Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQHWP904PGDG60RKAV3CH6

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Duration:
24.0s
Cost:
$0.010840
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Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air beneath Camden was thick with mildew and something older—something metallic and wrong, like rusted iron soaked in brine. Harlow Quinn stepped carefully over a fractured tile, her polished brogues crunching on grit and debris that hadn’t seen daylight in decades. Her breath curled in front of her like smoke, though the temperature, while cold, wasn’t anywhere near freezing. The beam of her flashlight cut through the gloom, illuminating cracked mosaics of the abandoned station: *Chalk Farm*, they read, though no train had stopped here since the 1960s. And yet, someone had died here tonight. DS Carl Nye stood by the body, hands tucked into the pockets of his overcoat, face pinched in the way it always did when he didn’t want to believe what he was seeing. “No signs of struggle,” he said, not looking at her. “Wallet’s gone. Looks like a mugging gone wrong.” Quinn didn’t answer. She crouched beside the victim—a man in his thirties, wearing a tailored wool coat and shoes too expensive for Camden backstreets. He lay sprawled near a tiled wall still half-covered in peeling advertisements for jazz clubs long extinct. His mouth was open, eyes wide, fixed on the tunnel ceiling as if he'd died mid-scream. But there were no bruises. No blood. No defensive wounds. “This wasn’t a mugging,” she said. Nye exhaled sharply. “Come on, Harlow. No ID, money missing, found in a derelict Tube station. Classic.” “Too classic,” she replied, her voice low, edged with the kind of fatigue that came not from lack of sleep, but from being the only one who remembered the patterns. She reached into her coat and pulled out a pair of nitrile gloves, snapping them on with practiced precision. “His rings are still on. Platinum and sapphire. A mugger wouldn’t leave that. And look at his shoes—untouched. You rob someone in a place like this, you take the boots, the coat, anything you can pawn. Not just the wallet.” Nye shifted. “Maybe he didn’t have time.” “Or maybe he didn’t see it coming.” She leaned closer, studying the man’s face. The pupils were dilated. Skin had a faint grayish sheen beneath the pallor, almost like something had leeched the warmth from within. She reached out and gently tilted the man’s head. Behind his left ear, nearly hidden by his collar, was a small, circular mark—like a brand. It looked old, but the tissue around it was inflamed. “You see that?” she asked. Nye squinted. “Looks like a burn.” “Not a burn,” she said. “That’s a sigil. A protective ward. Someone marked him—recently. And it failed.” Nye snorted. “Harlow—” “I’m not joking,” she cut in, standing. She turned her flashlight toward the far end of the platform, where the tunnel yawned into darkness. Something flickered just at the edge of her peripheral vision—a flicker, then gone. She snapped the light toward it. Nothing but crumbling tiles. Her left wrist ached. Not physically, not anymore. But the weight of the worn leather watch, ticking silently beneath her cuff, reminded her of Morris—of the way he’d looked at her the last time they’d stood in a tunnel like this, right before the lights went out and the shadows started breathing. She’d buried him without answers. Without a body. She wasn’t going to do that again. “Get forensics down here,” she said. “Full sweep. But tell them not to touch anything near the east wall. I want it photographed first.” “The east wall?” Nye blinked. “There’s nothing—” “Just do it.” She stepped past him, moving down the platform, her boots echoing against the stillness. The air grew colder with each step. The beam of her flashlight caught something on the wall—faint, almost invisible. A series of symbols, drawn in what looked like ash and soot, etched into the grime. She recognized one: an inverted crescent, flanked by thorned vines. It was the same mark she’d seen in Morris’s notes. The same one that had been on the door of the warehouse where he’d vanished. Her breath caught. Then, a noise. A soft shuffle. Like leather on stone. She turned, hand instinctively going to her sidearm. A woman stood at the edge of the platform, partially shrouded in shadow. Small, red curls escaping from beneath a woolen beanie, round glasses glinting in the dim light. She held a worn leather satchel tightly against her chest, and as Quinn’s flashlight swung her way, she flinched—then tucked a lock of hair behind her left ear. “You’re not supposed to be here,” Quinn said, voice firm. The woman swallowed. “I—I was just leaving.” “You’re not leaving. You’re coming with me.” “No, you don’t understand,” the woman said, her voice trembling but laced with urgency. “He was asking questions. About the Market. He must’ve used a bone token without knowing the rules.” Quinn narrowed her eyes. “The market?” “The Veil Market,” the woman whispered. “It convenes here tonight. Full moon. They move every month. But if you come in without protection, without knowledge—” “You knew him,” Quinn interrupted. The woman hesitated. “I saw him yesterday. He came to the British Museum archives. Asked about Enochian bindings. I told him to be careful.” Quinn stepped closer. “Who is he?” “I don’t know his name. Just that he was looking for a Veil Compass. Said he needed it to find his brother.” Quinn froze. “A compass?” “A shadow compass,” the woman said. “Brass, sigils on the face, points to rifts. Dangerous thing in the wrong hands.” Quinn’s mind spun. Morris had been looking for a compass. Before he died. She looked back at the body. The sigil behind the ear. The lack of physical trauma. The cold that shouldn’t exist. The way this woman—this stranger—knew things no civilian should. “And you?” Quinn asked. “Who are you?” The woman straightened. “Eva Kowalski. Research assistant. Department of Antiquities. I specialize in pre-Celtic occult practices.” Quinn studied her. The nervous habit. The satchel full of books. The intelligence in her eyes, sharp and wary. “You don’t work for the police,” Quinn said. “No.” “Then why are you here?” Eva glanced at the symbols on the wall. “Because whoever summoned this isn’t finished. That sigil? It wasn’t just a ward. It was a beacon. And the compass he wanted—it wasn’t to find his brother.” “Then what for?” “To open something,” Eva said softly. “And now someone else has it.” Quinn turned back to the body. No wallet. But in the inner pocket of his coat, something bulged. She reached in—carefully—and pulled out a small, tarnished object. A brass compass. Verdigris-stained. The needle quivered, then spun violently, pointing not north, but toward the dark tunnel beyond the platform. And as it did, the temperature dropped again. Somewhere, deep beneath Camden, stone groaned. Nye, who had been watching in stunned silence, took a step back. “Harlow… what the hell is going on?” She didn’t answer. She was staring at the compass. At the truth settling like dust in her lungs. Morris hadn’t died in a botched raid. He’d been erased. And this—this was the same trail. She snapped the compass shut, tucked it into an evidence bag, and turned to Eva. “You’re going to tell me everything you know,” she said. “Because this isn’t over.” And for the first time in three years, Detective Harlow Quinn felt the sharp, dangerous edge of something like hope.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
91.6667% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she replied, her voice low, edged with the kind of fatigue that came not from lack of sleep, but from being the only one who remembered the patterns [only]"
1"Eva said softly [softly]"
51.6908% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1242
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count2
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"sharply"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
4
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"gently"
2"sharply"
3"softly"
4"tightly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
27.5362% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1242
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"beacon"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"glinting"
count1
4
word"quivered"
count1
5
word"fractured"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"echoing"
count1
8
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"beacon"
1"flickered"
2"flicker"
3"glinting"
4"quivered"
5"fractured"
6"weight"
7"echoing"
8"etched"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences103
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences103
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences132
matches
0"see that?” she"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean20.42
std22.4
cv1.097
sampleLengths
089
17
251
367
46
517
689
77
871
95
106
1117
123
1347
1460
157
1624
177
183
1984
203
213
227
238
2457
2510
267
277
2831
296
3025
315
3224
336
3422
354
3620
3713
3830
397
4016
4119
428
431
445
4535
463
4712
4827
4921
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences103
matches
0"were dilated"
1"was inflamed"
2"been erased"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs162
matches
0"was seeing"
1"was staring"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount881
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.03745743473325766
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.014755959137343927
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences132
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences132
mean9.28
std7.95
cv0.856
sampleLengths
020
122
218
329
47
533
610
78
83
921
1017
1116
125
132
143
156
163
1714
1830
1919
2040
212
225
2314
244
2518
269
2716
2810
295
302
314
325
3312
342
351
367
3717
3813
396
404
414
424
4344
445
453
467
476
4818
495
51.7677% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3560606060606061
totalSentences132
uniqueOpeners47
50.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"he said, not looking at her (say, does not look)"
1"she replied, her voice low, edged with the kind of fatigue that came not from lack of sleep, but from being the only one who remembered the patterns (reply, edge does come not be remember)"
2"she cut in, standing (cut in, stand)"
3"Quinn said, voice firm (say, voice)"
4"the woman said, her voice trembling but laced with urgency (say, tremble lace)"
5"the woman whispered (whisper)"
6"Quinn interrupted (interrupt)"
7"Eva said softly (say softly)"
86.6271%