Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQH5BTZWZKW0HQ1SHPYN27

Run Details

Duration:
20.3s
Cost:
$0.011157
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air changed first. One moment, Aurora was stepping over the moss-slick roots at the edge of the grove, the next, the wind died—completely, unnaturally. No birdsong, no rustle of leaves, not even the distant hum of traffic from Richmond Park. Just a silence so thick it pressed against her eardrums like water. She paused, fingers brushing the small crimson gem at her throat. The Heartstone Pendant pulsed—once, slow, like a drowsy heart—and its warmth flared against her skin. Rory exhaled. This was it. The Veil was thin here. Thin enough to cross. Behind her, Nyx shimmered into partial form, their silhouette coalescing from the long twilight shadows beneath the oaks. “This place breathes,” they whispered, the sound barely more than a breath carried on still air. “It’s not empty. It’s waiting.” Rory glanced back. Nyx stood tall, their form wavering at the edges, like heat haze over pavement. Violet eyes, faint but steady, scanned the clearing. She nodded. “So do we.” She stepped forward. The world bent. Not with violence, but with a quiet insistence, like a door opening in a dream. The trees—ancient standing oaks that ringed the perimeter—seemed to lean inward, their trunks blackened with silver veining, their branches tangled into arches above. Between them rose stones, half-swallowed by moss and ivy, covered in glyphs that glimmered when not looked at directly. The sky, if it could be called that, was a dome of pearlescent silver, shot through with threads of lavender light. The sun, if there was one, didn’t cast shadows—instead, the light hung in the air like dust, suspended. Flowers bloomed in riotous color along the ground: cerulean lilies, crimson foxgloves with bell-shaped blooms that chimed faintly in a wind no one could feel. Rory’s boots made no sound on the path, though she knew she was walking. The ground was springy, like moss over stone, yet warm beneath her feet. She reached out, fingertips grazing a flower. It trembled, then exhaled a puff of iridescent pollen that spiraled upward like a tiny galaxy. “We’re not in Richmond anymore,” she murmured. Nyx drifted beside her, their form shifting between solid and mist. “Time doesn’t walk here the way it does elsewhere. You could spend a day and return to find only seconds have passed. Or linger an hour and emerge aged.” Rory touched the pendant again. It pulsed stronger now, a steady warmth. “Isolde’s close.” They moved deeper. The path wound between the standing stones, and with each step, the air grew heavier—not oppressive, but dense with presence. Like walking into a library where every book was whispering at once. Then the trees fell away. Before them lay a grove unlike anything on Earth. A circle of silver grass swayed in an unfelt breeze. At its center stood a willow, but not of any kind Rory had seen. Its bark was pale as moonlight, its leaves long and translucent, chiming softly as they brushed together. Beneath it sat a figure. Isolde. She was slight, almost fragile-looking, but the air around her thrummed with quiet power. Her silver hair fell to the earth around her like a pool of liquid mercury. Her eyes—pale lavender, unblinking—lifted as they approached. “You’re late,” she said. Not unkindly. Just factually. Rory frowned. “We only just—” “The soul is never late,” Isolde interrupted, rising without moving her limbs, simply unfolding from sitting to standing as though gravity had no claim. “And the shade walks outside time. You have been expected.” Nyx inclined their head. “The Veil thins. You felt it.” Isolde stepped forward, bare feet hovering an inch above the grass. She left no trace. “The boundaries are thinning faster than the Fates predicted. Belphegor stirs. His chefs grow bold, hunting souls not merely for service, but for taste.” Rory stiffened. Dymas. Gluttony. Hel. She had read enough of the lore whispered in dark corners of the city to know what that meant. “Soul harvesting?” Isolde tilted her head. “Not harvesting. Selective culling. He seeks a flavor that cannot be replicated—free will mixed with desperation. A rare vintage.” Rory’s hand went to the dagger at her belt. The Fae-Forged Blade was cold against her fingers, even through the fabric of her coat. “So we stop him.” Isolde’s lips curved, but it wasn’t a smile. “You do not stop a prince of Hel by walking into his banquet hall with a knife. You outthink him. You become a dish he never anticipated.” Nyx’s form darkened, edges sharpening. “And if he tastes her soul?” “Then he will not digest it,” Isolde said. “The Heartstone binds her to life. But it will not protect her forever. Not against true consumption.” Rory exhaled slowly. The pendant glowed faintly, pulsing in rhythm with her heartbeat. “Who gave this to me?” Isolde’s gaze flickered. For the first time, something like sorrow passed through her ancient eyes. “Someone who loved you more than you know. Someone who paid in years to send it.” Rory swallowed. “My mother?” Isolde didn’t answer. She didn’t need to. A hush fell. The chiming leaves softened. The silver grass bowed in a slow wave that rippled toward the edges of the grove. Then, the earth trembled. Not violently, but with a deep, low thrum, like a drumbeat beneath the world. The pendant flared hot against Rory’s chest. Ahead, the air wavered—shimmering, just for a second, like heat on asphalt. “The Veil,” Nyx whispered. “A tear.” Isolde turned toward it, eyes narrowing. “Too soon. The solstice is weeks away.” Rory stepped forward. “If it’s opening now, something’s forcing it.” “Or someone,” Nyx added, their voice darker now, edged with something cold. “I feel him.” “Who?” Rory asked. But she already knew. Evan. Her breath caught. That name—her abuser, the man who’d driven her from Cardiff, who’d whispered poison into her mind until she couldn’t tell truth from torment—had vanished six months ago. Presumed dead. Or worse. “He’s not human,” Nyx said. “Not anymore. Something in Hel tasted him first. Now he hungers for more.” Isolde’s voice was soft. “He is a key now. A willing vessel. And he seeks you.” Rory’s fingers tightened around the Fae blade. The cold seeped into her palm, grounding her. She thought of her father’s voice on the phone last week: *You can’t run forever, Rory.* She thought of her mother’s last letter, postmarked from Dublin, unsigned. She thought of the scar on her wrist, crescent-shaped, old and pale. She wasn’t running anymore. She turned to Isolde. “Teach me how to fight a prince.” Isolde smiled then—genuinely, sadly. “You already have. You survived him once. Now you survive what he becomes.” She reached out, palm open. Above it, the air shimmered, and then a mirror formed—not glass, but liquid light. In it, Rory saw herself. But behind her, towering, shadowed, stood a figure with a crown of thorns and a mouth too wide, too full of teeth. And at the edge of the reflection, the amber sky of Dymas blazed. The pendant pulsed. The grove held its breath. And Rory stepped forward, into the image, into the truth.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
59.2593% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"they whispered, the sound barely more than a breath carried on still air [barely more]"
1"Isolde interrupted, rising without moving her limbs, simply unfolding from sitting to standing as though gravity had no claim [simply]"
66.6667% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1200
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"sadly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
1"sadly"
2"slowly"
3"softly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
33.3333% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1200
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"shimmered"
count2
2
word"wavered"
count1
3
word"wavering"
count1
4
word"trembled"
count2
5
word"oppressive"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"shimmered"
2"wavered"
3"wavering"
4"trembled"
5"oppressive"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences106
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences106
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences131
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean22.25
std17.88
cv0.804
sampleLengths
053
140
239
330
43
53
657
764
850
97
1040
1114
1235
135
1455
151
1636
178
185
1934
2010
2139
2226
2323
2428
2535
2611
2725
2818
2931
304
317
3223
334
3433
356
3613
3710
3815
393
404
411
4234
4318
4416
4554
464
4711
4817
4959
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs163
matches
0"was stepping"
1"was walking"
2"was whispering"
3"wasn’t running"
99.0929% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount926
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.04103671706263499
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.01511879049676026
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences131
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences131
mean9
std6.93
cv0.771
sampleLengths
04
121
216
312
411
515
62
73
85
94
1018
1116
125
133
1414
158
162
173
183
193
2015
2123
2219
2321
2418
2525
2614
2713
287
2916
307
3111
3229
335
347
352
363
3720
3812
395
409
4110
4214
4317
445
451
4614
4715
487
494
59.5420% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3893129770992366
totalSentences131
uniqueOpeners51
36.1111% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"they whispered, the sound barely more than a breath carried on still air (whisper, carry on)"
1"she murmured (murmur)"
2"Isolde interrupted, rising without moving her limbs, simply unfolding from sitting to standing as though gravity had no claim (interrupt, rise move simply unfold sit stand have)"
3"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
4"Nyx added, their voice darker now, edged with something cold (add, edge)"
85.5297%