| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.235 | | leniency | 0.471 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 78.09% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1369 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "slightly" | | 4 | "sadly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 12.34% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1369 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "flickered" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "shimmered" | | 4 | "fleeting" | | 5 | "mosaic" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "scanned" | | 8 | "echoes" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "vibrated" | | 11 | "whisper" | | 12 | "wavering" | | 13 | "pulse" | | 14 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 118 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 118 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 144 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 19 | | markdownWords | 31 | | totalWords | 1339 | | ratio | 0.023 | | matches | | 0 | "wrong" | | 1 | "open" | | 2 | "gone" | | 3 | "older" | | 4 | "Expanded." | | 5 | "slithering" | | 6 | "spoke" | | 7 | "“The heart sees what the eyes refuse.”" | | 8 | "shifted" | | 9 | "understood" | | 10 | "“Lost ones. Found ones. Hungry ones.”" | | 11 | "glowed" | | 12 | "answered" | | 13 | "another" | | 14 | "remembers" | | 15 | "Others" | | 16 | "a pulse" | | 17 | "Warning." | | 18 | "closed" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 60.23% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 47 | | wordCount | 1114 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.8 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 20 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Veil | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Isolde | 11 | | Nyx | 7 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.602 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if speaking from underwater" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 8 | | per1kWords | 5.975 | | wordCount | 1339 | | matches | | 0 | "not into more woodland, but into a clearing" | | 1 | "not planted, but grown *wrong*" | | 2 | "not the chill of winter, but something *older*" | | 3 | "not green, but a shifting mosaic of color" | | 4 | "neither day nor" | | 5 | "Not physically, but perceptually" | | 6 | "not violently, but like a curtain drawn aside" | | 7 | "not stars, but vast fields of amber wheat swaying under a warm, eternal sun" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 144 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 69 | | mean | 19.41 | | std | 17.1 | | cv | 0.881 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 34 | | 2 | 37 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 80 | | 6 | 39 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 30 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 30 | | 15 | 74 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 35 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 42 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 39 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 29 | | 32 | 34 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 45 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 52 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 47 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 27 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 24 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 201 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 35 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 31 | | totalSentences | 144 | | ratio | 0.215 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx, gliding beside her like smoke clinging to stone, flickered—its form momentarily thinning, as if caught between states." | | 1 | "It pulsed once—warm, insistent—just as the trees ahead parted, not into more woodland, but into a clearing that should not exist." | | 2 | "Before them stood a ring of ancient oaks, not planted, but grown *wrong*—their bark deep silver, their branches arcing together high above as though woven by unseen hands." | | 3 | "Rory had seen it only in fleeting glimpses—a distortion at the edge of vision, something her mind refused to hold steady—but here, it was *open*, rippling like liquid glass beneath a pale sun that cast no shadows." | | 4 | "Nyx passed through first—a ripple, a breath of darkness slipping between the stones." | | 5 | "One second they were there; the next, simply *gone*, absorbed into the shimmer." | | 6 | "Cold pressed against her skin, not the chill of winter, but something *older*—like the breath of a crypt forgotten for centuries." | | 7 | "The world folded, compressed, and then—*" | | 8 | "The trees were still oaks, but their trunks shimmered with veins of opal, their leaves not green, but a shifting mosaic of color—gold, violet, deep indigo—changing with the slow turn of some unseen light source above." | | 9 | "The sky, if it could be called that, was neither day nor night, but a soft twilight shot through with constellations that moved—drifting slowly like schools of luminous fish." | | 10 | "And the air—thick with the scent of wild mint, honeyed blossoms, and something metallic, like distant lightning." | | 11 | "Rory’s pendant pulsed again—harder this time." | | 12 | "Their violet eyes—two pinpricks of light in a face of shifting dark—scanned the trees." | | 13 | "From between the roots emerged a creature no larger than a cat—six legs, fur like spun obsidian, eyes like polished onyx." | | 14 | "But its mouth—when it opened—was a ring of tiny, translucent teeth, chiming softly as it moved, like wind through glass bells." | | 15 | "And then it vanished—melting into the moss, leaving only a faint hum in the air." | | 16 | "Not physically, but perceptually—Rory blinked, and suddenly the path ahead had lengthened, curving into a tunnel of interwoven branches." | | 17 | "The moonsilver was cold—even here, where the air held a strange warmth." | | 18 | "At one point, Rory saw her own reflection in a pool that wasn’t water—its surface mirror-smooth, yet rippling with colors not in the sky." | | 19 | "Then—music." | | 20 | "The leaves shimmered in response, releasing a mist that hung in the air, swirling into shapes—faces, half-formed, whispering in languages she didn’t know but somehow *understood*." | | 21 | "They followed her into a circular clearing, at the center of which stood a stone pedestal—smooth, worn, topped with a depression the exact shape of the pendant." | | 22 | "Isolde smiled—sadly." | | 23 | "For a heartbeat—nothing." | | 24 | "The sky split—not violently, but like a curtain drawn aside." | | 25 | "Through it, Rory saw *another* sky—not stars, but vast fields of amber wheat swaying under a warm, eternal sun." | | 26 | "A river cut through it, thick with fruit-laden trees, and beyond—palaces of glass and fire." | | 27 | "And the grove—bowed." | | 28 | "But beneath her fingers, just once, she felt it—*a pulse*." | | 29 | "And as they stepped back toward the ring of oaks, the grove behind them *closed*—the trees knitting together, the stars folding into themselves, the air sealing like a wound." | | 30 | "But Rory could still feel it—the weight of observation, the whisper of chiming teeth, the image of amber skies and unseen feasts." |
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| 91.65% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1148 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "Cold pressed against her" |
| | adverbCount | 49 | | adverbRatio | 0.042682926829268296 | | lyAdverbCount | 20 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017421602787456445 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 144 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 144 | | mean | 9.3 | | std | 7.37 | | cv | 0.792 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 28 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 37 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 36 | | 35 | 29 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 55.56% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.3541666666666667 | | totalSentences | 144 | | uniqueOpeners | 51 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, impossibly, *spoke*, its voice" | | 1 | "Then it was gone." | | 2 | "Even the stars dimmed." | | 3 | "Then the pedestal *glowed*." |
| | ratio | 0.042 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "they murmured, their voice like" | | 1 | "It pulsed once—warm, insistent—just as" | | 2 | "Her silver hair spilled like" | | 3 | "She did not turn, but" | | 4 | "Her ears popped." | | 5 | "She stumbled, catching herself on" | | 6 | "It was smooth, warm, pulsing" | | 7 | "She snatched her hand back." | | 8 | "They stood in a grove" | | 9 | "She looked down." | | 10 | "Their violet eyes—two pinpricks of" | | 11 | "It circled them once, pausing" | | 12 | "It flared where they touched," | | 13 | "She stepped forward, and the" | | 14 | "She drew it slightly, just" | | 15 | "Her face looked older, weary," | | 16 | "It vibrated in Rory’s bones." | | 17 | "They followed her into a" | | 18 | "She placed the Heartstone into" | | 19 | "It was cold now." |
| | ratio | 0.208 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 67 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "The air changed before they" | | 1 | "The next, the wind stilled," | | 2 | "Nyx, gliding beside her like" | | 3 | "they murmured, their voice like" | | 4 | "Aurora’s fingers brushed the Heartstone" | | 5 | "It pulsed once—warm, insistent—just as" | | 6 | "Rory had seen it only" | | 7 | "Isolde stood before the threshold," | | 8 | "Her silver hair spilled like" | | 9 | "She did not turn, but" | | 10 | "Isolde tilted her head." | | 11 | "Nyx passed through first—a ripple," | | 12 | "One second they were there;" | | 13 | "Rory hesitated only a moment" | | 14 | "Her ears popped." | | 15 | "The world folded, compressed, and" | | 16 | "She stumbled, catching herself on" | | 17 | "It was smooth, warm, pulsing" | | 18 | "She snatched her hand back." | | 19 | "They stood in a grove" |
| | ratio | 0.698 | |
| 52.08% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "Before them stood a ring" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 12.99% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx, gliding beside her like smoke clinging to stone, flickered—its form momentarily thinning, as if caught between states." | | 1 | "Before them stood a ring of ancient oaks, not planted, but grown *wrong*—their bark deep silver, their branches arcing together high above as though woven by un…" | | 2 | "Isolde stood before the threshold, barefoot on moss that glowed a soft emerald underfoot." | | 3 | "Her silver hair spilled like molten moonlight down her back, untouched by wind, as if suspended in time." | | 4 | "The sky, if it could be called that, was neither day nor night, but a soft twilight shot through with constellations that moved—drifting slowly like schools of …" | | 5 | "It flared where they touched, blooming with tiny flowers that opened and closed like breathing mouths." | | 6 | "At one point, Rory saw her own reflection in a pool that wasn’t water—its surface mirror-smooth, yet rippling with colors not in the sky." | | 7 | "The leaves shimmered in response, releasing a mist that hung in the air, swirling into shapes—faces, half-formed, whispering in languages she didn’t know but so…" |
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| 62.50% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said, her voice distant, as if speaking from underwater" |
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| 61.76% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Isolde warned (warn)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.235 | | leniency | 0.471 | | rawRatio | 0.375 | | effectiveRatio | 0.176 | |