| 100.0000% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | |
| 33.3333% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked) | | wordCount | 300 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.0000% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.0000% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked) | | wordCount | 300 | | totalAiIsms | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "ethereal" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "tinged" | | 3 | "glided" | | 4 | "loomed" | | 5 | "calculating" | | 6 | "etched" |
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| 100.0000% | Cliche density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 24 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.8261% | Filter word density | Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 24 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.0000% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 25 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 51.3070% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 9 | | mean | 32.33 | | std | 10.66 | | cv | 0.33 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 46 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 42 | | 3 | 37 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 46 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 30 | | 8 | 14 |
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| 100.0000% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤5% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 24 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 44 | | matches | | |
| 77.0578% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 277 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 16 | | adverbRatio | 0.05776173285198556 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.02888086642599278 | |
| 100.0000% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 25 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 25 | | mean | 11.64 | | std | 6.71 | | cv | 0.577 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 1 |
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| 96.0000% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.68 | | totalSentences | 25 | | uniqueOpeners | 17 | |
| 0.0000% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured, her pale lavender eyes fixed on some distant point (murmur, eyes fixed)" | | 1 | "they whispered, the sound like wind through dry leaves (whisper)" |
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