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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQGARPGC1AF629BBGY64AS
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Model:
Mistral Small Creative
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
9.5s
Cost:
$0.000537
Provider:
Mistral
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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The door swung open with a sharp *click* of the deadbolts, and there he stood—platinum hair slicked back, charcoal suit immaculate despite the damp London evening, one amber eye catching the dim hallway light while the other remained a void. Lucien Moreau leaned against the doorframe, cane tapping idly against the scuffed linoleum, as if he hadn’t just materialized out of thin air after six months of silence. Rory’s fingers tightened around the edge of the door. The scent of rain and something darker—smoke and spice, like burnt cinnamon—drifted in with him. She should have slammed the door. Should have told him to piss off. But the words stuck in her throat, tangled up in the memory of his voice, low and rough, whispering her name in the dark. “Laila,” he said, and the sound of it—her old alias, the one she’d shed like a second skin—
sent a jolt through
her. She exhaled through her nose, sharp and controlled. “It’s Rory. And you’re not welcome here.” Lucien’s mouth quirked, just
slightly
, like he
was amused
by the lie. “You always were terrible at pretending.” Behind her, Ptolemy the tabby let out a low, suspicious *mrrow* from his perch on the armchair, tail flicking. The flat was a mess—books stacked in precarious towers, half-empty mugs of cold tea, the faint hum of the radiator struggling against the autumn chill. She hadn’t expected company. Certainly not *him*. “What do you want, Lucien?” She crossed her arms, the crescent scar on her wrist catching the light as she shifted. A reminder. A warning. He pushed off the doorframe, stepping inside before she could protest, the ivory handle of his cane
glinting
as he moved. The blade hidden inside was a secret between them, one of many. “Can’t a man visit an old friend?” “Friends don’t disappear for half a year.” She didn’t step back, even as he invaded her space, the heat of him too familiar, too dangerous. “Friends don’t leave without a word.” Lucien’s heterochromatic gaze
flicked
over her face, lingering on the tight set of her jaw, the way her fingers dug into her own arms. “You knew where to find me.” “And you knew I wouldn’t.” The words came out sharper than she intended, raw at the edges. She turned away, stalking toward the kitchenette, the clatter of her boots against the floorboards too loud in the sudden silence. “Tea?” “Please.” She filled the kettle with more force than necessary, the water sloshing against the sides. The flat was too small for this. Too small for the way her pulse jumped when he was near, for the way her skin remembered the press of his hands, the
weight
of his body against hers. She set two chipped mugs on the counter, the clink of ceramic the only sound between them. Lucien leaned against the counter, watching her. “You’ve been busy.” “Deli
very
shifts at the Golden Empress don’t exactly leave time for social calls.” She didn’t look at him, focusing instead on the steam curling from the kettle’s spout. “But I’m sure you already knew that.” “Yu-Fei sends her regards.” Rory’s hands stilled. “You’ve been talking to *her*?” “She’s a useful contact.” His voice was smooth,
unreadable
. “Unlike some people.” She whirled on him, the kettle forgotten. “Oh, *fuck* you, Lucien. You don’t get to waltz in here after six months and act like I’m the one who owes you explanations.” His expression didn’t change, but something
flickered
in his black eye, a shadow passing over the void. “You’re right.” The admission startled her into silence. The kettle whistled, shrill and insistent, and she turned back to it, pouring the water with hands that weren’t quite steady. The scent of Earl Grey filled the air, too domestic, too normal for the storm brewing between them. Lucien reached for the mug she slid toward him, their fingers brushing. A spark. A memory. His touch had always been like that—electric, dangerous. She pulled her hand back like she’d
been burned
. “Why are you here?” she asked again, quieter this time. He took a slow sip of tea, watching her over the rim of the mug. “I need your help.” Rory let out a humorless laugh. “Of course you do.” “It’s not like that.” “Then what’s it like, Lucien?” She set her own mug down with a sharp *clink*. “Because last I checked, you made it *
very
* clear you didn’t need me. Or anyone.” His jaw tightened. “Things have changed.” “People don’t change.” “No?” His voice dropped, rougher now. “Then why did you?” The question hit like a punch to the gut. She turned away, gripping the edge of the counter until her knuckles ached. “You don’t get to ask me that.” “Why not?” He set his mug down, the sound too loud in the sudden stillness. “You left. You *ran*. And you didn’t look back.” “I had my reasons.” “And I didn’t get to hear them.” She whirled on him, her voice rising. “Because you *wouldn’t listen*! You were too busy playing the untouchable fixer, too busy pretending you didn’t give a damn about anything but your precious deals and your *secrets*!” Lucien’s eyes flashed, amber and black, and for a second, she saw the demon in him—the one he kept leashed, the one that made her blood run hot and her pulse stutter. “And you were too busy lying to yourself.” The words hung between them, heavy and suffocating. Rory’s chest heaved, her breath coming too fast. She wanted to scream. She wanted to hit him. She wanted to kiss him, to erase the last six months with the press of her mouth against his, to pretend none of it had ever happened. But she didn’t. Instead, she exhaled, slow and controlled, and met his gaze. “What do you need, Lucien?” He studied her for a long moment, as if weighing his words. Then, quietly: “There’s a job. A dangerous one. And I can’t do it without you.” Rory’s laugh
was bitter
. “You’ve managed just fine without me so far.” “This is different.” He stepped closer, close enough that she could see the flecks of gold in his amber eye, close enough that she could feel the heat of him, the pull of him. “It’s *you*, Laila. It’s always been you.” The words wrapped around her, familiar and foreign all at once. She should have pushed him away. Should have told him to leave, to never come back. But she didn’t. Because some wounds didn’t heal. Some fires didn’t burn out. And some lies—no matter how
carefully
crafted—couldn’t stand against the truth.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
0.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
2
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"he said, and the sound of it—her old alias, the one she’d shed like a second skin—sent a jolt through her [like]"
72.9973%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1111
totalAiIsmAdverbs
3
found
0
adverb
"carefully"
count
1
1
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
2
adverb
"very"
count
1
highlights
0
"carefully"
1
"slightly"
2
"very"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
54.9955%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1111
totalAiIsms
5
found
0
word
"flickered"
count
1
1
word
"flicked"
count
1
2
word
"glinting"
count
1
3
word
"unreadable"
count
1
4
word
"weight"
count
1
highlights
0
"flickered"
1
"flicked"
2
"glinting"
3
"unreadable"
4
"weight"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"sent a shiver through"
count
1
highlights
0
"sent a jolt through"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
1
narrationSentences
70
matches
0
"was bitter"
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
70
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
100
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
46
mean
23.91
std
17.74
cv
0.742
sampleLengths
0
68
1
61
2
22
3
15
4
18
5
51
6
25
7
40
8
31
9
30
10
39
11
1
12
69
13
10
14
35
15
4
16
8
17
12
18
31
19
19
20
45
21
33
22
10
23
19
24
10
25
4
26
30
27
6
28
3
29
10
30
29
31
24
32
4
33
7
34
36
35
40
36
52
37
3
38
15
39
27
40
12
41
41
42
27
43
3
44
10
45
11
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
2
totalSentences
70
matches
0
"was amused"
1
"been burned"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
133
matches
(empty)
95.6509%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
845
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
38
adverbRatio
0.04497041420118343
lyAdverbCount
6
lyAdverbRatio
0.007100591715976331
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
100
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
100
mean
11
std
8.57
cv
0.779
sampleLengths
0
40
1
28
2
9
3
15
4
6
5
7
6
24
7
22
8
8
9
7
10
12
11
6
12
19
13
25
14
4
15
3
16
21
17
2
18
2
19
21
20
12
21
7
22
25
23
6
24
24
25
6
26
17
27
21
28
1
29
1
30
15
31
7
32
30
33
17
34
7
35
3
36
28
37
7
38
4
39
3
40
5
41
9
42
3
43
7
44
24
45
17
46
2
47
6
48
21
49
18
53.0000%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
7
diversityRatio
0.36
totalSentences
100
uniqueOpeners
36
50.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
2
fancyCount
1
fancyTags
0
"he said, and the sound of it—her old alias, the one she’d shed like a second skin—sent a jolt through her (say, shed like send)"
83.9202%