| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "soft voice drifted back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.75 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |
| 66.10% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 295 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 295 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "etched" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "synchronized" | | 7 | "rhythmic" | | 8 | "tinged" | | 9 | "calculating" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 24 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 24 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 25 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 26 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 291 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 56.72% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 13 | | wordCount | 268 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.87 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 5 | | Shade | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | University | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Isolde | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Shade" | | 2 | "University" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.567 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 18 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "symbols that seemed to shift and breathe when Aurora wasn't looking directly at them" | | 1 | "reflections that seemed to move independently of any actual movement" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 291 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 25 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 51.31% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 9 | | mean | 32.33 | | std | 10.66 | | cv | 0.33 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 46 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 42 | | 3 | 37 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 46 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 30 | | 8 | 14 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 24 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 44 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't looking" | | 1 | "was indeed watching" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 25 | | ratio | 0.12 | | matches | | 0 | "Its deep crimson surface pulsed with a faint warmth, synchronized with something deeper—a rhythmic thrumming just beneath perception." | | 1 | "Wildflowers bloomed impossibly—summer and winter blossoms intertwined, frost-rimed petals nestled against vibrant crimson blooms." | | 2 | "The Fae-forged blade at Aurora's hip—a gift from Isolde—felt cold." |
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| 77.06% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 277 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 16 | | adverbRatio | 0.05776173285198556 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.02888086642599278 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 25 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 25 | | mean | 11.64 | | std | 6.71 | | cv | 0.577 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 1 |
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| 96.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.68 | | totalSentences | 25 | | uniqueOpeners | 17 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 22 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.045 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 22 | | matches | | 0 | "Its deep crimson surface pulsed" | | 1 | "Her delivery job and Cardiff" | | 2 | "She left no footprints, and" | | 3 | "they whispered, the sound like" | | 4 | "Its moonsilver surface caught the" |
| | ratio | 0.227 | |
| 28.18% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 22 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed like" | | 1 | "Nyx moved ahead, their shadowy" | | 2 | "The Shade's whisper-soft voice drifted" | | 3 | "Aurora's fingers instinctively brushed the" | | 4 | "Its deep crimson surface pulsed" | | 5 | "Her delivery job and Cardiff" | | 6 | "Isolde glided between the ancient" | | 7 | "She left no footprints, and" | | 8 | "Isolde murmured, her pale lavender" | | 9 | "The air felt thick, almost" | | 10 | "Wildflowers bloomed impossibly—summer and winter" | | 11 | "Aurora's breath caught in her" | | 12 | "This was no ordinary place." | | 13 | "This was a pocket between" | | 14 | "Nyx stopped suddenly, their violet-tinged" | | 15 | "they whispered, the sound like" | | 16 | "The Fae-forged blade at Aurora's" | | 17 | "Its moonsilver surface caught the" | | 18 | "Something was indeed watching." |
| | ratio | 0.864 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 22 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 13 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed like ancient sentinels, their rough surfaces etched with symbols that seemed to shift and breathe when Aurora wasn't looking directly…" | | 1 | "Pale lavender light filtered through the grove's perpetual twilight, casting everything in an ethereal glow that made her skin prickle." | | 2 | "Its moonsilver surface caught the peculiar light, momentarily casting prismatic reflections that seemed to move independently of any actual movement." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde murmured, her pale lavender eyes fixed on some distant point" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "they whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |