Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQH6E1WWPWEWC77SEQ8REF

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Duration:
52.0s
Cost:
$0.006115
Provider:
WandB

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The ancient oaks of Richmond Park towered above them as Aurora Carter pushed aside a curtain of ivy, revealing the circle of standing stones that marked the boundary. Her bright blue eyes widened, taking in the site she'd only read about in cryptic texts. Beside her, Nyx shifted form, their shadowy silhouette coalescing from a diffuse mist into a more defined humanoid shape. "Are you certain this is wise?" Nyx's voice was like a whisper carried on the wind, barely audible even in the quiet clearing. Aurora's fingers unconsciously touched the Heartstone pendant hanging from a silver chain around her neck. The deep crimson gemstone pulsed faintly with warmth, almost as if responding to the proximity of the ancient site. "Isolde said she would meet us here. She has answers we need." Nyx's faintly glowing violet eyes scanned the perimeter. "The Veil is thin here. Can you feel it?" Aurora could indeed feel it - a subtle pressure in the air, like the atmosphere before a storm. Though she couldn't see the shimmering distortion that marked the boundary between worlds, she sensed its presence. The Hair on her arms stood on end. "Someone comes," Nyx murmured, suddenly dissolving into a patch of shadow near one of the standing stones. A moment later, a woman emerged from behind the largest monolith. Her waist-length silver hair seemed to catch light that wasn't there, and her pale lavender eyes held ancient wisdom. She moved with impossible grace, leaving no footprints in the mossy ground despite her solid appearance. "Isolde," Aurora breathed, relief washing through her. The Half-Fae seer offered a mysterious smile. "The seeker arrives when the moon hangs low, though the sun has not yet surrendered the sky." Aurora glanced at the afternoon sun, then back at Isolde. "You said you could help me understand this." She held up the Heartstone pendant, watching as its inner glow intensified in Isolde's presence. "The heart remembers what the mind forgets," Isolde replied cryptically. "Step across the threshold, child of two worlds, and see what awaits in the space between." Nyx materialized fully beside Aurora. "I will accompany you." Isolde nodded. "The shadow walks where light cannot reach. Come, the grove awaits." As they approached the standing stones, Aurora felt a growing sense of vertigo. The air between the ancient oaks seemed to warp and shimmer. She took a deep breath and stepped forward. The transition was instantaneous yet profound. One moment, they stood in a normal clearing in Richmond Park; the next, they had entered somewhere entirely different. The sky above had shifted to an impossible shade of twilight violet, though no time seemed to have passed. Wildflowers in every color imaginable bloomed in profusion around them, despite the fact that it was autumn in the mortal world. The air itself felt different - charged with energy that made Aurora's skin tingle. "By all that's holy," she whispered, turning slowly in place. Nyx's form seemed more substantial here, less transparent. "This place resonates with my nature. I feel... anchored." Isolde moved ahead of them, her silver hair flowing as if in a breeze that touched nothing else. "Time flows differently here. An hour within may be minutes or years without. Tread carefully, for the path remembers every step." As they ventured deeper into the grove, Aurora noticed that the plant life seemed to respond to their presence. Flowers turned their faces toward Isolde, while moss retreated from Nyx's shadowy feet. When Aurora reached out to touch a luminous blue blossom, it curled its petals around her finger for a moment before releasing her. "They're aware," she said in wonder. "All things have awareness in the in-between places," Isolde replied. "The veil between realms is gossamer here. Listen closely, and you might hear the songs of other worlds." Aurora closed her eyes, focusing on the sounds around her. Beneath the normal rustle of leaves and bird calls, she could indeed hear something else - a faint, haunting melody that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once. "Do you hear it?" she asked Nyx. The Shade inclined their head. "It is the music of the spaces between - the sound of possibility itself." The grove opened into a small clearing where a crystal-clear pool reflected the violet sky. At its center stood a single tree with silver bark and leaves that shimmered like moonlight. Isolde approached the pool and gestured for the others to join her. "Look," she said simply. As Aurora gazed into the water, she saw not her own reflection, but images shifting and changing - places she'd never seen, people she didn't know, events from times long past and perhaps yet to come. She saw flashes of what looked like a fiery realm with a warm amber sky, filled with sprawling vineyards and feasting tables - Dymas, she realized with a start. "The Heartstone shows you truths," Isolde explained. "It is a key that opens doors between worlds. But keys can lock as easily as unlock." Nyx peered into the pool. "I see... myself. As I was. Before the ritual." Aurora turned to them in surprise. "You were human once?" "Aldric," Nyx whispered, their form rippling with emotion. "In sixteen forty-three. I attempted a summoning that went wrong. Now I am... this." The weight of centuries hung in the air. Aurora instinctively reached out to comfort them, but her hand passed through their shadowy arm. "The grove amplifies what is in your heart," Isolde said softly. "Wonder, fear, regret - all become more real here. Be mindful of your thoughts." As if summoned by her warning, the atmosphere shifted. The haunting melody faded, replaced by an unsettling silence. The wildflowers seemed to droop, and the air grew suddenly cold. Aurora felt a prickle of fear as shadows deepened around them, moving independently of their sources. "Something's wrong," she said, her hand going to the Fae-Forged blade Isolde had given her. The moonsilver dagger felt unnaturally cold in her grip, yet it began to emit a faint luminescence in the twilight of the grove. "The Veil tears easily here," Isolde warned, her own expression tense. "Your emotions have called attention to us." From the shadows between trees, figures began to emerge - not fully formed, but suggestions of beings with too many eyes and limbs that bent at impossible angles. They were neither fully in the grove nor entirely elsewhere, straddling the boundary like Nyx, but with malicious intent. The Fae-Forged blade in Aurora's hand pulsed with bright light. "What are they?" " echoes of what waits beyond," Isolde replied, her voice trembling slightly despite her attempt to remain calm. "Drawn to the Heartstone's power." Nyx moved to stand protectively in front of Aurora. "I can hold them back, but not for long." As the shadowy figures advanced, the grove itself seemed to respond to the intrusion. The ground trembled slightly, and the silver-barked tree at the center of the pool began to glow with an inner light. A soft breeze kicked up, carrying the scent of night-blooming flowers, and the haunting melody returned, stronger this time. The advancing figures hesitated, recoiling from the light and sound. "Trust the grove," Isolde urged. "It protects its own." Aurora took a deep breath and sheathed the Fae blade. Closing her eyes, she focused on the wonder she'd felt upon entering, pushing aside the fear. As she did, the Heartstone pendant warmed against her skin, pulsing in time with the growing melody. The shadowy figures retreated, dissolving back into the spaces between trees. The oppressive atmosphere lifted, and the grove returned to its previous state of tranquil beauty. When Aurora opened her eyes, the pool before them had changed. Instead of showing random visions, it now reflected a clear image - a gateway of swirling energy, standing alone in a place she didn't recognize. "Is that...?" she began. "A way forward," Isolde finished. "The grove has shown you what you seek. But the path is dangerous, and the choice is yours alone." Nyx solidified beside her. "Wherever you go, I will follow. This place has given me a measure of peace I haven't felt in centuries." Aurora looked from the pool to Isolde, then to Nyx. The wonder of the grove surrounded them, ancient and alive. She knew her life had irrevocably changed the moment she'd stepped into this place between worlds. Whatever came next, she would face it with the allies she'd found here. "Tell me what I need to know," she said to Isolde, her voice steady despite the rapid beating of her heart. The Half-Fae seer smiled, her lavender eyes holding depths of knowledge Aurora couldn't begin to fathom. "The journey begins at the crossroads of shadow and light, where the heart remembers what the mind has forgotten." In the magical twilight of the Fae Grove, with the scent of impossible flowers in the air and the music of other realms in her ears, Aurora Carter prepared to learn the truths that would change everything.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
15.6863% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount6
adverbTags
0"Nyx murmured, suddenly dissolving into a patch of shadow near one of the standing stones [suddenly]"
1"Isolde replied cryptically [cryptically]"
2"she whispered, turning slowly in place [slowly]"
3"she said simply [simply]"
4"Isolde said softly [softly]"
5"Isolde replied, her voice trembling slightly despite her attempt to remain calm [slightly]"
53.4265% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1503
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count2
highlights
0"carefully"
1"slightly"
2"slowly"
3"softly"
4"suddenly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.4265% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1503
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"luminous"
count1
1
word"shimmered"
count1
2
word"trembled"
count1
3
word"oppressive"
count1
4
word"profound"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"echoes"
count1
highlights
0"luminous"
1"shimmered"
2"trembled"
3"oppressive"
4"profound"
5"weight"
6"echoes"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"hung in the air"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences88
matches(empty)
97.8261% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount11
narrationSentences88
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
2"begin to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences111
matches
0"noticed that the"
1"\"Is that...?\" she"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean27.83
std15.78
cv0.567
sampleLengths
063
123
246
317
443
517
646
77
824
933
1026
119
1213
1332
1425
1554
1610
1717
1839
1955
206
2128
2240
237
2419
2543
264
2765
2824
2914
3010
3122
3223
3325
3445
3538
3618
3747
3813
3923
4018
4154
4210
439
4443
4526
4636
474
4824
4924
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs186
matches(empty)
99.7290% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1144
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount46
adverbRatio0.04020979020979021
lyAdverbCount23
lyAdverbRatio0.020104895104895104
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences111
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences111
mean13.54
std6.95
cv0.513
sampleLengths
028
116
219
323
415
519
612
78
89
918
1017
118
1217
1311
1419
1516
167
177
1817
1910
2023
2110
2216
235
244
252
2611
2713
2811
298
306
3119
3219
3321
3414
3510
368
379
3818
3921
4019
4113
4223
436
4410
4518
4610
4730
487
495
63.0631% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.40540540540540543
totalSentences111
uniqueOpeners45
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount13
fancyTags
0"Nyx murmured, suddenly dissolving into a patch of shadow near one of the standing stones (murmur, suddenly dissolve)"
1"Aurora breathed, relief washing through her (breathe)"
2"Isolde replied cryptically (reply cryptically)"
3"she whispered, turning slowly in place (whisper, turn slowly)"
4"she said simply (say simply)"
5"Isolde explained (explain)"
6"Nyx whispered, their form rippling with emotion (whisper, ripple)"
7"Isolde said softly (say softly)"
8"she said, her hand going to the Fae-Forged blade Isolde had given her (say, go give)"
9"Isolde warned, her own expression tense (warn)"
10"Isolde replied, her voice trembling slightly despite her attempt to remain calm (reply, tremble slightly remain)"
11"Isolde urged (urge)"
12"Isolde finished (finish)"
81.3622%