
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| 93.05% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 187 | | matches | | 0 | "was like standing" | | 1 | "was standing" | | 2 | "was already beginning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 114 | | ratio | 0.088 | | matches | | 0 | "The crimson gem lay cool against her skin—no warmth, no pulse." | | 1 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible profusion—bluebells and foxglove, primrose and wild orchid, all blooming together in defiance of season and sense." | | 2 | "She'd grown up on stories of places like this—her mother's Welsh fairy tales, whispered at bedtime in their Cardiff townhouse." | | 3 | "\"Stories are shadows of truth. They get the shape right but miss the substance.\" Nyx tilted their head, and for a moment Rory caught something almost like nostalgia in their expression—remarkable, given they had no face to speak of." | | 4 | "Time felt different here too—elastic, unreliable." | | 5 | "She was beautiful in the way that dangerous things were beautiful—a blade's edge, a lightning strike, a flame dancing too close to bare skin." | | 6 | "She left no footprints as she moved, Rory noticed—the grass simply declined to acknowledge her passage." | | 7 | "She stopped in front of Nyx, and something flickered across her ageless features—recognition, perhaps, or old sorrow." | | 8 | "In her palm rested a single flower—a white rose, its petals edged with silver frost." | | 9 | "In her hand, the rose was already beginning to wilt—but its cold remained, burning against her palm like a promise." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1249 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 40 | | adverbRatio | 0.032025620496397116 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008807045636509208 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 114 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 114 | | mean | 15.92 | | std | 9.43 | | cv | 0.592 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 34 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 28 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 27 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 39 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 24 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 63.45% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.41228070175438597 | | totalSentences | 114 | | uniqueOpeners | 47 | |
| 39.22% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "Then it stepped through a" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd walked through Richmond Park" | | 1 | "She'd never seen this place" | | 2 | "she said, though that wasn't" | | 3 | "She simply hadn't been allowed" | | 4 | "Their voice carried on a" | | 5 | "She stepped between two of" | | 6 | "She'd grown up on stories" | | 7 | "She'd stopped believing in such" | | 8 | "Its coat shimmered between white" | | 9 | "She couldn't have said whether" | | 10 | "She kept her voice low," | | 11 | "Her silver hair fell to" | | 12 | "She was beautiful in the" | | 13 | "She left no footprints as" | | 14 | "She stopped in front of" | | 15 | "She stood in one fluid" |
| | ratio | 0.188 | |
| 54.12% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 69 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose from" | | 1 | "Rory counted seven of them," | | 2 | "She'd walked through Richmond Park" | | 3 | "She'd never seen this place" | | 4 | "she said, though that wasn't" | | 5 | "The moss climbing the stones" | | 6 | "This clearing had been here" | | 7 | "She simply hadn't been allowed" | | 8 | "Nyx drifted past her, their" | | 9 | "Their voice carried on a" | | 10 | "Rory touched the Heartstone pendant" | | 11 | "The crimson gem lay cool" | | 12 | "Whatever this place was, it" | | 13 | "She stepped between two of" | | 14 | "The change wasn't violent." | | 15 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 16 | "The sky above had softened" | | 17 | "Rory's breath caught in her" | | 18 | "She'd grown up on stories" | | 19 | "Annwn, the otherworld." |
| | ratio | 0.812 | |
| 58.82% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "Before she could ask what" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "A doe stood at the far end of the meadow, watching them with eyes that held too much intelligence." |
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| 62.50% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx moved, their passage utterly silent" | | 1 | "Isolde knelt, her silver hair pooling around her like liquid mercury" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 43 | | tagDensity | 0.047 | | leniency | 0.093 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |