Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQGMHVE0WZ7PGXY7DHAX6B

Run Details

Duration:
1m 12s
Cost:
$0.003762
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The door opened with a soft sigh that pushed back a breath of curry and rain. Rory stood in the narrow frame of Eva’s flat, one hip braced against the doorjamb, a stack of receipts etched through the glow of a lamp that did little more than cast halos on the wall of books. Ptolemy, the tabby cat who had claimed the place the way rain claims a street, flicked his tail and vanished into the labyrinth of scrolls and memory between the couch and the window. The room smelled of turmeric, ink, and old paper; a scent-memory of all the nights she’d spent here chasing dragons that wore no wings but wore danger like a perfume. The door had three deadbolts on it, but none of them were what kept the chill at bay. The man who stepped into the glow did more to close the space between danger and quiet than any lock could’ve managed. Lucien Moreau, a silhouette of tailored charcoal and intention, filled the doorway with an almost impossible stillness. His platinum hair was slicked back, a line of clean arrogance that matched the line of his jaw. One amber eye caught the lamp’s glare, the other a deep, stubborn black, as if the world had made a half-smile and whispered, trust me, you’ll want to watch this one. He wore a suit so perfectly cut it looked like a second skin; the ivory-handled cane leaned against his leg, the tip catching a glimmer of lamplight, a blade sheathing itself in the memory of the room. “Bonsoir, Rory,” he said, the French accent in his voice smoothing out the edges of the corridor. It was the kind of greeting that could slide along a surface and take a person’s breath away if they allowed themselves to listen. He looked at her with that cool, later-of-the-night gaze he always carried—the gaze that asked, What do you want to believe about what’s coming next? Rory didn’t lean into the compliment. She crossed her arms, a habit she used to keep the softer edges of herself hidden behind the practical calm she wore like a well-fitted coat. Her blue eyes—bright, almost electric—took him in from head to toe, the way a figure in a case study might study a specimen before the exam. Her hair, straight and black as a night that had learned to bite, hung just at her shoulders, catching a streetlamp’s halo on the edge of a stray curl. The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist caught the lamplight, a pale silver seam that was as much a map of where she’d come from as any tattoo could pretend to be. “Lucien,” she said, and the name came out without heat, a measured syllable that left the door’s frame between them like a border to be negotiated. “You’re late to the party you didn’t RSVP to.” The corner of his mouth twitched, almost—a smile that knew all the doors that could be opened and all the ones that should stay shut. He stepped inside and let the door close with a soft, determined click that settled over the room like a shield lowering into place. “I didn’t come to chitchat,” he said, and there was a gravity in his voice that made the room feel smaller, more intimate, as if the air itself held its breath. “And you know I never come unarmed.” He gestured with the cane, though the blade was unseen, tucked away in the elegant, innocuous wood like a rumor kept in a yarn of quiet threads. Rory watched him move with a creature’s careful awareness; every motion was purposeful, the way a panther’s spine kept its grace even when it was about to spring. For a moment, the old ache—whatever had kept them apart—throbbed behind her ribs and then settled into a stubborn knot she could measure, like the tightness of a knot in a rope she’d used before. “Is it about a job?” she asked, though she knew better. The word hung between them—the old truth that whenever Lucien appeared out of the blue with his language of favors and favors’ prices, it meant something was breaking and needed to be fixed by the two of them, or else someone else would break worse. Lucien’s eyes shifted to the cat, to Ptolemy’s tail that flicked in a corner of the room as if it were a metronome for everything else. “A rogue in the east end of your kingdom,” he said, with that dry, almost affectionate tone he used when he spoke of London’s underbelly as if it were a pet they could train. “Something unsettled, something dangerous. And you—quietly efficient Rory—are the only person I trust to sort what refuses to behave itself.” The word “your kingdom” landed with a strange weight because Rory knew exactly what world he meant. She’d learned to navigate the shade between law and something older, something supernatural that London wore like a threadbare scarf at the edge of winter. She’d learned to deliver parcels for Yu-Fei Cheung’s Golden Empress restaurant by day, to move with a different edge by night, when the city whispered of deals that could undo a person in all the ways a bad decision could. “And you,” Rory said, letting him stand there a moment longer, a moment that felt like a test of who had learned the rules of their own game, “you show up unannounced with a blade tucked away in your—” “Cane,” he finished softly, the corner of his mouth tilting again in that unsteady, almost imperceptible smile that never failed to draw a flicker of warmth into her chest if she let it. “In case you needed a reminder that you don’t get to forget what I am.” She did not forget. Not for a second. Not the way his voice had once wrapped around her and carried her through nights that felt like they could explode with a single misstep. They had shared a conversation that had turned into something her friends would call a dangerous risk to their hearts—an economy of longing traded for danger’s currency. The memory rose and bit down hard enough to make her breath hitch, to make her eyes slip on him for just a heartbeat longer than she intended. “What are you offering in exchange?” she asked, though she knew the answer wasn’t an offer so much as a demand: cooperation, or a reckoning. Her hands learned the edge of the desk’s wood, as if touch could steady the tremor she felt in her spine at being so close to him again after so long. Lucien took a measured step forward, the cane angled away from him as if it perched on the edge of a secret. He studied her, not with the wary interest of a hunter but with the quiet respect of someone who understood the geometry of her mind—the way she could map a street in a single breath, the way she’d learned to read a situation and pull the lever that would tilt it toward safety. His voice softened, almost incongruously tender, and it unnerved her more effectively than a blade. “You still keep your desk tall and your shadows taller. Your lists are precise, and your tolerance for nonsense is, I’m told, nonexistent. I need that on this.” The room tightened, the books leaning in to listen, as if the shelves themselves were part of the scene, counting breaths with them. Rory’s gaze flicked to a stack of scrolls, the handwriting on one of them crammed in neat columns as if the author had written something that could not be spoken aloud without inviting disaster. She noted the way dust rose from the pages when she waved a hand, the way the lamp threw a halo on Lucien’s shoulder blades. “Talk,” she said, and the word carried a weight that surprised even her—because she’d thought she’d left the habit of listening to his every syllable behind when she’d escaped Cardiff and the shadow of an ex named Evan. But the truth was that even after all this time, even after London had tried to swallow her whole, there were places where his voice could pull her back into the current and make her forget to surface for air. He stepped closer. The space between them felt both dangerous and deliberate, a corridor the two of them might walk to find something they didn’t want to admit they were looking for. “There’s a disturbance at the periphery,” he said, his tone now crisp, the professional mask back in place. “A demon of sorts, skirting the edges of your street. Nothing that cannot be contained—with the right leverage and the right information. I have part of it. You have the other, and together we can finish the piece to keep people from bleeding in the gaps.” “Always with the threat,” Rory whispered, but there was no accusation in it, only the weary familiarity of someone who’d learned to survive between the cracks of the city’s darker corners. “And what’s the price this time?” “Trust,” he said without hesitation, letting the word fall between them with a dull thud that sounded almost like a challenge. “Your trust, Rory. Not the city’s, not the families’, not the pulse of a demon you’ve learned to scent when it gets hungry. Yours.” She measured his tone as if she were weighing a blade in a hand that knew exactly where to place it. “Trust is a currency you squandered long before you learned to deal cautiously with it,” she replied, though the sting in her voice was less about accusation and more about the ache of a memory she wasn’t certain she wanted to admit still mattered. “If you want my cooperation, you’ll have to prove you’ve earned it.” Lucien’s face remained inscrutable, though the amber and black in his eyes flickered with a color she hadn’t expected—the flash of something almost tender, almost regretful, perhaps. He lowered the cane and let his fingers brush the wood with a reverent caution, the act more intimate than any handshake could ever be. “I am not asking you to trust me blindly,” he said, and for a moment his voice dropped to something that sounded almost like confession, a note of weathered honesty that didn’t quite fit the image of the phantoms he navigated in London’s underworld. “I’m asking you to see me again, Rory. To acknowledge the old terms we set and decide if we still want them to hold us in place—or to let them fall apart and build something else from the ashes.” The words struck her with a surprising gentleness and a surprising fear. The old terms hadn’t held them in place so much as they had held them apart from the rest of the world—the kind of apart they could hide in, a safe distance that felt more dangerous for being safer than the rest of London’s temptations. She looked past him to the room behind him where the cat watched with the patient, indifferent eyes cats wear when they’re about to step into your life and knock over your carefully arranged galaxy of fragile things. “What do you want from me, Lucien?” she asked, letting the name sit between them, a small, unassuming bridge. “A map to a demon’s lair? Or a confession that you missed me as much as I missed you when you disappeared into the smoke?” He gave a small, almost rueful smile, the sort of expression that looked like it belonged to someone else’s memory of him. “I want both. And I want neither. I want what we used to pretend we could have without burning everything down around us.” That was when Rory felt it—the old tremor in her chest that she’d learned to mute with logic and lists. It came from somewhere deep inside, a place where vows and promises had once glittered with possibility and then dulled into the reality of necessity. The quiet between them grew heavy with it, the room somehow closer, the lamp’s light softening into something like a halo around their heads. “Say we do this,” she said, her voice softer now, almost a hush, as if she didn’t want to wake the city from its careful sleeping. “What then? After the demon thing, after you’ve walked away or I have? We’re survivors, not painters. We don’t get to create brushes that aren’t already worn to thin edges.” Her hesitance wasn’t a lack of courage. It was the truth she knew too well: the moment of vulnerability between them threatened to upend the balance she’d learned to keep between predatory risk and careful calculation. The memory of a kiss that had almost been theirs, the taste of a night that felt like forever in a single breath, haunted her in the soft lamp-light, leaning into the quiet as if to whisper that it hadn’t gone anywhere, not really. Lucien’s eyes softened, just a fraction. He took a step closer, careful not to invade her space, and the cane’s tip tapped the floor with a soft, patient sound, a metronome for the negotiation they found themselves in once more. “Then we do not pretend,” he said, and there was a weight in that line, a willingness to sink into whatever darkness came with the truth. “We do not pretend we are not who we are to one another. You do not pretend you cannot feel the weight of what we could be, if only we allowed ourselves to touch it again.” The room held its breath, the way a city holds its breath before a storm that might burn or save depending on how the rain fell. Rory’s pulse steadied, then accelerated in a way she knew he could feel in the air between them, in the way his own breath shortened just a fraction as if he too remembered a moment when they stood closer than this, in a hallway or on a rooftop, with the night listening to them like a living audience. “Let’s hear the plan,” she said at last, because the practical whisper of a plan could anchor them and keep their hearts relatively safe from themselves. “Details first, then decisions that won’t ruin everything we’ve built since Cardiff, since that night you said you were leaving and I said I’d figure it out without you.” Lucien gave a small nod, the old businesslike efficiency returning to his posture. “The demon is skittish, a creature of misdirection: illusions, blurs of night and sound that make people see what isn’t there and fear what might be real. It’s drawing power from your neighborhood—the places you walk to deliver noodles for the Golden Empress, the back alleys behind Silas’ bar, the shadows that are never truly dark there because they’re crowded with rumors.” He paused, letting the words settle, letting the clinical tone soften around the edges with something more human. “We start with the least risky source—the entity’s anchor, the thing it uses to anchor its presence in London. A memory thought, a fear, a scent. Your notes and my networks will map the rest.” Rory watched him, the edge of his cane catching the light again, the ivory gleaming with the promise of something sharp and necessary. He spoke of maps and anchors and networks, and she could hear the old, dangerous music in his voice—the language of lovers who know how to read the city as if it were a lover itself, a thing that can bruise and heal in equal measure. A moment stretched. Ptolemy reappeared, tail high, head turned toward them with a cat’s bristling curiosity, as if to sniff the tension between two humans who had survived by learning to read each other’s silences. The cat hissed, not at either of them, but at a memory of dust motes swirling in a beam of light—an accidental audience to a history that refused to stay quiet. “You want to know what I’m ready to risk?” Rory asked, almost too softly, the question hovering near the edge of something more intimate than a partnership. “You want the truth that I can’t pretend to keep hidden just to preserve a fragile peace? You want to be in my life again, not as a problem in need of a solution but as a person who still matters even when the night is loud and the city thinks it’s invincible.” Lucien’s gaze did not waver. The moment hung, like a pendulum on the verge of swinging too far in a direction they might not recover from. He spoke with a quiet honesty that surprised her, the words moving with a strange tenderness that made the old ache bloom again, not like a wound but like a memory of warmth in a world that worshiped cold logic. “Yes,” he said simply, the syllable heavy with possibility. “Yes, you still matter. Yes, I want to fix the part I broke. And yes, I’m asking you to risk it with me again. Not the city’s risk, not the city’s fate, but ours.” Her breath came out in a shallow sigh, the air in the room thinning to something almost painful in its clarity. The truth of it sparked a small, genuine tremor in her—an echo of hearts that had beat in tempo once—and she let herself meet his eyes, the courage she’d spent years building rising to the surface like a dawn lighthouse. “I haven’t forgotten what we almost were,” she admitted, her voice a touch rough, but steady. “I haven’t forgiven the disappearing act you ran when I needed you most. But I’m not afraid of you, Lucien. Not anymore. If we’re doing this, we do it careful. We do it with eyes open and hands ready to pull back if the bargain begins to bleed again.” The room seemed to lean with relief, as if the walls themselves were exhaling after a long hold. Lucien stepped closer, not nearly close enough to be intimate but close enough that the proximity pressed heat into the space between them—that electric, dangerous warmth of a kiss avoided for too long. His voice lowered, velvet and weathered, as if the words were meant every night in every room of every place they might have met. “Then there is no more pretending,” he said, and his tone implied a dare, a promise, a question all at once. “We work. We breathe. We don’t let the fear of what came before outsurf what we can still be. If we do this right, we can keep the city safe and ourselves whole.” Rory let a slow breath out, the kind of breath that cleared the fog from a street before a storm. Her gaze dropped to his mouth for a fraction of a second—just long enough to acknowledge the old spark, the heat that had flared and cooled, flared again, until it burned at a level she could still pretend to control with a rational thought. She lifted her eyes to his again, and in them she found something that felt almost like relief, a relief she hadn’t allowed herself to admit since the night she had walked away from Cardiff and never looked back. “Then we start now,” she said, and the decision sounded inevitable, the sort of decision a person makes when the alternative is letting fear decide for them. She stepped away from the door, away from the frame that had kept them both in safe, careful distance from the world, and moved toward the center of the room, where the map of their shared danger lay crisp on the table, along with her own notes that she had almost memorized by heart. Lucien followed, his cane tapping once on the wooden floor, a quiet rhythm that steadied the pulse she could feel thrumming in her wrists. He settled into a chair with the ease of someone who had learned to appear unthreatening even when danger hovered just behind the curtain. His suit’s fabric rustled a little as he leaned the cane against the chair’s leg, the blade safely concealed, the promise of sharpness still implied. The cat, Ptolemy, jumped onto the table with a soft clack of claws against wood, nudging a stack of papers with a curious, almost disdainful interest as though to remind them that life—even a life saturated with danger and longing and old debts—still belonged to the ordinary: to cats and to the way a lamp glows and throws halos on old books and new decisions. Rory placed her own bag of notes on the table beside Lucien’s own prints of leaks and lies they had learned to separate from truth, but she did not sit. She stood at the edge of the table, arms still crossed, and watched him map their plan with a seriousness that fit the gravity of the city’s night air. The demon’s presence would not be a simple thing to eradicate, not when it drew breath from the lives of people they cared about, not when it fed on the very dissonance between who they were when they were alone and who they were when they stood together against the dark. The moment stretched into long minutes in the quiet, each second a careful measurement of risk and reward. Somewhere in the city below, a curry house steamed, its windows fogged with heat, and the voices of strangers rose in a chorus Rory could almost hear while she watched the man who had once been her fiercest competitor in the game she loved—who had once taught her how to play the long game—speak in the low, precise language of people who know the streets better than the morning sun. “Tell me your memory,” Lucien said, not as a question but as a challenge that sounded almost personal. “Tell me what it felt like to stand at Cardiff’s river mist and realize you’d chosen the wrong river to drown your fears in. Tell me what it felt like to realize you were still standing when I thought I’d drown you in the tide.” Her breath hitched, but she willed it to steady. Memories like that could unmake a person. They could pull a thread and watch everything unravel—her future, his, the fragile peace she’d managed to clutch to herself since leaving Cardiff behind. She would not surrender the night’s careful composition to the pull of a moment’s warmth again. Not unless the moment promised something stronger than the past. “I remember the night you left more than the night you stayed,” she admitted, and the words tasted like a confession she hadn’t asked for. “I remember how the rain hit the windows of the flat we shared, how your voice sounded in the hallway, and how I believed you could walk back through that door and make it all right again. But you didn’t. You turned the key and you didn’t come back.” The room stilled. Ptolemy’s tail lashed once, twice, as if signaling that the correct answer might be a delicate thing that could still be salvaged if tended with care. Lucien’s eyes softened, and in them Rory found a shared ache—a memory of a time when trust hadn’t needed to be earned, or at least when it hadn’t required a ledger of successes and failures to prove its value. “We’ve both changed,” he said, quiet as a whisper in a cellar. “But we’re still in the same game, Rory. And if you’ll play with me again, we might just win.” Her lips curled into a small, stubborn line. “We might,” she allowed, not conceding, not denying, merely acknowledging the possibility. She moved closer to the map and the notes, lifting one page with careful hands, tracing a line with a fingertip as if she could draw safety into the room with her touch. The old crescent scar on her wrist caught the lamplight again and glinted briefly, a reminder of every time she had chosen to stand her ground when the world tried to push her aside. “Where do we start?” she asked, her voice a blend of fierceness and wonder, a cocktail she wore with practiced ease as if it were simply another accessory she kept at the ready in her bag of clever tricks. Lucien leaned forward, his elbows on his knees, eyes never leaving hers. “We start in your neighborhood,” he said, and the words came out with the quiet certainty of someone who had already mapped every street in the plan but wanted her blessing to walk it again. “We walk the edges of your world and watch the echoes the demon leaves behind. We listen to the lies the city tells about itself and we find the truth it’s trying not to admit. And if we survive it—if we survive it together—we can move past what happened and decide what the future will hold for us.” She met his gaze, felt the old pull whisper behind her ribs again, the same pull that had drawn them into danger and something like love all at once. She did not answer with a kiss or a pledge or a vow. She answered with a nod, slow, deliberate, the sign that she accepted his plan and the chance it held, that they could walk back into the same rooms and the same streets without letting the past dictate the rhythm of their lives. Ptolemy rubbed against Rory’s shin, a warm, steady pressure that felt almost ceremonial, a cat’s way of blessing a fragile alliance formed in a moment of vulnerability and hope. The lamp above them hummed softly, the glow throwing amber halos on the two of them as if the city itself held its breath in anticipation of what they would do next. “Then we begin now,” Rory said again, though this time it carried a different weight, a finality that wasn’t surrender but commitment. “We begin in Brick Lane, where the curry steam does more work than the paperwork ever could. We begin with the people who live there who always know more than they’re supposed to, and we begin with the memory that we still have a chance to be more than the parts we played in the past.” Lucien nodded, his expression that rare blend of resolve and tenderness she’d learned to fear and crave in equal measure. He didn’t say more, not yet. He stood and lifted the cane, not as a weapon but as a symbol—a promise that danger would be faced but would not own them, that they could steer their world back toward something that looked a little more like trust, a little more like safe, fragile hope. The night outside pressed in, a living thing pressing at the windows as if London itself wished to hear their vow. The city’s noise seeped through the walls—the distant clatter of a train, the muffled thud of footsteps on the brick, the occasional shout from the street below—but inside Eva’s Flat, it was as if the walls grew thicker, the room more intimate, the pages more patient, waiting for the two of them to decide whether they would walk away again or walk toward something that might still be theirs if they just dared to take the leap. And for a heartbeat, Rory allowed herself to imagine the possibility. Not a fairy tale, not a naive dream, but a real choice—a decision to face the future together, possibly at the edge of something that could burn them both to ash or, mercifully, blaze them into something new. The scent of old paper and spice wrapped around them like a soft cloak, and she felt the truth settle in with the same quiet inevitability with which the tide finds a shore: they were in this again, and they were not letting go. The cat, Ptolemy, rolled onto her back on the table, eyes half-lidded with contentment, a small, almost satisfied purr rumbling up from his chest as if to say: If you’re choosing to risk it, we’ll watch and tell you if you two ruin it. In that simple, merciless mercy, Rory found the quiet she needed to say the most dangerous word of all: yes. Yes to the risk. Yes to the plan. Yes to the possibility that, this time, they might survive what came next not as enemies or even as lovers in a reckless moment, but as partners who could hold the line between darkness and dawn. And if dawn came, she thought, watching the way his hands moved with careful, practiced precision as he spread the map across the table, she would be ready to meet it with him, together. If dawn never came, if the night swallowed everything they had hoped to build, she would still stand with him at the edge of the city and watch, because some corners of a life are worth guarding with everything you’ve got—even if, in guarding them, you lose even more than you have already risked. They started talking in measured whispers, the words not erasing the old ache but giving shape to a new possibility—a possibility that was not promise but a plan, not romance without risk but romance that came with a road map, not forward to a future merely imagined but forward to a future they could actually walk, step by careful step, under a London that could still surprise them, and perhaps forgive them, if they dared to try again together.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags30
adverbTagCount19
adverbTags
0"he said, and there was a gravity in his voice that made the room feel smaller, more intimate, as if the air itself held its breath [more]"
1"he said, with that dry, almost affectionate tone he used when he spoke of London’s underbelly as if it were a pet they could train [almost underbelly]"
2"Rory said, letting him stand there a moment longer, a moment that felt like a test of who had learned the rules of their own game [like]"
3"he finished softly, the corner of his mouth tilting again in that unsteady, almost imperceptible smile that never failed to draw a flicker of warmth into her chest if she let it [softly, again almost]"
4"she said, and the word carried a weight that surprised even her—because she’d thought she’d left the habit of listening to his every syllable behind when she’d escaped Cardiff and the shadow of an ex named Evan [even]"
5"Rory whispered, but there was no accusation in it, only the weary familiarity of someone who’d learned to survive between the cracks of the city’s darker corners [only]"
6"he said without hesitation, letting the word fall between them with a dull thud that sounded almost like a challenge [almost]"
7"she replied, though the sting in her voice was less about accusation and more about the ache of a memory she wasn’t certain she wanted to admit still mattered [more still]"
8"he said, and for a moment his voice dropped to something that sounded almost like confession, a note of weathered honesty that didn’t quite fit the image of the phantoms he navigated in London’s underworld [almost quite]"
9"she said, her voice softer now, almost a hush, as if she didn’t want to wake the city from its careful sleeping [almost]"
10"she said at last, because the practical whisper of a plan could anchor them and keep their hearts relatively safe from themselves [relatively]"
11"he said simply, the syllable heavy with possibility [simply]"
12"he said, and his tone implied a dare, a promise, a question all at once [once]"
13"she said, and the decision sounded inevitable, the sort of decision a person makes when the alternative is letting fear decide for them [sort of]"
14"Lucien said, not as a question but as a challenge that sounded almost personal [almost]"
15"she admitted, and the words tasted like a confession she hadn’t asked for [like]"
16"she allowed, not conceding, not denying, merely acknowledging the possibility [merely]"
17"he said, and the words came out with the quiet certainty of someone who had already mapped every street in the plan but wanted her blessing to walk it again [already again]"
18"Rory said again, though this time it carried a different weight, a finality that wasn’t surrender but commitment [again]"
81.9168% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount4977
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"cautiously"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count3
4
adverb"really"
count1
5
adverb"truly"
count1
6
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"cautiously"
2"perfectly"
3"softly"
4"really"
5"truly"
6"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
55.7967% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount4977
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"throbbed"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"flicked"
count3
4
word"gleaming"
count1
5
word"velvet"
count1
6
word"unsettled"
count1
7
word"anticipation"
count1
8
word"weight"
count5
9
word"footsteps"
count1
10
word"echo"
count1
11
word"echoes"
count1
12
word"etched"
count1
13
word"navigate"
count1
14
word"navigated"
count1
15
word"unravel"
count1
highlights
0"throbbed"
1"flickered"
2"flicker"
3"flicked"
4"gleaming"
5"velvet"
6"unsettled"
7"anticipation"
8"weight"
9"footsteps"
10"echo"
11"echoes"
12"etched"
13"navigate"
14"navigated"
15"unravel"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences150
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences150
filterMatches
0"feel"
1"decide"
hedgeMatches
0"tend to"
1"tried to"
2"seemed to"
3"managed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences175
matches
0"whisper that it"
1"signaling that the"
2"held, that they"
50.0684% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs66
mean74.65
std24.28
cv0.325
sampleLengths
0117
140
2103
366
4119
535
649
738
890
956
1080
1182
1239
1348
1488
1556
16118
1782
1878
1996
2037
2145
2277
23135
2495
2544
2645
2769
2856
2980
30102
3184
3255
33128
3469
3566
3680
3766
3843
3961
4065
4175
4254
43103
4481
4573
4665
47110
4888
4963
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences150
matches
0"was slicked"
1"were meant"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs627
matches
0"was breaking"
1"were looking"
2"were weighing"
3"were exhaling"
4"were not letting"
98.1556% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount3966
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount167
adverbRatio0.04210791729702471
lyAdverbCount23
lyAdverbRatio0.005799293998991427
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences175
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences175
mean28.15
std14.84
cv0.527
sampleLengths
016
138
233
330
418
522
617
718
831
937
1017
1124
1225
136
1426
1526
1629
1732
1826
199
2025
2124
2231
237
2427
2528
2635
2711
2845
2926
3034
3120
3217
3325
3440
3539
3633
3715
384
394
4025
4127
4228
4325
4431
4522
4653
4715
4828
4923
38.0000% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats21
diversityRatio0.2342857142857143
totalSentences175
uniqueOpeners41
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags30
fancyCount24
fancyTags
0"he said, the French accent in his voice smoothing out the edges of the corridor (say, smooth)"
1"she said, and the name came out without heat, a measured syllable that left the door’s frame between them like a border to be negotiated (say, come out leave like be negotiated)"
2"he said, and there was a gravity in his voice that made the room feel smaller, more intimate, as if the air itself held its breath (say, be make hold)"
3"he said, with that dry, almost affectionate tone he used when he spoke of London’s underbelly as if it were a pet they could train (say, use speak be underbelly be train)"
4"Rory said, letting him stand there a moment longer, a moment that felt like a test of who had learned the rules of their own game (say, let stand feel like learn)"
5"he finished softly, the corner of his mouth tilting again in that unsteady, almost imperceptible smile that never failed to draw a flicker of warmth into her chest if she let it (finish softly, tilt again does not never fail draw let)"
6"she said, and the word carried a weight that surprised even her—because she’d thought she’d left the habit of listening to his every syllable behind when she’d escaped Cardiff and the shadow of an ex named Evan (say, carry surprise even think leave escape name)"
7"he said, his tone now crisp, the professional mask back in place (say, back in)"
8"Rory whispered, but there was no accusation in it, only the weary familiarity of someone who’d learned to survive between the cracks of the city’s darker corners (whisper, does not be no learn survive)"
9"he said without hesitation, letting the word fall between them with a dull thud that sounded almost like a challenge (say let almost like)"
10"she replied, though the sting in her voice was less about accusation and more about the ache of a memory she wasn’t certain she wanted to admit still mattered (reply, be does be not want still matter)"
11"he said, and for a moment his voice dropped to something that sounded almost like confession, a note of weathered honesty that didn’t quite fit the image of the phantoms he navigated in London’s underworld (say, drop almost like does not quite fit navigate)"
12"she said, her voice softer now, almost a hush, as if she didn’t want to wake the city from its careful sleeping (say, does not want wake)"
13"he said, and there was a weight in that line, a willingness to sink into whatever darkness came with the truth (say, be sink come)"
14"she said at last, because the practical whisper of a plan could anchor them and keep their hearts relatively safe from themselves (say anchor keep)"
15"he said simply, the syllable heavy with possibility (say simply)"
16"she admitted, her voice a touch rough, but steady (admit, voice)"
17"he said, and his tone implied a dare, a promise, a question all at once (say, imply)"
18"she said, and the decision sounded inevitable, the sort of decision a person makes when the alternative is letting fear decide for them (say, sound sort of decision make let decide)"
19"Lucien said, not as a question but as a challenge that sounded almost personal (say, sound almost)"
77.8787%