"he said, and there was a gravity in his voice that made the room feel smaller, more intimate, as if the air itself held its breath [more]"
1
"he said, with that dry, almost affectionate tone he used when he spoke of London’s underbelly as if it were a pet they could train [almost underbelly]"
2
"Rory said, letting him stand there a moment longer, a moment that felt like a test of who had learned the rules of their own game [like]"
3
"he finished softly, the corner of his mouth tilting again in that unsteady, almost imperceptible smile that never failed to draw a flicker of warmth into her chest if she let it [softly, again almost]"
4
"she said, and the word carried a weight that surprised even her—because she’d thought she’d left the habit of listening to his every syllable behind when she’d escaped Cardiff and the shadow of an ex named Evan [even]"
5
"Rory whispered, but there was no accusation in it, only the weary familiarity of someone who’d learned to survive between the cracks of the city’s darker corners [only]"
6
"he said without hesitation, letting the word fall between them with a dull thud that sounded almost like a challenge [almost]"
7
"she replied, though the sting in her voice was less about accusation and more about the ache of a memory she wasn’t certain she wanted to admit still mattered [more still]"
8
"he said, and for a moment his voice dropped to something that sounded almost like confession, a note of weathered honesty that didn’t quite fit the image of the phantoms he navigated in London’s underworld [almost quite]"
9
"she said, her voice softer now, almost a hush, as if she didn’t want to wake the city from its careful sleeping [almost]"
10
"she said at last, because the practical whisper of a plan could anchor them and keep their hearts relatively safe from themselves [relatively]"
11
"he said simply, the syllable heavy with possibility [simply]"
12
"he said, and his tone implied a dare, a promise, a question all at once [once]"
13
"she said, and the decision sounded inevitable, the sort of decision a person makes when the alternative is letting fear decide for them [sort of]"
14
"Lucien said, not as a question but as a challenge that sounded almost personal [almost]"
15
"she admitted, and the words tasted like a confession she hadn’t asked for [like]"
16
"she allowed, not conceding, not denying, merely acknowledging the possibility [merely]"
17
"he said, and the words came out with the quiet certainty of someone who had already mapped every street in the plan but wanted her blessing to walk it again [already again]"
18
"Rory said again, though this time it carried a different weight, a finality that wasn’t surrender but commitment [again]"
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
3966
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
167
adverbRatio
0.04210791729702471
lyAdverbCount
23
lyAdverbRatio
0.005799293998991427
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
175
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
175
mean
28.15
std
14.84
cv
0.527
sampleLengths
0
16
1
38
2
33
3
30
4
18
5
22
6
17
7
18
8
31
9
37
10
17
11
24
12
25
13
6
14
26
15
26
16
29
17
32
18
26
19
9
20
25
21
24
22
31
23
7
24
27
25
28
26
35
27
11
28
45
29
26
30
34
31
20
32
17
33
25
34
40
35
39
36
33
37
15
38
4
39
4
40
25
41
27
42
28
43
25
44
31
45
22
46
53
47
15
48
28
49
23
38.0000%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
21
diversityRatio
0.2342857142857143
totalSentences
175
uniqueOpeners
41
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
30
fancyCount
24
fancyTags
0
"he said, the French accent in his voice smoothing out the edges of the corridor (say, smooth)"
1
"she said, and the name came out without heat, a measured syllable that left the door’s frame between them like a border to be negotiated (say, come out leave like be negotiated)"
2
"he said, and there was a gravity in his voice that made the room feel smaller, more intimate, as if the air itself held its breath (say, be make hold)"
3
"he said, with that dry, almost affectionate tone he used when he spoke of London’s underbelly as if it were a pet they could train (say, use speak be underbelly be train)"
4
"Rory said, letting him stand there a moment longer, a moment that felt like a test of who had learned the rules of their own game (say, let stand feel like learn)"
5
"he finished softly, the corner of his mouth tilting again in that unsteady, almost imperceptible smile that never failed to draw a flicker of warmth into her chest if she let it (finish softly, tilt again does not never fail draw let)"
6
"she said, and the word carried a weight that surprised even her—because she’d thought she’d left the habit of listening to his every syllable behind when she’d escaped Cardiff and the shadow of an ex named Evan (say, carry surprise even think leave escape name)"
7
"he said, his tone now crisp, the professional mask back in place (say, back in)"
8
"Rory whispered, but there was no accusation in it, only the weary familiarity of someone who’d learned to survive between the cracks of the city’s darker corners (whisper, does not be no learn survive)"
9
"he said without hesitation, letting the word fall between them with a dull thud that sounded almost like a challenge (say let almost like)"
10
"she replied, though the sting in her voice was less about accusation and more about the ache of a memory she wasn’t certain she wanted to admit still mattered (reply, be does be not want still matter)"
11
"he said, and for a moment his voice dropped to something that sounded almost like confession, a note of weathered honesty that didn’t quite fit the image of the phantoms he navigated in London’s underworld (say, drop almost like does not quite fit navigate)"
12
"she said, her voice softer now, almost a hush, as if she didn’t want to wake the city from its careful sleeping (say, does not want wake)"
13
"he said, and there was a weight in that line, a willingness to sink into whatever darkness came with the truth (say, be sink come)"
14
"she said at last, because the practical whisper of a plan could anchor them and keep their hearts relatively safe from themselves (say anchor keep)"
15
"he said simply, the syllable heavy with possibility (say simply)"
16
"she admitted, her voice a touch rough, but steady (admit, voice)"
17
"he said, and his tone implied a dare, a promise, a question all at once (say, imply)"
18
"she said, and the decision sounded inevitable, the sort of decision a person makes when the alternative is letting fear decide for them (say, sound sort of decision make let decide)"
19
"Lucien said, not as a question but as a challenge that sounded almost personal (say, sound almost)"