| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 20 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 41 | | tagDensity | 0.488 | | leniency | 0.976 | | rawRatio | 0.05 | | effectiveRatio | 0.049 | |
| 79.97% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1248 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 31.89% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1248 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "shimmered" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "glinting" | | 5 | "racing" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "depths" | | 8 | "raced" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "unspoken" | | 11 | "chill" | | 12 | "fractured" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 106 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 106 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 128 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 52 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 7 | | markdownWords | 7 | | totalWords | 1269 | | ratio | 0.006 | | matches | | 0 | "feel" | | 1 | "grown" | | 2 | "wants" | | 3 | "is" | | 4 | "place" | | 5 | "you" | | 6 | "cleansed" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 19 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 59 | | wordCount | 986 | | uniqueNames | 17 | | maxNameDensity | 1.52 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 15 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Nyx | 11 | | Isolde | 13 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Dymas | 2 | | Grove | 4 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | London | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | One | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Evan" | | 4 | "Grove" | | 5 | "Yu-Fei" | | 6 | "Eva" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Cardiff" | | 3 | "Blade" | | 4 | "London" | | 5 | "Veil" |
| | globalScore | 0.739 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 71.88% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite" | | 1 | "not quite a bird, not quite a child — trilled from above" | | 2 | "not quite a child — trilled from above" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 6 | | per1kWords | 4.728 | | wordCount | 1269 | | matches | | 0 | "not carved, but *grown*, fused from roots" | | 1 | "not painfully, but insistently" | | 2 | "not a memory, not a vision, but a *place*: a cavern of roots beneath the Grove" | | 3 | "not a vision, but a *place*: a cavern of roots beneath the Grove" | | 4 | "not only warning, but weapon" | | 5 | "not stars, but a slow, drifting ocean of shadow" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 128 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 50 | | mean | 25.38 | | std | 20.88 | | cv | 0.823 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 87 | | 1 | 34 | | 2 | 39 | | 3 | 81 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 29 | | 6 | 86 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 36 | | 11 | 32 | | 12 | 55 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 68 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 29 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 48 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 30 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 24 | | 41 | 55 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 49 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 34 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 23 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 165 | | matches | | 0 | "was bending" | | 1 | "was already forming" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 19 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 16 | | totalSentences | 128 | | ratio | 0.125 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stepped forward, her boot sinking slightly into moss that exhaled a breath of something warm and floral — not earth, not exactly a scent, more like the memory of one." | | 1 | "Rory tightened her grip on the strap of her courier bag — a nervous habit." | | 2 | "Trees rose on either side, but they weren’t trees — not quite." | | 3 | "A sound — not quite a bird, not quite a child — trilled from above." | | 4 | "Nyx exhaled — a sound like wind through a keyhole — and reshaped, drawing themselves taller, more defined." | | 5 | "A clearing opened before them, ringed by standing stones — not carved, but *grown*, fused from roots and stone." | | 6 | "It reflected nothing — not the trees, not the sky." | | 7 | "Images flickered beneath — Rory as a child, laughing on a beach in Cardiff, her father lifting her onto his shoulders." | | 8 | "Then a man’s hand slamming a door, a ring glinting — Evan." | | 9 | "A breeze stirred — too sudden, too deliberate." | | 10 | "Then a whisper — not from Nyx, not from Isolde — but from the standing stones." | | 11 | "The image changed — not a memory, not a vision, but a *place*: a cavern of roots beneath the Grove." | | 12 | "In its depths, something glowed — a cluster of crystals, pulsing with crimson light." | | 13 | "The blade was icy in her grip, but the chill didn’t burn — it *cleansed*, like winter air in the lungs." | | 14 | "For a moment, the canopy parted, revealing not stars, but a slow, drifting ocean of shadow — the spaces between realms, where Nyx had wandered for centuries." | | 15 | "The world outside had aged minutes — the Grove, she knew, had given her hours." |
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| 96.44% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 885 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 39 | | adverbRatio | 0.04406779661016949 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015819209039548022 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 128 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 128 | | mean | 9.91 | | std | 7.44 | | cv | 0.75 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 31 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 52 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 59.11% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.3828125 | | totalSentences | 128 | | uniqueOpeners | 49 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "Only a swirl of opal" | | 1 | "Then a man’s hand slamming" | | 2 | "Then a whisper — not" |
| | ratio | 0.035 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "She had not crossed the" | | 1 | "they whispered, their voice a" | | 2 | "She hadn’t told them it" | | 3 | "she asked, her voice low" | | 4 | "Her breath didn’t fog here." | | 5 | "Her bare feet left no" | | 6 | "They moved deeper." | | 7 | "Their bark gleamed like polished" | | 8 | "Their violet eyes glimmered in" | | 9 | "It reflected nothing — not" | | 10 | "Her shadow didn’t fall on" | | 11 | "She dipped a fingertip into" | | 12 | "she added, her voice lowering" | | 13 | "Her mind raced, cool and" | | 14 | "Her fingers curled around something" | | 15 | "She drew it out slowly." | | 16 | "It hummed under the air." | | 17 | "She had no training with" | | 18 | "She thought of Yu-Fei’s kitchen," |
| | ratio | 0.221 | |
| 58.84% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 69 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "The forest fell away behind" | | 1 | "The next, the trees seemed" | | 2 | "Rory stepped forward, her boot" | | 3 | "Isolde murmured, her silver hair" | | 4 | "She had not crossed the" | | 5 | "Nyx slid forward like smoke" | | 6 | "The air around them dimmed." | | 7 | "they whispered, their voice a" | | 8 | "Rory tightened her grip on" | | 9 | "The Heartstone pendant beneath her" | | 10 | "She hadn’t told them it" | | 11 | "she asked, her voice low" | | 12 | "Her breath didn’t fog here." | | 13 | "The air was warm." | | 14 | "Isolde stepped across." | | 15 | "Her bare feet left no" | | 16 | "They moved deeper." | | 17 | "Trees rose on either side," | | 18 | "Their bark gleamed like polished" | | 19 | "Leaves overhead shimmered between green" |
| | ratio | 0.802 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 17.86% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stepped forward, her boot sinking slightly into moss that exhaled a breath of something warm and floral — not earth, not exactly a scent, more like the mem…" | | 1 | "She hadn’t told them it had started doing that three days ago, right before the dreams began: visions of endless feasts beneath amber skies, of tables groaning …" | | 2 | "Leaves overhead shimmered between green and gold, then violet, as if painted by a hand that didn’t believe in fixed colors." | | 3 | "Isolde walked ahead, her silver hair catching light that didn’t seem to originate from any sun." | | 4 | "Images flickered beneath — Rory as a child, laughing on a beach in Cardiff, her father lifting her onto his shoulders." | | 5 | "Then a man’s hand slamming a door, a ring glinting — Evan." | | 6 | "A chorus of soft voices speaking in a language that slithered around meaning." |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 20 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde murmured, her silver hair drifting as if underwater despite the stillness" | | 1 | "they whispered, their voice a rustle beneath leaves" | | 2 | "she asked, her voice low" | | 3 | "she added, her voice lowering," |
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| 3.66% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 18 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 4 | "she added (add)" | | 5 | "Isolde agreed (agree)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 41 | | tagDensity | 0.439 | | leniency | 0.878 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.293 | |