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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQH2HRYJWH94MGFFAZVHTX
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Model:
MoonshotAI: Kimi K2.5
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Mystery: examining a crime scene
Duration:
21.2s
Cost:
$0.010529
Provider:
BaseTen
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The tunnel smelled of wet stone and ozone, a metallic tang that coated the back of the throat. Detective Harlow Quinn descended the final iron rung of the maintenance ladder, her worn leather
watch
catching the dim emergency lighting as she checked the time. Eighteen minutes past three. She’d told the constable upstairs she’d be down for fifteen. The discrepancy irritated her, a splinter beneath the fingernail of her military precision. Her boots hit the platform with a sound that shouldn’t have
echoed
as long as it did. The abandoned Camden Tube station str
etched
before her, a throat of black tiles and dormant tracks that terminated in a wall of engineered darkness. CSIs had erected portable floods, painting the scene in harsh sodium glare that turned the salt-and-pepper stubble of Harlow’s cropped hair into a silver halo. She ran a hand over it, feeling the familiar bristle, and stepped toward the body. It lay supine on the platform’s edge, a man in a solicitor’s suit, mid-thirties, hands folded neatly across his chest as if he’d
been arranged
for viewing. No blood. That was the first wrongness. The second was the shoes—polished Oxfords pointing toward the tunnel wall, not the exit, as though he’d been walking into the dark when he died. “Cardiac arrest,” said a voice behind her. “Or so the preliminary suggests.” Harlow turned, her sharp jaw tightening. Eva Kowalski stood at the platform’s lip, her curly red hair escaping the confines of a hasty bun, round glasses sliding down her freckled nose. She clutched her worn leather satchel to her chest with both arms, knuckles white. When she noticed Harlow’s gaze, she tucked a stray curl behind her left ear—a nervous habit, left side only. “You shouldn’t be down here, Miss Kowalski,” Harlow said. “This is an active scene.” “The Museum sent me. The victim—Mr. Aldridge—was consulting our restricted archives. Occult iconography.” Eva’s voice steadied as she stepped closer, her boots crunching on something that wasn’t gravel. “He was looking for entry points. I told him he was being paranoid. But this…” She gestured at the platform, the darkness, the wrongness of the body’s placement. Harlow crouched beside the deceased. Up close, she could see the third wrongness: the man’s fingernails were clean. Too clean. No dirt from the ladder descent, no grease from the rungs. As if he’d never touched the surface of this world on his way down. She reached for the evidence bag lying nearby. Inside sat a small brass compass, its casing mottled with verdigris that
seemed to
shift in the floodlight, almost iridescent. The face
was etched
with sigils that hurt to look at directly—protective markings, her brain supplied, though she didn’t know how she knew. The needle spun
lazily
, not north, not anywhere fixed, but pointing toward the tunnel’s terminus wall. “He had that when they found him,” Eva said. “It’s not a standard compass. The patina—it matches the oxidation on the platform tiles. See?” She pointed to the black tiles near the wall, where greenish stains bloomed in patterns that almost looked like footprints, almost looked like script. Harlow stood, her left wrist heavy with the
watch
DS Morris had given her, three years ago, before the warehouse, before the case that still woke her at 3 AM with the taste of copper in her mouth. Morris had died in a locked room with no entry points, positioned like this, hands folded, shoes pointing the wrong way. The file said heart attack. Harlow had known better. She just hadn’t known *what* better was. Now,
watch
ing the compass needle quiver toward solid brick, she
began to
see. “The evidence doesn’t add up,” she said quietly. Eva stepped closer, her satchel bumping against her hip. “Because it’s not evidence of a crime. Not a human one. He was trying to buy passage, Detective. The Veil Market moves every full moon. Tonight, it’s here. Or rather, *there*.” She pointed at the wall. Harlow’s hand moved to her
watch
, fingers tracing the worn leather. She thought of Morris, of the unexplained circumstances, of the supernatural origins she’d spent three years denying. The compass in her other hand grew warm, the verdigris seeming to spread, to breathe. She looked at the body again. The clean fingernails. The shoes pointing toward the wall. The lack of blood because the heart hadn’t stopped—it had
been *traded
*. “He found the entry,” Harlow said, her voice gaining the clipped precision she used when the pieces finally aligned. “But he didn’t have the token. The bone token.” She crouched again, ignoring protocol, and
gently
opened the dead man’s jacket pocket. Inside, nestled against a
silk
lining, lay a small ivory disc carved with the same sigils as the compass. “He had it. But something went wrong with the transaction.” Eva’s breath caught. “The Market doesn’t take cash, Detective. It takes equivalents. He offered his heart for something. But if the exchange was interrupted…” “The goods were taken, but the payment remained,” Harlow finished. She stood, pocketing the compass—evidence be damned—and turned to face the tunnel wall. The needle in her pocket pressed against her thigh, pointing through the brick. “There’s a door there.” “Not a door,” Eva whispered. “A threshold. It moves. That’s why the evidence doesn’t make sense. He was killed standing in two places at once.” Harlow touched the wall. The brick was cold, solid, undeniable. But her
watch
—the leather band Morris had worn before her—felt hot against her skin. Three years of searching for a killer without a face, a murder without a weapon, a death in a locked room. She’d been looking at the wrong evidence. She’d been looking for a *who*. She should have been looking for a *where*. “The Market moves every full moon,” Harlow said, not turning around. “When’s the next full moon, Miss Kowalski?” “Tonight.” Eva’s voice
trembled
. “In three hours.” Harlow withdrew her hand from the wall. In the pocket of her coat, the compass needle spun wildly, drunk on proximity. She thought of the verdigris footprints on the tiles, the chemical reaction of brass meeting something that shouldn’t exist in London’s atmosphere. She thought of Morris, folded like a suit in an empty room, shoes pointing toward a wall that hadn’t been there yesterday. “Seal the scene,” Harlow said, her sharp jaw set. “No one touches the body. No one leaves.” “Detective, you can’t arrest a threshold.” “I’m not going to arrest it,” Harlow said, her fingers closing around the warm brass compass in her pocket. The sigils
seemed to
burn against her palm. “I’m going to wait for it to open. And then I’m going to find out what killed my partner.” She turned from the wall, her bearing military, precise, unyielding. The evidence had never added up because she’d been solving for the wrong variable. X wasn’t a murderer. X was a doorway. And tonight, with the full moon rising and the compass spinning in her pocket, Detective Harlow Quinn was finally going to pick the lock.
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2/17/2026, 2:40:55 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
0.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
10
adverbTagCount
4
adverbTags
0
"she said quietly [quietly]"
1
"Harlow said, her voice gaining the clipped precision she used when the pieces finally aligned [finally]"
2
"Harlow said, not turning around [around]"
3
"Harlow said, her fingers closing around the warm brass compass in her pocket [around]"
83.0795%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1182
totalAiIsmAdverbs
2
found
0
adverb
"gently"
count
1
1
adverb
"lazily"
count
1
highlights
0
"gently"
1
"lazily"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
66.1591%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1182
totalAiIsms
4
found
0
word
"trembled"
count
1
1
word
"silk"
count
1
2
word
"echoed"
count
1
3
word
"etched"
count
1
highlights
0
"trembled"
1
"silk"
2
"echoed"
3
"etched"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
77
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
3
hedgeCount
3
narrationSentences
77
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"began to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
88
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
29
mean
40.28
std
22.7
cv
0.564
sampleLengths
0
71
1
17
2
64
3
59
4
12
5
64
6
14
7
56
8
45
9
67
10
48
11
75
12
13
13
8
14
45
15
43
16
27
17
70
18
24
19
40
20
25
21
66
22
18
23
7
24
65
25
17
26
6
27
46
28
56
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
3
totalSentences
77
matches
0
"been arranged"
1
"was etched"
2
"been *traded"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
160
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
936
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
24
adverbRatio
0.02564102564102564
lyAdverbCount
10
lyAdverbRatio
0.010683760683760684
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
88
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
88
mean
13.27
std
8.53
cv
0.643
sampleLengths
0
18
1
26
2
4
3
10
4
13
5
17
6
24
7
25
8
15
9
27
10
2
11
5
12
25
13
7
14
5
15
6
16
25
17
14
18
19
19
9
20
5
21
28
22
28
23
5
24
13
25
2
26
11
27
14
28
8
29
20
30
23
31
16
32
9
33
39
34
38
35
21
36
5
37
4
38
7
39
13
40
8
41
9
42
36
43
11
44
17
45
15
46
6
47
3
48
6
49
12
57.1970%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
8
diversityRatio
0.3977272727272727
totalSentences
88
uniqueOpeners
35
25.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
10
fancyCount
6
fancyTags
0
"she said quietly (say quietly)"
1
"Harlow said, her voice gaining the clipped precision she used when the pieces finally aligned (say, gain clip use finally align)"
2
"Harlow finished (finish)"
3
"Eva whispered (whisper)"
4
"Harlow said, not turning around (say, does not turn around)"
5
"Harlow said, her fingers closing around the warm brass compass in her pocket (say, close around)"
84.2021%