Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1265
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
32
adverbRatio
0.025296442687747035
lyAdverbCount
15
lyAdverbRatio
0.011857707509881422
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
104
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
104
mean
15.39
std
8.34
cv
0.542
sampleLengths
0
25
1
23
2
26
3
24
4
9
5
5
6
17
7
9
8
20
9
17
10
19
11
5
12
6
13
21
14
11
15
19
16
8
17
19
18
12
19
22
20
18
21
10
22
18
23
25
24
35
25
4
26
7
27
34
28
14
29
10
30
8
31
19
32
18
33
10
34
19
35
22
36
18
37
20
38
19
39
9
40
20
41
4
42
11
43
8
44
16
45
32
46
11
47
24
48
11
49
13
58.3333%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
6
diversityRatio
0.38461538461538464
totalSentences
104
uniqueOpeners
40
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
17
fancyCount
14
fancyTags
0
"Aurora said, her voice sounding flat and dull against the vibrant hum of the clearing (say, sound)"
1
"Nyx whispered, the sound carrying on a wind that didn't rustle the leaves (whisper, carry on does not rustle)"
2
"Isolde said, her voice melodic but layered with that familiar, maddening ambiguity (say, layer)"
3
"Isolde replied, stopping before a cluster of wildflowers that bloomed in impossible colors—violets that shifted to gold, reds that seemed to bleed into the air (reply, stop bloom shift seem bleed)"
4
"Nyx murmured, pointing a shadowy limb toward a small stream cutting through the center of the grove (murmur, point cut)"
5
"Aurora admitted, the cool-headed pragmatism she relied on for law exams and dodging traffic in London failing her (admit, rely dodge fail)"
6
"Isolde said, kneeling by the water's edge (say, kneel)"
7
"the seer said, rising (say, rise)"
8
"Isolde said, holding it out hilt-first (say, hold)"
9
"Nyx observed, their violet eyes glowing faintly in the dimming light of the grove (observe, glow faintly)"
10
"Isolde corrected (correct)"
11
"Aurora whispered, the name surfacing from a dream she couldn't quite remember (whisper, surface does not quite remember)"
12
"Isolde confirmed, her expression unreadable (confirm)"
13
"the Shade whispered, the wind in their voice picking up an edge of urgency (whisper, pick up)"