Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQGKZAWRKJVPQ3E3N5A27B

Run Details

Duration:
8.4s
Cost:
$0.000566
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The battered black cab pulled up outside the shadowed entrance of the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden. Detective Harlow Quinn stepped out, her shoulders squared, eyes sharp beneath a braid of salt-and-pepper close-cropped hair. The damp night air clung to her skin as she studied the scene with military precision, her worn leather watch glinting faintly under the haze of streetlights. Behind her, Sergeant Ellis fidgeted with a trembling hand, gesturing toward the glowing boundary of yellow police tape. “It’s definitely here, Harlow. Same spot, right beneath the old market. Not a fragment of debris out of place, no sign of forced entry. Just... this.” He nodded toward the slick, dark doorway that yawned into darkness, casting shadows like spilled ink. Harlow’s gaze lingered on the entrance, muscles tense. “Nothing looks disturbed from the outside,” she said, voice measured, eyes narrowing. “No signs of a scuffle, no discarded items. It’s like someone just vanished into the ground.” Ellis hesitated, scratching his head. “We found her empty. No body, no sign she was even here.” Harlow flexed her fingers around the handle of her notebook, then looked past the police tape. The air pulsated with that faint, unnatural hum she could never quite explain — the kind that made her skin crawl. She had learned to trust her instincts, especially when they whispered that something was wrong. “Tell me again,” she said, voice low but steady. “What details do we have?” Ellis pulled out his phone, showing her the photo of the victim—a woman in her late twenties, dressed in a neat blazer and jeans, lying face down on the cracked concrete floor, eyes wide open in shock. No visible trauma, no signs of a struggle. Harlow crouched beside the body, noting the position, the slight sheen on her fingertips. The woman’s face was turned toward the ground, but her eyes stared upward, unblinking. She made an unsettling, unnatural impression—more like a doll than a person. “Her name’s Lena Moore,” Ellis added quietly. “Local artist, worked the markets during the day, lived just a few blocks away.” Harlow stood, scanning the area again, sensing that the details didn’t quite fit together. The corpse was pristine, — no debris on her clothes, no signs of dirt or blood—yet she had clearly fallen or been placed here. The ground beneath her was smooth, almost polished in some spots, as if the surface had been deliberately altered. She turned her gaze toward the dark opening of the station’s entrance, then to the nearby alley where faint, cryptic symbols were etched into the bricks—symbols she recognized from her occult research, remnants of underground dealings or something darker. “Anyone see her go inside?” she asked. Ellis shook his head, frowning. “No witnesses, no CCTV footage that shows anyone approaching her here.” Harlow’s eyes flicked to a small, smoking object near Lena’s outstretched hand—a bone token, definitely a part of the underground market’s strange barter system. She knelt again, mind racing. Everything about this was off. Then she saw it—the faint shimmer on the ground, barely perceptible in the flickering lamplight. Her eyes traced a circular pattern just centimeters from Lena’s body, as if some invisible boundary had been touched or crossed. She stepped back, her sharp jaw tightening. “This isn’t just a fall,” she murmured. “Something’s influencing the scene.” “Maybe she was pushed,” Ellis suggested, voice tentative. Harlow shook her head. “No. Look closer.” Her gaze moved to Lena’s fingers. No signs of a struggle—no torn fabric, no scrapes—yet her hand rested near that bone token. A clue, perhaps, or a distraction. She moved her eyes to the nearby symbols, then to a faint tremor in the air—a whisper of something unnatural, almost like a ripple in a quiet pond. Her hand instinctively went to her side, where her signature detective tool, the Veil Compass, rested inside her coat pocket—an odd, small brass instrument with face etched in sigils, crafted by a Shade artisan. She hesitated briefly, then pulled it out and held it aloft. The needle twitched erratically, then steadied, pointing unwaveringly toward the dark opening beyond the boundary. The supernatural energy nearby was unmistakable. “Ellis,” she said softly, “we’re dealing with something more than a simple fall. This isn’t just environment. It’s a portal—probably linked to the Veil Market, or whatever’s beneath the surface.” His eyes widened. “You think she was taken?” “Or she went somewhere she shouldn’t have.” Harlow's tone carried the weight of someone who’d hunted shadows for nearly two decades. “We’re not just looking at a crime scene—this is a crossroads. And we're going to need more than just the usual forensics.” She crouched again, eyeing Lena’s still, unblinking face. Her gaze drifted to the etched symbols on the bricks, then to the bone token, the faint glow of supernatural energy rippling out from the opening. Her jaw tightened. “Keep everyone back,” she ordered. “We’re getting a specialist down here. And I want that compass with me. If it points toward something supernatural, we follow it. No matter what.” Ellis nodded, already dialing on his radio, but Harlow’s attention was fixed on the dark opening, her mind racing through what she knew—for now, the scene refused to give up its secrets. Because the evidence didn’t add up, and someone or something was waiting in the shadows, unseen but felt. And this case was only just beginning to tear open the veil hiding something far darker than a simple disappearance.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
18.18% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Ellis added quietly [quietly]"
1"she said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.55
leniency1
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.182
89.12% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount919
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"deliberately"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"deliberately"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
29.27% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount919
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"glinting"
count1
1
word"measured"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"pristine"
count1
4
word"etched"
count3
5
word"flicked"
count1
6
word"racing"
count2
7
word"traced"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"carried the weight"
count1
highlights
0"glinting"
1"measured"
2"scanning"
3"pristine"
4"etched"
5"flicked"
6"racing"
7"traced"
8"whisper"
9"carried the weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences51
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences51
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences60
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords908
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
85.81% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount701
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.28
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Camden1
Harlow9
Quinn1
Sergeant1
Ellis7
Lena4
Veil1
Compass1
Shade1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Sergeant"
3"Ellis"
4"Lena"
5"Veil"
6"Compass"
places(empty)
globalScore0.858
windowScore1
84.21% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences38
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite fit together"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount908
matches(empty)
55.56% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences60
matches
0"whispered that something"
1"sensing that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean33.63
std16.99
cv0.505
sampleLengths
061
160
236
317
452
514
645
740
821
957
1039
117
1216
1334
1436
1518
168
1735
1873
1921
2030
218
2243
2337
2430
2532
2638
77.74% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences51
matches
0"been placed"
1"were etched"
2"been touched"
3"was fixed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs117
matches
0"was waiting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences60
ratio0.183
matches
0"The air pulsated with that faint, unnatural hum she could never quite explain — the kind that made her skin crawl."
1"Ellis pulled out his phone, showing her the photo of the victim—a woman in her late twenties, dressed in a neat blazer and jeans, lying face down on the cracked concrete floor, eyes wide open in shock."
2"She made an unsettling, unnatural impression—more like a doll than a person."
3"The corpse was pristine, — no debris on her clothes, no signs of dirt or blood—yet she had clearly fallen or been placed here."
4"She turned her gaze toward the dark opening of the station’s entrance, then to the nearby alley where faint, cryptic symbols were etched into the bricks—symbols she recognized from her occult research, remnants of underground dealings or something darker."
5"Harlow’s eyes flicked to a small, smoking object near Lena’s outstretched hand—a bone token, definitely a part of the underground market’s strange barter system."
6"Then she saw it—the faint shimmer on the ground, barely perceptible in the flickering lamplight."
7"No signs of a struggle—no torn fabric, no scrapes—yet her hand rested near that bone token."
8"She moved her eyes to the nearby symbols, then to a faint tremor in the air—a whisper of something unnatural, almost like a ripple in a quiet pond."
9"Her hand instinctively went to her side, where her signature detective tool, the Veil Compass, rested inside her coat pocket—an odd, small brass instrument with face etched in sigils, crafted by a Shade artisan."
10"Ellis nodded, already dialing on his radio, but Harlow’s attention was fixed on the dark opening, her mind racing through what she knew—for now, the scene refused to give up its secrets."
84.82% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount713
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"pepper close-cropped hair."
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.05049088359046283
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.019635343618513323
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences60
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences60
mean15.13
std9.63
cv0.636
sampleLengths
017
117
227
318
442
58
612
716
85
912
1016
1121
1215
139
145
1537
168
1714
1814
1912
207
2114
2214
2324
2419
2539
267
275
2811
2924
305
315
3215
3321
347
357
364
378
384
399
4016
416
4228
4334
4411
4515
466
4730
483
495
68.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.45
totalSentences60
uniqueOpeners27
69.44% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences48
matches
0"Then she saw it—the faint"
ratio0.021
70.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences48
matches
0"He nodded toward the slick,"
1"she said, voice measured, eyes"
2"She had learned to trust"
3"she said, voice low but"
4"She made an unsettling, unnatural"
5"She turned her gaze toward"
6"She knelt again, mind racing."
7"Her eyes traced a circular"
8"She stepped back, her sharp"
9"Her gaze moved to Lena’s"
10"She moved her eyes to"
11"Her hand instinctively went to"
12"She hesitated briefly, then pulled"
13"she said softly"
14"His eyes widened."
15"She crouched again, eyeing Lena’s"
16"Her gaze drifted to the"
17"Her jaw tightened."
ratio0.375
22.50% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount42
totalSentences48
matches
0"The battered black cab pulled"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped out,"
2"The damp night air clung"
3"He nodded toward the slick,"
4"Harlow’s gaze lingered on the"
5"she said, voice measured, eyes"
6"Ellis hesitated, scratching his head."
7"Harlow flexed her fingers around"
8"The air pulsated with that"
9"She had learned to trust"
10"she said, voice low but"
11"Ellis pulled out his phone,"
12"Harlow crouched beside the body,"
13"The woman’s face was turned"
14"She made an unsettling, unnatural"
15"Ellis added quietly"
16"Harlow stood, scanning the area"
17"The corpse was pristine, —"
18"The ground beneath her was"
19"She turned her gaze toward"
ratio0.875
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences48
matches
0"Because the evidence didn’t add"
ratio0.021
89.95% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Her eyes traced a circular pattern just centimeters from Lena’s body, as if some invisible boundary had been touched or crossed."
1"Ellis nodded, already dialing on his radio, but Harlow’s attention was fixed on the dark opening, her mind racing through what she knew—for now, the scene refus…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she said, voice measured, eyes narrowing"
1"she said, voice low but steady"
2"Ellis suggested, voice tentative"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Ellis added quietly (add)"
1"she murmured (murmur)"
2"Ellis suggested (suggest)"
3"she ordered (order)"
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.4
74.8311%