| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.265 | | leniency | 0.529 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 83.25% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1194 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "completely" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "sadly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 33.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1194 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "shimmered" | | 4 | "wavering" | | 5 | "scanned" | | 6 | "could feel" | | 7 | "trembled" | | 8 | "oppressive" | | 9 | "flickered" | | 10 | "wavered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 106 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 106 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 131 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 5 | | totalWords | 1179 | | ratio | 0.004 | | matches | | 0 | "You can’t run forever, Rory." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 52 | | wordCount | 906 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 1.88 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Nyx | 8 | | Rory | 17 | | Earth | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Isolde | 12 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Dublin | 1 | | Dymas | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Dymas" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Cardiff" | | 3 | "Dublin" |
| | globalScore | 0.562 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "something like sorrow passed through her anc" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 5 | | per1kWords | 4.241 | | wordCount | 1179 | | matches | | 0 | "Not with violence, but with a quiet insistence, like a door opening in a dream" | | 1 | "not oppressive, but dense with presence" | | 2 | "not merely for service, but for taste" | | 3 | "Not violently, but with a deep, low thrum, like a drumbeat beneath the world" | | 4 | "not glass, but liquid light" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 53 | | mean | 22.25 | | std | 17.88 | | cv | 0.804 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 53 | | 1 | 40 | | 2 | 39 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 57 | | 7 | 64 | | 8 | 50 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 40 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 35 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 55 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 36 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 34 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 39 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 28 | | 25 | 35 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 25 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 31 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 33 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 34 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 54 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 59 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 35.39% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 162 | | matches | | 0 | "was stepping" | | 1 | "was walking" | | 2 | "was whispering" | | 3 | "wasn’t running" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 131 | | ratio | 0.076 | | matches | | 0 | "One moment, Aurora was stepping over the moss-slick roots at the edge of the grove, the next, the wind died—completely, unnaturally." | | 1 | "The Heartstone Pendant pulsed—once, slow, like a drowsy heart—and its warmth flared against her skin." | | 2 | "The trees—ancient standing oaks that ringed the perimeter—seemed to lean inward, their trunks blackened with silver veining, their branches tangled into arches above." | | 3 | "The sun, if there was one, didn’t cast shadows—instead, the light hung in the air like dust, suspended." | | 4 | "The path wound between the standing stones, and with each step, the air grew heavier—not oppressive, but dense with presence." | | 5 | "Her eyes—pale lavender, unblinking—lifted as they approached." | | 6 | "Ahead, the air wavered—shimmering, just for a second, like heat on asphalt." | | 7 | "That name—her abuser, the man who’d driven her from Cardiff, who’d whispered poison into her mind until she couldn’t tell truth from torment—had vanished six months ago." | | 8 | "Isolde smiled then—genuinely, sadly." | | 9 | "Above it, the air shimmered, and then a mirror formed—not glass, but liquid light." |
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| 98.15% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 926 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 39 | | adverbRatio | 0.042116630669546434 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01511879049676026 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 131 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 131 | | mean | 9 | | std | 6.93 | | cv | 0.771 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 4 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 29 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 20 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 59.54% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.3893129770992366 | | totalSentences | 131 | | uniqueOpeners | 51 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a silence so thick" | | 1 | "Then the trees fell away." | | 2 | "Then, the earth trembled." |
| | ratio | 0.035 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, fingers brushing the" | | 1 | "they whispered, the sound barely" | | 2 | "She stepped forward." | | 3 | "She reached out, fingertips grazing" | | 4 | "It trembled, then exhaled a" | | 5 | "It pulsed stronger now, a" | | 6 | "They moved deeper." | | 7 | "Its bark was pale as" | | 8 | "She was slight, almost fragile-looking," | | 9 | "Her silver hair fell to" | | 10 | "Her eyes—pale lavender, unblinking—lifted as" | | 11 | "She left no trace." | | 12 | "She had read enough of" | | 13 | "She didn’t need to." | | 14 | "Her breath caught." | | 15 | "She thought of her father’s" | | 16 | "She thought of the scar" | | 17 | "She wasn’t running anymore." | | 18 | "She turned to Isolde." | | 19 | "She reached out, palm open." |
| | ratio | 0.233 | |
| 87.91% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 64 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "The air changed first." | | 1 | "She paused, fingers brushing the" | | 2 | "The Heartstone Pendant pulsed—once, slow," | | 3 | "This was it." | | 4 | "The Veil was thin here." | | 5 | "they whispered, the sound barely" | | 6 | "Rory glanced back." | | 7 | "Nyx stood tall, their form" | | 8 | "Violet eyes, faint but steady," | | 9 | "She stepped forward." | | 10 | "The world bent." | | 11 | "The trees—ancient standing oaks that" | | 12 | "The sky, if it could" | | 13 | "The sun, if there was" | | 14 | "Flowers bloomed in riotous color" | | 15 | "Rory’s boots made no sound" | | 16 | "The ground was springy, like" | | 17 | "She reached out, fingertips grazing" | | 18 | "It trembled, then exhaled a" | | 19 | "Nyx drifted beside her, their" |
| | ratio | 0.744 | |
| 58.14% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "Before them lay a grove" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 87.91% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The trees—ancient standing oaks that ringed the perimeter—seemed to lean inward, their trunks blackened with silver veining, their branches tangled into arches …" | | 1 | "Between them rose stones, half-swallowed by moss and ivy, covered in glyphs that glimmered when not looked at directly." | | 2 | "Flowers bloomed in riotous color along the ground: cerulean lilies, crimson foxgloves with bell-shaped blooms that chimed faintly in a wind no one could feel." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 2.94% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Isolde interrupted (interrupt)" | | 3 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "Nyx added (add)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.265 | | leniency | 0.529 | | rawRatio | 0.556 | | effectiveRatio | 0.294 | |