| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 23 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said simply [simply]" | | 1 | "Isolde said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 48 | | tagDensity | 0.479 | | leniency | 0.958 | | rawRatio | 0.087 | | effectiveRatio | 0.083 | |
| 68.58% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1273 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "gently" | | 4 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 37.16% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1273 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "flickered" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "etched" | | 4 | "echoing" | | 5 | "dancing" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "quickened" | | 8 | "crystal" | | 9 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was thick with" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 113 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 113 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 139 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1258 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 20 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, in a voice like stone grinding on stone, it spoke." |
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| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 61 | | wordCount | 948 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 1.79 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Nyx | 9 | | Isolde | 15 | | Rory | 17 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Veil | 2 | | Shade | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | One | 2 | | Warden | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Evan | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Pendant" | | 4 | "Shade" | | 5 | "Blade" | | 6 | "One" | | 7 | "Warden" | | 8 | "Evan" | | 9 | "Yu-Fei" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.603 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 29.03% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "as though parting a curtain" | | 1 | "as though breathing" | | 2 | "as though dancing" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 5 | | per1kWords | 3.975 | | wordCount | 1258 | | matches | | 0 | "not with heat, but with something deeper: a ripple, like oil on water, bending" | | 1 | "not the false sky, but constellations unknown: spirals, zigzags, a crown of seven e" | | 2 | "not just of the body, but of the soul" | | 3 | "not walking, but gliding" | | 4 | "not as concept, but as presence" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 139 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 62 | | mean | 20.29 | | std | 18.95 | | cv | 0.934 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 66 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 32 | | 5 | 71 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 77 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 60 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 31 | | 17 | 47 | | 18 | 34 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 35 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 47 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 49 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 34 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 52 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 35 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 39 |
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| 99.05% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 182 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 20 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 16 | | totalSentences | 139 | | ratio | 0.115 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory felt it first—a prickle along her scar, the old crescent on her wrist tingling like a wire humming beneath her skin." | | 1 | "It pulsed — warm, steady — a quiet drumbeat against her ribs." | | 2 | "But the pendant had led her here — to the edge of the Veil." | | 3 | "She took Nyx’s shadowed hand—cool, like touching a moonless night—and stepped." | | 4 | "One moment, Richmond Park’s misty twilight; the next, a clearing bathed in golden-green light." | | 5 | "The standing stones were gone—replaced by towering oaks, their trunks wrapped in silver ivy, bark etched with runes that shifted when not stared at directly." | | 6 | "The sky was not sky—more like a dome of stained glass, colors bleeding slowly from amber to indigo." | | 7 | "She hadn’t drawn it since receiving it—from Isolde, no explanation, just a quiet, “You’ll need it.”" | | 8 | "A bird—no, not a bird—flitted between branches: a flash of iridescent wings, body like spun glass, voice like a child laughing underwater." | | 9 | "Beyond it, a pool—still as glass—mirrored not the false sky, but constellations unknown: spirals, zigzags, a crown of seven eyes." | | 10 | "Her reflection rippled—then changed." | | 11 | "Before her, a body—faceless—lay on a silver platter, steaming." | | 12 | "From the edge of the clearing, figures emerged—not walking, but gliding." | | 13 | "Rory felt it before she saw it—the Veil, not as concept, but as presence." | | 14 | "Then, as suddenly as they came, they faded—back into mist, into shadow, into nothing." | | 15 | "Nyx touched her shoulder—cold, solid, real." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 941 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "half-corporeal, half-shadow." |
| | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.03506907545164718 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01381509032943677 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 139 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 139 | | mean | 9.05 | | std | 6.52 | | cv | 0.721 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 25 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 56.59% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.37410071942446044 | | totalSentences | 139 | | uniqueOpeners | 52 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "Only a deep, internal glow," | | 1 | "Instead, she walked deeper into" | | 2 | "Then, a sound." | | 3 | "Even the air seemed to" | | 4 | "Then, in a voice like" | | 5 | "Then, as suddenly as they" |
| | ratio | 0.065 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "She stopped, boots scuffing the" | | 1 | "Their form flickered, edges blurring." | | 2 | "they whispered, voice like wind" | | 3 | "She didn’t blink." | | 4 | "It pulsed — warm, steady" | | 5 | "She’d woken three nights ago" | | 6 | "she muttered, glancing at Nyx" | | 7 | "She vanished without sound." | | 8 | "She took Nyx’s shadowed hand—cool," | | 9 | "It chimed once, softly." | | 10 | "She reached for the Fae-Forged" | | 11 | "She hadn’t drawn it since" | | 12 | "It vanished into a thicket" | | 13 | "she paused, eyes locking onto" | | 14 | "Her reflection rippled—then changed." | | 15 | "She wore a chef’s coat" | | 16 | "Their faces were indistinct, featureless" | | 17 | "They carried staves of black" | | 18 | "She thought of Evan, his" | | 19 | "She thought of Yu-Fei’s kitchen," |
| | ratio | 0.239 | |
| 63.26% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 73 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "The air changed before they" | | 1 | "Rory felt it first—a prickle" | | 2 | "She stopped, boots scuffing the" | | 3 | "The trees ahead swayed, though" | | 4 | "Nyx stepped beside her, a" | | 5 | "Their form flickered, edges blurring." | | 6 | "they whispered, voice like wind" | | 7 | "Isolde stood apart, silver hair" | | 8 | "She didn’t blink." | | 9 | "Rory tightened her grip on" | | 10 | "It pulsed — warm, steady" | | 11 | "She’d woken three nights ago" | | 12 | "Yu-Fei had warned her not" | | 13 | "she muttered, glancing at Nyx" | | 14 | "The Shade tilted their head." | | 15 | "Isolde stepped forward first, gliding" | | 16 | "She vanished without sound." | | 17 | "She took Nyx’s shadowed hand—cool," | | 18 | "The world folded." | | 19 | "The air was thick with" |
| | ratio | 0.793 | |
| 54.35% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "Before her, a body—faceless—lay on" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 91.84% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory felt it first—a prickle along her scar, the old crescent on her wrist tingling like a wire humming beneath her skin." | | 1 | "Flowers carpeted the ground: blue stars, crimson bells, and blossoms that pulsed faintly, as though breathing." | | 2 | "Nyx drifted forward, their form solidifying slightly, taking on a sharper silhouette." |
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| 59.78% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 23 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said, her voice echoing from everywhere and nowhere" | | 1 | "she paused, eyes locking onto Rory’s" | | 2 | "Rory said, heart hammering" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 20 | | fancyCount | 9 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "she lied (lie)" | | 5 | "she gasped (gasp)" | | 6 | "Rory demanded (demand)" | | 7 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" | | 8 | "Nyx observed (observe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 48 | | tagDensity | 0.417 | | leniency | 0.833 | | rawRatio | 0.45 | | effectiveRatio | 0.375 | |