| 60.47% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 20 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde replied cryptically [cryptically]" | | 1 | "she said simply [simply]" | | 2 | "Isolde said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 43 | | tagDensity | 0.465 | | leniency | 0.93 | | rawRatio | 0.15 | | effectiveRatio | 0.14 | |
| 76.56% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1493 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "carefully" | | 3 | "softly" | | 4 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 46.42% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1493 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "scanned" | | 4 | "sense of" | | 5 | "profound" | | 6 | "charged" | | 7 | "crystal" | | 8 | "shimmered" | | 9 | "weight" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "echoes" | | 12 | "trembled" | | 13 | "oppressive" | | 14 | "depths" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes widened" | | 1 | "hung in the air" |
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| 87.12% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 4 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "y with warmth" | | 1 | "d in wonder" | | 2 | "m in surprise" | | 3 | "felt a prickle" |
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| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 11 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "begin to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 111 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1503 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 53.76% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 76 | | wordCount | 1143 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.92 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Aurora | 22 | | Carter | 2 | | Nyx | 14 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Hair | 1 | | Half-Fae | 2 | | Isolde | 17 | | Shade | 1 | | Dymas | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Fae | 6 | | Grove | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Hair" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Shade" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae-Forged" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.538 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 13.01% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "as if responding to the proximity of the ancient site" | | 1 | "seemed more substantial here, less transparent" | | 2 | "melody that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once" | | 3 | "looked like a fiery realm with a warm amb" |
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| 0.40% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 1.996 | | wordCount | 1503 | | matches | | 0 | "not her own reflection, but images shifting" | | 1 | "not fully formed, but suggestions of beings with too many eyes" | | 2 | "neither fully in the grove nor" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 54 | | mean | 27.83 | | std | 15.78 | | cv | 0.567 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 63 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 46 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 43 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 46 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 33 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 32 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 54 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 39 | | 19 | 55 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 28 | | 22 | 40 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 43 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 65 | | 28 | 24 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 25 | | 34 | 45 | | 35 | 38 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 47 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 23 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 54 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 43 | | 45 | 26 | | 46 | 36 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 24 | | 49 | 24 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 186 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 111 | | ratio | 0.072 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora could indeed feel it - a subtle pressure in the air, like the atmosphere before a storm." | | 1 | "One moment, they stood in a normal clearing in Richmond Park; the next, they had entered somewhere entirely different." | | 2 | "The air itself felt different - charged with energy that made Aurora's skin tingle." | | 3 | "Beneath the normal rustle of leaves and bird calls, she could indeed hear something else - a faint, haunting melody that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once." | | 4 | "As Aurora gazed into the water, she saw not her own reflection, but images shifting and changing - places she'd never seen, people she didn't know, events from times long past and perhaps yet to come." | | 5 | "She saw flashes of what looked like a fiery realm with a warm amber sky, filled with sprawling vineyards and feasting tables - Dymas, she realized with a start." | | 6 | "From the shadows between trees, figures began to emerge - not fully formed, but suggestions of beings with too many eyes and limbs that bent at impossible angles." | | 7 | "Instead of showing random visions, it now reflected a clear image - a gateway of swirling energy, standing alone in a place she didn't recognize." |
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| 99.73% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1144 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 46 | | adverbRatio | 0.04020979020979021 | | lyAdverbCount | 23 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.020104895104895104 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 111 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 111 | | mean | 13.54 | | std | 6.95 | | cv | 0.513 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 23 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 30 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 63.06% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.40540540540540543 | | totalSentences | 111 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 40.65% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead of showing random visions," |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "Her bright blue eyes widened," | | 1 | "Her waist-length silver hair seemed" | | 2 | "She moved with impossible grace," | | 3 | "She held up the Heartstone" | | 4 | "She took a deep breath" | | 5 | "she whispered, turning slowly in" | | 6 | "she said in wonder" | | 7 | "she asked Nyx" | | 8 | "she said simply" | | 9 | "She saw flashes of what" | | 10 | "she said, her hand going" | | 11 | "They were neither fully in" | | 12 | "She knew her life had" | | 13 | "she said to Isolde, her" |
| | ratio | 0.171 | |
| 63.66% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 65 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oaks of Richmond" | | 1 | "Her bright blue eyes widened," | | 2 | "Nyx's voice was like a" | | 3 | "Aurora's fingers unconsciously touched the" | | 4 | "The deep crimson gemstone pulsed" | | 5 | "Nyx's faintly glowing violet eyes" | | 6 | "Aurora could indeed feel it" | | 7 | "The Hair on her arms" | | 8 | "Nyx murmured, suddenly dissolving into" | | 9 | "A moment later, a woman" | | 10 | "Her waist-length silver hair seemed" | | 11 | "She moved with impossible grace," | | 12 | "Aurora breathed, relief washing through" | | 13 | "The Half-Fae seer offered a" | | 14 | "Aurora glanced at the afternoon" | | 15 | "She held up the Heartstone" | | 16 | "Isolde replied cryptically" | | 17 | "Nyx materialized fully beside Aurora." | | 18 | "The air between the ancient" | | 19 | "She took a deep breath" |
| | ratio | 0.793 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "Though she couldn't see the" | | 1 | "As if summoned by her" |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 32.97% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oaks of Richmond Park towered above them as Aurora Carter pushed aside a curtain of ivy, revealing the circle of standing stones that marked the bou…" | | 1 | "The deep crimson gemstone pulsed faintly with warmth, almost as if responding to the proximity of the ancient site." | | 2 | "Though she couldn't see the shimmering distortion that marked the boundary between worlds, she sensed its presence." | | 3 | "Her waist-length silver hair seemed to catch light that wasn't there, and her pale lavender eyes held ancient wisdom." | | 4 | "The air itself felt different - charged with energy that made Aurora's skin tingle." | | 5 | "Isolde moved ahead of them, her silver hair flowing as if in a breeze that touched nothing else." | | 6 | "Beneath the normal rustle of leaves and bird calls, she could indeed hear something else - a faint, haunting melody that seemed to come from everywhere and nowh…" | | 7 | "In the magical twilight of the Fae Grove, with the scent of impossible flowers in the air and the music of other realms in her ears, Aurora Carter prepared to l…" |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 20 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx whispered, their form rippling with emotion" | | 1 | "Isolde warned, her own expression tense" | | 2 | "Isolde replied, her voice trembling slightly despite her attempt to remain calm" | | 3 | "she said, her voice steady despite the rapid beating of her heart" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 16 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Aurora breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "Isolde explained (explain)" | | 4 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 5 | "Isolde warned (warn)" | | 6 | "Isolde urged (urge)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 43 | | tagDensity | 0.372 | | leniency | 0.744 | | rawRatio | 0.438 | | effectiveRatio | 0.326 | |