Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQJ5JKK8EQQ08NEF8DKVXP

Run Details

Duration:
1m 36s
Cost:
$0.002127
Provider:
Venice

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The transition didn’t feel like stepping through a door; it felt like the air itself had been thinned, a tension snapped in the fabric of the world. For a heartbeat, there was only the sharp, metallic scent of ozone and the sudden, disorienting vertigo of the Rift. Rory stumbled, her boots catching on nothing but shifting, mists that smelled of burnt sugar and ancient stone. She caught herself on a jagged root of iron and oak, the bark scraping her palm. When the world resolved, the first thing that hit her wasn’t the sight, but the heat. It wasn’t the oppressive, wet warmth of a London summer. It was dry, ardent heat that licked at the back of her neck, smelling of cedar smoke, roasting meat, and wine that had fermented for a century too long. Rory pushed herself upright, brushing lint from her jacket. "We’re here," she said. Her voice sounded thin, swallowed by the vastness around them. Above, the sky was a molten amber, bleeding into the horizon where it met a sea of rolling vineyards that stretched to the edge of reality. The vines weren’t made of green wood; they were twisted cables of dark bronze and copper, bearing fruit the size of cantaloupes—fruit that glowed with a deep, liquid crimson. "Intoxicating, isn’t it?" Isolde Varga drifted into view from behind a twisted oak. The Half-Fae seer moved without sound, her silver hair spilling over her waist like spilled moonlight. She stood amidst the alien flora, wildflowers blooming instantly behind her feet, crowding each other for space in the fertile, sickly-soil expanse. Rory ignored the commentary, her hand drifting to her chest where the silver chain of the Heartstone Pendant rested against her blouse. It was warm, a dull, throbbing rhythm that matched her own heartbeat—a signal that the Veil was active here, and that the dead were close. "Less enchanting for me," a whisper replied. Rory looked down. A puddle of ink-black darkness on the ground shimmered, then rose. Nyx reformed at nearly six feet tall, their silhouette sharp and angular. Their faintly glowing violet eyes, usually dim, now pierced the amber light like emeralds. "Where's the gravity?" Nyx asked, their voice sounding like a draft moving through an empty room. "It feels... lopsided." "Prince Belphegor," Rory supplied, pulling her backpack tighter around her shoulders. "He’s the Lord of Gluttony. This place is built on excess. Everything is larger than it needs to be. Look at that vine." She pointed to a tendril thick enough to be a man’s torso, curling lazily around a massive, stone obelisk. Nyx drifted closer, their form flickering like a faulty television static. They reached out a hand, ghosting it through a hanging bunch of crimson fruit. "It pulses," Nyx murmured. "It knows we're watching." "Everything here knows," Rory said, stepping forward. She rested her hand on the hilt of the dagger strapped to her thigh. It was the Fae-Forged Blade, moonsilver leaf-shaped and heartbreakingly cold against her leg. Even in this infernal heat, the metal remained ice against her skin—a comforting constant. Isolde smiled, a expression that didn't quite reach her pale lavender eyes. "The fruit requires the screaming of a thousand souls to ripen properly, Rory. It tastes of injustice. Or perhaps, only of long-suffering." "Don't eat it," Rory warned. She pulled the pendant out from under her shirt, letting the crimson gemstone catch the amber sun. It pulsed rhythmically, brighter, thumping against her sternum like a captive bird. This was the anchor. This was the reason they had crossed the Veil, against the protests of every instinct that told her to stay in the safety of her flat above Silas's bar. The pendant led them to a ridge overlooking a sprawling ruin—a banquet hall carved directly into the side of a dormant volcano. It was Gothic in structure but eldritch in decoration. Columns were made of thigh-bones; statues of rotund angels watched over tables laden with foods that shouldn't exist. "There is no hunger here," Isolde whispered, stepping onto the ridge. She looked at the scene below with a mixture of pity and disdain. "Only the desire to consume until the vessel breaks." "Are there souls?" Nyx asked, shifting from solid to mist to dodge a floating swarm of gnat-like flies that buzzed with the sound of laughter. "If the Veil holds, there are," Rory said. She scanned the perimeter. The Heartstone pulsed again, harder this time, drawing her toward the northwest corner of the ruin. She could feel the wards humming under her skin, a low vibration that rattled her teeth. "Stay close," she ordered, moving toward the breach in the stone wall. As they descended into the shadow of the ruin, the temperature spiked. Steam hissed from vents in the stone, carrying the scent of roasting boar and rich sauces. Rory felt a headache bloom behind her eyes, a pressure that came from the sheer volume of magic packed into this one square mile. She found a slit in the wall—ancient, sealed by a ward of red wax that had long since melted and stained the stone. The Heartstone in her hand flared, heating her palm until she had to grip it with both hands. "Step through," Rory commanded. She didn't wait for Isolde or Nyx; she slid through the gap, squeezing past thick roots that had forced their way through the stonework. On the other side, the air was thick enough to chew. The room was a kitchen, vast as a cathedral. Counters of black marble stretched as far as the eye could see, lined with cauldrons the size of tubs. A shadowy figure stood at a counter, stirring a pot with a ladle the size of a shield. It didn't turn when they entered. "Guests," the figure rumbled, the sound echoing in a chest like a cavern. "Cooking for the Prince? Trifling. But welcome. Taste?" It gestured with the ladle, and a wave of thick, purple vapor rolled toward them. "Pass out," Rory hissed. "Now." Isolde raised a hand, her expression calm. A shimmer of starlight waved the cloud back, dispersing it instantly. "Fae hospitality is... notoriously lethal," she murmured, stepping fully into the room. "Yet, I sense no host. Only a kitchen." Nyx coalesced into their humanoid form, folding their arms over their chest. Their violet eyes scanned the darkness above. "The host is coming. Can you feel that? The floor... it’s shifting. It wants to eat us." "Does it have the pendant?" Nyx asked. "Positive identification in progress," Rory said. She closed her eyes, listening to the hum of the Heartstone. It was a tone distinct from the hum of the ruin, a higher frequency, clearer. To the north. "Away from the stove," Rory said, turning away from the stationary cook. "Nyx, cover the rear. Isolde, stay alert for traps. I don't know how the wards work here, but I don't want to end up as an ingredient." "We are merely explorers," Isolde said, her voice drifting softly. "Navigating the currents of a feast that has not ended since the first snow." Rory moved with practiced efficiency. Her hands were empty of weapons now, the Fae blade holstered, trusting Nyx to watch her back as she held the glowing artifact aloft. The stone pulsed, guiding her around a massive table leg that looked suspiciously like a femur. The room opened up into a dining hall. A long, banquet table stretched into the darkness, draped with a cloth that looked suspiciously like spider silk. At the far end, the shadow of a throne loomed. Rory stopped at the foot of the table, panting slightly. The Heartstone was screaming now, vibrating against her hand so hard it nearly slipped. "They're here," Nyx whispered, their voice dropping to a terrified hiss. "They are *here*." Rory looked up. Sitting on the throne wasn't Prince Belphegor. It was empty. But the shadows on the throne weren't empty. They writhed, thick and black, pulsing with a heartbeat that matched the Heartstone. A massive, distorted face formed in the smoke above the throne, comprised of thousands of twisting shadows. It smiled, revealing teeth that looked like stalactites. "My," a voice boomed, resonating in Rory's marrow. "A palate for the exotic." Rory felt the world tilt. She dropped to one knee, the Heartstone flaring blindingly bright, casting long, jagged shadows that seemed to move independent of the light source. "Wait," Isolde said. Her voice rang out, cutting through the booming laughter. "We seek only a path. Not a meal." The face in the smoke paused, studying them. "The Seer. And the Shadow. And the little bird with the gem." Rory stood up slowly, forcing her knees to hold her weight. She looked into the abyss of the smoke-face. "I have a delivery to make," Rory said, her voice steady despite the rising terror in her gut. "And I'm not late."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
89.8551% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"she murmured, stepping fully into the room [fully]"
1"Rory said, turning away from the stationary cook [away]"
2"Isolde said, her voice drifting softly [softly]"
73.2083% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1493
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
1"slightly"
2"slowly"
3"softly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
39.7187% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1493
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"shimmered"
count1
1
word"oppressive"
count1
2
word"loomed"
count1
3
word"silk"
count1
4
word"marble"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"amidst"
count1
7
word"echoing"
count1
8
word"navigating"
count1
highlights
0"shimmered"
1"oppressive"
2"loomed"
3"silk"
4"marble"
5"weight"
6"amidst"
7"echoing"
8"navigating"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences101
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences101
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences116
matches
0"feel that? The"
90.0035% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean32.17
std14.96
cv0.465
sampleLengths
047
150
239
323
455
551
647
77
840
919
1053
1133
1248
1334
1467
1549
1633
1725
1844
1912
2052
2141
2228
2311
2452
2521
2615
275
2838
2936
307
3135
3239
3324
3445
3536
3624
3714
3834
3925
4013
4128
4220
4320
4419
4522
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences101
matches
0"been thinned"
1"were made"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs210
matches
0"was screaming"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1249
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.025620496397117692
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.01521216973578863
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences116
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences116
mean12.76
std7.3
cv0.573
sampleLengths
027
120
218
316
416
510
629
79
84
910
1026
1129
1213
1316
1422
1522
1625
177
183
1911
2012
2114
2216
233
2411
2542
2611
2714
284
294
307
3114
3213
3314
3412
3522
365
3717
3812
394
4029
4122
429
4318
4411
4513
469
4725
488
494
69.5402% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4482758620689655
totalSentences116
uniqueOpeners52
22.8261% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags23
fancyCount14
fancyTags
0"Rory supplied, pulling her backpack tighter around her shoulders (supply, pull)"
1"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
2"Rory said, stepping forward (say, step)"
3"Rory warned (warn)"
4"Isolde whispered, stepping onto the ridge (whisper, step)"
5"she ordered, moving toward the breach in the stone wall (order, move)"
6"Rory commanded (command)"
7"the figure rumbled, the sound echoing in a chest like a cavern (rumble, echo)"
8"Rory hissed (hiss)"
9"she murmured, stepping fully into the room (murmur, step fully)"
10"Rory said, turning away from the stationary cook (say, turn away)"
11"Isolde said, her voice drifting softly (say, drift softly)"
12"Nyx whispered, their voice dropping to a terrified hiss (whisper, drop terrify)"
13"a voice boomed, resonating in Rory's marrow (boom, resonate)"
87.3619%