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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQFH4R4E9ZXMCC9DD35V0B
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Model:
Z.AI GLM 4.6
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:
1m 26s
Cost:
$0.007067
Provider:
DeepInfra
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The London damp had seeped into her bones, a familiar misery that clung to the hem of her jeans. Rory followed Isolde through the winding paths of Richmond Park, the last vestiges of twilight painting the skeletal branches of the oaks in bruised shades of purple and grey. Beside her, Nyx was a patch of deeper darkness in the gloaming, their form solid enough to cast a faint, distorted shadow of its own. They moved with an unnerving silence, their feet making no sound on the leaf litter. “Not much further,” Isolde said, her voice like the chime of small, distant bells. She didn't look back. Her silver hair, unbound and flowing to her waist,
seemed to
capture the dying light and weave it into a soft,
ethereal
glow. Rory pulled her jacket tighter, her fingers brushing against the Heartstone pendant nestled at her throat. It was its usual, placid self, a faint, internal warmth a quiet reassurance against the encroaching chill. The Fae-forged blade, tucked into the inner pocket of her coat, was a sliver of
profound
cold, a
stark
contrast. She was a walking paradox of temperatures, a mortal girl carrying pieces of realms she was still struggling to understand. They stopped before a circle of ancient standing stones. They weren't the neat, arranged monoliths of a tourist site. These were massive, rough-hewn oaks, petrified into gnarled, grey stone and sunk deep into the earth. Moss, the color of jade, clung to their crevices. The air grew still. The distant hum of traffic on the A3, the chatter of late-night dog walkers, the cry of a fox—it all vanished, snuffed out like a candle. “Here,” Isolde whispered, raising a hand. Her pale lavender eyes
seemed to
see something Rory couldn’t. “The boundary.” Rory’s heart
began to
beat a little faster, a drum against her ribs. She watched as Isolde stepped between two of the tallest stones. There was no shimmer, no tear in the fabric of reality. The Half-Fae simply… vanished. One moment she was there, the next she
was gone
. Nyx flowed forward, their edges blurring. “The Veil is thin here,” they whispered, their voice like the rustle of dry leaves skittering across pavement. “A fold, not a wound.” They followed Isolde, dissolving into the space between the stones. Rory took a breath that tasted of cold earth and ozone. She
clenched her jaw
, pushing down the surge of adrenaline, the instinct to turn back to the mundane safety of the park. Cool-headed, she reminded herself. Think. She stepped through. The change was instantaneous and absolute. It wasn’t like walking through a doorway into a different room; it was like
being plunged
into an entirely different ocean. The air itself felt new, thick and sweet with the scent of night-blooming jasmine and something else, something metallic and clean, like rain on hot stone. The
profound
, hollow cold that replaced the Heartstone’s warmth was her first clue. The pendant, which had pulsed with life near the rift in the warehouse, now lay against her skin like a sliver of ice, inert and dead. This place was the antithesis of Hel. She stood on a carpet of moss so deep and green it
seemed to
emit its own soft light. Above her, the sky was not the black of a London night, but a deep, velvety indigo, pricked with stars that burned with a fierce, diamond-like intensity. There was no moon, yet the entire grove
was bathed
in a gentle, luminescent glow. The trees were unlike anything she had ever seen. Their bark was the color of polished silver, and their branches twisted in elegant, impossible spirals towards the sky, bearing leaves of shimmering, translucent gold. Wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion around their roots—snowdrops nestled against crimson roses, vibrant bluebells grew tangled with autumn asters. Their colors were too vivid, too pure for the world she knew. “It’s beautiful,” Rory breathed, the words escaping before she could stop them. Isolde, standing a few feet away, smiled faintly. “Beauty is a truth the Fae never lie about.” She gestured with a graceful hand. “Welcome to what remains of my home.” Nyx solidified beside a silver-barked tree, their violet eyes glowing
softly
in the ambient light. “The air… tastes of starlight and old secrets,” they murmured, their form seeming to drink the light from the air around them. Rory reached into her jacket and her fingers closed around the hilt of the Fae-forged blade. The moment she touched it, a low, resonant hum vibrated up her arm, a note of pure, clear cold. The blade felt… awake. A faint, sil
very
light
began to
emanate from the moonsilver, casting leaf-shaped patterns on the moss at her feet. It was a key, and this was its lock. “How is this possible?” Rory asked, her voice hushed. She looked up, trying to find the source of the light, but the indigo sky was a perfect, sourceless dome. “We’re still in Richmond Park, aren’t we?” “Here and there,” Isolde said, her cryptic nature surfacing. She
began to
walk deeper into the grove, her silver hair swaying. “Time here is a river, not a road. It flows where it will. An hour inside can be a breath outside, or a season.” Rory pulled out her phone. No signal, of course. The screen showed the time: 9:17 PM. She slipped it back into her pocket, a useless relic from another world. She followed Isolde and Nyx, her boots sinking silently into the yielding moss. She noticed Isolde’s footprints—or rather, the lack of them. The Half-Fae
glided
over the ground, leaving no trace of her passing, as if she weighed nothing at all. Unease
began to
prickle at the edges of her
wonder
. This place was too perfect, too serene. It felt ancient and powerful in a way that made her
feel
mortal and fragile. The silence was the most unnerving part. Not the absence of noise, but the presence of a quiet so deep it felt like it
was listening
. They came to the center of the grove, where a small,
perfectly
circular pool of water lay. It was as still as polished glass, yet it reflected not the indigo sky above, but a swirling nebula of stars and galaxies. The water was dark, but light
seemed to
emanate from within its depths. “This is the heart of the Grove,” Isolde said, her voice losing its riddling tone, replaced by a deep, resonant sadness. “A shard of the true Feylands, left behind when the Courts closed their doors to me.” Rory stared into the pool, mesmerized. She could see constellations being born and dying in its depths, clouds of stellar dust coalescing into novas. It was the universe, captured in a basin of water. Nyx moved to the pool’s edge, their shadow-form
wavering
. “It is a reflection of the space between,” they whispered. “Where I was lost.” Rory knelt, the Fae blade humming in her hand. She reached out, her fingers hovering just above the water’s surface. It didn’t
feel
wet. It felt cold, like the blade, and thrummed with a faint, almost imperceptible energy. She felt a pull, a dizzying sense of vertigo, as if the pool
was trying
to draw her not in, but *out*—out of her own body and into the cosmos. She snatched her hand back, her breath catching in her throat. The
wonder
was still there, a dizzying, breathtaking thing, but it was now laced with a sharp, clear understanding. This wasn’t just a hidden garden. It was a place of power, a fragile bubble of another reality pressed against her own. And she, a human girl with a Fae blade and a Helstone,
was standing
at its
very
heart.
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2/17/2026, 2:41:09 AM
model
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cancelled
false
latency
659
moderation_latency
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generation_time
86204
tokens_prompt
1590
tokens_completion
4045
native_tokens_prompt
1543
native_tokens_completion
3693
native_tokens_completion_images
(null)
native_tokens_reasoning
2116
native_tokens_cached
64
num_media_prompt
(null)
num_input_audio_prompt
(null)
num_media_completion
0
num_search_results
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origin
"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byok
false
finish_reason
"stop"
native_finish_reason
"stop"
usage
0.0070669099999552
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(null)
provider_responses
0
id
"chatcmpl-Ryp1z49UVEZbbFpz0dZBNZiA"
status
200
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false
latency
48
endpoint_id
"c8607edc-8577-4199-b03d-1213da4743dc"
provider_name
"DeepInfra"
model_permaslug
"z-ai/glm-4.6"
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
9
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
76.9585%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1302
totalAiIsmAdverbs
3
found
0
adverb
"perfectly"
count
1
1
adverb
"softly"
count
1
2
adverb
"very"
count
1
highlights
0
"perfectly"
1
"softly"
2
"very"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
53.9171%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1302
totalAiIsms
6
found
0
word
"ethereal"
count
1
1
word
"glided"
count
1
2
word
"wavering"
count
1
3
word
"profound"
count
2
4
word
"stark"
count
1
highlights
0
"ethereal"
1
"glided"
2
"wavering"
3
"profound"
4
"stark"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"clenched jaw/fists"
count
1
highlights
0
"clenched her jaw"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
92
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
2
hedgeCount
8
narrationSentences
92
filterMatches
0
"wonder"
1
"feel"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"began to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
98
matches
(empty)
75.6716%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
25
mean
51.52
std
21.37
cv
0.415
sampleLengths
0
88
1
41
2
73
3
74
4
18
5
49
6
39
7
41
8
99
9
61
10
65
11
12
12
30
13
37
14
67
15
36
16
45
17
70
18
58
19
53
20
37
21
34
22
23
23
68
24
70
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
3
totalSentences
92
matches
0
"was gone"
1
"being plunged"
2
"was bathed"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
3
totalVerbs
189
matches
0
"was listening"
1
"was trying"
2
"was standing"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1187
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
30
adverbRatio
0.02527379949452401
lyAdverbCount
6
lyAdverbRatio
0.005054759898904802
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
98
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
98
mean
13.14
std
7.05
cv
0.536
sampleLengths
0
19
1
29
2
25
3
15
4
14
5
4
6
23
7
16
8
17
9
20
10
20
11
9
12
10
13
16
14
9
15
4
16
26
17
6
18
10
19
2
20
13
21
11
22
11
23
3
24
1
25
10
26
6
27
18
28
15
29
11
30
22
31
4
32
1
33
3
34
6
35
21
36
26
37
13
38
26
39
7
40
19
41
27
42
15
43
9
44
25
45
19
46
12
47
12
48
8
49
15
46.9388%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
9
diversityRatio
0.336734693877551
totalSentences
98
uniqueOpeners
33
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
9
fancyCount
8
fancyTags
0
"Isolde said, her voice like the chime of small, distant bells (say, like)"
1
"Isolde whispered, raising a hand (whisper, raise)"
2
"they whispered, their voice like the rustle of dry leaves skittering across pavement (whisper, like skitter)"
3
"Rory breathed, the words escaping before she could stop them (breathe, escape stop)"
4
"they murmured, their form seeming to drink the light from the air around them (murmur, seem drink)"
5
"Isolde said, her cryptic nature surfacing (say, surface)"
6
"Isolde said, her voice losing its riddling tone, replaced by a deep, resonant sadness (say, lose riddle replace)"
7
"they whispered (whisper)"
85.4992%