Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQH9V762BTPKAN8MTBP81F

Run Details

Duration:
12.4s
Cost:
$0.006383
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air thickened, growing cloying and sweet like overripe fruit left too long on a summer day. Aurora Carter shivered, despite the unnatural warmth that pressed in around them. One moment, they were among the twisting oak trees of Richmond Park, the next, the familiar scent of damp earth and decaying leaves vanished, replaced by something far more intoxicating. Nyx, a humanoid silhouette of living shadow, stood beside her, utterly still. Even its faintly glowing violet eyes seemed to drink in the sudden transformation of their surroundings. Over Isolde’s shoulder, Aurora caught a glimpse of what lay behind them: not the continuation of the Fae Grove, but a shimmering distortion, like heat rising off asphalt, yet vibrant with unseen energy. The Veil, she thought. It hummed in her bones, a low, resonant thrum that spoke of ancient power and impossible distances. The Heartstone Pendant, nested beneath her shirt, pulsed with a warmth that spread through her chest. “Dymas,” Isolde Varga stated, her voice a melodic whisper that somehow cut through the heavy air. The Half-Fae seer stood tall, her silver hair like a waterfall down her back. She left no footprints on the damp, reddish soil they now stood upon. Isolde tilted her head, pale lavender eyes sweeping across the verdant landscape before them. “The Glutton’s Realm.” Aurora looked, truly looked, and her breath caught. Gone were the familiar greens and browns of Earth. Before them stretched an endless expanse of cultivated land, but unlike any farm or orchard she had ever seen. The sky above was a permanent, soft amber, casting everything in a perpetual, golden twilight. Overhead, massive, luminous insects, like elongated fireflies the size of small birds, drifted lazily, their inner light pulsing with hypnotic rhythm. “Look at the trees,” Aurora breathed, stepping forward, drawn despite a prickle of unease. They were unlike any she knew. Their bark was a smooth, deep purple, almost black, and the leaves that fanned out from their branches were a vibrant turquoise, shifting to jade at the edges. But it wasn’t just their color that was strange. The trees were heavy with fruit, far more abundant than any Earthly tree could bear. Great, swollen gourds the size of watermelons, striped in greens and golds, hung from low branches. Clustered higher were fruits that resembled gigantic, ruby-red berries, each segment glistening with what looked like condensed syrup. The air was thick with their perfume, blending with the scent of something baking, something savory and complex, and a metallic tang that made her nose tingle. “The fruit,” Nyx whispered, its voice like the rustle of dry leaves. “It calls.” Aurora felt it too. A subtle, insistent urge to reach out, to pluck one of those glittering berries and taste its impossible sweetness. The sensation was unsettling, a hunger that wasn't her own. She gripped the Fae-Forged Blade at her hip, the moonsilver hilt cold against her palm, grounding her. They began to walk, their footsteps silent on the unusually soft, reddish soil. It felt springy, like walking on a thick moss, though no moss was visible. They moved deeper into the orchards. The ground sloped gently downward, leading them towards what appeared to be a vast, sprawling city in the distance, a hazy silhouette against the amber sky. Columns of steam, thick and fragrant, rose from countless chimneys, carrying the promise of unimaginable feasts. “This way,” Isolde said, her voice betraying no surprise or wonder, as if this was merely another path in her familiar grove. She led them off the main path, into a denser part of the orchards. Here, the trees grew closer, their turquoise leaves nearly touching overhead, forming a living canopy that dappled the amber light into shifting patterns on the ground. Aurora noticed the sounds first. A low hum vibrated beneath her feet, accompanied by a distant, rhythmic thud. As they ventured deeper, the hum intensified, and the thud resolved into a distinct *chop, chop, chop*. They passed a grove of trees laden with enormous, iridescent mushrooms, their caps shimmering with all the colors of a rainbow. The air here was even heavier, laden with the scent of rich, dark spices and something akin to roasting meat. Suddenly, a clearing opened up, revealing a truly bizarre sight. A colossal beast, easily the size of a small elephant, lay on its side, its hide a deep, mottled green, like aged bronze. It had multiple limbs, some resembling hooves, others closer to a crab’s pincers, but all were still. Its eyes, the size of dinner plates, were closed, its breathing slow and shallow. Hovering around it were small, bulbous creatures, like overgrown wasps, but with delicate, crystalline wings. They moved with a strange grace, their long, needle-like proboscises dipping into patches of soft, glowing fungi that pulsed on the creature’s hide. “What is that?” Rory whispered, her voice tight. Isolde merely smiled, a knowing, cryptic twist of her lips. “A harvest, of a sort. This realm thrives on… symbiosis.” The chopping sound grew louder, and they realized it was not far off. Following Isolde, they came upon another, smaller clearing. Here, a figure stood, tall and slender, with skin the color of polished mahogany. It moved with frantic energy, wielding a gleaming, curved cleaver that shimmered with an inner light. It was hacking away at a giant root, thick as a human torso, that grew out of the ground. The root was a vibrant magenta, oozing a thick, clear sap that smelled faintly of cinnamon and something impossibly sweet. The figure wore a simple apron, stained with various brightly colored liquids. It had no hair, and its eyes, when it looked up at their approach, were solid gold, unblinking. It wasn’t human. Not quite. Its face was gaunt, almost skeletal, yet its movements were fluid and powerful. “Greetings, travelers,” the creature intoned, its voice surprisingly deep and resonant, like a bass cello. It bowed, a swift, practiced movement, before returning to its work. “You are far from the feasting halls.” “We seek another path,” Isolde replied. “One that avoids the attention of the Prince.” The golden-eyed being paused, its cleaver resting on the magenta root. It studied them, its eyes lingering on Aurora’s Heartstone and Nyx’s shimmering form. “Prince Belphegor’s hunger is vast. He welcomes all who contribute to the culinary arts. Or are consumed by them.” It chuckled, a dry, unsettling sound. “But if you wish to remain… unseen… you must learn the rhythm of Dymas. Observe. Adapt. And do not, under any circumstances, taste the nectar of the Bloom-Weepers.” It gestured with its cleaver towards a cluster of vine-like plants whose flowers wept thick, translucent drops of liquid. Aurora felt a fresh wave of unease. “What happens if you do?” The creature looked at her, its golden eyes unreadable. “You become part of the feast in a way you did not intend.” It resumed its chopping, a deliberate, rhythmic sound that echoed through the strange orchard. Isolde motioned for them to continue. As they moved, Rory kept a wary eye on the Bloom-Weepers, a strange fascination warring with her apprehension. The air here felt thicker than ever, pressing against her skin. The scents were overwhelming, a dizzying blend of sweet, savory, pungent, and tart. It was a realm of pure sensory overload, a constant assault on the senses designed to incite insatiable hunger. She glanced at Nyx. The Shade was an anchor, its silent presence a strange comfort. Rory still didn’t fully understand what Nyx was, or where it truly stood in this impossible world, but its unwavering focus offered a measure of stability in the chaos. They continued deeper, the ground growing softer with each step. They passed groves of iridescent, crystal-like trees that chimed with a faint, musical sound when a breeze rustled their leaves. Giant, luminescent fungi pulsed with soft light, illuminating patches of ground where small, furry creatures, like chameleons crossed with rabbits, scuttled through the undergrowth, their fur shifting colors to match the glowing mushrooms. The constant hum in the air intensified, taking on a deeper, more resonant tone. It was like living within a vast, organic instrument. The ground grew undeniably marshy now, squelching under their feet. The air hung thick with moisture and the intense, sugary scent of fermented fruit. Then, they saw it. A river, not of water, but of thick, golden syrup, flowed sluggishly through a wide channel. Its surface shimmered, reflecting the amber sky and the pulsating lights of the fungi-trees. Strange, bloated fish, their scales gleaming like polished jewels, swam lazily in its depths, occasionally breaching the surface with a heavy plop, sending ripples of liquid gold sprawling. The banks of the river were lined with massive, iridescent bubbles, each the size of a small dwelling. They glowed from within, casting a soft, multi-colored light. “River of Ambrosia,” Isolde murmured. “A tributary of the Great Current.” Aurora stared, mesmerized. The sheer, overwhelming excess of it all was breathtaking. It was a place where indulgence was not just permitted, but built into the very fabric of existence. Every sight, every smell, every sound seemed to reinforce the theme of gluttony. The rhythmic *thud* they had heard earlier now sounded much closer. As they skirted the syrupy river, following Isolde’s lead, they came upon a bizarre sight. A series of colossal, rotating gears, formed from a dark, obsidian-like rock, jutted from the riverbank, half-submerged in the golden liquid. They turned with immense power, grinding against each other with a deafening roar, their surfaces slick with the glistening syrup. And on the gears, moving like automatons, were more of the gaunt, golden-eyed beings. They were pushing and pulling, adding strange, dark fruits to the gears, which in turn pulverized them into the river, further enriching the Ambrosia. The beings worked in silence, their movements precise and tireless. They did not seem to notice Aurora, Nyx, or Isolde, lost in their endless, arduous task. These were the helbound souls, Aurora realized, enslaved by Prince Belphegor’s hunger. The thought chilled her, an undercurrent of horror beneath the wonder. This realm was beautiful in its excess, but it was also a prison, a forge for endless desires. Isolde signaled them to cross a narrow bridge made of woven vines, stretched taut over a calmer section of the Ambrosia river. The bridge swayed gently under their weight, the heady scent of the syrup rising up to meet them. The Heartstone pulsed steadily, a constant reminder of their true purpose. They were in Dymas, yes, but this was only a means to an end. A monstrous, beautiful, terrifying means.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
8.3333% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Isolde Varga stated, her voice a melodic whisper that somehow cut through the heavy air [somehow]"
1"Isolde said, her voice betraying no surprise or wonder, as if this was merely another path in her familiar grove [merely]"
2"the creature intoned, its voice surprisingly deep and resonant, like a bass cello [surprisingly]"
43.5984% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1773
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"gently"
count2
1
adverb"lazily"
count2
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"utterly"
count1
4
adverb"truly"
count3
5
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"lazily"
2"suddenly"
3"utterly"
4"truly"
5"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
21.0378% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1773
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"luminous"
count1
1
word"crystalline"
count1
2
word"shimmered"
count2
3
word"glistening"
count2
4
word"gleaming"
count2
5
word"unwavering"
count1
6
word"unreadable"
count1
7
word"apprehension"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"footsteps"
count1
10
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"luminous"
1"crystalline"
2"shimmered"
3"glistening"
4"gleaming"
5"unwavering"
6"unreadable"
7"apprehension"
8"weight"
9"footsteps"
10"echoed"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences115
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences115
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
2"appeared to"
3"seem to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences122
matches
0"is that?” Rory"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean55.13
std31.8
cv0.577
sampleLengths
059
198
260
372
414
5119
614
750
875
962
1076
11102
128
1320
1490
1548
1633
1714
1896
1912
2036
2167
2244
2363
2447
254
2685
2711
2843
29105
3067
3170
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences115
matches
0"were closed"
1"being paused"
2"were lined"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs257
matches
0"was unsettling"
1"was hacking"
2"were overwhelming"
3"were pushing"
88.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1650
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"gigantic, ruby-red berries,"
1"monstrous, beautiful, terrifying means."
adverbCount58
adverbRatio0.03515151515151515
lyAdverbCount26
lyAdverbRatio0.01575757575757576
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences122
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences122
mean14.46
std7.39
cv0.511
sampleLengths
017
112
230
312
416
533
64
717
816
916
1014
1113
1214
133
148
159
1619
1715
1821
1914
206
2128
229
2315
2416
2518
2627
2712
282
294
3019
3110
3217
3313
3414
356
3626
3716
3822
3914
4026
415
4213
4317
4421
4520
4610
4723
4817
4914
50.8197% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3442622950819672
totalSentences122
uniqueOpeners42
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"Isolde Varga stated, her voice a melodic whisper that somehow cut through the heavy air (state, voice somehow cut)"
1"Aurora breathed, stepping forward, drawn despite a prickle of unease (breathe, step draw)"
2"Nyx whispered, its voice like the rustle of dry leaves (whisper, like)"
3"Isolde said, her voice betraying no surprise or wonder, as if this was merely another path in her familiar grove (say, betray surprise wonder, be merely)"
4"whispered (whisper)"
5"the creature intoned, its voice surprisingly deep and resonant, like a bass cello (intoned, like)"
6"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
77.1641%