| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 19 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She stepped back [back]" | | 1 | "She glanced back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 54 | | tagDensity | 0.352 | | leniency | 0.704 | | rawRatio | 0.105 | | effectiveRatio | 0.074 | |
| 94.82% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1931 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 40.45% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1931 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "etched" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "quickened" | | 7 | "could feel" | | 8 | "reminder" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "shattered" | | 11 | "unreadable" | | 12 | "searing" | | 13 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 131 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 131 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 166 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 45 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.46% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 42 | | markdownWords | 128 | | totalWords | 1917 | | ratio | 0.067 | | matches | | 0 | "\"This place is... hungry,\"" | | 1 | "\"It feeds on memory, on longing. Be careful what you think of here.\"" | | 2 | "wrong" | | 3 | "\"The grove remembers. It remembers the Fae who walked here, the bargains they struck, the blood they spilled.\"" | | 4 | "they" | | 5 | "\"Safe is a relative term,\"" | | 6 | "\"The Fae don’t understand mortal concepts of safety. To them, danger is just another kind of game.\"" | | 7 | "\"You’re learning.\"" | | 8 | "knew" | | 9 | "move" | | 10 | "shifting" | | 11 | "\"No,\"" | | 12 | "\"But I don’t think we’re alone.\"" | | 13 | "guest" | | 14 | "\"Isolde.\"" | | 15 | "Nyx" | | 16 | "\"We’ve met,\"" | | 17 | "\"Briefly. Before.\"" | | 18 | "dramatic" | | 19 | "felt" | | 20 | "could" | | 21 | "will" | | 22 | "knew" | | 23 | "remembered" | | 24 | "\"Rory. Don’t.\"" | | 25 | "why" | | 26 | "tilted" | | 27 | "no, not screaming, singing" | | 28 | "moved" | | 29 | "laughed" | | 30 | "spoke" | | 31 | "\"Rory. Breathe.\"" | | 32 | "burning" | | 33 | "hell" | | 34 | "moved" | | 35 | "Prince Belphegor." | | 36 | "knew" | | 37 | "shifted" | | 38 | "catch" | | 39 | "\"Enough riddles, Isolde. What does she have to do with Dymas?\"" | | 40 | "parted" | | 41 | "\"Run, little mortal. But remember—some doors are meant to be opened.\"" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "The runes flared brighter at her approach, and for a heartbeat, she swore she heard whispers—voices layered over one ano…" |
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| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 67 | | wordCount | 1558 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.99 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Nyx | 17 | | Rory | 31 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Isolde | 12 | | Aldric | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.505 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 66.67% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 90 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "as if sensing the magic in the air" | | 1 | "looked like a mirror, its surface reflect" | | 2 | "It was as if the surface had been frozen in time, yet she knew—*knew*—that if she reached out, her fingers would pass through it like mist" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.522 | | wordCount | 1917 | | matches | | 0 | "not the sky, but something deeper" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 166 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 64 | | mean | 29.95 | | std | 26.48 | | cv | 0.884 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 91 | | 1 | 57 | | 2 | 60 | | 3 | 95 | | 4 | 56 | | 5 | 76 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 87 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 30 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 82 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 56 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 45 | | 19 | 69 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 30 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 59 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 58 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 37 | | 31 | 60 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 30 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 87 | | 40 | 24 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 38 | | 44 | 35 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 64 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 97.23% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | | 0 | "been frozen" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "was gone" |
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| 54.01% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 6 | | totalVerbs | 274 | | matches | | 0 | "was looking" | | 1 | "was trying" | | 2 | "were resisting" | | 3 | "wasn’t turning" | | 4 | "was standing" | | 5 | "was *burning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 20 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 16 | | totalSentences | 166 | | ratio | 0.096 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the grove was thick with the scent of damp earth and something sweeter—wildflowers that shouldn’t have been in bloom this late in the year." | | 1 | "The trees weren’t just tall—they were *wrong*, their branches twisting into impossible shapes, their leaves shimmering with colors that didn’t exist in the mortal world." | | 2 | "The runes flared brighter at her approach, and for a heartbeat, she swore she heard whispers—voices layered over one another, speaking in a language that made her teeth ache." | | 3 | "*\"The grove remembers. It remembers the Fae who walked here, the bargains they struck, the blood they spilled.\"* Their form rippled, and for a moment, Rory thought she saw something else beneath the shadows—a face, gaunt and familiar, before it dissolved back into darkness." | | 4 | "Had he—*they*—walked this path before?" | | 5 | "At its center stood a pool of water so still it looked like a mirror, its surface reflecting not the sky, but something deeper—something that shifted and writhed just beneath the surface." | | 6 | "\"Isolde said this place was safe,\" Rory muttered, though she wasn’t sure who she was trying to convince—herself or Nyx." | | 7 | "It was as if the surface had been frozen in time, yet she knew—*knew*—that if she reached out, her fingers would pass through it like mist." | | 8 | "Not swaying in the wind—*shifting*, their trunks bending like limbs, their branches knitting together to form a wall of bark and leaves." | | 9 | "She was tall—taller than Rory, though not by much—and her silver hair cascaded down her back like a waterfall of moonlight." | | 10 | "The scar was a relic of her childhood, a reminder of the night her mother had died—of the fire, the smoke, the way the world had split open and swallowed her whole." | | 11 | "Her mother was screaming—*no, not screaming, singing*—a wordless, keening wail that made Rory’s bones ache." | | 12 | "It *spoke*, its voice a chorus of whispers and static, and then—" | | 13 | "It *moved*, rippling with images—flashes of a city of gold and amber, of feasting halls where demons in fine clothes laughed over goblets of wine, of a door, carved from black stone, its surface etched with runes that made her eyes water." | | 14 | "And then, a face—a man with eyes like molten gold, his smile sharp as a knife." | | 15 | "The images in the water *shifted*, coalescing into a single, terrible vision—a city in flames, the sky choked with smoke, and at its center, a figure wreathed in shadow, their hands outstretched as if to *catch* the fire." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1574 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 51 | | adverbRatio | 0.032401524777636595 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0031766200762388818 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 166 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 166 | | mean | 11.55 | | std | 8.95 | | cv | 0.775 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 29 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 28 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 29 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 44 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 32 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 26 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 22 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 45.78% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.28313253012048195 | | totalSentences | 166 | | uniqueOpeners | 47 | |
| 82.64% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 121 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, they drifted forward, their" | | 1 | "Then her mother was gone." | | 2 | "Instead, she raised a hand," |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 84.46% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 41 | | totalSentences | 121 | | matches | | 0 | "She glanced back, but the" | | 1 | "they murmured, their voice a" | | 2 | "She didn’t like the way" | | 3 | "She yanked her hand back." | | 4 | "Their form rippled, and for" | | 5 | "She didn’t ask." | | 6 | "She’d seen enough strange things" | | 7 | "She stepped closer to the" | | 8 | "It was as if the" | | 9 | "She could feel the pull" | | 10 | "She turned just in time" | | 11 | "She was tall—taller than Rory," | | 12 | "Her eyes were pale lavender," | | 13 | "She wore a gown of" | | 14 | "she said, her voice like" | | 15 | "She tilted her head, her" | | 16 | "She turned her attention back" | | 17 | "She gestured to the pool" | | 18 | "She stepped closer, her bare" | | 19 | "She reached out, her fingers" |
| | ratio | 0.339 | |
| 9.59% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 109 | | totalSentences | 121 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the grove" | | 1 | "Rory Carter stepped between the" | | 2 | "The moment she crossed the" | | 3 | "She glanced back, but the" | | 4 | "they murmured, their voice a" | | 5 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 6 | "The dagger had been a" | | 7 | "She didn’t like the way" | | 8 | "Nyx didn’t answer." | | 9 | "The grove unfolded around them," | | 10 | "The trees weren’t just tall—they" | | 11 | "Some were the deep violet" | | 12 | "Rory’s breath hitched as she" | | 13 | "The runes flared brighter at" | | 14 | "She yanked her hand back." | | 15 | "Nyx tilted their head, their" | | 16 | "Their form rippled, and for" | | 17 | "The name flickered through her" | | 18 | "Nyx had been human once." | | 19 | "She didn’t ask." |
| | ratio | 0.901 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 121 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | technicalSentenceCount | 14 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the grove was thick with the scent of damp earth and something sweeter—wildflowers that shouldn’t have been in bloom this late in the year." | | 1 | "Beside her, Nyx flickered like a candle flame in a draft, their shadowy form solidifying for a moment before dissolving into tendrils of darkness that coiled ar…" | | 2 | "The dagger had been a gift from Isolde, its moonsilver edge humming faintly against her skin, as if sensing the magic in the air." | | 3 | "The trees weren’t just tall—they were *wrong*, their branches twisting into impossible shapes, their leaves shimmering with colors that didn’t exist in the mort…" | | 4 | "Some were the deep violet of twilight, others the sickly green of decay, and a few glowed like embers, casting flickering shadows that moved independently of th…" | | 5 | "The runes flared brighter at her approach, and for a heartbeat, she swore she heard whispers—voices layered over one another, speaking in a language that made h…" | | 6 | "At its center stood a pool of water so still it looked like a mirror, its surface reflecting not the sky, but something deeper—something that shifted and writhe…" | | 7 | "Not swaying in the wind—*shifting*, their trunks bending like limbs, their branches knitting together to form a wall of bark and leaves." | | 8 | "Her eyes were pale lavender, sharp and knowing, and when she smiled, it was the kind of smile that made Rory’s skin prickle." | | 9 | "Her mother was screaming—*no, not screaming, singing*—a wordless, keening wail that made Rory’s bones ache." | | 10 | "It *moved*, twisting and coiling like a living thing, its tendrils reaching for her mother, dragging her toward the hearth where the flames burned hottest." | | 11 | "It *moved*, rippling with images—flashes of a city of gold and amber, of feasting halls where demons in fine clothes laughed over goblets of wine, of a door, ca…" | | 12 | "The pendant flared, its light searing through her shirt, branding her skin." | | 13 | "The images in the water *shifted*, coalescing into a single, terrible vision—a city in flames, the sky choked with smoke, and at its center, a figure wreathed i…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 19 | | uselessAdditionCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "they murmured, their voice a whisper that slithered into Rory’s ear" | | 1 | "Nyx replied, their voice dry as dead leaves" | | 2 | "Nyx said, their form coiling tighter, darker" | | 3 | "She tilted, her gaze flicking to Nyx" | | 4 | "Nyx said, their voice tight" | | 5 | "She turned, her expression softening" | | 6 | "She stepped, her bare feet silent on the moss" | | 7 | "She leaned in, her breath cool against Rory’s ear" | | 8 | "She stepped back, her gown shimmering like a living thing" | | 9 | "She turned, her silver hair catching the light" | | 10 | "She glanced back, her smile sad" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 54 | | tagDensity | 0.148 | | leniency | 0.296 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.074 | |