Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQGTPTYM3FJTZSNGH83SWP

Run Details

Duration:
14.1s
Cost:
$0.000976
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air inside the grove was thick with the scent of damp earth and something sweeter—like crushed petals and honeyed wine. Rory stepped past the last of the standing stones, her boots sinking slightly into the mossy ground. The boundary between the mortal world and this place had been a shimmer, a breath of cool air against her skin, and then—*then*—she was standing beneath a sky that wasn’t quite sky. It stretched above her, a vast, shifting canopy of silver and violet, threaded with stars that pulsed like slow, sleeping hearts. She exhaled, her breath curling in the air despite the warmth. "Well. That’s new." Beside her, Nyx solidified just enough to brush their shadowed fingers against the bark of the nearest tree. The trunk was smooth, almost glass-like, its surface etched with faint, glowing runes that twisted like vines. "The Fae don’t build for mortals," they murmured, their voice a whisper of wind through dead leaves. "This place wasn’t made to be *comfortable*." Rory shot them a look. "Comfortable? Who said anything about comfortable? I just meant—" She gestured vaguely at the sky, the trees, the way the light here seemed to bend around them like liquid. "This isn’t *Earth*." Nyx’s violet eyes gleamed, amused. "No. It’s not." Ahead of them, Isolde moved with the quiet grace of someone who belonged here. Her silver hair caught the strange light, turning it to liquid mercury as she glided between the trees. She didn’t walk so much as *drift*, her bare feet never quite touching the ground. Rory had seen her do it before—back in the mortal world, where the half-Fae had left no footprints in the dew-soaked grass of Richmond Park. But here, in this place, it made sense. Here, the rules were different. Rory adjusted the strap of her bag, the weight of the Heartstone pendant warm against her sternum. It had been pulsing since they crossed the threshold, a slow, insistent throb, like a second heartbeat. She didn’t like it. But she didn’t *dislike* it, either. It was just… *there*. A reminder that she was out of her depth. She reached into her pocket and pulled out the Fae-forged blade Isolde had given her. The moonsilver dagger was cold in her palm, its edge catching the light like a sliver of frozen starlight. She tested its weight, then slipped it back into her belt. Better to have it close. "Stay sharp," Nyx murmured, their form rippling like smoke. "The grove doesn’t like intruders." Rory smirked. "Good thing we’re not intruders, then. We were *invited*." Isolde paused beneath a low-hanging branch, her lavender eyes flickering toward them. "Invited," she repeated, her voice like chimes in a distant wind. "Yes. And yet, the grove does not know you. It watches. It *waits*." A shiver ran down Rory’s spine. She didn’t like the sound of that. They pressed deeper into the grove, the trees growing taller, their branches weaving together overhead like the ribs of some great, slumbering beast. The air hummed with a low, resonant note, a sound that vibrated in Rory’s bones. She pressed a hand to her chest, feeling the pendant’s pulse sync with it. "Is that—" she started. "The grove’s song," Isolde said, turning her head slightly, as if listening to something Rory couldn’t hear. "It sings to the Fae. To those who belong." Rory swallowed. "And what does it say about *us*?" Isolde’s lips curved, just slightly. "That you are *interesting*." Nyx let out a sound that might have been a laugh, if shadows could laugh. "High praise." Rory rolled her eyes but didn’t argue. Interesting was better than *dead*, at least. They rounded a bend, and the trees parted abruptly, revealing a clearing bathed in golden light. At its center stood a pool, its surface so still it might have been a mirror. But when Rory stepped closer, she saw that it wasn’t reflecting the sky above—it was reflecting *something else*. A landscape of towering spires and crimson skies, a place that made her stomach clench with recognition. "Dymas," she breathed. The pendant burned against her skin. Isolde knelt at the pool’s edge, her fingers hovering just above the water. "The Veil is thin here," she murmured. "Thinner than it should be." Rory crouched beside her, her reflection wavering in the pool’s surface. For a moment, she thought she saw *herself*—but then the image shifted, and it wasn’t her at all. It was a woman with her face, but older, harder, her bright blue eyes burning with something like fury. A crown of thorns rested on her brow, and in her hand, she held a dagger dripping with black blood. Rory jerked back. "What the *hell* was that?" Isolde didn’t answer. She was staring at the water, her expression unreadable. Nyx materialized beside Rory, their form solidifying just enough to place a hand on her shoulder. "The pool shows possibilities," they said, their voice low. "Not certainties." Rory exhaled sharply. "Great. So I’m either going to become a *queen* or a *monster*? Which one’s worse?" Isolde finally looked at her, her lavender eyes dark with something like pity. "Both," she said. "And neither." Rory opened her mouth to snap a retort, but the words died on her lips as the water rippled again. This time, the reflection showed *her*—but not as she was now. She was standing in a vast, shadowed hall, her black hair streaked with silver, her hands clenched around the Heartstone pendant. Behind her, a figure loomed—tall, cloaked, its face hidden in darkness. But Rory didn’t need to see its face to know who it was. *Belphegor.* The Prince of Gluttony. The water stilled. The vision vanished. Rory’s hands were shaking. Nyx’s grip on her shoulder tightened. "Breathe," they murmured. She did, forcing air into her lungs. "That’s not—That can’t be—" Isolde stood, her silver hair swaying like a curtain of mist. "The grove shows what *could* be," she said. "Not what *will* be." Rory clenched her fists. "Then why show me *that*?" "Because," Isolde said, turning away, "you are standing at a crossroads, Aurora Carter. And the path you choose will shape more than just your own fate." Rory wanted to argue. She wanted to scream. But the words stuck in her throat because, deep down, she *knew*. She had felt it the moment the pendant had been pressed into her hands. The moment Nyx had first spoken to her in the shadows of Silas’ bar. The moment she had looked into Isolde’s eyes and seen the weight of centuries staring back at her. She was caught in something bigger than herself. And she had no idea how to get out. --- They moved on, leaving the pool behind. The grove seemed to shift around them, the paths twisting in ways that made Rory’s head spin. Once, she could have sworn she saw a figure darting between the trees—a child, maybe, with skin like bark and eyes like polished river stones. But when she blinked, it was gone. "Did you see—" she started. Nyx nodded. "The grove’s children. They don’t like strangers." Rory rubbed her arms, suddenly cold. "Yeah. I got that." Isolde led them to a small clearing where the trees parted to reveal a circle of standing stones, their surfaces carved with the same glowing runes as the trees. At the center of the circle stood a pedestal, and upon it rested a single object: a silver chalice, its surface etched with intricate patterns that seemed to shift when Rory looked at them too long. She hesitated at the edge of the circle. "Is that—" "A gift," Isolde said. "Or a test." Rory frowned. "What kind of test?" Isolde didn’t answer. She simply stepped forward and plucked the chalice from the pedestal. The moment her fingers closed around it, the runes on the stones flared bright, and the air hummed with a sound like a thousand voices whispering at once. Rory’s breath caught. "Isolde—" The half-Fae turned, her eyes glowing with an eerie light. "Drink," she said, holding out the chalice. Rory stared at it. The liquid inside was dark, almost black, but it shimmered with flecks of gold. It smelled like nothing she had ever encountered—sweet and bitter at once, with an underlying sharpness that made her nose sting. She swallowed. "What’s in it?" Isolde’s lips curved. "Truth." Rory hesitated. She had never been one for blind trust, not after Evan, not after the way her life had unraveled in London. But this wasn’t about trust. This was about *choice*. She took the chalice. The moment her fingers brushed the silver, a jolt ran up her arm, like static electricity but deeper, *older*. The pendant at her throat burned, and the Fae blade at her hip grew colder, as if reacting to whatever magic was in the cup. She lifted it to her lips. The liquid was ice and fire at once, searing her throat as she swallowed. It pooled in her stomach, heavy and warm, and then— *Images.* A flash of crimson skies. A throne of black bone. A hand, pale and long-fingered, reaching for her. *A voice, smooth as poisoned honey.* *"You cannot run forever, little thief."* Rory gasped, stumbling back. The chalice slipped from her fingers and clattered to the ground, the dark liquid spilling into the moss. She pressed a hand to her chest, her heart hammering. Nyx was at her side in an instant, their shadowed form solidifying around her. "Rory?" She couldn’t speak. The vision—*no, the memory*—clung to her like a second skin. She had *heard* that voice before. She had *felt* that hand brush against her wrist, cold and possessive. Belphegor. He had been there. In her dreams. In the spaces between waking and sleep. And he was *waiting* for her. Isolde watched her, her expression unreadable. "Now you see," she said softly. Rory’s hands trembled. "See *what*?" "The thread that binds you," Isolde said. "The one you have been running from." Rory wanted to deny it. She wanted to scream that she wasn’t running, that she was *fighting*. But the words died in her throat because, deep down, she knew the truth. She *had* been running. From Evan. From her past. From the weight of the pendant around her neck and the visions that haunted her sleep. But she couldn’t run anymore. Not from this. --- The grove seemed to hold its breath as Rory straightened, her fingers curling around the hilt of the Fae blade. The metal was cold, grounding. She took a slow, steadying breath. "Alright," she said, her voice steadier than she felt. "What now?" Isolde’s eyes gleamed. "Now," she said, "you choose." Rory looked at the spilled chalice, at the standing stones, at the sky above that wasn’t quite a sky. She thought of the visions in the pool. The throne. The hand. The voice. She thought of the way the pendant pulsed against her skin, like a second heartbeat. She thought of the way Nyx stood beside her, solid and sure, their violet eyes burning with something like pride. And she thought of the girl she had been—scared, broken, running—and the woman she was becoming. She exhaled. "Then I choose to *fight*," she said. The grove seemed to sigh around her, the trees rustling as if in approval. The air hummed, the runes on the stones flaring bright once more. Isolde smiled, slow and knowing. "Then let us begin."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
66.6667% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Nyx murmured, their form rippling like smoke [like]"
1"Isolde said, turning her head slightly, as if listening to something Rory couldn’t hear [slightly]"
2"Isolde said, turning away [away]"
3"she said softly [softly]"
68.7337% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1919
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count3
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"slightly"
2"softly"
3"suddenly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
16.6232% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1919
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"throb"
count1
1
word"searing"
count1
2
word"shimmered"
count1
3
word"glided"
count1
4
word"wavering"
count1
5
word"trembled"
count1
6
word"loomed"
count1
7
word"unreadable"
count2
8
word"intricate"
count1
9
word"weight"
count4
10
word"etched"
count2
highlights
0"throb"
1"searing"
2"shimmered"
3"glided"
4"wavering"
5"trembled"
6"loomed"
7"unreadable"
8"intricate"
9"weight"
10"etched"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her fists"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences175
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences175
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount6
totalSentences207
matches
0"\"Is that—\" she"
1"saw that it"
2"heard* that voice"
3"felt* that hand"
4"scream that she running, that she"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs92
mean20.7
std20.73
cv1.002
sampleLengths
091
114
259
337
48
585
657
750
814
911
1036
1113
1252
134
1426
159
169
1717
1814
1967
203
216
2225
2368
248
2512
2627
2718
2818
2976
301
314
326
334
349
3511
3623
379
3826
3966
408
419
421
4356
445
459
4610
4765
4810
497
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences175
matches
0"been pressed"
1"was caught"
2"was gone"
3"been—scared"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount9
totalVerbs303
matches
0"was standing"
1"was reflecting"
2"was staring"
3"was standing"
4"were shaking"
5"was *waiting"
6"was *fighting"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1679
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount56
adverbRatio0.03335318642048839
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.005955926146515783
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences207
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences207
mean9.2
std7.06
cv0.767
sampleLengths
021
117
232
321
411
53
618
717
817
97
105
1129
123
135
143
1514
1618
1715
1825
198
205
2117
2217
234
246
253
261
279
2815
2919
3011
315
329
335
342
359
3612
3711
3813
396
407
4123
4215
4314
444
4517
469
472
487
495
41.2195% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.2682926829268293
totalSentences205
uniqueOpeners55
12.5000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags20
fancyCount13
fancyTags
0"they murmured, their voice a whisper of wind through dead leaves (murmur)"
1"Nyx murmured, their form rippling like smoke (murmur, ripple like)"
2"she repeated, her voice like chimes in a distant wind (repeat)"
3"started (start)"
4"Isolde said, turning her head slightly, as if listening to something Rory couldn’t hear (say, turn listen does not hear)"
5"she breathed (breathe)"
6"she murmured (murmur)"
7"they murmured (murmur)"
8"Isolde said, turning away (say, turn away)"
9"started (start)"
10"she said, holding out the chalice (say, holding out)"
11"she said softly (say softly)"
12"she said, her voice steadier than she felt (say, feel)"
82.6908%