Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQHM7V78JBEAC0WF7F6YQZ

Run Details

Duration:
12.4s
Cost:
$0.003282

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The standing stones loomed like ancient sentinels, their rough surfaces etched with symbols that seemed to shift and breathe when Aurora wasn't looking directly at them. Pale lavender light filtered through the grove's perpetual twilight, casting everything in an ethereal glow that made her skin prickle. Nyx moved ahead, their shadowy form flickering between solid and translucent, leaving no trace on the wildflower-strewn ground. The Shade's whisper-soft voice drifted back: "The boundaries are thin here." Aurora's fingers instinctively brushed the Heartstone pendant at her neck. Its deep crimson surface pulsed with a faint warmth, synchronized with something deeper—a rhythmic thrumming just beneath perception. Her delivery job and Cardiff University felt impossibly distant, like memories from another lifetime. Isolde glided between the ancient oaks, her silver hair flowing without any apparent wind. She left no footprints, and when Aurora glanced back, the path behind them seemed to shimmer and reshape itself, defying ordinary spatial logic. "Time is not linear here," Isolde murmured, her pale lavender eyes fixed on some distant point. "An hour might be a moment. A moment might span centuries." The air felt thick, almost liquid. Wildflowers bloomed impossibly—summer and winter blossoms intertwined, frost-rimed petals nestled against vibrant crimson blooms. Aurora's breath caught in her throat. This was no ordinary place. This was a pocket between realms, a threshold where reality bent and folded upon itself. Nyx stopped suddenly, their violet-tinged silhouette becoming more defined. "Something watches," they whispered, the sound like wind through dry leaves. The Fae-forged blade at Aurora's hip—a gift from Isolde—felt cold. Its moonsilver surface caught the peculiar light, momentarily casting prismatic reflections that seemed to move independently of any actual movement. Something was indeed watching. Not with eyes, precisely. More like a presence. Aware. Calculating.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
33.3333% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount300
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
1"suddenly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount300
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"ethereal"
count1
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"tinged"
count1
3
word"glided"
count1
4
word"loomed"
count1
5
word"calculating"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"ethereal"
1"sentinels"
2"tinged"
3"glided"
4"loomed"
5"calculating"
6"etched"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences24
matches(empty)
97.8261% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences24
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences25
matches(empty)
51.3070% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs9
mean32.33
std10.66
cv0.33
sampleLengths
046
129
242
337
427
546
620
730
814
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences24
matches(empty)
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs44
matches
0"wasn't looking"
77.0578% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount277
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.05776173285198556
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.02888086642599278
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences25
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences25
mean11.64
std6.71
cv0.577
sampleLengths
026
120
218
311
410
518
614
714
823
916
1011
116
1214
136
145
1515
169
1711
1810
1920
204
214
224
231
241
96.0000% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.68
totalSentences25
uniqueOpeners17
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Isolde murmured, her pale lavender eyes fixed on some distant point (murmur, eyes fixed)"
1"they whispered, the sound like wind through dry leaves (whisper)"
79.7367%