Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
76
glossingSentenceCount
4
matches
0
"as if bracing for wind"
1
"not quite an invitation"
2
"as if reading the shadowed little flat in three seconds: books mapped in constellations across every surface, cramped walls and yellow ceiling paint, two mugs cooling side by side"
"The knock was soft but insistent—two deliberate raps, spaced perfectly apart."
1
"Three deadbolts, each one as reassuring as a bedtime story—nobody gets in unless you say."
2
"Nobody waited in the corridor—not a neighbor, not a courier in a windbreaker."
3
"His tailored charcoal suit showed no sign he'd just braved an entire city of wet pavements and choked gutters—the old lesson Rory still hadn't mastered."
4
"“Lucien. You’re… early for Armageddon, aren’t you?” She flinched inwardly—why always the joke, when it counted?"
5
"His gaze, heterochromatic and steady, moved over her—amber and black, both sharp enough to skin a lie."
6
"He’d always had that talent—for seeing places as they really were, people too."
7
"No trace of apology in his voice—he didn’t do apology, not when it counted, not when the wound to her pride still scraped raw in her memory."
8
"“I came for you.” A pause—the echo of something almost shy, then smothered."
9
"Rory’s face went hot—anger, shame—and she looked away, scratching at the edge of her sleeve."
10
"Lucien regarded the cat with a suppressed smile—a breach in the armor."
11
"or Who’s covering you?—something to keep him at arm’s length."
12
"Lucien—never unguarded, not in languages, not in suits, not in the deals he struck."
13
"Rory found herself standing behind the table, breathing shallow—somewhere between relic and rupture."
14
"He nodded, eyes searching hers—so earnest she half-wanted to throw a mug at his head, just to break the moment."
15
"Rory reached out at last, touching the mug nearest her—Eva’s, not her own, lukewarm but solid to the touch."
16
"But for once, he sat there—shoulders lowered, gaze unguarded—making no move toward the door."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
52
technicalSentenceCount
4
matches
0
"But tonight, the hollow scrape of knuckles through parted silence brought something else: an itch beneath her skin that was more memory than warning."
1
"His right hand held the familiar ivory-handled cane, fingers resting with the sort of infuriating stillness that suggested he’d never once misplaced his composu…"
2
"His eyes flicked past her, as if reading the shadowed little flat in three seconds: books mapped in constellations across every surface, cramped walls and yello…"
3
"He removed his overcoat and hung it on the peg, moving as if he’d never forgotten how small this space was, how the back of Eva’s door needed a gentle nudge to …"