| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she asked again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.238 | | leniency | 0.476 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.048 | |
| 86.49% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1110 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "carefully" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 27.93% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1110 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "reminder" | | 3 | "glinting" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "flicked" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "unreadable" | | 9 | "flickered" | | 10 | "electric" | | 11 | "could feel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 100 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 11 | | markdownWords | 12 | | totalWords | 1100 | | ratio | 0.011 | | matches | | 0 | "click" | | 1 | "mrrow" | | 2 | "him" | | 3 | "her" | | 4 | "fuck" | | 5 | "clink" | | 6 | "very" | | 7 | "ran" | | 8 | "wouldn’t listen" | | 9 | "secrets" | | 10 | "you" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 16 | | wordCount | 834 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.72 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Moreau | 1 | | Ptolemy | 1 | | Lucien | 6 | | Rory | 5 | | Earl | 1 | | Grey | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Moreau" | | 1 | "Lucien" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Earl" | | 4 | "Grey" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if weighing his words" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1100 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 46 | | mean | 23.91 | | std | 17.74 | | cv | 0.742 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 68 | | 1 | 61 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 51 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 40 | | 8 | 31 | | 9 | 30 | | 10 | 39 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 69 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 35 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 31 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 45 | | 21 | 33 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 30 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 29 | | 31 | 24 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 36 | | 35 | 40 | | 36 | 52 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 27 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 41 | | 42 | 27 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 11 |
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| 95.24% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "was amused" | | 1 | "been burned" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 133 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 100 | | ratio | 0.07 | | matches | | 0 | "The door swung open with a sharp *click* of the deadbolts, and there he stood—platinum hair slicked back, charcoal suit immaculate despite the damp London evening, one amber eye catching the dim hallway light while the other remained a void." | | 1 | "The scent of rain and something darker—smoke and spice, like burnt cinnamon—drifted in with him." | | 2 | "“Laila,” he said, and the sound of it—her old alias, the one she’d shed like a second skin—sent a jolt through her." | | 3 | "The flat was a mess—books stacked in precarious towers, half-empty mugs of cold tea, the faint hum of the radiator struggling against the autumn chill." | | 4 | "His touch had always been like that—electric, dangerous." | | 5 | "Lucien’s eyes flashed, amber and black, and for a second, she saw the demon in him—the one he kept leashed, the one that made her blood run hot and her pulse stutter." | | 6 | "And some lies—no matter how carefully crafted—couldn’t stand against the truth." |
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| 95.65% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 845 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 38 | | adverbRatio | 0.04497041420118343 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007100591715976331 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 100 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 100 | | mean | 11 | | std | 8.57 | | cv | 0.779 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 40 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 30 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 28 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 24 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 53.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.36 | | totalSentences | 100 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "Certainly not *him*." | | 1 | "Too small for the way" | | 2 | "Instead, she exhaled, slow and" |
| | ratio | 0.046 | |
| 35.38% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 30 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "She should have slammed the" | | 1 | "he said, and the sound" | | 2 | "She exhaled through her nose," | | 3 | "She hadn’t expected company." | | 4 | "She crossed her arms, the" | | 5 | "He pushed off the doorframe," | | 6 | "She didn’t step back, even" | | 7 | "She turned away, stalking toward" | | 8 | "She filled the kettle with" | | 9 | "She set two chipped mugs" | | 10 | "She didn’t look at him," | | 11 | "His voice was smooth, unreadable" | | 12 | "She whirled on him, the" | | 13 | "His expression didn’t change, but" | | 14 | "His touch had always been" | | 15 | "She pulled her hand back" | | 16 | "she asked again, quieter this" | | 17 | "He took a slow sip" | | 18 | "She set her own mug" | | 19 | "His jaw tightened." |
| | ratio | 0.462 | |
| 44.62% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 54 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "The door swung open with" | | 1 | "Lucien Moreau leaned against the" | | 2 | "Rory’s fingers tightened around the" | | 3 | "The scent of rain and" | | 4 | "She should have slammed the" | | 5 | "he said, and the sound" | | 6 | "She exhaled through her nose," | | 7 | "Lucien’s mouth quirked, just slightly," | | 8 | "The flat was a mess—books" | | 9 | "She hadn’t expected company." | | 10 | "She crossed her arms, the" | | 11 | "He pushed off the doorframe," | | 12 | "The blade hidden inside was" | | 13 | "She didn’t step back, even" | | 14 | "Lucien’s heterochromatic gaze flicked over" | | 15 | "The words came out sharper" | | 16 | "She turned away, stalking toward" | | 17 | "She filled the kettle with" | | 18 | "The flat was too small" | | 19 | "She set two chipped mugs" |
| | ratio | 0.831 | |
| 76.92% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "Because some wounds didn’t heal." |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 63.49% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 27 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien Moreau leaned against the doorframe, cane tapping idly against the scuffed linoleum, as if he hadn’t just materialized out of thin air after six months o…" | | 1 | "He pushed off the doorframe, stepping inside before she could protest, the ivory handle of his cane glinting as he moved." | | 2 | "The kettle whistled, shrill and insistent, and she turned back to it, pouring the water with hands that weren’t quite steady." |
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| 75.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "He set, the sound too loud in the sudden stillness" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.048 | | leniency | 0.095 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |