| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "The shade leaned close [close]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.1 | |
| 92.67% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1365 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 1.10% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1365 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "tangible" | | 2 | "vibrated" | | 3 | "wavered" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "glinting" | | 6 | "electric" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "gloom" | | 9 | "marble" | | 10 | "flicker" | | 11 | "anticipation" | | 12 | "quivered" | | 13 | "trembled" | | 14 | "unreadable" | | 15 | "whisper" | | 16 | "shimmered" | | 17 | "echo" | | 18 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 96 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 43 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1354 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 70.45% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 55 | | wordCount | 1257 | | uniqueNames | 19 | | maxNameDensity | 1.59 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 2 | | Veil | 3 | | Nyx | 8 | | Aurora | 20 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Pendant | 1 | | Varga | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Dymas | 1 | | Go | 1 | | Isolde | 5 | | Eva | 1 | | London | 1 | | Brendan | 1 | | Jennifer | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Heartstone" | | 4 | "Varga" | | 5 | "Blade" | | 6 | "Isolde" | | 7 | "Eva" | | 8 | "Brendan" | | 9 | "Jennifer" |
| | places | | 0 | "Veil" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Hel" | | 3 | "Earth" | | 4 | "Dymas" | | 5 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.704 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 89.76% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if bending to welcome them" | | 1 | "as if urging her forward" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.739 | | wordCount | 1354 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 84.06% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 24 | | mean | 56.42 | | std | 25.06 | | cv | 0.444 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 120 | | 1 | 60 | | 2 | 73 | | 3 | 68 | | 4 | 66 | | 5 | 75 | | 6 | 69 | | 7 | 74 | | 8 | 79 | | 9 | 74 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 43 | | 12 | 72 | | 13 | 54 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 62 | | 16 | 45 | | 17 | 40 | | 18 | 74 | | 19 | 26 | | 20 | 39 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 70 | | 23 | 22 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 210 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 96 | | ratio | 0.073 | | matches | | 0 | "A low hum vibrated through the ground—part insect chorus, part distant machinery—giving life to this place of excess." | | 1 | "Beyond these vines lay orchards hung with fruits she had only heard of in legends: pears the size of apples, their flesh shimmering opal-white; pomegranates that spilled black seeds like spilled ink; apples wired with copper veins pulsing a faint electric glow." | | 2 | "A chorus of indistinct voices rose from behind the nearest table—chefs, their skin pale and eyes hollow, heaped dishes upon ornate china." | | 3 | "Each soul here—she recognized the empty gaze—had been brought from Earth and bound to cook for an audience of tasteless aristocrats." | | 4 | "They offered excess instead—enough indulgence that you forgot you sought anything else." | | 5 | "She glanced at Nyx, whose violet gaze shone with something that might have been sympathy—or anticipation." | | 6 | "In her mind’s eye she saw Eva’s face—her friend who had plucked her from London’s dark alleys—and the promise she gave to protect the living." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1273 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.02749410840534171 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0054988216810683424 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 96 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 96 | | mean | 14.1 | | std | 6.98 | | cv | 0.495 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 28 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 42 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 28 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 35 | | 42 | 22 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 21 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 48.96% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.34375 | | totalSentences | 96 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 74.91% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere ahead, a distant laughter" | | 1 | "Finally, she spoke:" |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 94.16% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "It pressed down on her" | | 1 | "She brushed a strand of" | | 2 | "They drifted forward first, a" | | 3 | "Their faintly glowing violet eyes" | | 4 | "She stood at the edge" | | 5 | "She fingered the silver moonsilver" | | 6 | "they whispered, voice a breeze" | | 7 | "She flexed the muscles in" | | 8 | "She stepped between two trunks" | | 9 | "She forced her curiosity back" | | 10 | "She had come seeking a" | | 11 | "They broke through the last" | | 12 | "They raised their pitchforks and" | | 13 | "She raised a hand and" | | 14 | "She felt the fabric between" | | 15 | "It called to her like" | | 16 | "They offered excess instead—enough indulgence" | | 17 | "She glanced at Nyx, whose" | | 18 | "It carried a hint of" | | 19 | "She turned to Isolde, who" |
| | ratio | 0.315 | |
| 16.18% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 79 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter paused at the" | | 1 | "The sky above her rippled" | | 2 | "It pressed down on her" | | 3 | "She brushed a strand of" | | 4 | "A low hum vibrated through" | | 5 | "They drifted forward first, a" | | 6 | "Their faintly glowing violet eyes" | | 7 | "Aurora felt its tremor against" | | 8 | "Isolde Varga murmured behind them," | | 9 | "She stood at the edge" | | 10 | "She fingered the silver moonsilver" | | 11 | "Aurora nodded, her fingers curling" | | 12 | "The air smelled of candied" | | 13 | "A faint scent of smoke" | | 14 | "Nyx drifted lower, their form" | | 15 | "A hand extended, pale fingers" | | 16 | "The grapes gave way, dripping" | | 17 | "The shade tasted it, lips" | | 18 | "they whispered, voice a breeze" | | 19 | "She flexed the muscles in" |
| | ratio | 0.888 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 72.60% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "She stood at the edge of the standing stones that marked the boundary, though here they looked more like gnarled older oaks than the great monoliths of Richmond…" | | 1 | "Beyond these vines lay orchards hung with fruits she had only heard of in legends: pears the size of apples, their flesh shimmering opal-white; pomegranates tha…" | | 2 | "She had come seeking a rift point in the Veil, a tear that might lead them toward Hel’s darkest corners." | | 3 | "The pendant pulsed stronger here, as if urging her forward." | | 4 | "Strings of flickering lamps hovered overhead, each flicker revealing another monstrous delicacy: conch shells the size of shields filled with glowing broth, loa…" | | 5 | "In her mind’s eye she saw Eva’s face—her friend who had plucked her from London’s dark alleys—and the promise she gave to protect the living." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde Varga murmured, her voice carrying the hush of falling petals" | | 1 | "Aurora replied, voice low" | | 2 | "the shade asked, voice breathless as wind through reeds" | | 3 | "they said, voice low" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde Varga murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "she spoke (speak)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.533 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |