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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQGTXWBYHPAJFMK7FCWNCV
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Model:
Z.AI GLM 4.5
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Mystery: examining a crime scene
Duration:
39.7s
Cost:
$0.004606
Provider:
WandB
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The bone token felt cold against Detective Harlow Quinn's palm as she approached the brick wall that concealed the entrance to the Veil Market. The abandoned Tube station beneath Camden hummed with a silence that pressed against her eardrums, thick and unnatural. She traced the familiar pattern with her thumb, and the bricks
shimmered
like heat haze before parting to reveal the tunnel beyond. Eighteen years in the Metropolitan Police had prepared Harlow for many things, but nothing had quite readied her for the Veil Market. It defied physics in ways that made her teeth ache—a cavernous space that should have been impossible underground, with stalls stretching into shadowy corners that
seemed to
shift when you
weren't looking
directly at them. The air smelled of ozone, old paper, and something metallic that reminded her of blood after rain. "Detective Quinn," called a voice from the center of the commotion. Eva Kowalski pushed her round glasses up her nose, her curly red hair escaping its tie as she gestured frantically at the scene before them. "Thank you for coming. I wasn't sure if you'd believe me." Harlow's sharp jaw tightened as she approached. At 5'9", she towered over the 5'4" researcher, who kept
nervously
tucking her hair behind her left ear—a habit Harlow had noticed in their three previous encounters involving cases with unexplainable elements. "I believe evidence, Ms. Kowalski," Harlow said, her worn leather
watch
catching the dim light as she gestured to the body. "What have we got?" The victim lay in the center of the market's main thoroughfare, surrounded by scattered goods from an overturned stall selling what
appeared to
be ancient manuscripts. A man in his late fifties, expensive suit, no visible wounds. The medical examiner was just finishing up. "David Thorne," said the ME, straightening up. "No signs of physical trauma. No toxins in his initial screening. Heart just stopped, as far as I can tell." Eva stepped forward, her worn leather satchel full of books bumping against her hip. "That's not all, Detective. Look at this." She pointed to a small brass compass on the ground beside the body. Its casing had a patina of verdigris, and the face
was etched
with protective sigils. Harlow crouched down, her military precision evident in every movement. "The Veil Compass," Eva explained. "It points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal. It was crafted by a Shade artisan. These are extremely rare—valuable enough to kill for." Harlow picked up an evidence bag and
carefully
dropped the compass inside. "So we're looking at a robbery gone wrong?" "That was my first thought too," Eva said, her green eyes wide behind her glasses. "But something doesn't add up. The compass is still here." Harlow stood
slowly
, her brown eyes scanning the scene. "If someone killed him for this, why leave it behind? And why no signs of a struggle?" "Exactly," Eva said, relief crossing her freckled face. "I think the market's protective wards reacted to something. Maybe Thorne wasn't supposed to have the compass, or perhaps he tried to use it for something forbidden." Harlow walked a careful perimeter around the body, noting how the market's other vendors had given the area a wide berth. Some
watch
ed with expressions that hovered between fear and fascination; others had simply shuttered their stalls and vanished into the shadows. "The market moves locations every full moon," Eva offered, following Harlow like an eager student. "It's only been here for a week. Thorne must have known that to find it." Harlow stopped at a patch of ground just beyond the body. Something glittered in the irregular light of the enchanted lanterns hanging from the cavern ceiling. She knelt again, pulling tweezers from her coat pocket. "What is it?" Eva asked. "Glass," Harlow said,
carefully
collecting several tiny fragments. "Not from any of the stalls. Too fine." She continued her examination, her gaze sweeping across the scene with
methodical
precision. Something nagged at her—the arrangement of the overturned manuscripts, the way Thorne's body lay, the complete lack of defensive wounds. "Tell me about the wards," Harlow said, her attention fixed on a faint shimmer in the air around the body. "They're ancient," Eva explained. "Designed to protect both buyers and sellers. Prevent violence from spilling over from other realms. They can sense hostile intent and neutralize it." "Neutralize how?" Eva hesitated. "There are stories. Of hearts stopping. Of minds being wiped clean. But those are just legends." Harlow's
eyes narrowed
. "Are they?" Standing up, Harlow walked over to the overturned manuscript stall. The vendor, a gaunt man with eyes that
seemed to
o large for his face,
watch
ed her
warily
. "Mr. Thorne was interested in particular texts?" Harlow asked. The vendor nodded
slowly
. "Asked about dimensional thresholds. Wanted to know about weak points between realms. Paid triple for anything that mentioned the Compass." Harlow's gaze returned to the body. "Did he seem afraid?" "Excited," the vendor corrected. "Like a man who'd found the answer to a question he'd been asking for years." Harlow thanked the vendor and walked back to where Eva waited, scribbling notes in a small pad. "What if the wards didn't kill him?" Harlow said
softly
. Eva looked up, confused. "But what else could it be? There's no other explanation." Harlow crouched by the body again, her brown eyes missing nothing. She pointed to Thorne's right hand, which
was clenched
in a loose fist. "What's he holding?" Eva leaned closer. "Nothing. The hand is empty." "Exactly," Harlow said. "But look at the position. Like he was holding something small. Something that might have shattered." She pulled out the evidence bag containing the glass fragments. "Fine glass. Like what might contain a potion or an elixir." Eva's
eyes widened
. "You think he poisoned himself?" "No," Harlow said. "I think he opened something." She stood and gestured to the compass in its evidence bag. "The Veil Compass doesn't just point to rifts. With the right knowledge, it can create them. Or at least, temporarily weaken the veil between worlds." She walked to the spot where she'd found the glass and pointed to the faint shimmer in the air. "The wards aren't reacting to hostile intent. They're containing something. Something that came through when Thorne used the compass." Eva's face paled. "That's impossible. The compass can't create rifts, only find existing ones." "According to who?" Harlow asked, her voice steady. "The same people who run this market and have a vested interest in
keeping that information
quiet?" She turned to face Eva directly. "Thorne didn't die from the wards. He died because whatever came through that rift killed him. And then it vanished, leaving only broken glass and a man whose heart simply stopped." Eva shook her head. "But if something came through, where did it go?" Harlow's gaze swept across the shadowy corners of the market, the places that
seemed to
shift when you
weren't looking
directly at them. "It's still here. Somewhere in this market. And it's hungry." As if on cue, a faint whisper
echoed
through the cavern, seeming to come from everywhere and nowhere at once. Harlow's hand went to the weapon holstered under her jacket, her military training kicking in. "What
was that?" Eva
whispered, tucking her hair behind her ear. "The sound that killed DS Morris," Harlow said
softly
, her eyes scanning the darkness. "The sound I've been chasing for three years."
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
80.7018%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
19
adverbTagCount
3
adverbTags
0
"Harlow said, her worn leather watch catching the dim light as she gestured to the body [dim]"
1
"Harlow said, carefully collecting several tiny fragments [carefully]"
2
"Harlow said softly, her eyes scanning the darkness [softly]"
35.2751%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1236
totalAiIsmAdverbs
8
found
0
adverb
"carefully"
count
2
1
adverb
"nervously"
count
1
2
adverb
"slowly"
count
2
3
adverb
"softly"
count
2
4
adverb
"warily"
count
1
highlights
0
"carefully"
1
"nervously"
2
"slowly"
3
"softly"
4
"warily"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
67.6375%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1236
totalAiIsms
4
found
0
word
"shimmered"
count
1
1
word
"methodical"
count
1
2
word
"echoed"
count
1
3
word
"etched"
count
1
highlights
0
"shimmered"
1
"methodical"
2
"echoed"
3
"etched"
66.6667%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
2
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
2
highlights
0
"eyes narrowed"
1
"eyes widened"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
65
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
4
narrationSentences
65
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"appeared to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
2
totalSentences
97
matches
0
"keeping that information"
1
"was that?\" Eva"
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
48
mean
25.67
std
14.51
cv
0.566
sampleLengths
0
64
1
74
2
47
3
39
4
25
5
44
6
27
7
21
8
38
9
29
10
20
11
25
12
26
13
35
14
42
15
30
16
35
17
5
18
16
19
33
20
20
21
27
22
2
23
18
24
5
25
27
26
9
27
24
28
10
29
19
30
17
31
10
32
14
33
27
34
8
35
19
36
21
37
8
38
44
39
38
40
14
41
25
42
37
43
13
44
33
45
35
46
11
47
22
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
2
totalSentences
65
matches
0
"was etched"
1
"was clenched"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
2
totalVerbs
132
matches
0
"weren't looking"
1
"weren't looking"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
746
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
25
adverbRatio
0.03351206434316354
lyAdverbCount
14
lyAdverbRatio
0.01876675603217158
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
97
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
97
mean
12.7
std
7.55
cv
0.594
sampleLengths
0
24
1
18
2
22
3
22
4
35
5
17
6
11
7
25
8
11
9
7
10
32
11
21
12
4
13
26
14
11
15
7
16
7
17
20
18
14
19
7
20
13
21
15
22
10
23
5
24
24
25
12
26
8
27
15
28
10
29
9
30
17
31
8
32
27
33
21
34
21
35
15
36
15
37
11
38
15
39
9
40
5
41
8
42
8
43
13
44
20
45
20
46
4
47
23
48
2
49
2
70.1031%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
2
diversityRatio
0.4329896907216495
totalSentences
97
uniqueOpeners
42
30.2632%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
19
fancyCount
11
fancyTags
0
"Harlow said, her worn leather watch catching the dim light as she gestured to the body (say, catch gesture)"
1
"said the ME, straightening up (say straighten up)"
2
"Eva explained (explain)"
3
"Eva said, relief crossing her freckled face (say, cross)"
4
"Eva offered, following Harlow like an eager student (offer, follow like)"
5
"Harlow said, carefully collecting several tiny fragments (say, carefully collect fragment)"
6
"Harlow said, her attention fixed on a faint shimmer in the air around the body (say, fix)"
7
"Eva explained (explain)"
8
"the vendor corrected (correct)"
9
"whispered (whisper)"
10
"Harlow said softly, her eyes scanning the darkness (say softly, scan)"
85.3322%