Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQJ49PMX4F6W82FS3NH56X

Run Details

Duration:
29.1s
Cost:
$0.005821
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air inside the grove tasted wrong, not spoiled, but thick with a sweetness that clung to the back of the throat like honeyed wine. Aurora Carter paused just beyond the ancient oak standing stones, her hand instinctively drifting to the small crescent scar on her left wrist. It was a nervous tic, a phantom itch from a childhood fall in Cardiff that had nothing to do with the impossible landscape unfolding before her. Behind her, the muddy path of Richmond Park dissolved into a shimmering distortion, the Veil knitting itself shut with a sound like tearing silk. There was no going back the way they came. Not until Isolde allowed it. "Stay close," Aurora said, her voice sounding flat and dull against the vibrant hum of the clearing. "And don't touch anything unless Isolde says it's safe." Nyx drifted beside her, a humanoid silhouette of living shadow that seemed to drink the light rather than reflect it. In the dappled sunlight of the grove, their form was less distinct, edges blurring into the ferns. "Safe is a relative concept, Rory," Nyx whispered, the sound carrying on a wind that didn't rustle the leaves. "This place breathes. It watches." To Aurora's right stood Isolde Varga. The half-fae seer moved with an eerie grace, her silver hair cascading down to her waist like a river of moonlight. As she walked across the soft moss, she left no footprints. The ground seemed to rise to meet her boots and settle instantly after, erasing any evidence of her passage. Her pale lavender eyes scanned the canopy, unblinking. "The grove welcomes those who seek truth," Isolde said, her voice melodic but layered with that familiar, maddening ambiguity. "But truth is often sharp. Beware the beauty that offers no shadow." Aurora frowned, adjusting the strap of her delivery bag—a habit from her shifts at the Golden Empress that felt absurdly mundane here. "You brought us here for a reason, Isolde. My pendant has been vibrating since we crossed the stones." She reached into her tunic and pulled out the Heartstone. The deep crimson gem, no larger than her thumbnail, pulsed with a faint, warm rhythm against her palm. It glowed with an inner fire that seemed to sync with the amber hue of the sky above, though they were still technically in London. The sky here wasn't the grey ceiling of an English winter; it was a warm, perpetual twilight, suffused with a golden glow that reminded her uncomfortably of the descriptions of Dymas, the realm of Gluttony. But this wasn't Hel. This was something older, caught between worlds. "The stone reacts to the thinning of the Veil," Isolde replied, stopping before a cluster of wildflowers that bloomed in impossible colors—violets that shifted to gold, reds that seemed to bleed into the air. "Winter approaches. The barrier weakens. The walls between here, there, and everywhere grow porous." Aurora stepped forward, her boots sinking slightly into the moss. The flora here was aggressive in its vitality. Vines twisted with a purpose that suggested intelligence, reaching out as if to brush against her jacket before retreating. She moved deeper into the clearing, Nyx flowing behind her like spilled ink, Isolde gliding in their wake. The further they went, the more the sensory overload intensified. The air grew warmer, heavy with the scent of blooming jasmine and something metallic, like ozone before a storm. Sounds filtered through the trees—not just bird calls, but chimes and low, resonant thrums that seemed to vibrate in Aurora's chest cavity. "Look," Nyx murmured, pointing a shadowy limb toward a small stream cutting through the center of the grove. The water didn't flow; it hovered, suspended in mid-air in a spiraling ribbon before cascading silently into a pool below. The surface of the pool was perfectly mirror-smooth, reflecting not the sky above, but a starfield Aurora didn't recognize. Constellations spun slowly in the water, alien and bright. "It's beautiful," Aurora admitted, the cool-headed pragmatism she relied on for law exams and dodging traffic in London failing her. "But it feels... hungry." "Perception is a lens," Isolde said, kneeling by the water's edge. She dipped a finger into the suspended stream. The water did not wet her skin; instead, it clung to her fingertip like a jewel. "The grove feeds on memory. On time. An hour here may be a minute in your world, Rory. Or it may be a decade. Time is merely another ingredient in the feast." Aurora felt a cold prickle of unease crawl up her spine. She thought of her flat above Silas' bar, the half-finished legal textbooks on her table, the evening shift at the restaurant waiting for her. If she lost a decade here, Evan might find her again. Or worse, she might simply cease to exist in the world she knew. "We need to find what we came for and leave," Aurora said, her voice firmer now. She tightened her grip on the Heartstone. "Isolde, you said you had a vision about the rift points. About the Wardens." "I did," the seer said, rising. She turned, her silver hair catching the amber light, making her look less like a woman and more like a statue carved from frost and starlight. "But visions are riddles wrapped in smoke. To show you, I must give you a tool. A tool that cuts through lies." Isolde reached into the folds of her robe and produced a dagger. It was slender and leaf-shaped, forged from a metal that seemed to be made of solidified moonlight. Even in the warm glow of the grove, the blade emitted a chill that Aurora could feel from three feet away. Fae-forged. Moonsilver. "This is not a gift given lightly," Isolde said, holding it out hilt-first. "It cuts through magical wards. It bites deep into demon flesh. But it demands a steady hand and a clear heart. Hesitation will dull its edge." Aurora hesitated. She was a delivery girl, a former pre-law student running from an ex-boyfriend, not a warrior. But the weight of the last few months—the shadows lengthening, the strange occurrences in London, the way Nyx had found her—pressed down on her. She stepped forward and took the hilt. The cold bit into her palm, shocking and absolute. It didn't numb her; it sharpened her senses. The hum of the grove seemed to quiet, focusing entirely on the blade in her hand. The faint luminescence of the steel flared, casting long, dancing shadows against the trees. "It suits you," Nyx observed, their violet eyes glowing faintly in the dimming light of the grove. "Shadow and steel. A dangerous combination." "It suits the task," Isolde corrected. "The Veil is tearing, Rory. Not just here, but in the cities, in the places where people crowd together and forget to look up. Something is pushing through. Something that feeds on excess." Aurora looked down at the Heartstone in her other hand. It was pulsing faster now, the warmth turning into a heat that bordered on uncomfortable. The crimson glow intensified, casting a bloody light on the moss at her feet. "Dymas," Aurora whispered, the name surfacing from a dream she couldn't quite remember. "Prince Belphegor." "The gluttonous king," Isolde confirmed, her expression unreadable. "He seeks to expand his banquet. And Earth is the main course." A sudden gust of wind swept through the grove, but this time, it carried a sound that didn't belong. A distant roar, like a crowd cheering, mixed with the clatter of silverware and the snapping of bones. The warm amber sky flickered, and for a split second, Aurora saw not trees, but sprawling vineyards and orchards laden with fruit that looked too perfect, too ripe. The scent of roasting meat and spiced wine overwhelmed the floral perfume of the grove. Then, as quickly as it came, the vision vanished. The grove was silent again, save for the silent cascade of the hovering stream. Aurora's heart hammered against her ribs. She sheathed the Fae blade at her belt, the cold of it seeping through her clothes, a grounding anchor in the swirling unreality. "How do we stop it?" she asked, looking from the ethereal seer to the living shadow. Isolde smiled, a sad, ancient expression that didn't reach her eyes. "We do not stop the tide, Rory. We learn to swim. Or we build a boat. The path ahead is dark, and the answers lie in the places where the shadows are deepest." She gestured toward a thicket of brambles that seemed to writhe in the corner of her vision. "The first step is to trust the blade. And to trust yourself." Nyx shifted, their form solidifying slightly, becoming more human, more present. "Then let's move," the Shade whispered, the wind in their voice picking up an edge of urgency. "The feast is starting, and I'd hate to be late." Aurora took a deep breath, filling her lungs with the sweet, heavy air of the Fae Grove. She touched the scar on her wrist one last time, then gripped the hilt of the moonsilver dagger. The fear was still there, coiled tight in her gut, but beneath it was something else—a sharp, clear resolve. "Lead the way, Isolde," Aurora said. "But keep your riddles to a minimum. I've got a shift at six." The seer laughed, a sound like breaking glass, and turned toward the writhing brambles. As they followed her into the deeper woods, the wildflowers seemed to bow in their wake, and the sky above darkened, the amber fading into a twilight that promised neither day nor night, but something entirely new.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
94.1176% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Nyx observed, their violet eyes glowing faintly in the dimming light of the grove [faintly]"
1"Aurora whispered, the name surfacing from a dream she couldn't quite remember [quite]"
62.8483% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1615
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count2
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"perfectly"
2"quickly"
3"slightly"
4"slowly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.4644% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1615
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"ethereal"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"cascading"
count2
3
word"silk"
count1
4
word"unreadable"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"dancing"
count1
highlights
0"ethereal"
1"flickered"
2"cascading"
3"silk"
4"unreadable"
5"weight"
6"dancing"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences87
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount9
narrationSentences87
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
89.0483% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean43.27
std19.98
cv0.462
sampleLengths
074
138
226
361
465
531
640
799
848
955
1051
1118
1248
1324
1467
1559
1637
1754
1812
1940
2039
2149
2247
2323
2439
2539
2615
2720
2880
2923
3029
3116
3273
3338
3454
3519
3651
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs209
matches
0"was pulsing"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1265
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.025296442687747035
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.011857707509881422
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean15.39
std8.34
cv0.542
sampleLengths
025
123
226
324
49
55
617
79
820
917
1019
115
126
1321
1411
1519
168
1719
1812
1922
2018
2110
2218
2325
2435
254
267
2734
2814
2910
308
3119
3218
3310
3419
3522
3618
3720
3819
399
4020
414
4211
438
4416
4532
4611
4724
4811
4913
58.3333% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.38461538461538464
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners40
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount14
fancyTags
0"Aurora said, her voice sounding flat and dull against the vibrant hum of the clearing (say, sound)"
1"Nyx whispered, the sound carrying on a wind that didn't rustle the leaves (whisper, carry on does not rustle)"
2"Isolde said, her voice melodic but layered with that familiar, maddening ambiguity (say, layer)"
3"Isolde replied, stopping before a cluster of wildflowers that bloomed in impossible colors—violets that shifted to gold, reds that seemed to bleed into the air (reply, stop bloom shift seem bleed)"
4"Nyx murmured, pointing a shadowy limb toward a small stream cutting through the center of the grove (murmur, point cut)"
5"Aurora admitted, the cool-headed pragmatism she relied on for law exams and dodging traffic in London failing her (admit, rely dodge fail)"
6"Isolde said, kneeling by the water's edge (say, kneel)"
7"the seer said, rising (say, rise)"
8"Isolde said, holding it out hilt-first (say, hold)"
9"Nyx observed, their violet eyes glowing faintly in the dimming light of the grove (observe, glow faintly)"
10"Isolde corrected (correct)"
11"Aurora whispered, the name surfacing from a dream she couldn't quite remember (whisper, surface does not quite remember)"
12"Isolde confirmed, her expression unreadable (confirm)"
13"the Shade whispered, the wind in their voice picking up an edge of urgency (whisper, pick up)"
85.5772%