| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 41 | | tagDensity | 0.22 | | leniency | 0.439 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.71% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1372 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "sharply" | | 1 | "barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 45.34% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1372 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "stark" | | 3 | "glinting" | | 4 | "etched" | | 5 | "oppressive" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "racing" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "flickered" | | 10 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 125 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 19 | | markdownWords | 23 | | totalWords | 1364 | | ratio | 0.017 | | matches | | 0 | "unusual circumstances, possible homicide" | | 1 | "books" | | 2 | "someone" | | 3 | "contained" | | 4 | "there" | | 5 | "compass" | | 6 | "told" | | 7 | "stay" | | 8 | "through" | | 9 | "waiting" | | 10 | "bargain" | | 11 | "should" | | 12 | "Dragged" | | 13 | "somewhere" | | 14 | "somewhere else" | | 15 | "warnings" | | 16 | "will" | | 17 | "let" | | 18 | "hungry" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 47 | | wordCount | 926 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 2.16 | | worstName | "Eva" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Tube | 1 | | Harlow | 18 | | Quinn | 1 | | London | 1 | | Veil | 2 | | Market | 1 | | Constable | 1 | | Eva | 20 | | Kowalski | 1 | | Compass | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Market" | | 3 | "Constable" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Kowalski" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.42 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.733 | | wordCount | 1364 | | matches | | 0 | "not with the usual London vibration of traffic and life, but with something quieter, something" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 34.1 | | std | 25.09 | | cv | 0.736 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 86 | | 1 | 99 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 73 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 61 | | 6 | 50 | | 7 | 90 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 62 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 40 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 33 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 71 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 31 | | 20 | 24 | | 21 | 48 | | 22 | 35 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 37 | | 25 | 40 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 31 | | 28 | 35 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 28 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 32 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 67 | | 35 | 26 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 55 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 4 |
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| 90.33% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "was etched" | | 1 | "been taken" | | 2 | "been taken" | | 3 | "been taken" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 152 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 125 | | ratio | 0.064 | | matches | | 0 | "The abandoned Tube station smelled of damp concrete and something older—something that clung to the back of Harlow Quinn’s throat like the ghost of a bad decision." | | 1 | "The call had come in an hour ago—*unusual circumstances, possible homicide*—and the address had been a dead end until she’d dug deeper." | | 2 | "A worn leather satchel was slung over her shoulder, bulging with books—because of course Eva had brought *books* to a crime scene." | | 3 | "Harlow stepped closer, her boots crunching on something brittle—glass, maybe, or bone." | | 4 | "The scuff marks were there, all right—deep grooves in the dust, as if heels had dug in." | | 5 | "Her gaze snagged on a symbol carved into the tile near the alcove—a jagged, uneven mark, like a child’s attempt at a star." | | 6 | "She’d heard the name before—whispers in interrogation rooms, the kind of thing that made suspects clam up faster than a guilty plea." | | 7 | "Eva’s green eyes flickered with something—fear, maybe, or the ghost of an old argument." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 935 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.039572192513368985 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0053475935828877 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 125 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 125 | | mean | 10.91 | | std | 8.21 | | cv | 0.752 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 39 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 28 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 31 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 28 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 31 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 44.40% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.28 | | totalSentences | 125 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 75.76% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the oppressive weight of" | | 1 | "Instead, she reached into her" |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "Her torch cut a pale" | | 1 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "She’d heard the rumors, of" | | 3 | "She looked small in the" | | 4 | "She didn’t look down." | | 5 | "She gestured to the platform," | | 6 | "She crouched, careful not to" | | 7 | "She stood, her watch glinting" | | 8 | "She nodded toward a shadowed" | | 9 | "Her gaze snagged on a" | | 10 | "She crouched, running her fingers" | | 11 | "She’d heard the name before—whispers" | | 12 | "She turned back to the" | | 13 | "She picked it up, rolling" | | 14 | "She thought of the scuff" | | 15 | "They’d been taken *somewhere else*." | | 16 | "She pocketed the button, her" | | 17 | "It was warm, almost pulsing," | | 18 | "She swallowed the bile rising" | | 19 | "She always did." |
| | ratio | 0.227 | |
| 56.59% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 71 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "The abandoned Tube station smelled" | | 1 | "Her torch cut a pale" | | 2 | "The air hummed, not with" | | 3 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 4 | "The call had come in" | | 5 | "The Veil Market." | | 6 | "A name that didn’t appear" | | 7 | "She’d heard the rumors, of" | | 8 | "Detective Constable Eva Kowalski stood" | | 9 | "She looked small in the" | | 10 | "A worn leather satchel was" | | 11 | "Harlow exhaled through her nose." | | 12 | "Eva didn’t flinch." | | 13 | "Harlow stepped closer, her boots" | | 14 | "She didn’t look down." | | 15 | "She gestured to the platform," | | 16 | "Eva followed her gaze, her" | | 17 | "She crouched, careful not to" | | 18 | "Harlow crouched beside her, her" | | 19 | "The scuff marks were there," |
| | ratio | 0.807 | |
| 56.82% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "Because the evidence didn’t lie." |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 23.81% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The abandoned Tube station smelled of damp concrete and something older—something that clung to the back of Harlow Quinn’s throat like the ghost of a bad decisi…" | | 1 | "Her torch cut a pale arc through the dark, illuminating the peeling posters of long-forgotten theatre productions and the rusted tracks that hadn’t seen a train…" | | 2 | "The air hummed, not with the usual London vibration of traffic and life, but with something quieter, something that made the hairs on the back of her neck stand…" | | 3 | "Supernatural black market, enchanted goods, the kind of place that made her skin itch just thinking about it." | | 4 | "She turned back to the stain, her torchlight catching something glinting near the edge." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "She stood, her watch glinting as she checked the time" | | 1 | "Eva said, as if that explained anything" | | 2 | "Harlow finished, her voice steady" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Eva interrupted (interrupt)" | | 1 | "Eva agreed (agree)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 41 | | tagDensity | 0.073 | | leniency | 0.146 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.098 | |