Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQHASKMFS5FBTBNPEE3GYT

Run Details

Duration:
23.2s
Cost:
$0.011079
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The sky burned amber, a slow simmer without sun or cloud, casting long shadows that seemed to stretch not from the trees but *toward* them. Rory stepped forward, her boots sinking slightly into soil that shimmered like crushed topaz underfoot. The air was thick—not with heat, but with scent: ripe figs bursting on the vine, saffron steeped in honeyed wine, the musk of truffles dug from dark earth. She inhaled sharply, her bright blue eyes scanning the orchard that unfolded before them like a dream stitched from hunger. “This isn’t Earth,” Nyx murmured, their voice a breath caught between heartbeats. They stood just behind Rory, form flickering between solid and smoke. At full height, their silhouette loomed, a shadow given will. Their violet eyes pulsed faintly, fixed on the horizon where spires of gilded stone rose like teeth from a banquet hall buried in emerald moss. “No,” Isolde agreed, drifting past them as if she weighed nothing at all. Her silver hair streamed behind her like liquid moonlight, untouched by wind. She left no print in the glittering soil. “This is *Dymas*. The realm of Gluttony. Though, to call it mere *greed*…” She tilted her head, pale lavender eyes alight with something like sorrow. “It is desire untempered by need. A feast that never ends, even when the hunger has gone.” Rory touched the pendant at her throat—*the Heartstone*—its crimson gem pulsing faintly, a slow throb against her skin. It had led them here, through a tear in the Veil she hadn’t even known existed, hidden behind the rusted gate of an abandoned spice warehouse in Peckham. One moment, the rain-lashed alley; the next, this impossible orchard. Vines heavy with fruit the color of storm clouds curled around pillars of basalt, their flowers exhaling perfume that made Rory’s head swim. She reached out, hesitated, then plucked a fruit shaped like a pomegranate, but smooth and black as obsidian. “Do we eat it?” she asked warily. Isolde did not answer directly. “Taste is the first betrayal,” she whispered. “The second is satisfaction.” Nyx drifted to a tree whose trunk spiraled in on itself, bark etched with symbols Rory didn’t recognize. “Spirits are bound here,” they said. “Not trapped. *Contracted*. Chefs from Earth, promised immortality in flavor. They cook forever… but never eat.” A low sound drifted through the orchard—not wind, but music. A slow, rich melody played on strings and brass, rising from the direction of the golden spires. It tasted like dark chocolate melting on the tongue. Rory tucked the fruit away in her coat pocket. "Let’s keep moving. That music’s… compelling.” They followed a path of polished onyx that curved between fields of golden wheat swaying though no breeze stirred. Butterflies the size of doves flitted past, wings shimmering with fractal patterns that made Rory’s eyes ache if she stared too long. One landed on her hand—warm, furred like a bat, humming a single clear note before lifting off again. Deeper in, the orchard gave way to vineyards. Terraced hills stretched to infinity, every row heavy with grapes that gleamed like rubies, amethysts, even clusters that pulsed with internal light. Workers moved among them—human, or nearly so. Gaunt, hollow-eyed, yet moving with practiced grace. They pruned, harvested, crushed, fermented—never eating. Never speaking. Their fingers stained purple, their mouths dry. One turned as Rory passed. His eyes locked onto hers, wide with recognition—or plea. “I know him,” Rory breathed. “Martin… from culinary school. He vanished two years ago. Said he wanted to ‘find the perfect dish.’” She swallowed. “They told us he’d gone to Bali.” Nyx reached out, a shadow-hand brushing the man’s shoulder. He didn’t flinch. Didn’t blink. “They’re aware,” Nyx said quietly. “But the contract holds. They trade their freedom for mastery. The irony is… they were already masters.” Isolde stepped ahead, her bare feet silent on the path. “There is a feast tonight. In the Hall of Tongues. Prince Belphegor judges the dish that transcends flavor—*the one that tastes like memory*.” Rory frowned. “We’re not here for a cooking contest. We’re looking for the rift key—the anchor on this side. The Heartstone brought us here because it’s linked.” “The key,” Isolde said, “is not an object. It is a *choice*. One made at the table.” Rory’s fingers twitched toward her coat, where the Fae-forged blade lay hidden. The moonsilver dagger was cold even through the fabric, a quiet reminder: *not everything here is what it seems*. They reached the Hall just as dusk deepened the amber sky to molten honey. It was a cathedral of cuisine—walls carved from marble veined with saffron and truffle, tables stretching beyond sight, set with plates of crystal that reflected flavors before the food was even served. Spirits in chef’s whites moved between the courses, but no guests sat at the tables. “Where is everyone?” Rory asked. “They’re here,” Nyx said, their voice hollow. “In the food.” A server passed with a platter of roasted game birds whose eyes were still moving. One blinked at Rory. She recoiled. “No. That’s not—” “The souls of the arrogant,” Isolde said, voice gentle. “Those who demanded only the rarest, the finest, the *forbidden*. Now they are served, again and again, flavor cycling forever through the palate of the Prince.” Rory’s stomach twisted. She thought of Evan, the way he’d sneer at her for ordering simple dishes, for not understanding the *art* of consumption. For not wanting more than she needed. The Heartstone flared hot against her skin. At the foot of a grand dais, a dish was being unveiled under a silver cloche. A single chef stood trembling before it, hands clasped, face pale. Nyx drifted forward, whispering, “That’s… that’s *her*.” Rory recognized her too—Cassandra Vale, famed for inventing the “ghost soufflé,” a dish so delicate it dissolved before it touched the tongue. She had disappeared three months ago. The cloche lifted. Inside sat a single dumpling, translucent, swirling with colors that shifted like oil on water. It pulsed once. “The Memory Dumpling,” Isolde murmured. “It contains her first kiss. Her mother’s voice. The scent of rain on warm stone. *Everything* she ever loved, boiled down into taste.” The Prince did not appear. A seat at the head of the hall simply… filled. Not with a man, but with *presence*. A figure of silk and shadow, crowned with grapevines and antlers, eyes like smoldering coals. Belphegor did not speak. The air *tasted* the words: *“Serve.”* Cassandra lifted the dumpling with trembling chopsticks. She opened her mouth—hesitated—then turned and *threw* it into the firepit beside the dais. Silence. Then, a laugh—rich, indulgent, terrible. The flames roared high, golden, and within them, the shape of a key formed from molten sugar and ash. “The choice,” Isolde said softly. “To consume… or to let go.” Rory stepped forward. She felt the Heartstone burn. She reached into her coat, drew the Fae-forged blade. Moonlight didn’t touch this place, yet it glowed faintly, humming with cold power. She walked to the flames. And plucked the key from the fire.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
66.6667% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Nyx said quietly [quietly]"
1"Rory recognized her too—Cassandra Vale, famed for inventing the a dish so delicate it dissolved before it touched the tongue. [too—so]"
2"Isolde said softly [softly]"
66.2732% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1186
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"warily"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"slightly"
2"softly"
3"warily"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.4098% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1186
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"throb"
count1
1
word"shimmered"
count1
2
word"loomed"
count1
3
word"silk"
count1
4
word"marble"
count1
5
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"throb"
1"shimmered"
2"loomed"
3"silk"
4"marble"
5"etched"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences90
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences90
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean27.83
std21.29
cv0.765
sampleLengths
088
158
275
379
425
516
640
736
815
959
1059
1114
1231
1314
1422
1533
1627
1717
1831
1961
205
2110
2219
235
2435
2531
267
2727
287
2928
303
3118
3228
3337
3410
3521
361
3724
3811
3930
405
417
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences90
matches
0"being unveiled"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs175
matches(empty)
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount922
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.0368763557483731
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.01193058568329718
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean11.35
std7.42
cv0.654
sampleLengths
025
115
228
320
412
511
610
725
813
912
108
1125
1217
1318
1428
1510
1623
1718
187
195
207
214
2218
236
2416
2510
2617
279
289
296
3019
3122
3218
338
3422
357
367
376
382
397
405
419
425
4319
447
459
463
472
485
4917
73.1392% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4563106796116505
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners47
8.3333% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount10
fancyTags
0"Nyx murmured, their voice a breath caught between heartbeats (murmur, catch)"
1"Isolde agreed, drifting past them as if she weighed nothing at all (agree, weigh)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"Rory breathed (breathe)"
4"Nyx said quietly (say quietly)"
5"Isolde said, voice gentle (say, voice)"
6"Nyx drifted forward, whispering, (drift whisper)"
7"Rory recognized her too—Cassandra Vale, famed for inventing the a dish so delicate it dissolved before it touched the tongue. (recognize invent dissolve touch)"
8"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
9"Isolde said softly (say softly)"
86.1072%