| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said simply [simply]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.923 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.083 | | effectiveRatio | 0.083 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1416 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1416 | | totalAiIsms | 31 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "vibrated" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "quickened" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "scanned" | | 7 | "flicked" | | 8 | "shimmered" | | 9 | "crystal" | | 10 | "could feel" | | 11 | "quivered" | | 12 | "tracing" | | 13 | "chill" | | 14 | "echoed" | | 15 | "stomach" | | 16 | "silence" | | 17 | "familiar" | | 18 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 123 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 123 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 124 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1404 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 59.50% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 54 | | wordCount | 1326 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.81 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Nyx | 12 | | Isolde | 7 | | Varga | 1 | | Aurora | 24 | | Wheat-gold | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Veil | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Varga" | | 4 | "Aurora" | | 5 | "Veil" |
| | places | | 0 | "Cardiff" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.595 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 97 | | glossingSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "as if inhaling a held breath" | | 1 | "sounded like thunder" | | 2 | "felt like this" | | 3 | "seemed sticky blinking forward in slow motion" | | 4 | "as if warning her off" | | 5 | "not quite touch" | | 6 | "darkness that seemed to drink the surrounding light" | | 7 | "tasted like bile" | | 8 | "as though waking from a dream" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1404 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 124 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 20 | | mean | 70.2 | | std | 4.6 | | cv | 0.066 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 65 | | 1 | 75 | | 2 | 69 | | 3 | 69 | | 4 | 73 | | 5 | 71 | | 6 | 74 | | 7 | 66 | | 8 | 73 | | 9 | 79 | | 10 | 74 | | 11 | 74 | | 12 | 65 | | 13 | 63 | | 14 | 74 | | 15 | 69 | | 16 | 66 | | 17 | 63 | | 18 | 66 | | 19 | 76 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 123 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 245 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 124 | | ratio | 0.065 | | matches | | 0 | "She glanced back—no footprints marred the moss, only her own." | | 1 | "She left no footprints—Aurora bent to examine the soft earth—and spoke in her soft, riddle-laced cadence." | | 2 | "She glanced at her watch—time against time—but the hands seemed sticky, blinking forward in slow motion." | | 3 | "A silver mist pooled between trees not twenty paces away, swirling into shapes that might have been faces—eyes and light and a mouth gaping wide—before vanishing in a rush of static wind." | | 4 | "She looked at Nyx, who bent and plucked a shadow-spool from the earth—an orb of darkness that seemed to drink the surrounding light." | | 5 | "Grapes larger than fists tumbled over silver platters, and laughter—rich, low, hungry—rolled beneath." | | 6 | "She scanned the grove—no shadow-spools, no feast, only moonlight pale through branches and the hush of wildflowers." | | 7 | "It no longer itched—only pulsed with a faint glow, like a promise of secrets still hidden beneath the boundary of worlds." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1239 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "soft, riddle-laced cadence." |
| | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.029055690072639227 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00887812752219532 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 124 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 124 | | mean | 11.32 | | std | 5.96 | | cv | 0.527 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 27 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 32 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 22 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 56.18% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.3709677419354839 | | totalSentences | 124 | | uniqueOpeners | 46 | |
| 84.75% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she squared her jaw." | | 1 | "Instantaneously, shadow and earth coalesced," | | 2 | "Only the faint memory of" |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 84.41% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 40 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "She felt the air shift," | | 1 | "She glanced back—no footprints marred" | | 2 | "She swallowed, tasting cool dampness," | | 3 | "they breathed, voice trembling on" | | 4 | "They tilted their head, air-whisper" | | 5 | "Her pale lavender eyes scanned" | | 6 | "She left no footprints—Aurora bent" | | 7 | "She flicked a glance at" | | 8 | "she asked, voice low" | | 9 | "She glanced at her watch—time" | | 10 | "Its metal was always cold," | | 11 | "She closed her fingers around" | | 12 | "Her pulse slammed in her" | | 13 | "She could feel the boundary" | | 14 | "Her scar itched on her" | | 15 | "It burned with memory, as" | | 16 | "She clenched her jaw and" | | 17 | "she intoned, voice soft" | | 18 | "She looked at Nyx, who" | | 19 | "she said simply" |
| | ratio | 0.339 | |
| 10.85% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 106 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter paused at the" | | 1 | "Twilight filtered through ancient branches," | | 2 | "She felt the air shift," | | 3 | "The hush pressed against her" | | 4 | "She glanced back—no footprints marred" | | 5 | "The grove felt older than" | | 6 | "Moss curled over every surface" | | 7 | "An almost imperceptible hum vibrated" | | 8 | "She swallowed, tasting cool dampness," | | 9 | "Nothing in Cardiff had ever" | | 10 | "Nyx drifted from the shadows" | | 11 | "Aurora’s breath caught as violet" | | 12 | "The shade’s presence sucked warmth" | | 13 | "they breathed, voice trembling on" | | 14 | "They tilted their head, air-whisper" | | 15 | "Her pale lavender eyes scanned" | | 16 | "She left no footprints—Aurora bent" | | 17 | "The words drifted into Aurora’s" | | 18 | "Aurora forced her shoulders to" | | 19 | "She flicked a glance at" |
| | ratio | 0.898 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 73.73% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Twilight filtered through ancient branches, casting long, leaning shadows that flickered like specters." | | 1 | "Moss curled over every surface in plush mats that yielded to her boot, and wildflowers bloomed violet and gold in impossible patterns." | | 2 | "An almost imperceptible hum vibrated underfoot, a low pulse that quickened her pulse in return." | | 3 | "Together they walked, the ground rising and dipping as though the grove breathed beneath them." | | 4 | "She looked at Nyx, who bent and plucked a shadow-spool from the earth—an orb of darkness that seemed to drink the surrounding light." | | 5 | "The shadow-spool on the pedestal vibrated, thrumming to Nyx’s chant in an alien tongue that rumbled like distant thunder." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "they breathed, voice trembling on the wind" | | 1 | "she asked, voice low" | | 2 | "she intoned, voice soft" | | 3 | "Nyx offered, voice hushed:" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "she murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.615 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |